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Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster)
October 19, 2018
Status: c95
Typical Isekai garbage. If you want a well written plot go elsewhere. The MC is supposedly nearing 1, 000 years old or at least past 700. He's been warring, killing, fighting, leading and conquering for hundreds of years nearly none stop through multiple worlds and 'life times'. This iant even spoilers it's basically the description.

Somehow the MC keeps his Japanese Isekai passive attitude. There's nothing to look forward to. Anything remotely serious is reduced to trash by completely inappropriate comedic relief. It's just so dissatisfying, the MC has never seen... more>> a pretty girl before? It's like a harem trash novel done wrong. This is just so dumb. Ah I'm so frustrated it's these type of novels that make you hate the genre. I want to filter out all Isekai and even Japanese webnovels and light novels for a while it's THAT bad.

The author spends so much time doing inner thoughts, the main characters are cookie cutter, card board cut out, trope trash. Completely unoriginal. You can see why the novel hasn't progressed look at the chapter count. Just read a slice of life novel instead at least one of those is meant to be that way. This novel is just frustrating and boring. <<less
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Elixir Supplier
December 3, 2018
Status: c21
Ah the story starts off a bit weird. The MC is too accepting of the system. Do all Chinese people think of having systems in their heads? Is that why the chinese government restricts internet access lol? Just kidding hehe...

Anyway it's almost comical how the MC just takes it in stride it takes you out of the story a bit. Anyway this seems like another of those MC has a system and becomes super awesome from wastrel garbage status.

Not that far in, MC has stats but they don't do much... more>> so far other than kind of give him a bit more strength and endurance when hauling vegetables.

He started brewing medicine, that just started so not much else to say. I'll keep reading but since it seems to be in the real world there isn't any world building. The story isn't anything special so far. I might drop is something I dont like happens. I might keep reading I'm iffy about it. <<less
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Overgeared
October 14, 2018
Status: c926
KOREA NUMBER 1!!!!

Go Korea super underachiever but really the best in the world!! Korea!!!!

MC grows up into garbage then some wish fulfillment happens he turns rich and beautiful. It's great the MC is an idiotic trash then the MC develops a bit. Great read until all the supporting cast loses their personalities. All the girls want to be in his harem and devolve into scary harem freaks. All the enemies want his items. The world revolves around him somehow.

The MC loves Korea Number 1 and the story dies a slow... more>> boring patriotic death. <<less
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A poorly written/ translated slice of life novel. The story gets dragged down by the food, usually food centered stories can be referred to as 'food p***' but not this one. Too many details are lost in translation or the story was mediocre in the first place.

It just drags on and on and the food descriptions aren't that great.

The winning point is the stories system, everyone has levels and stats. Everything else from the reason she transmigrated to the worlds background is completely generic iseki garbage. The author didn't even... more>> try to make it original. <<less
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Empress Running Away with the Ball!
July 9, 2018
Status: c1689
The female MC has a decent personality. Until she loses it over and over to idiotic repeated events. It's the same thing over and over, the story is interesting but turns into word padding fast. Writing so the author gets paid because of word count it's horrible. The story loses all its flare. Soon after the start it turns into garbage that repeats itself over and over. No progress is made in the story so it quickly turns into a slog of the same plot repeated again and again. You... more>> just want something meaningful to happen, but you get nothing but word count padding instead. <<less
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I Will Quietly Disappear
July 9, 2018
Status: c12
I'm so unhappy. I look forward to a next chapter and we get failing filler. The story is only 12 chapters in and the author is writing garbage filler already. From other peoples perspectives we get a bunch of trash that's useless. I'm so unhappy I start to look forward to the next chapter and the author has an autism flare and he stops the main story line for word padding chapters. Omake on the 3rd chapter. Now that's bad writing wow.

The story is mediocre. Another of the generic avoid... more>> the bad ending kinds where someone useless the the first life suddenly becomes mildly less useless because of an adults mind in a child.

The dialogue is incoherent babble, characters are introduced and you have no idea who's talking. Its horrid to read. <<less
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How To Die As Heavy As Mount Tai
July 8, 2018
Status: c1
The first chapter skips through thoughts like crazy. It's an incoherent info dump. You can basically skim through chapter one and get a feel for the the type of story it is. Either you'll be okay with the writing style enough to stay or you'll hate it and drop.

Now that I think about it the story is like the description. See how its perfectly normal then suddenly half way through it noticable becomes a garbaled mess of words and thoughts? The story is like that.
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"Being the demon lord’s gigolo is the best." -Former Hero

Anyway the story is originally Japanese, then someone translated it into Chinese Mandarin, then the translator machine translated the Chinese Mandarin translation into English. So the story reads like sh!t haha.
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Just the Two of Us in this Vast World
August 23, 2018
Status: c1 part14
I like this story. The only problem I have is.. Well I expect it to be the kind of story where she's just insane and none of it happens its just her being a slasher lmao. Idk. It's like a middle schoolers delusional thoughts haha. You know the angsty thoughts of a bullied kid.
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The Empress’s Gigolo
June 27, 2018
Status: c184
Edit: The story is being updated but novel updates hates qidian for no reason so they dont track every novel.

Have you ever read I have a Mansion in the Post-Apocalyptic World?

... more>> This story is similar, the MC goes from one world to the other bringing objects and knowledge from to and from worlds.

In Gigolo his move between worlds has a rigid schedule and he can't choose when to travel.

He interacts with the empress quite a bit, I was almost surprised how much. The situations are a bit dumb, sure there are semi reasonable explorations but I thought he'd world from the bottom a bit longer than he did. His technology makes her country better so she's happy, this is basically the plot early on.

Spoiler

I'm really disappointed how fast he gets rich and influential it's rather droll.

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The Amber Sword
May 17, 2018
Status: v4c21
It's a great series, I even read the machine translation just a little bit to read ahead.

I think the translator does a great job, he could probabaly make a decent amount of money by just working for qidian instead of running his own site, paying hosting bills and even adding invasive ads.

Guess it's up to the translator. Anyway he's really good at translating he just has a lot of real world problems it seems.
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I Reincarnated For Nothing
January 7, 2019
Status: c148
I really was here for a love story. Matiel and Arpte were such cute kids. Matiel has loved Arpte for so long... it was cute and fluffy with decent story thrown in. Eventually it turns into bullsh*t, they spend all their time in time skips. They do this time skip they're two years older or whatever time skip time skip time skip it is so annoying. What was cute in childhood turns re****ed as they grow older. Arpte starts surrounding himself with young girls. Matiel becomes strange, it just turns... more>> out kind of meh.

Arpte is so overpowered it turns the story into sh*t. IIt's just, going, the story is moving forward but it lost all the charm, it feels like your waiting for it to finish. If I had to compare it to something maybe.. waiting for a terminal distant family member to die slowly so you can stop having to show care. Just annoying, hope it finishes soon. <<less
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Soul of Searing Steel
December 3, 2018
Status: c169
The MC is a super muscle head. Unlike those annoying novels where tons of schemes are required to do things MC forgoes that and just hits stuff until the problem is solved. It's kind of refreshing to have a meathead MC just bash things, let's you turn your brain off and read some junk after a hard days work. At this point in the story the arc dragged on a bit and not all that much smashing enemies has happened so I'm a bit disappointed, kind of want the huge... more>> lug to start hitting things again. <<less
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For a Prosperous World
October 19, 2018
Status: c35
Edit 2: Delta made it to chapter 35, I'll raise the rating a star. The story gets much better later on. Quality goes up, story is good, MC is a little silly and lazy but a good student to the general.

Edit: Well I like the story. Still unsure about delta but whatever.

Ah Delta is a real wishy washy translator. Delta always drops novels, all novels Delta translated were dropped. Just based off the translator I'd say don't bother.

Check this translation quality. First chapter excerpt.

Skin as smooth as water, a face formed like jade, the height of a meter seven, anyone with eyes would praise this person's looks.
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Psychic Tattoo
July 11, 2018
Status: c62
Wow I really like these types of stories. A bit of mystery a bit of horror. The only problem is the translation is a bit bad. It needs polish. Also the MC is an idiot lmao. He doesn't listen to advice he gets pressured by everyone he's a weak sissy MC.

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The MC is a fu*king moron. People keep giving him fantastic advice and he does not listen to anyone. There are so many other more experienced mystic users and he continues to f*cking ignore them and do the exact opposite of what everyone tells him to do.

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*sigh* He does get better later on but the beginning is really annoying. I reccomend the story. It's an interesting read if you like this genre. <<less
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Transmigrator Meets Reincarnator
May 15, 2018
Status: c374
Nice food p*** story, later on she fights with her husband less and he starts to hate her less. I kind of didn't like their not so hateful interactions but that's just me. Probabaly used to the story of them not liking each other, it's been that way almost 300 chapters straight so the change feels off.

Cute story the transition of them not hating each other or indifference is a bit off but I guess its reasonable in a way.

Wish she took credit for her achievements.
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Is He A Hero? 「Yup」
May 2, 2019
Status: c12
It's kind of silly and the updates are slow but the story is funny. I don't like the palace girl guide she keeps holding our majestic and slightly erratic hero MC back but other than that this is kind of funny.
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A heart warming one shot. What reincarnation is most likely to be if it were really to happen. I think this puts any delusions I might have ever had to rest. My heart feels a little steadier.
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