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Nine Star Hegemon Body Art
November 7, 2018
Status: c200
In response to some of the negative reviews:

Mom can't cultivate because she doesn't have a spirit root. The end. The MC isn't God.

Ex-fiance broke off the marriage because he was too weak. That's fine too. I hate it when people say thats cold hearted. She wants someone who can be considered an equal. They've never met before and there's no reason for a cultivator to marry a mortal and become a huge weak link. On top of the fact that she was really kind in the way she cancelled the... more>> marriage too. I also hate it when people say that he shouldn't chase after a girl just because she's beautiful. As if all of you people haven't chased someone because you were attracted to them. Damn Hypocrites. The father has his own problems that are explained later in the story and can't spare any manpower to help his family.

Story is good, and the scheming is interesting. I like his cultivation technique. The MC gets setbacks too, versus the always in control MC. I highly recommend it. Updated at chapter 200:
The only problem that I see is that everyone else seems kind of stupid except for the MC, including his own people. That's extremely annoying. Also, there are a lot of cliches, which seem to get a bit worse in the later chapters. It lacks a spark of originality.

Updated at chapter 311:

Also, it's weird that the evil side is united and the good side has tons of infighting. Unity among evil people seems highly unlikely, unless there's one really strong person forcing them to do so. Of course, we haven't learned much about the other sides' higher ups.

The scheming has gone done somewhat in quality too.

I decreased it down one star as a result to a 4 star story. <<less
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Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms
December 5, 2017
Status: --
Even if you make a new page to reset the poor reviews...a bad story is still a bad story... all you did was remove all of the positive views that initially were garnered by the story when it first came out...

A ridiculous harem story where women all just randomly fall in love with the MC, leaving you thinking, quite literally "wtf"...

It started with something that sounds like it would have been a great story, but the author just wreaked it. If you literally have nothing to read at all, then... more>> I might suggest looking at this one.

Cultivation Chat Group is like a 1000X better than this story. <<less
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Immortal Ape King
June 28, 2017
Status: c11
Not sure if the story is going to be good or not, but the translation by WuxiaNationTL is difficult to read because it feels machine translated. Also, when you read the story, it feels like a child wrote it, so it might make your head hurt...

The main character has just started cultivating, and is supposedly a genius because his soul crossed over, and how he would be better than everyone else, if only he had resources or was born into a better clan. There's a bit of whining. Then the... more>> author goes on the say that cultivation speed wasn't much of a problem any more in a later chapter. Also I didn't get whether they explained what his previous internal injuries were from.

He was also an orphan in his previous life, and now he has parents. Doesn't feel like he is grateful for having parents now. The crossing over of his soul is also kind of like, "Oh okay, I crossed over. Thank you god." It required no real adjustment on his part...

Also, apparently using a bow will give him prefect control of his strength and coordination of his entire body, which I don't believe that is true at all. Apparently, using the bow will help him refine his body so it gets better suited for control...

I haven't seen any actual character development for anyone either, making you feel like this story might be a bit shallow. Also, I don't feel like anything has really been happening in the story. No antagonist, just the MC trying to get strong.

This story kind of feels like a subpar version of The Desolate Era. It has a water cultivation attributed MC, Houyi archer, alive loving parents, etc

I can't really judge the story properly this early, so I guess we will see how it goes. But if it continues superficially like this, I'll probably drop it soon. <<less
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Haroon
July 13, 2017
Status: v1c6
The story is everything that you hope for in a VR novel. The world is real, and doesn't feel like a game, like those other novels like the great thief and similar novels. The extra cool thing is that playing the game helps him improve in real life as well.

Each chapter is nice an long too, compared to other novels.

Hoping for more updates soon!
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Gob Tensei
July 6, 2016
Status: C12
Its weak and there doesn't seem to be a particular direction that its going in. Very slice of life kind of story with a creepy masochist MC. Nothing special here
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Peerless Martial God
August 5, 2018
Status: c2000
I just want to give Totally Insane Translations some props for continuing to translate to the end. It's actually very impressive if you look at it from this angle. It would have been simple to quit, with all of the negative feedback this story gets, but they are going to the end, and I respect that.

The major problem with this story is that the villains are too 1 dimensional and almost always "arrogant young masters". The villains are always sprouting lies and covering the truth that the MC exposes every... more>> time. And somehow only the MC's friends are good people. Sometimes the MC offends people for no reason other than "they looked at him with disdain". Like, who the hell cares if people look at you like that. Everyone in this story is too extreme, including the MC, especially in later chapters.

On the other hand, unless someone died, they still show up later in the story, because the MC goes back home over and over again, so you get to see the changes in all of those areas. I like that about this story. It doesn't deserve one star, but its definitely not 5 stars either. I'd say 3 stars. An alright read. <<less
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One Piece Invincible
October 10, 2018
Status: c19
If you are looking for accuracy, you shouldn't read this.

This is a fanfiction obviously. The writing isn't that great, and feels a bit childish. The translation has some typos here and there too.

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Spoiler

Apparently there are dinosaurs in East blue somehow. And according to the author, people with bounties in the hundreds of millions just wander East blue. And then it went from belli currency to gold and silver coins...I stopped reading One piece after the time skip, but I don't know if that became a thing.

Also, MC is overly OP. He can get and use all devil fruits. No limitations. Unfortunately, he became stupid all of a sudden.

He is getting crew members in a similar order to Luffy as well with the navigator and swordsmen. It is lacking a bit of originality.

He even gave away the healing fruit so far to his one and only crew member. So apparently no one can get in the water on that ship. He says its for her protection, but she is a non-combatant, and if she falls in the water from not being able to protect herself, she'll die anyways.

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It might turn people off that the MC and navigator have Indian names, but I don't mind.

Its an "okay" read, if you're just looking to pass the time.

I had to drop it because I got bored. It doesn't have the same appeal as One Piece. It's like a watered down version. <<less
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