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Atelier Tanaka
March 17, 2016
Status: --
Rather disappointing. Mostly it's about a reincarnated man who become ugly as a cheat-power but doesn't do anything special just lives, go to work, meet people who don't like him.
Actually it's kind of boring.
It's not a love story, neither is there any "special/complex/exiting" magic.
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Super Brain Telekinesis
October 20, 2016
Status: v1c5
Strange story. To be sincere, if this was written by a 12 years old, I would say "Good work, keep working and who knows, one days you may become a writer."
But if this is made by an experienced writer, corrected by other people, bought by reader with money... sorry, not worth the time.

Why?
First no presentation, by that I mean that in every story, there are some place where the writer would present the MC, the world he is living (yes, even the "actual world"), gave a background to... more>> make the story more solid, giving the reader a feeling of reality. Allowing us to really lose ourselves when reading. Here, you just read the facts, as if you are supposed to guess everything around it.
Second
Spoiler

what kind of story explain the central plot (his powers) at his second paragraph? Its like he wrote :

People ! Here is a boy. He had an accident. He woke up in a hospital. His head doesn't hurt? => his brain mutated

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Alleluia! The great one is here.
No suspense, no stress or wondering. You either accept it or you die...

Third?
Spoiler

The MC is a mix between a Super-Duper-Over-Powered boy and a stupid teenager getting into trouble incapable of using what he has (powers or just his brain like every normal teen) to help himself or does something smart.

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Whatever, this is the kind of novel where the writing is just to write, obviously no concrete plot.

PS: If this is written by a teen sorry but either you gave up writing for people outside family or you look around for help and advices. <<less
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Hakai Me no Yuuri
April 7, 2016
Status: --
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Not to be rude but the first thing happening is the MC getting raped by all the city, kind of disturbing let's say. Until chapter 6, nothing special. A bit of humor but always forced, the protagonist isn't all that smart and the action is nonexistent until now.

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So not worth reading until now but it could change.
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World of Warcraft: Foreign Realm Domination
October 26, 2017
Status: c61
Probably one of the most disappointing novels I have ever read.

At first the WOW element make it interesting however, this is actually a trap since there are no real links to WOW excepts the puppets names.

The MC act always like to say that his "reincarnation" made him smarter, more mature, etc. Than others but he actually is just like your usual perverted, slow and slightly stupid teenager.

... more>> This novel is literally a waste of time.

I finally found a novel which can really kill my brain. Stay away from it if you want to stay as smart as you currently are. <<less
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In a World Without Life
March 27, 2016
Status: --
A sweet love story mixing magic and world traveling. Truly a nice story to read.
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Returning from the Immortal World
June 4, 2018
Status: c510
To quote someone, I'm at the chapter 510, when I started, I was a big fan yet more and more :

The racism, general biggotry and nationalistic pride in this novel is truly rampant... Makes it really hard to stomache reading it at times... It's a huge turn off. I hope there's at least a lesson down the line...

It's tiring. A so called "immortal" who traveled the universe, lived for millions years was present at war with way more than billion people actually hope to "govern" Japan in the Dark and... more>> hold their people in his hands. Also wants to obtain more and more money with reason "we need money to get ingredients". Also his view of women is kinda strange: they are great and must be respected but charming left and right while keeping them at bay is okay, keeping himself free because of previous hurt but "sacrificing" his body himself to a woman subordinate in love.

At first, I thought it was a immortal with little "outside" experience, very innocent so 1. protect his family, 2. get stronger maybe?

But it seems I was wrong as he gets more and more like one of these big tycoon with lots of connections, secret knowledge, money can solve everything or killing all enemies (if killing seems troubling then just create a unique immortal technique that you could never show before).

I have to say, for a fabled cultivator, every chapter make the MC more and more boring. If it change, I would be more than happy to start reading again, but this time was the time too much and I need a break from this "The immortal World" with no immortal (merely OP people whose powers are never used) and no world (stuck in China with a bit of Japan as a... land of uncultured foreigners I guess).

So off I am. <<less
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Dungeon+Harem+Master
July 16, 2016
Status: v1c6
Utterly worthless. No real plot, translation unclear and messy. MC sometimes good and naïve sometimes evil and cruel.
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The Overbearing Chief Husband’s Favorite: Baby
September 14, 2018
Status: c31
Okay so :

Spoiler

    • the female MC goes to the birthday feast of someone who want to hurt her
    • she just so happens to find a room to hide
    • the male MC rapes her after seeing her necklace
    • next morning the female MC act thankful/angry...
    • etc

As for the description on NU, chapter 31 and no sign of child so... maybe it will come toward chapter 60-100 but in that case, it's not a description adapted.

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I don't see any characters building, any deepness in either theirs actions or theirs thoughts.

I got quickly bored with the characters not thinking more than their next step. It's like writing a book as it come and not revising it after, allowing event to be scrambled. A bit like a story where each page is summarized by one sentence : it make sense but doesn't capture the attention or create any imagination from the reader.

This novel isn't bad but if you hope for something fun, full of surprise or excitement, this won't help. Kinda like binge reading, give you something but after reading you won't feel like remembering it more than this.
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These Dangerous Girls Placed Me Into Jeopardy
June 1, 2018
Status: side story 1
Exeptionnel. A story not overly complicated or complex but worth the time and the pleasure.

Although the supernatural has it's place, it doesn't change the story into a unbelievable-one and still keep a steady flow.

Some may said that it is full of boring and already seen things but I fell that it's only a cute and enjoyable story, not trying to overdo it or to make itself THE best story of all.

So have a good time without trying to overthink it :D
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Thrive in Catastrophe
November 30, 2017
Status: c19
Ever since the second chapter I could tell : this novel is sooo.... GOOD !

A true jewel seriously, both the original writing, the translating, the pace of the story, the characters ambiguous at first, then interesting and very attaching.

A novel to read at all cost :D
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Knights & Magic
December 4, 2016
Status: v3c29
The best novel about giant robots. The slight reincarnation is almost un-important since the only advantage the MC has is his programming skill. Also for once, the reincarnated one doesn't keep talking about "in my old world...".

Sadly, starting from the chapter 28 volume 3, the story has changed of translators and the new one seems to never edit his translations making for one very annoying read. The verbs are all wrong, the sentence make almost no sense, the name are suddenly strange (ex: Dell Van Cool), the translator doesn't seems... more>> to really understand his own translation,...

A complete opposite from the first part which is a enjoyable as it is well translated.

This is the first time a translation make me unable to keep following a novel, truly disappointing.

To finish with a clear advise, READ IT. It's new, original, fun and slightly "real" enough to keep wondering what's gonna happen. Just stop before v3c29. ;-) <<less
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Game Market 1983
July 13, 2016
Status: v1c23
Once again an amazing novel to read.

Very few cliffhanger making each chapter a clear part of the full story which allow us to enjoy reading without frustration. Amazing facts corresponding with the true story of the game-making world creating a believable background. Presence of a limited supernatural/magic actions pushing the story to become even more enjoying to read. Writing very clean so no long and annoying sentences/chapters/... however still maintain a certain complexity to form an attaching and real main character.

-->Read if you want a good story where you won't... more>> have headache concerning overly complicated thoughts. <<less
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The Magus Era
March 28, 2016
Status: --
Impressive reading. The story starts fast and already as a teenager. The fact that the MC come for another world is only briefly mentioned then forgotten only giving him more maturity than other children. Although some may says that the MC is stupid, it's more like he is reacting accordingly with what he knows of the world which means not a lot at first.
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Dragon Dragon Dragon
January 15, 2017
Status: c49
So... chapter 49 and nothing really interesting happened. Well the dragon/girl did make her first true friend. Except that, the MC is naïve, slow-witted, unable to use her (dragon) -body to do anything but speak human's words.

Not really worth reading and as say by others, it's either extremely slow or the dragon-reincarnation-things was used just to have something special because the MC is boring. She act like a young child, thinks like one and while it may be cute, after some times, any reader hope for his hero/anti-hero to have... more>> at least a few brains cells working.

So read it when you have nothing interesting to read and if you want to fill empty hours with even more emptiness. <<less
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The Legendary Master’s Wife
April 28, 2016
Status: --
Although the ten firsts chapters are a bit hard to enjoy the story very quickly become extremely INTERESTING and FUN to read. This story is one of the few xianxia who possess a lot of humor while staying serious enough to captive. Really worth the time! (read up to chapter 130)
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