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Against the Gods
October 25, 2017
Status: c966
Even after all of the usual clinches it was one of my favorite novels. But after chapter 650 it became bad. Most frustrating thing in this novel - ... more>>
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are missing heroines. Like seriously his first wife and baby mama has been missing for half of the story. With no idea where they are. The founder of the sect (his first wife's sect) left a teleportation array so a single person can escape during disaster. But she set the destination as random. How stupid can you get? The planet they are on 97% water with 3% land, what if she got teleported into the ocean?? She quite possibly got teleported to higher realms. Thats like sending a small powerless rabbit into a lair of wolves. And don't even get me started on his baby mama. She has been missing for 600+ chaps. Like a weak pregnant woman somehow dissapered from the whole planet without a trace. Every possible fact tells MC that she is dead (offcourse she is not). He goes into denial that she is alive. But what does he do with the woman who sent assassins after his pregnant woman. He spares her bcoz that woman's son is mc's friend (He has only provided minor help to MC on few occassions). This is completely out of MC's character. I mean the dude went apesh*t and exterminated an entire clan bcoz they kidnapped his family members. Sparing that woman is fine as well but what about the actual assassins he didn't even gave a single thought about them.

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Most retarded thing is MC's purpose in the novel. There are a lot of things that could have been his future aims.
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But he decides to go to higher realms to say goodbye to his master. I mean she left him in a hurry after saying goodbye. But what about your missing wife? Missing child?. He would not be happy in his entire life if he doesn't bid her goodbye. For that reason he drops everything he was doing in his home world and decides to ascend.

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MC's character has completely left his character ouline. He was smart in initial chapters but now he is dumb as rocks. I mean he has a knack for dying (dissappear for months, people think he is dead), he tells his bro-in-law that never beleive he is dead unitl you see his dead body but he doesn't even have the basic decency to give a soul crystal to his family. Even small fry antagonists have soul crystals (which alert their sect by shattering when MC kills them) but not the MC. He used to give importance to loved ones and promises but now they mean sh*t. <<less
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Martial God Asura
June 24, 2017
Status: c2148
I will borrow someone else's line to describe this novel. "In MGA villain's are on drugs, Side characters are on drugs, MC is on drugs, everybody is on drugs". I repeat this line is completely accurate.

Author will go out of his way to make villain's evil, you can expect 90% characters in this novel are psychopaths.
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MC arrives at a sect. Where sect is divided into parts on basis of living conditions, quality etc. Part with the bottom ranking only have cripples. Why? Because disciples from upper ranking part come and cut-off their arms, pluck their eyes for fun. If these cripples use their cultivation to heal themselves, they will suffer worse torture from upper disciples. These are full grow men (Psychopaths) plucking out eyes of little kids (10-11 year old's) for fun. Elder in charge of bottom ranking part does nothing. Why? He says these cripples don't have self respect. According to elder they should heal their limbs and wait for more torture. They don't get enough resources, cultivation technique's. Well Adults are fine But What do you expect from children??

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This novel is overflowing with characters like this. Villain's are villain (simply psychopaths) for the sake of being villain.

I'll list another character.
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A female character was looking for a little girl who is special and have mysterious origins but MC saves the little girl and gets himself caught by the female character. This female character goes on to torture MC using variety of ways all the while mentioning that she will do the same thing to the little girl. Why does she wanna do that? What enmity does she have the girl? None, she simply wants to dissect the little girl for experimentation (she ain't a frog) because little girl is special. MC frees himself and later on somebody else's suggestion rapes this female character because he hates her and wanted to destroy her pride. I hate rape. But what happens next will show you what I meant by MC is on drugs. Later on female character's grandpa helps MC because female character was taken hostage by MC's team. Due to this MC starts feeling guilty for female character. Why is he feeling guilty? She is a psychopath and you are a rapist MC!! Every girl he had s*x with all started as rapes (every single one). He even decides if she wants he will marry her. Why? What help did she provide you? What redeeming act did she do so you feel guilty? She is still a psychopath and you are still a rapist.

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Ok last one
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A group of clans want to kill MC because his bloodline is better than their's. They post wanted posters's. Try to assassinate him again and again. Lastly the kidnap the entire school MC is a part of and threaten to kill them off if MC doesn't surrender. After a brutal battle a powerful person comes and forces MC and clans to make peace. MC accepts and author explains MC is not a narrow minded person. Later on another group of sects are forced or hired by someone to attack and destroy MC's school. This group didn't try to assassinate MC, didn't Post wanted poster's, didn't kidnap anyone. He only had a single battle with them. Another powerful person comes and forces MC and group to make peace. But this time he decides that he will exterminate them in future. Why? They simply didn't create enough enmity with MC that they should be eliminated while the previous group crossed all lines and he still let them off. As I said he sometimes forgives people who have tried to kill him multiple times (author says he is not a narrow minded person) but goes all out to kill someone who he doesn't have enough enmity with.

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As I said he is on drugs.

Author had many things at his disposal (decent cultivation system, world building) but he simply failed to utilize them and create a good novel. Sometimes it feels like he is going with the flow. Personalities of characters will change after every few chapters. I gave it repeated chances and somehow suffered till 2148 mostly because I didn't have anything to read at the time and wanted to know about MC's past. But when truth about MC's history is revealed I was fed up with this story and dropped it.
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Ancient Strengthening Technique
March 30, 2017
Status: c165
Bad things about this novel
1. MC (a loser/gamer/college student) dies in real world. Reincarnates in a different world. MC has a weak body since birth and unable to cultivate. By some chance encounter in a backward village he obtains a cultivation technique. His cultivation system is based on a game like there are progress bars telling his XP in alchemy etc. Xp increases he unlocks new things. His reincarnation, cultivation technique are completely random.
2. MC has a Completely ridiculous cultivation technique, when he enters a new level he... more>> unlocks random information like cooking, pill receipts etc.
3. MC's personality is stupid.
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He comes to a big city and tries his best to woo a woman. Makes promises that he will marry her, keep her happy. After sometimes this woman falls in love with him, but by this time MC has lost his virginity to some other girl (i.e. He raped her) and is no longer interested in this woman because since he is from modern world he wants a monogamous relationshi p (even after this he keeps on f**king other girls) . He still flirts with her but also lets her know from his expressions that he is no longer going to do anything with her.

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4. MC's ridiculous and nonsensical Treasure
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He finds a pendant which gives him own personal secret realm where time is slower by 100 times. Later on this pendent embeds itself on MC's forehead and sticks out like a purple dot. Everybody thinks MC has become cool and literally not a single person comments about it when they see him for the first time. Secret realm has pond where if you keep aquatic animals there meat gives huge benefits to people. His secrete realm upgrades every time he has s*x with a new woman, like secret realms size increases, a new tree appears with OP fruits. He finds this treasure in the same backward village.

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5. MC's reasoning is completely stupid and ridiculous. He will say something but do contradictory actions.

I am too tired to mention anything more. Started this novel bcoz wanted a good harem, but MC's actions, logic, abilities frustrated me so much that I couldn't even continue reading till he even properly establishes a Harem. <<less
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Happy Peach
March 30, 2017
Status: c6
If you are here due to anal, mature, romance tag then you came to the wrong place. First of all no romance here Completely and utterly disappointed with actions of MC. Why because almost all of s*xual relation MC has with is the peach not with a female character. More info in spoiler.
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MC obtains a peach with a hole, hole is connected to a woman's asshole. If you insert anything in peach, that thing gets inserted in asshole of the lady. He gets a mature s*xy blonde who is also mother of his classmate. Instead of doing anything with this mature lady. He only f**ks his peach. He even gets annoyed when this woman tries to f**k him and he is repulsed by her actions. There are also 2 more girls. MC only inserts objects like balls inside peach which teleports to woman's assholes then it comes out from there. MC is perfectly satisfied with performing these experiments. 90% of s*xual relationship he has is with the peach.

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This novel is suitable for people who have fetish with inanimate objects. <<less
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