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Victor DoUrden
Victor DoUrden
The Grandmaster Strategist
August 29, 2017
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No where as good as people make it out to be. It reads quite dryly and lack of detail if any to who looks like what aside from a name. Like a boring history book. The chauvinism typical in many chinese works is also fairly prevalent here. There is no draw or reason to give a f**k about anyone really. Some parts that could possibly be interesting are totally skipped

eg. He was going over there bam he arrived! Or some objective he is going to____ he did it

Also some parts... more>> are just total bullsh*t in regards to his blind luck. I haven't even gotten fair and there are parts where it's 10% his wits 90% pure blind luck. <<less
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Bocchi Tenseiki
January 14, 2016
Status: --
This is something for when bored. At the start it seems... MEH enough with some cliches here and there and how easily being a POS asshole comes to the MC. The entire spirit magic thing one might think would add promise to the story, being something of a good foundation for elaboration upon... it’s not and to what’s translated up to now, it’s not sh*t to this story and seems forgotten practically. It sorta implies or foreshadows some possible argument or altercation with people... that doesn’t happen. Some comedy can... more>> be found with the unicorns and that’s pretty much the best part to this story. Nothing really else just a fast turn into the pure garbage domain of stories with stupid slave harem sh*t. It has a hot spring part could you get anymore f**king cliche.

Characters are barely (if even) built on in anyway outside their comments. Course there is also the misogynist undertone that builds up, the typical sh*t in harems, as well as where for lack of reasons outside oh he save me I love him bullsh*t. Girls come off as pathetic (particularly angela who can surprisingly at least wipe her own ass without him). Sure she was in a bad situation yada yada and now treated way better..... but her annoying weak mental state is only there for her to like the MC more and present a use for his strength to show off saving her as the leading role for damsel in distress. Could be more then inane blushes and cheek kisses and I don't mean s*xually... there could be something made from that.... but will never happen, ever. Deep is not what one should expect from puddles. This story by no means has sinkhole hidden in that puddle... it is nothing more then just a shallow puddle of a story.

Sadly cant think of anything positive really to say about this. Sure it could be worse like way worse (eg. close combat mage looking at you) but the story is 1.5 at best. Nothing new, no good draw, bunch of cliches. Story is just meh with a selfish ass of an MC who is not deep enough in anyway to overcome that being a loser d*ck, into... well an interesting character. Not d*ckish enough to despise him and hope the story ends quickly with his death either. Meh..... <<less
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Victor DoUrden
Kinda plain out bad (for now) but with promise. Beginning just starts up and bam with another character of his and some silly sappyness. With only 5 chapters jack sh*t has happened except for major time skip of just him... just chillin? Just... hanging around with a female elf character he made before he isekai'ed

I'll change this when there is something to actually review past what I've mentioned
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Magi’s Grandson
December 3, 2015
Status: --
This a an alright story and a good read for the wait for updates to better stories. This does not have jack sh*t for any deep characters, great plot or anything else really. Story is quite predictable and cliche here and there. The synopsis pretty much is the entire story in a nut shell. He is OP to just being the very point of silly and not entirely aware of it which is the leading punchline to most of the humor.

The point where it is at and progress of the... more>> story is good with so far. No sign of some bullsh*t coming out of nowhere, popping out suddenly and getting everything absurd like some other stories. Simple, light hearted, and comical in a nutshell. <<less
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Very light hearted simple story with an awfully unreasonably realistic and plausible character instead of some trash high/middle school MC that should go choke on a purple dildo to death.
Entire premise is he just does whatever his whimsy, none of that I gotta be the very best, read all the forums, catch em all, numbers!! numbers!! stats!!..... nah just I feel like doing this and Im gonna do it at my on pace. No life or death moments just hey gonna give archery a try... does archery.
Good premise... more>> but can be kinda meh here and there but this is after all a slice of life genre <<less
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