The Macs girl friend gets kidknapped by her father for 250 mother f**king chapters. This was the most annoying mother f**king thing in the world to me. Once the gf was kidknapped the story went from amazing to absolute crap. It takes 200 chapters for the girl to even be mentioned and they still haven't met up. You can't have a romance and than take it away for the majority of the crappy story you are writing.
Spoiler: THEY STILL HAVNT MET UP AND THE STORY IS STILL ABSOLUTE sh*t AND JUST DRAGGING ON.
in the same chapter he writes the main character bought sleeping powder to beat the pack of jackals but when he meets the group he doesn't use it and runs away like a puss and than for some reason comes up with the idea to use aphrodisiac on them... terrible writing. this isn't the only thing too but why should I waste more words on an author that can't write?
Also, if a girl willingly broke up with you to "protect" you and does this twice, would you still like her? if she doesn't even fight to be with me than she is not worth my time. our MC is a f**king wuss and doesn't have his priorities straight.
My dude also hides his upgraded ability because some random card upgraded him and he thinks if he shows off that his ability upgraded they will somehow assume it was him... I hate all these stupid ass cliches of hiding your abilities. also the different family backgrounds thing is also another annoying cliche.
My dude has a gf but he still molests other girls but only molests them, doesn't give them what they want and straight up uses them
My dude dates a girl, doesn't even kiss her but he molests every attractive girl he sees, somehow making them all fall in love with him only to say I can't because of my girlfriend. Than later proceeds to cheat without a guilty conscious only to reject every other girls advances that he was s*xually assaulting than continue to cheat with that girl he originally cheated with with a clear mind. Than once again ignores the other girls he is molesting only to rape a 16 year old girl... author, this here alone makes me beg you to stop writing. you can't write a romance harem like this. its not satisfying at all and leaves me feeling sick to my stomach.
Also my dude is a cultivator but decides to blatantly murder tens of mortal people and cripple hundreds more and feels accomplished... WHAT?!?!?!?!?! are you f**king serious rn?
Back to the girl issues. My dude never kissed his gf but rapes and cheats and molests other girls and the author decides to write the gf out for 50 chapters only to bring her back than have her dad say no contact for a year and you better have a mortal job and earns tons of money.... once again he writes off the gf but decides to have the main character molest high school girls, college girls and even his bosses and police officers... Also the author writes off a ton of girls that he s*xually assaults.
THE PLOT HOLES ARE REAL. My dude is the chairmen of the most power company, leader of the mafia in a town and a cultivator but you know, he goes around telling everyone he is a regular security guard and all the sh*t he accomplished never existed except for the fact that he kills a lot of mortals.
DONT READ THIS. DONT WASTE YOUR TIME LIKE I DID. THIS NOVEL IS HONESTLY TRASH AND THE PERSON WHO WROTE THIS AND THE PEOPLE WHO LIKE THIS ARE SOMEWHAT f**kED IN THE HEAD. When I see five stars and positive reviews I'm like, did you actually read this or is their something f**ked in your head?
This is not a romance cultivation novel. This is a novel about a girl who "hates" but for some reason won't leave the male lead gets s*xually assaulted and her narcism. She brags about being an amazing assassin when all she got is a smart mouth. The male lead is a yandere (idk spelling) to the extreme. The MC girl forgets grievances and tools she has to get out of situations.
Main thing that gets me heated is the male leads childhood friend tried to murder the MC. MC asks male lead if he would believe her if she said his childhood friend is trying to kill her and he said no. Than he ends up almost dying and she ends up forgiving him and forgets that happened.
Honestly is a retarded MC girl and a yandere male lead who both suck at talking and with there feelings and its just terrible.
Theres about 60 chapters about splitting open rocks for crystals... Just so you know. See the status? she only leveled up twice...
Also, if you see a description of someone, it gets repeated copy and pasted. There is a lot wrong with this terrible novel especially how she hates how he s*xually assaults her but she doesn't try to leave him or actually hate him.I guess if you to china and you s*xually assault girls or rape them over and over again they will end up falling in love with you. I mean thats the vibe I get from this novel and every other novel with a girl male lead in it. correction any type of character as the lead.
ALMOST FORGOT! He nearly kills her by choking her to death when she says he can't control her life but then one chapter later when he is struggling in pain from a disease she feels bad for him and helps him. ARE YOU FCKING SERIOUS RN?
She was tortured in prison for a day than spent two days more after that one day. Than a few days later she got forced to confined into a shack and starved for multiple days. He didn't come to help until after she got released or forced her way out of the two predicaments. He didn't even try to prevent them or speak to anyone after that. Would you care for someone who doesn't care for you?
write the male lead off. the novel got worse and worse and worse after that and 198 chapters later its complete trash. he disappears and returns once for one chapter. these chapters are 10 paragraphs long by the way. complete waste of my time.
The main character sees a pretty girl and decides to sh*t on the family she is engaged too to steal her away. take in mind she also for some reason starts to fall in love with him but this is the firs time they have ever seen each other.
The MC decides to add the girl to his collection... if you like this character than you are true scum. I'm being completely honest. He treats his family like sh*t and sees a pretty girl for the first time and declares that she is his, even though she has been engaged for 6 years to another man.
HE USES SPIRIT POWER TO FORCE A GIRL TO HOOK UP WITH HIM SO SHE IS FORCED TO LEAVE HER FIANCE. HE ALSO f**kING USES IT TO MANIPULATE THE THOUGHTS OF HER WHOLE FAMILY. if you still read at this point than can you please leave society and I hope no person ever falls for scum like you. author, stop writing this or go back and rewrite this. are you good in the head???????????????????????????????????