The author initially to write a sweet story and succeeds in doing so in early chapters. Later chapters starts introducing 3rd party in their love story. Both FL and ML was clean and doesn't really fall for anyone else but the story is quite awkward. For example, during the Doctor Arc, ML doctor was polite but alienated type. He was constantly being pursued by the hospital owner's daughter but he always refuse. However, on the night that he met the female lead, he's even politely sending her home. He wasn't accepting the confession but wasn't really pushing her away either. Later stories have many arc like this.

The FL in the story is quite pitiful in my opinion. I guess, it depends on peoples perception but several times the ML lied to her in order to keep her by his side and she always ended up falling for it. There are also several stories where obviously the ML is the one who's manipulating behind the scenes but in front of the FL he will act like he's on the grieved side. Thus, FL always ends up feeling sorry for him and feels that she's the one at fault.

No ending was written and later stories were rushed. This "planned-to-be-sweet" story turned into drama (according to the author) because of their original story and turn of events. It seems that this wasn't intended to happened so the author sealed the book.

MC grew up being raised by ML and treating him as an elder.

However, he used a system (supposedly from last Lord God) to have the MC be repeatedly assaulted by all his soul fragments.

Can you see how creepy this is? Lol.

Basically, the ML is g*ooming the MC to be his child bride. He's ahead of her in EQ and IQ, and within the first arc at chapter 15 he's already hypnotizing her to make her fall asleep so he can assault her with kisses and whisper to himself like a total creepy pe*vert.

Now, there's totally a large audience for this, as you can see from all the high early ranks and reviews - but this is extremely problematic from the get-go. It's all too obviously what will happen down the line with tons of arcs and quick romance between MC and ML soul fragments as put in the literal summary.

There's no getting around creepy 'eternal teenager' ML happily mind screwing the MC into being his happy little s*x puppet. (Worded this way on purpose to put it out there as plainly as possible).

But this part is not really the main issue. The main issue is these cardboard worlds and the lack of IQ for the MC. Or to be more precise, her lack of everything. She just kinda went through cutscene motions, said she loved Ml, and then bam the end!

The worlds are very vaguely detailed and lots of stuff randomly happens.

Example: Arc1 Little mermaid arc: Amber (Psycho Ml) immediately kisses MC which means in mermaid culture he devotes everything to her after spontaneously feeling like he likes her. Then later on it suddenly cuts to some elder (witch?) of the ML saying love between human/mermaid never works out of nowhere!

Arc is very shallow.

Now, We have this perfect, handsome and sexy male God (I’m not gonna site names because google translate sucks and I don’t want anyone suing me for getting ML name wrong). Despite his lack of emotions he found Ann abandoned human girl (FL) and took care of her.

He took care of her but because he’s still the unfeeling God he sometimes forgets about her (I know absurd) and he abandoned her once when she got older. (he was a God and She was a mortal he didn’t want to Ben attached to her) BUT he regrets it so he tries to find her only to realize that the world is big and he might not find her again. When he finally finds her, she was not like before, there was an respectful but alienated look in her eyes...

WHY ML SOULD SCATTERED

Although not ALL BUT 99% of the wouldn’t shards fell in love at first sight. And yes, they were possessive and all handsome.

FL is quite naive. But she’s understandable. She was abandoned by ML and she’s thinks she doesn’t have a chance with him so she just protected her heart and beame more realistic of her future.?

BUT LEGIT THIS IS GOOD. ? % RECOMMED.

There's just certain matters, like g*ooming, manipulation, and seduction of the ML. However, I think the FL had her own brain to realize this problems already.

The ML is her master who adopted her, so he's basically standing as her elder. But at this point, age doesn't really matter for an immortal cause they live a long life. Yeah, I know, it's not an excuse cause it's still g*ooming no matter what, but it matters not if the FL wants to be with him. So, I'll just try to hypnotize myself.

I mean,

To be fair, when she began to get in the relationship with the soul fragments of her master, she should've known about it right? I mean, no matter how silly a person can be, it's impossible that they can't distinguish a platonic love from romantic love. Especially, when she kisses the ML at the 2nd arc, and when she decided to be together with her master from the 1st arc.

Even if she was indeed calculated by the ML so that she would fall in love with him, didn't she still decide to be with him in the end? For, me it's not that complicated, as long as the FL is aware of her decisions and actions there's nothing to worry about. She did treat him as an elder, but the moment she decided to be involved romantically with her master's soul fragment, she must've known what she's getting to.

Besides, I've read countless QT where females approach the ML's with motives to preserve there life and seduce them.

All those ML's were also manipulated and seduced by the FL's in the process of QT, but all the comments in the story are praising the FL by how badass she is, how cunning, smart, beautiful, and crafty she is to capture the ML's. (Though, not in all QT novels, since some of them are just really straight up awful)

There's no mention of how they use the capture target's feelings for their own, no mentions of how creepy those females are for manipulating men and seducing them just to extract their s**en or affection, no mention of how those FL would seduce the ML for their status just so they can live a leisurely life of a salted fish. Which is I think, unfair since they're basically just doing the same thing, just in a different gender, yet suddenly the other would be praised as badass, cunning and smart FL, while the other would be branded as a creepy manipulative and possessive ML's.

And...... I know, I know.

Some would say that none of these would work if those men just controlled their lower body, but the same logic could be applied to the FL of this story.

None of his plan would've work if the FL didn't succumb to his seduction. So, to be fair, let's just leave the MC's together, shall we? Since they both know what they're getting into.

I LOVE how Princess Delina didn't turn out to be the stereotypical b*tchy rival and instead, she actually supported Yu Chu's happiness and in turn, achieved her own happiness. Ahh, so lovely.