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Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return
February 15, 2018
Status: c188
Damn cute. Read the raws to recent, fairly simple story. Super OP doting parent. The children are believable; wife story is nice as well. He srs OP, despite broken soul, or whatnot.

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There is a small misunderstanding at some point, as to why he disappeared, which the MC takes literally 1 sentence to clear up. He shows her his 500 years worth of memories.

The mother's reason for leaving is believable as well. She is from a cultivator family whose, dumb as usual, rules prevent her from having a kid, hence asking auntie Zheng to take care of her daughter.

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The story is pretty new, as it only has 188 ish chapters at the moment, but I liky liky. <<less
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Isekai ni Kanaderu Densetsu ~Toki wo Tomeru Mono~
February 11, 2016
Status: --
I-I just can't... I couldn't make it past chapter 4. Honestly, would've stopped at chapter 1. The viewpoint jumps made me cringe so hard. When you go from 3rd person, to 1st person and then a different POV on the first goddamn chapter, it shows uncertainty on where you're going with the story.
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Great story, my only issue is that like in most re-incarnation stories, MC doesn't actually retain anything from his previous experience, in this case as a salaryman. Or perhaps it would be better to say that he doesn't have the opportunity to showcase his capabilities? (He didn't even haggle for profit, he doesn't even wear a suit, the EVERYTHING in the image of a salaryman)

I find the author's choice of using 'salaryman' in the title to be poor, as he barely does anything salaryman-like. Then again we're at 37/167... more>> so maybe those business skill will show up afterwards? Regardless, it's still a fun story. Do read. <<less
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