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Pro:
- Interesting main character background: I like transmigrations into hated main characters and their struggle to change.
- Beautiful character design in the illustrations. Even the supposed horrible "piggy duke" is kinda cute.
- Translation is average (sticks too much to the original language, untranslated bits here and there, some weird sentences...). I've seen way worse though, so it's a pass I guess.

Con:
- No logical explanations on the MC goal, he does what he does just because.
- The MC is way too emotionally driven, it's like the... more>> fact that he was a transported person is completely forgotten. And it's weird even from the original piggy MC, who is supposed to hide that he's actually smart.
- The comical effect of the "buhi" interjection becomes quickly annoying: we get it, the MC is fat. It's the same with the "I'm hated because I'm fat" overuse too. In fact the comedy kinda kills the whole story for me.
- The background lore is too simple. <<less
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Breakers
February 27, 2017
Status: c92
It was interesting and good in the beginning, but frankly boring and predicable after 60+ chapters.

I thought the MC would be clever and witty, but he's just knowledgeable about the game, and doesn't even seem to use that knowledge wisely. He's just getting really strong, with no effort or clever way to plan his future.
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Really good, in a relaxed way.

The main character isn't a "fake" adult like many other reincarnation stories, as they usually behave like teenagers while supposed to be dead as adult. Actually he reminds me of a less powerful Satou from Death March.

You also feel family love, and side characters are properly developed, some of them being reasonably powerful.

... more>> BTW there is NO romance (for now as of c66) for the main character, though there is between side characters.

The only con I have are the somewhat long technical explanations he sometime does, that I usually pass on by reading diagonally. And that DUMB yen conversion too. <<less
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The Novel’s Extra
August 12, 2018
Status: c82
Awesome.

Pro

  • MC is interesting, good natured and kinda dense, while trying to scheme around knowing what's going on, resulting in people thinking he's way more amazing than he really is. The idea to make him a side character makes the whole thing actually attractive.
  • Secondary characters are all developed, as you follow what they think and understand their reasoning. I think that's really the best part of this novel.
  • The world is interesting, even if the focus on Korea being the greatest powerful country is kinda too much IMO. A balanced setting would have made things more enjoyable.
  • The secondary romances are cute, with the MC not seeing people being attracted to him.
Con

  • MC becomes the focus of various powerhouses a little too fast IMO.
  • The Dungeon system needs a little development, for now it's too vague.
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When A Mage Revolts
November 4, 2017
Status: c200
Way better than I thought. I recommend it!

Pro

  • MC is a good guy trying to get by in a fantasy European like world, and there is character progression in the story. He's relatively bright too, which is good in a story where he isn't the strongest one around.
  • Side characters are all interesting, every one of them way more complex than the simple minded fools you see usually in Chinese WN.
  • Same for antagonists.
  • You feel like the world is not centered around the MC, each and every character having his life and little scheme.
  • Comedy is down in latter parts of the story, and that's for the better.
  • A few plot twists that really surprised me.
Con

  • The heavy comedy in the beginning was almost too much.
  • No romance (until now at least). I always feel like it balances a story when a good romance is introduced.
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Tales of the Reincarnated Lord
April 7, 2017
Status: c174
One of the few stories that I bypassed the first time seeing it due to to some harsh critics. How wrong I was!

It's an incredibly detailed story, maybe way too much sometimes, but clearly a hundred time better than the lazy stories that don't bother to lay out any lore at all. The world felt literally alive when reading it, especially as chapters are long and fulfilling.

Characters are fleshed out, interesting, and not just the MC but the whole cast is developed. Also, no ridiculous power ups just to fill... more>> up some chapters: the character gets better really naturally through the story. Finally, kudo for the quality translation.

The only things I would nitpick about is maybe about how "average" morally the MC is: don't get wrong, he isn't the pretentious jerk you see so many times in Chinese WN, but he could slightly be better I guess... also, I wish it had a better romance, with maybe a female character to upset and balance the overbearing personality of the MC, though that's just personal preference. <<less
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Throne of Magical Arcana
November 12, 2017
Status: c302
A transmigration story properly done. I highly recommend that one.

Pro

    • MC is a good and clever guy, and you really feel character growth.
    • All characters are complex and interesting.
    • The whole idea of using modern science to enhance magic instead of outdated notions (4 elements) is refreshing.
    • World building is excellent.
    • The focus on music is well done.
    • A few twists I didn't expect.
Con

    • The library concept is not properly explained.
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Possessing Nothing
April 30, 2018
Status: c56
This is a great second chance novel.

Pro

  • The MC is believable : sufficiently mature, not unkind or a psycho, while not being overly genius to pass as a normal dude getting a second chance.
  • All characters are kinda unique and well developed. The MC is really the underdog here, with many incredible geniuses around.
  • Plot twists! There is a sense of mystery in the story, really interesting.
Con

  • No romance (as of now), but maybe there will be later.
  • The translation is good, but it needs an editor.
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The story is supposed to be about an old genius wizard going back in time into his younger self body. It doesn't feel that way at all unfortunately: he thinks like a teenager, acts like a teenager, so this doesn't feel believable at all. No cleverness, no wisdom, just a bored teenager "leveling up" because that's what all people need to do after all, senseless level up. Also, the level system is so standard it's useless and actually makes the story worse.

Also, the translator (for vol 1 at least)... more>> is so so, with Japanese words mixed in, and random non vocal words written as actual sounds (like the little "tsu", I hate this one, it's so misunderstood: it's supposed to be a voiceless sound dammit!). <<less
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The Path Toward Heaven
December 23, 2018
Status: c388
This is quality Xuanhuan, I recommend it.

Pro

  • MC is amazing, and it shows later in the story: he's old and really wise, not like the reincarnation stories where MC is behaving like a dumb teen while supposedly old.
  • All characters are interesting and kept being developed after 300+ chapters, which is better than the easily forgotten ones we see often in these stories. Few characters are dumb or rash, instead all of them have plans, and you sometime wonder who is the actual enemy.
  • The world is interesting and gives an impression of mysteriousness.
  • Good writing style, few repetitions.
Con

  • The first 100 chapters or so are difficult to get into IMO, mainly because the MC seems really detached. And then after it becomes amazing.
  • No romance, though we'll maybe have a bittersweet one.
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Immortal
March 11, 2018
Status: v2c49
Amazing! I don't understand why it's not more popular.

Pro

  • Old wise MC behaving like an actual old wise MC. Also, good natured, and really clever, compensating his weak strength.
  • Many characters behave like human beings instead of killing machines.
  • Interesting love interests who are developed in the story instead of being thrown away after 5 chapters.
  • Interesting world.
Con

  • I wish we had more stories about MC before the beginning of the story, like a prequel.
  • Chinese words kept in the otherwise high quality translation, it's as weird as when groups do that for Japanese WN.
  • Translated super slowly, and now no longer translated : (
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Miracle Throne
October 24, 2017
Status: --
Good and bad. I read it just to quench my curiosity on the next invention, but then dropped it because MC and antagonists are unbearable.

Pro :

  • I like the fact that the idea to use future inventions to accelerate development is implemented and not ditched after 3 chapters.
  • Actual female MC descriptions, not just "jade like beauty" like I usually see.
Con :

  • MC is an idiot savant, knowing many technical things, but as careful as a bulldozer in a china shop, making an enemy of practically everyone he encounters. He is arrogant, hot headed, and immature. At least he isn't a complete psycho, only destroying the ones against him (but that's basically everyone else).
  • Many characters are behaving like hot headed teens instead of mature people, making dumb decisions, having muscles instead of a brain, needlessly cruel and wasteful of human resources.
  • Exclamation points! So much of them! Everything is exciting!
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Hachinan tte, Sore wa Nai Deshou!
July 14, 2017
Status: --
Good, then boring.

Pro

    • Interesting story overall.
    • Interesting and slightly more realistic than usual feudal family structure.
    • Main character is calm and not super immature.
    • No level like magical system with status screens and so on, but a more real world like "analog" feeling.
    • Translation isn't bad (though onomatopoeia are kept in later chapters, and it's annoying and cringy to see a good translation riddled "Ano" and other "Jaa")
Con

    • Summary of the story on every damn chapter, seriously super annoying.
    • Nonsensical local money to yen translation. Economy 101 : no exchange of goods between Japan and the different world means no possibility of any exchange rate.
    • Excess of little details while there is no big main character development is boring in the later chapters.
    • I ultimately didn't feel any attachment to the main character, and that's what killed the story for me.
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The Overlord of Blood and Iron
May 11, 2019
Status: --
First chapter : wow this has potential, seems interesting and MC has an actual trump card.

After some chapters : ok he got back, and first thing he does is punching some goons in his company. Said company that is controlled by thugs, who are violent and dumb?

This is cliché, but well, I'll continue...

I stopped after :

"Look at my car, it's a MUSTANG, but it's not as good as the BUGATTI VEYRON I had before!"

Really MC...

Very childish and immature MC, very bling mentality, not my thing.
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Surviving a Harsh Fantasy with Cheat Items
October 14, 2017
Status: c10
Meh, too much plot holes, too much nonsense. It could have been awesome, instead it's just below average.

Dropped.

Pro

  • The idea of a transported story without an overpowered hero is good. At least that way modern knowledge is used, instead of being forgotten after one chapter like I see in most stories.
  • Pretty illustrations.
  • Long chapters.
  • Pretty ladies but not a ton of ecchi content ruining the plot. At least not in the beginning.
  • Not a fan of slightly pervert MC, but he's not a huge one, so it's still bearable.
  • Translation is OK. No Japanese words kept because they are "cool" like I see sometimes, making it a cringe fest to read. Only honorific titles are left, and that is acceptable.
Con

  • The MC is WAY too carefree: he's transported to another world, nearly dies because of his stupidity, but no anxiety, everything is alright...
  • Side characters are too open about him not being from there. They accept it just like that. No one is bothered that a totally literate stranger appears like this in a random village? Come on...
  • Side characters lack personality and revolve too quickly around the MC. It's like they were waiting for him or something.
  • Business and people reaction are weird.
    Spoiler

    For example, Lyle helped the MC to make bombs without asking for anything in return, and after that always being with him in his business. Or the MC negotiation skills being non-existant. Or the Earl they see in Est being super polite with someone who is basically a nobody.

    [collapse]
  • Huge plot holes, especially in how he creates his inventions. I mean,
    Spoiler

    there are bombs, and he is able to create them just like that. No explanations. Last time I checked, even an engineer would find that super difficult without any prior base industry to lean on. And also, NO ONE thinks this is great for wars? And outside of that: gunpowder is invented, but no one cares until he does something with it???

    [collapse]
  • The exchange rate between Japanese yen and this world currency is dumb. No exchange of goods, no exchange rate, economy 101.
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Apocalypse Meltdown
January 11, 2019
Status: c5
Dropped.

Pro

  • MC seems like a good guy overall.
  • The lore seems mysterious.
Con

  • MC is portrayed as an intelligent returner, while behaving really like a re**** :
    • Spoiler

      Instead of really preparing for the apocalypse in a safe location he would rent with a quick loan using a shark loan (for ex), he's going back to the 3rd floor of his dorm and SLEEPS (wasting precious time). Dorm that is closed by keys at night, and of course keys he didn't bother to get. Way to go making yourself in a prison full of zombies for the first day of the apocalypse.

      [collapse]
    • Spoiler

      Instead of buying a mask/more protections, loaning a sturdy car/van, and load this car to the brim with everything he'd need, like lots of provisions and gaz, he only buys dry biscuits, some jerky and water enough to have in a BACKPACK.

      [collapse]
    • Spoiler

      Instead of beginning his voyage to his parent's location (his first goal), he GOES BACK to his dorm and instead wait for the apocalypse, completely wasting the whole time he could have used to begin traveling in safe roads, before the apocalypse.

      [collapse]
    • Spoiler

      Instead of buying something easy to transport and handle, he buys an actual AXE, which is kinda making him panting as it's too big and heavy for him.

      [collapse]
    • Spoiler

      Instead of changing his soon to be useless paper money to something more useful like maybe gold, he doesn't care about it.

      [collapse]
    • etc etc
  • Some antagonist sneering to MC in the middle of the apocalypse. He should be terrified, but still has time to plan some future revenge against MC. Ridiculous and obvious foreshadowing.
  • Who the hell uses "eschatology" as a synonym to "apocalypse"? These words' meanings are completely different, as "eschatology" means the STUDY of the end of the world according to religious books, not the event itself !
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The Gate Of Good Fortune
February 19, 2018
Status: c374
This was way better than some comments made me think it was. I recommend it, it's a really good story. Pros

    • Good natured MC, retaining his Earth morality and not becoming a psycho.
    • He actually has a goal, and do everything to attain it, way better than nonsensical power ups for nothing.
    • Many characters are kept all along the story, instead of being thrown out after a chapter or so.
    • Long fulfilling chapters.
    • The romance is cute.
    • The harem is not badly done, as all the girls have their own goals and things to pursue in life. It's not overbearing, and that's a good thing.
    • Latter parts actually surprised me.
    • Friends exist, not everyone is a crazy sociopath.
Cons

    • Dude has too much coincidences going on.
    • Some classic style dumb characters unable to contain their evilness.
    • Sometime some concept are badly explained.
    • Would have been better with some more chapters not about the MC.
    • Ridiculous laser like ability from antagonists to know exactly that it was MC who has done something, even in the absence of any witness.
    • The overuse of vague duration expressions is annoying.
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Sovereign of the Three Realms
June 20, 2018
Status: c113
I was enticed by the tags and some comments. Don't be like me.

Pro

    • MC isn't so bad, he's kinda dumb though, lacking the strategic thinking I'd expect from the reincarnation of a 1 million year prince. At least he's calm and not a complete psycho.
    • The world seemed interesting.
Con

    • Repeated repetitions while trying to remind you of things already repeated in a preceding repetition. God I hate this cheap way of adding words...
    • Ridiculously arrogant and cruel antagonist young masters who don't understand the expression "thinking before acting".
    • The worst forced plot armor for an antagonist I've seen in a while at around chapter 100.
Dropped.
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Can't say if it's good or bad, I just can't get past the cringe of reading a translation where random Japanese words are kept in English.

And no, not just the honorifics, that would be bearable, but words like desu, darou ne, kore wa kore wa, nanto... It's ridiculous.

You have been warned.
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Akuyaku Reijo Ni Koi Wo Shite
March 20, 2017
Status: --
This is a gem :
- The developed world may be simple game like, but only in surface, as it has a well developed culture.
- The main character is really interesting, strong and always scheming. In fact, all of the characters are interesting, and none of them really that stereotypical.
- The bittersweet unconfessed romance is really touching and cute. I rooted for them when reading the story!
- The chapters are long and satisfying.
- The translation is good.

Read it if you like any of the above, you... more>> won't be disappointed. <<less
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