MC meets his so called Fiance and at first everything is nice the mother in law is especially good to him, but who would expect that the moment the mother in law leaves on sect business the Fiance straight forwardly tells the MC that she has no intention of marrying him especially him who has no talent in cultivation (her cultivation level is too low to even realize that he has a special body so she just judges from testing his cultivation level.) She then goes on to threaten him into giving her the sect leaders ring his master (her father) gave him. Naturally our MC outright tells her to go kill herself (okay not that but he did say something but I cant remember) our MC then sneaks out of the sect only to be found out and chased down and almost killed by his own Fiance if not for his special body. Then he's pretty much the enemy of said sect but another old man who he meets in the beginning saves him and ends up dying for him. While on his last breath, marries his daughter to the MC and makes him his successor to his city lord position and such, now the MC has to shoulder this task while competing against his new dead master's sons who want to become the next city lord (and this is just the start of his troubles)
as the MC has to convince people to fight with him against an enemy who quite frankly has more than 300 years preparation while he has none so its fun to see the methods he has to try to win.
There is one specific woman who ends up in his harem later that pretty much he tricks her that he is her husband who she thought was dead (well the truth is the husband asks makes him promise to pose as him and take care of her and his family) although they had been married but it was pretty much for 1 day before he had been killed. MC basically takes the wife's first time and gets her pregnant when she finds out the truth she goes balistic but later through there other encounters you realize she actually start to fall in love with him not to mention he is the father of her soon to be kid but she trolls him constantly with her tsudere personality. She later on becomes one of the people who are constantly helping him even if it means to drug another woman and bring her into his bed lol
Yulian the young glo (Desert prince/1st in line/future king... really just however you prefer to interpret it) who pretty much is a little brat trying to become stronger for various reasons but mostly to help his tribe who is situated in the desert. He a little after the story starts encounters a mysterious middle aged man who he realizes is super OP so he immediately asks to become his disciple after some time the man agrees and so starts our Young Glo's journey. As he gets older he starts to realize the world he lives in isn't so simple, as he has to face beings that can demolish cities, while watching his own back from those close to him. Not to mention destiny has set a course for him, his friends and his family in a prophecy that may determine the fate of his entire world and the most important thing he starts to realize his master is a lot stronger than he could possibly imagine.
I read most of the other fan fictions by authors like "Strongest hokage" and "God of Soul system" and others but for this the author took a different route. I'll be honest I'm not that interested in this, especially with him looking like he's going all Medical Ninja atm... The author's writing in this at times feel like some high school kid is writing while other times its okay (if I didn't know otherwise I would think this was his first novel)... The first chapter just feels like everything happened out of nowhere like a lotto event. But even if I look pass that there are a lot things in the beginning I really can't understand at all.
He's fresh out the womb, meets his uncle in the narutoverse... who doesn't spend that much time with him in the beginning a little later he dies in the war... and when this guy finds out he gets so angry as if he was so emotionally attached to this person? If it was the mother I would understand but the uncle? I mean even the mother was shocked he even remembered his uncle who she said he hadn't seen since he was 1 year old (he's 5 years old now when his uncle dies), Plus it was angry enough to unlock his sharingan? Like really?
Since this is only 10 chapters in theres not really much to go on but i'll continue to read either way and see how it goes...
Also translator needs to get someone to do editing for him as I ran into way too much grammatical errors and missing words.
(2/5) I'll probably read this in my free time when I have nothing else to read...
Update ---> Chapter 21
From what I see so far... this will be the most normal novel vs the others the author has written, when I say normal I mean he didn't add anything outside of the naruto world i.e. Fruit from one piece or Zanpacto (is that how it's spelt?) from bleach. Not that its bad or anything but anyway so far he has dropped the notion of being a medical ninja and started focusing on becoming stronger. There are few strange twists and turns but it only has slight potential so far so ill move it up to a (3/5).
one of Kaguya clansmen appear earlier which causes some slight confusion in the MC's planning but still solved none the less.
Small impact: Kakashi's sharingan no longer limits his potential as the MC along with orochimaru fixed the issue with the Sharingan not being compatible with Kakashi bcuz of him not having uchiha bloodline. MC
Major Impact: The MC fines the solution to mangekyo blindness without having to transplant another sharingan though it has some defects it worked for the most part. MC also did some soul and cloning research that he uses to bring back people who's souls he used his power to save.
MC decides to go to the home world of Kaguya to slaugter her clansmen instead of waiting for them to appear like in the story but this also further expands on the clan the original never mentioned.
MC knows that Kaguya left something like beacon that could draw her clan towards their world, MC goes out of his way to destroy these things and coincidentally meet a stranger from outside of their world who happens to speak "Chinese" but is not from earth but a different race that happens to use Chinese as their main language lol (I'm assuming there will be an arc about this race also).
Author built up so much expectation as if he was about to had his own original storyline to the narutoverse yet he just ends it after he fights the head of Kaguya's clan... like wtf... there were so many things left that he didn't pursue in the novel sh*t....
Actually this part annoyed the sh*t out of me because I like an MC that can at least hold his own against who he is fighting. Although the MC does fight and his cultivation does rise to a certain extent by absorbing other peoples cultivation who he kills but these fights can be counted on my hand out of the first 400+ chapter arc
To transition into this arc I wont go into detail but he loses his entire empire he was building
MC pretty much gets transformed into a vampire demon thing, where he sucks the blood of his enemies and it adds to his cultivation he doesn't look like a monster though except the vampire fangs and sharp ears.
MC is a shadow dancer which is the term given to people who are born with high affinity to darkness elemental attribute. There are naturally also people that have affinity with other attribute like him but they are all very rare.
1. MC finds a mysterious crystal that happens to fuse with his body mysteriously.
2. MC suddenly realizes his body is mysteriously changing bcuz of the crystal (talent + cultivation speed)
3. MC start to climb his sect ranks from trash to genius diciple
4. Everything's going good as usual with a few twist and turns with fellow sect disciples until boom! Suddenly an old enemy of the major sect reappears on the continent on the continent.
5. War break's out.
6. Due to some circumstances him and another cultivator is forced to leave that side of the continent as he vows to come back when he is stronger
7. Reaches other continent joins another sect (they call it college) then participates in the tournament that seems impossible for him to win and boom miracle appears he wins.
8. Goes back to his home continent and starts to sh*t on people who needs to be sh*t on.
9. Sound familiar? A lot of things are different but its still the same direction.
In middle school a girl fell in love with him, they were desk mates and he also started to fall for her. Later on another girl reported them to their class teacher who took it upon himself to call both parents while throwing dirt on the MC by telling the girls father the MC had been purposely misleading and taking advantage of her. The Mc's father who also there got mad and slapped the sh*t out of him in front of everyone. This scarred him at a young age causing him to lose motivation to be the same as before. Not to mention he was even more disappointed that the girl never contacted him ever again in any form.
He can see a couple miles ahead clearly as if in front and even xray vision he discovers later
The most notorious and most wanted hitman in the world or is it china? Either way he is op
Eye of death, eye of life, eye of illusion?... yeah I forgot some stuff but hey u have other eyes
MC is task with looking for a certain woman as his current sect in a dire situation which he isn't strong enough to do anything about so his master sends him away to take refuge under a woman he knew. But other from a name he doesn't know anything about this woman. When he goes to the city he goes under the status of a beast tamer which is a highly respected occupation next to the fact that the MC is really young he is looked at as a genius (This guy has no taming skill its his sharingan genjutsu doing that work). The city lord who he is introduced to has a daughter who has the name of the woman he is looking for, naturally the MC is looking for an opportunity to speak to her but 'coincidentally' she is hosting GET A WIFE contest where anyone that's in the younger generation who can beat her will be able to take her as a wife. The city lord who see's the MC being a genius pretty much throw him into the ring against his will to fight his treasured daughter. Naturally MC wins but he truly has no feelings for her but that doesn't stop her from developing feelings for him even though the MC pays absolutely no attention to her. One thing lead to another and the MC decides he's going to leave this city and her behind but while he is escaping the city lord send his top warriors and so on after him who he manages to sh*t on of course but as he is about to successfully escape he encounters her waiting on him. He is in an awkward situation but he knows that he truly hurt her in his decision to leave so he promises her that when he is finished the things he needs to do he will come back for her.
Throughout the novel one encounter and arc I enjoyed was his encounter with Death who pretty much chased him down for a year or two. (Person like him with the special Eye called Eye of Death)
pregnancy issues happen later on
There are several females he has s*x with in this novel but every single time the author would use some bullsh*t excuse as to why this situation came about and why the females are in acceptance of the situation
The MC later on figured out that the reason the apocalypse caused by some alien race that used their planet to test a virus. Which was okay I could accept that, but this guy starts to fight them in space by himself (at this point hes almost like a god in the story) they proceed to try to kill him by blowing up half the moon and then they send several strikes to earth almost driving the entire civilization extinct, Only a couple hundred thousand chinese survived as he killed the aliens before they could finish. He then took over the ship they used and brought the survivors out to space, this novel now took a complete 180 degree turn from the direction I thought it would when I started reading. Now we later find out that the system he uses was send to him by some higher beings who want to use his power to obverse something (not gonna bother talk about it since it really doesnt matter) which results in him discarding the system bcuz he can do that now he's that OP. So now we follow our captain on the SS Enterprise space ship as they travel throughout the universe in hopes of discovering new life -_-
Also MC gets this magic book that assists him in mastering cultivation techniques and so on but the book is basically possessed by a beautiful onee-san who pretty much helps this guy again and again but this retard keeps putting himself in situations that where she keeps almost disappearing forever as she constantly tries to save this retard
Author keeps introducing all these girls that like the MC and still trying to not make this a harem, I love a good romance especially when its only one girl, harem I don't mind as long as each of the girls character's are developed well and not just some retarded big chest no brain types. The first one the nurse girl that was thrown in his face she get raped and suicides later on, then there is the rich girl who pretty much likes the MC because he ignored her. She then realized that she was pretty stupid and changed her ways for the MC and starts helping him with various problems while clearly still showing that she is in love with him. Next girl he met in another country she ended up working for him while he was there he saved her life and her gave her enough money for her family and such through some event he ended up sleeping with her but of-course our MC is strictly one woman kinda guy so at most he keeps her around but doesn't have any intimate relations with her. Then this guy goes way back in time to Egypt and falls in love with Cleopatra or something but because he has to go back in to our present time he has to leave her after. (completely retarded) Then the last girl introduced into where I currently stopped was the daughter of his enemy who started to like him, she basically just came in the story to just die for the MC pretty much because that's what she did lol