Its pretty funny but there's Secretary, News Girl, Gamer Girl. All girls have their unique qualities. News girl is a tsundere. Secretary is amazing intelligent. Gamer girl is funny. But the Writer is so indecisive. He keeps changing script to much that he doesn't use these girls. Secretary girl tried so hard for MC. Learnt new language, joined his side and stayed loyal against her company.. Gamer girl. I was expecting more from her considering she's the only gamer out of the 3. Hardly gives her input and is just there.
Apperantly he learned several Martial Arts and how to kill 'online' and became a professional killer... That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard! The story is seriously unbalanced because of the situations between Real Life and Online. I thought it would be a Assassin reincarnation to another world story. But the way it is now there's no good balance or good direction to focus on the story.
I love the fact that Tang Yao whose a playboy falls in love with that Lou girl. You could say she saved him from dying since he in the previously life he died from being a womanizer. I think they suit each other. I still don't know if they'll end up together... I love the fact that the MC uses his friends as a shield to hide his identity but the story to fast to enable to join it. Before you know it your done with this. Its really short
If what the Manga says is true. He had a little sister who died and had wholeheartedly faith in him! Its just so sad.. However in WN we see no background on the MC or why he is so obsessed
There's a Girl whose left alone and her name is Rokuko. However despite being the main heroine she has short scenes. The Author doesn't make use of this Character. You could emphasize more on her "loneliness and character". Her backstory is good but not used! This could be a really deep story. There's also a girl called Meat. I don't like the Fact that she's a potential lover. She's already had s*x a lot of times against her own will as a slave so... she's really stained and unworthy of being a Heroine.
Just what was the point of Reincarnation?! He doesn’t use his past knowledge from a technological modern era! Hardly anything from his past life is known. It has no meaning and completely pointless writing him about being reincarnated.
you could say its nothing but dirt and sand. Even traveling to one town is considered like going to a university.
Second Arc was very amazing. He struggles through life and death just to save that Oujousama. Her character development has truly been one of the best in the Entire Series. I really do wish this was more Japanese-Like since LNs give good filters. But this Novel is always about fighting and getting stronger. No time for the charcaters or friends to interact and breath. I can’t enjoy them like this. We can only see them in their Arc but once the Arc is done they have little interaction and are just ‘there’
This world is so down graded that having slaves are normal and a huge necessity. Since hardly can one human accomplish so much by himself. At first I thought the MC was cruel and Ruthless but we see many sides of him as time goes by. Even his gentleness. I do wish he had better lines when he’s caring though.
For example the father has a beautiful wife but he still looks at other women. Like wtf what’s with these characters? They don’t feel real to the reader are all.
His carelessness leaks out his position to the enemies and they became dirt poor because of his stupid grudge. But he at least noticed his wrongs and shortcomings. Ogre gets revenge so that's good.
As for love interest so far there's only the female Neighbor and Scartlet. At first I loved the neighbor but she's more like a hooker. When Scarlet came I began laughing every chapter and hey she's a pretty cool character. When MC founded out she was being surrounded by a Guild arrogant 'young master' who tried to court her, MC goes there not because he wanted to protect her but he wanted to die for EXP! Even so people kept thinking that he was deeply in love with her! The misunderstanding of their love moments is funny.
Ever since he was acknowledge as a 'Brother-in-Law' by the little Loli, that's when I wanted to come together! If they don't become a couple then I'll be sad... but why does it feel like MC will end up with hooker instead? She's only a supporting side character. And doesn't do much in the Novel... even if she did enter the game. This Novel to soon to judge but I really want the Loli to become his Sister in law! As she lives things up
Immortal Princess was a girl born with a golden spoon, she's super arrogant and prideful. She loves but hates the MC. It makes me mad because she only accepts till he's acknowledge by important figures and defeated her... This rich girl deserves to get slap.
You visited another Sect and wanted to enter their mines. You don't even have the money to purchase. They had the right to treat you disrespectful but MC takes it like he was offended. He has no status whatsoever. Why the freak did she even take MC there? Talk about ignorance when she's the Master daughter... This is one of the many examples. Also that Xia girl turned her Master asleep and slipped out with MC. I just can't believe she would leave her best line of defense... Are you serious? When the MC has so many enemies... Your just asking to die. Although Meng says she's destined to be at the peak. She does not act like a martial artist at all..
The first girl Xiao was chill. She was in very deep in the Sect and wore a mask. It gave an impression of mysterious beauty. But she showed her colors to soon into a shy beautiful girl... I didn't like it first but she became like a good wife. Even so her whole character is useless and unnecessary... The 2nd girl was the worst. She acted like a slut. She played with fire too much then becomes the Damsel in distress. She doesn't deserve the MC. But somehow the MC forgives her and takes her in... Sigh. Not going lie I do I kind of like her because of her child like personality. But in the end her Blood family is still benefiting from the MC. At least strip away from your family to show your sincerity. But yeah she deserved to die.
Sun Yan the 3rd girl was the cold beauty type. I like her but she fell in love too easily like the others... She doesn't really have much to show.
The first chapters are really funny. Sun never felt like a villain but more like a funny character carrying a grudge. But yeah the ranking system makes no sense. Inner core disciples aren't worth much apparently. I also love the background story for the Sect Master. His dimples died and another betrayed. He deserves it though for showing favoritism to his disciple.
I found it very charming how the Author made MC seem like the dense slow but OP type. But even the Author didn't make good use of this and just another standard Wuxia type. I had high expectations because of the Translator regarding this highly. Yes, it has crazy good twists and turns but you can see times were the Author is negligent with his writing. The Eye seems OP at first then at other times is not considered OP then suddenly there are others like him? Like wtf? You could make better use of it... The character I read this for is Zhao Yufei. She's a good girl with a cute personality but she keeps being discarded.. Then the MC gets forcefully engage to another chick but MC does not have the guts to say it. They all fall in love instantly. Sigh... The romance is just really bad. You can see how forced it is