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Emperor of Solo Play
September 21, 2016
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...a Top Expert Swordsman who is dirt poor goes back in time after dieing to be a money sinkhole Necromancer while still using he pure Swordsmanship skills. To use a sword well he wastes all his stats points into str while his class is a Necromancer that does not get any bonus str per point.. To use his Necromancer skills he needs to use Real MONEY to buy gear to increase his magic related stats... To balance out his wasted points he needs to buy a large amount of skills... more>> with more money, get lucky on titles (that are rare in game), and rush to higher lvls so he can make money from being a Top Player all while learning his current class....

He does this only because he does not want to join a party since he was betrayed in a game where it was a common as spending real money to betray your party or guild since this game is such a hit you can make millions if you are a top player.. and since he heard that a very very rich player soloed a single Raid Boss (a boss monster that needs several parties to kill) as a Necromancer before no longer being able to advance (thus quiting) no matter how much money they spent. he went maybe I can do better even thou I am dirt poor by mixing my close combat ability with the very expensive summons for a Necromancer (since to get good summons they have only 2 ways get the materials yourself from mobs you kill or buy the materials from higher lvl players who are selling them). So he is using half baked info on the Necromancer Class to try and grow to the point he can do everything solo.

Now if he used his knowledge and experiences of the Swordsman Class to restart not only would be able to rush to the higher lvls faster he would not even need to try and grasp the class since he would know its ins and outs. Plus he might even be able to get many secret skills that he paid more attention to while he was a Swordsman while getting a lot of titles faster since he would not be running like a fish on dry land that just got a magical tool that lets it breath and walk on land and decided it can run like mankind the moment it got on land with this tool since it watched many men and woman running even thou it knew nothing of how to move while in the tool.

Anyone who does not mind all the contradicting elements or foolish actions from someone who has knowledge of the future (like joining part of a major event chain quest while solo and low lvled even thou his lvl is less than half of the top players and the monsters at the end of the quest) feel free to read it <<less
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Chaotic Sword God
June 13, 2016
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One of the few reincarnated stories that start well then go down hill fast. The author seems to need the MC against the world setting even as he hints that the MC killing so much will harm his cultivation at one point then just goes and sends him back into a kill everyone path. The cultivation "path" set for the MC is not fixed and seems change to suit the need to kill for treasure and fight the world for that plant to match the MC against the world setting... more>> even more.

MC has no real goal after more than 400 chapters. Shows less ability to think then the villains only getting out of trouble due to Major Plot Armor. MC is more villainous than many of the villains in almost all clashes between him and a so called "villain" as in almost all major clashes is because he makes things larger then needed going on senseless killing sprees where people can see and spread the word that he killed them or starts a killing spree only to run due to being to weak or they manage to run just to prolong the clash between them. MC starts more trouble then needed to sate his "I am the strongest even when you can kill me since I got plot armor" attitude bring more harm to everyone around him that only leaves a 2 line reflection that does not changes him. <<less
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Ancient Strengthening Technique
March 12, 2017
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A 1-D MC with a major lacking in personality and personality growth. Plot armor that does not even try to be hidden as anything other then plot armor. And women who strangely enough have more personality and personality growth then the MC even when they are 2-D decorations sent to 'entice' the 'elites' reactions.
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Starting from Zero
July 7, 2017
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... gave it a try but it goes from bad to worst as you read on and frankly many fan-fictions are better than this.

Game mechanics 1/100 star: Leveling up is simple to the point where you can not even bother to look for gears (they are not level locked but base stat locked so most looking for gear is worthless until after level 200 when leveling slows down)... no clear breakdown of the game coins [even a level 200+ can struggle to get some while a level 100+ can be... more>> loaded with coins]... game skills are not mentioned beyond the class basics even it was said he could buy them from shops or they drop from monsters.... no real story quest [or in game quest for that matter]. The list goes on

Romance 0/100 star: He meets a girl more beautiful then himself she gets in danger he helps her she is his now... no plot no work all within a few chapters..

Plot armor (?) I have to question if it is right to say he has plot armor or to just say the story is all plot armor. The game is something made 2/3rds by his parents companies a limited advance car [that even the government can only get a few of] is just given to him for no reason. NPCs give him wealth and do not care when he pays them back.. he gets a hidden class just because of his parents when he finds a bug in-game... and I just goes on <<less
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God Of Soul System
February 14, 2018
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If you can ignore the timelines errors (which there are lots of) , ignore the false romance (he gets the girl drops her like a worn out shoe to go to 2 different worlds while collecting 'maids' that are tossed as well in 2 different worlds [the 1st and 2nd worlds maids] only to be with the girl there for a few chapters worth of time [in both the 1st and 2nd world] with a whole one line at the last world in the last chapter), and the rapid changes... more>> in personality of some characters [with huge and rapid fluctuations to the mc's personality that are sometimes an observer, sometimes a standard xiānxiá/xuánhuàn of cultivate for many days without caring about the world since ya no one will harm the people I care about while I sit down and meditate for day to years for that little power jump or since you harmed my ppl I will kill you all, sometimes silkpants young master teasing girls while tossing all the work to underlings, sometimes trying to be the evil behind the scenes], and the unreasonable rapid learning speed of any type of skill or even world law... then you can enjoy the story [since it is like watching kids put on a play of being the MC of different books mixed into one play all the while forgetting the order of events and adding there own events into the mix] <<less
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Well lets start with no plot even after 139 chapters you get nothing in terms of plot.

Now lets talk about the story world... ok not enough to tell you other then he somehow went to a different world and so far as we know he is in some kingdom outside some town ran by the a princess (just because of her magic power and oh ya she is great at paper work) near (few days travel) a fort known for the amount of dungeons near/under it and a local nest... more>> of dragons (less than a days flight) that do not trouble the town/fort people (but they fly and bug the MC just because he radiates magic like a walking nuke).

Now the MC personality... none and I mean none he eats he sleeps and he is very intimate with the spirit of his house (to the point the house grows more rooms often since that seems to be the running joke of housebirth) and he builds stuff just so he can be lazier... and like a normal jap story he is denser then <insert densest intergalactic object here> in terms of EQ as several girls all but strip crawl into his bed (since the house spirit does not count as a person as she is the house in every sense of the word only due to 'reasons' she can manifest a human body to move around inside herself or to leave her real body to walk around).

And lastly the wealth the MC masses in days is more then the local towns treasury and he gets all that wealth mainly selling apple juice. <<less
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