A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality – Immortal World Arc

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With a new record of a mortal’s journey to immortality, new episodes are abound.
In this sequel to the celebrated A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality—Immortal World edition, join Han Li’s eternal journey towards immortality in the Immortal world.

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Phàm Nhân Tu Tiên Chi Tiên Giới Thiên (Phàm Nhân Tu Tiên 2)
RMJI2
RMJIIR
凡人修仙之仙界篇
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A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality (Prequel)
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PluristPurist
New PluristPurist rated it
April 19, 2024
Status: c603
I mostly enjoyed the first book, probably a 4 out of 5. The sequel is much of the same and that's not an entirely bad thing if you liked the first one. There are some massive problems I have with it though. To start the MC has his cultivation ruined once again, this time at the very beginning. (You'd best believe it might happen again too) If the author had never done this I wouldn't complain too much but anybody that read the first book knows the author's already done... more>> this multiple times. This is a bigger issue I have with the sequel, the author seems like he's really run out of ideas and re-uses old plot points to make things harder on him/try to spice things up. Reading the first book and going right into this one feels awful bc all the progress he made in the last one is thrown straight out the window. This time he not only lost his cultivation and items, he also lost his memories of the past 300 years. The first 200 chapters are an absolute slog to get through. It doesn't improve until he gets to the blaze dragon dao sect and gets most of his stuff back. (I remember the 200 chapter mark being around where his cultivation and items mostly come back)

One of the other problems is the lack of characters to care about. The only good thing the start of the book does is introduce you to a cute fox girl that helps take care of him while he's down and out. Almost immediately she gets stolen away bc he had to move to another area and the author didn't want to lug her around all day. Again, you don't meet anybody to care about for the first 200 chapters. This feels extra miserable when he's only progressing to right where he was at the end of the first book. I was left with nothing to care about, getting back what he already had or uncovering the garbage secrets behind how he ended up in the situation were just annoying to read about. Why the author thought gimping his cultivation again would be a good idea is beyond me.

This leads into the third major complaint I have, the author changed his personality a bit. It actually makes sense that he wouldn't interact with many characters bc he's pretty cautious and calculating. (Although the author should have given us some characters to find interesting) He takes far more risks in this book and he often forgets crucial points that come back to bite him later. I don't believe for a second he's actually this dumb and its just the author forcing the story in certain directions. My last complaint before I go into the good stuff is the focus on time laws. The author makes his major power time and I can already tell it's going to make things super messy. Combine unavoidable trips into the past and him constantly ruining his time dao runes which are super important for his combat strength and you have a messy time travel story where the author constantly gimps his power level for future plot payoffs. I hate this combo and it seems like it's going to become an increasingly big part of the story.

So what's good about this story? The author's biggest strength in my opinion is the amazing world he creates. It's so much fun exploring different locations and seeing different races/species. The MC is still pretty good, although not as good as he was in the previous book. He's still cautious and calculating whenever the author doesn't force him to be dumb. The powers he gains are actually pretty cool whenever the author doesn't ruin them and fights are still fun to read. There are also some cool characters to read about past chapter 200, I actually laughed and cared about a few of them. Haven't run into any of his old flames yet either, so no romance. (Shocking that people on Wuxia World think Nanong Wang his dao partner is great, she was never there even in the first book bc the author is terrified of writing romance, how can anyone like her when she doesn't exist?) Every-time I start writing a review my brain starts falling apart halfway through so its time to end this.

Read this if you liked the first one, its much of the same. If you hate the cultivation loss like I do then skim or skip the first 200 chapters, you aren't missing much anyway. (Maybe just read the very beginning with the fox girl) <<less
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Dg2
Dg2 rated it
November 30, 2020
Status: c22
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In the first dozen of chapters we are introduce to the MC's fox friend. After a cool fight, we are once again are put through the torture of reading the MC losing his powers for the fourth time in the story, but now we have to deal with his apparent lack of memories on top of it. This is completely ridiculous for the author to think that this was a good idea to start the second part of his book. And don't forget guys, this fic takes place right after the MC goes to the Fairy World right when he REGAINED his powers for the THIRD TIME.

I really don't know if I should even attempt reading this any longer. This author clearly grew to big for his own good and created a disaster of a story so far. As of now the first translator has done a horrible job with the translation. By giving characters names like White Jade and Daoist This and That. It is clearly obvious this work is derived from google translate with little time put into fixing the grammar and sentence structures.

Overall I'll wait till a good 200 chapters are translated. So I can skip a head where we have a MC who is back to his previous strength. Right now this fic is a solid 2/5 for everything being subar. I'll update this with in the next five years.

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MaceTheDon
MaceTheDon rated it
September 5, 2022
Status: Completed
I had to read a MTL for this novel since this isn't being translated anymore (found a pretty serviceable MTL all things considered). This novel is more of the same in regards to my feelings for the prequel. There is too much fighting, as such there is very little world building & little to no interesting characters introduced or even built upon with the current cast of side characters (which got boring real fast).
Romance is tr*sh btw.
Completed it for completions sake, as I already read too much before I could even decide to look back.
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Demonic Reader lv 451F
Demonic Reader lv 451F rated it
April 25, 2022
Status: c30
Have high hope that the author would grow up and write better. But It Is Worse.

It's still the white beard Passerby-A fighting blue-gown Passerby-B for 5 chapters while the MC playing yellow mud. Suddenly the MC gets bore, throws the mud, killing these two anonymous plus the jade-face passerby-C and elogant dress man.

The MC immortality is nothing buy]t perpetual robot. Queen Borg is more human than this aimless MC.

My conclusion : no need to waste your time.
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Eccentric lezmier
Eccentric lezmier rated it
September 25, 2023
Status: Completed
This sequel was long overdue by the time I got it.

The plot is in similar fashion to the first one. Some relationships are continuing and we see some good new ones. Some plot holes from the prequel are well covered here.

‘I love the fights, the romance plot, cultivation progress; and how the overarching plot is resolved in the end as well.
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Afm
Afm rated it
December 3, 2022
Status: Completed
Compare with the 1st arch... this 2nd one more shabby as the writer seem lost idea & 'start-to-jump-into-bandwagon'..

The MC originally an 'Independent/Indifferent person'.. BUT.. writer change his personality to 'Clingy/Busybody/Nosy' one... MC start to run around saving his people.. one after another... while being hunt by enemy..

its too tiring to finish...
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Infinite_V0id
Infinite_V0id rated it
September 1, 2021
Status: c0
Honestly, when I read prologue and amount of chapter, I hope amount of expression changes here is different. Who am I trying to decieve? So what if you're immortal, if you are part of this novel. I see it as if author use his pen to distort their faces ;D
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