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treecat
treecat rated it
Nine Star Hegemon Body Art
November 9, 2018
Status: c480
Don't bother reading.

I've given up by chapter 480.

The author kept writing all sort of justifications for the so-called genius protagonist to take the worst decision possible, leading to the ultimate drama, ending up using plot armor to barely survive.

And the drama kept building up, the protagonist kept getting stronger and angrier and angrier, the antagonists kept surviving and escalating the conflict.
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treecat
treecat rated it
Am I A God?
July 20, 2018
Status: c200
This is bullsh*t.

Developing the plot for an arc then using deus ex machina and constantly changing rules to keep some sort of status quo.

Developing the characters for an arc then writing bullsh*t dialogues denying any sort of growth.

I suspect the writer is at his wit's end trying to balance reasonable character and plot growth while keeping the novel exciting. He or she is finding excuses to turn this novel into a collection of Three Stooges short stories.
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