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Chaotic Lightning Cultivation
September 23, 2016
Status: c23
The story gets some facts wrong from the very start. It states that the MC is very hard working in his cultivation, he even cultivates 20 hours a day. The very next chapter we find out he takes most of the day doing his menial job at the sect picking up trash. It takes him hours and hours to go back and forth. To the point that he is almost always late for dinner. So which is it? If he is working all day then he can't be sitting down... more>> all day meditating. Even given that he meditates all night instead of sleeping he still shows to be working more than 4 hours a day. After that he pretty much hits the jackpot and gets a treasure that gives him a infinite money cheat. It then becomes a story on how a rich cultivator spends his money to fight and kill/rape his opponents. Then, to top off inconsistent facts and bad story, half of a chapter is filler. It feels like the author wrote a few paragraphs of what the chapter should be and then went back and added as much details about random crap as he could to make sure he gets his word count up. <<less
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Dimensional Sovereign
January 30, 2017
Status: c114
This story is about luck. When the MC walks bumps into a Boss 1 of the following two things can happen:

1. Boss trips over his own feet managing to impale himself and dies (or similar things), drops rarest of rare drops where MC learns the rarest of rare skills or gets the rarest of rare items
2. Boss feels like he no longer likes his own lord, joins MC

The MC has no real skill, he gets the best drop possible every single time. He has no redeeming quality. The story... more>> tries to portrait him as courageous, however it's not hard to be courageous with his level of luck where it's almost impossible to not win.

The story started out looking like a Management/Strategy building story, however after 40-50 chapters all that is abandoned and instead goes a whole different route of just power up and beating people in a 'war'. If you like wish fulfillment from amateur writers then this book is for you, if not then even other stories that are spectacularly bad are better than this one on this site. <<less
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Martial World
June 10, 2016
Status: c238
This story has some major flaws. It starts with the fact that the author needed to add words into the story so you will have repetition of the same things over and over and over again. There are whole chapters that any decent writer would just drop. Sometimes I would skip 2-3 chapters and not miss a single thing. The next issue is that the MC just stumbles from one lucky encounter to the next. It's a typical wish fulfillment novel. The MC is a marry sue type character that... more>> is all powerful with no flaws. This tends to make the story predictable and boring. The last issue I will mention is how poorly written the antagonists are. It has the typical problem with Xianxia stories that the MC will have issues with one person, that person then looks down on the MC gets beaten, but to make it alright to beat him up to the degree the MC does, he of course has moral problems, like being a super rapist, wanting to kill his family, and so on and so forth. They are all 2 dimensional characters with no depth. <<less
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Advent of the Archmage
April 24, 2018
Status: c45
I like the idea of the story. However the execution leaves me wanting. The plot armor is very strong with this one. If MC is in any sort of trouble he just 'buys' a spell on the spot and solves the issue. Need to defeat someone stronger then you? Yup got this spell right here that nobody has ever mentioned before that will solve all your problems!
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The World of Otome Games is Tough For Mobs
December 24, 2018
Status: v1c1 part2
The basis of the story makes no sense.

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The MC is the second son of the first wife of the Baron. Since the father remarried to someone higher in the nobel hierarchy the son is being suppressed. The social standing of Women and Men is supposed to be reversed in this world with woman having multiple male lovers and so on.

Now it might just be me, but in our society there is no polygamist relationship where the men has multiple wives and would allow one of his wifes to stay married to her previous husband. If nobel men can't find a wife if they are over 20 years old, how did the MC's father find a second wife when he was clearly over 20? If woman are in dominant position in this society, why is the man the nobel? Shouldn't it be the woman? Shouldn't all the woman be the only ones in line to inherit a title? Why would the matriarch of the family spend money on a son (the father) who was sold to another woman? Shouldn't he be living with her and the woman of the barony be taking over?

As I stated the basis of the plot is a huge plot hole.

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Quickly Wear the Face of the Devil
September 7, 2017
Status: c3.5
Pretty much a collection of short stories strung together by the MC changing backgrounds.

What bothers me is that in the 3 stories I've read so far a older man lusts after a younger person. Normally 17/18 year old MC with a close to 30 year old lover. The MC is pretty much still a child, in the first story he was also pretty much raised by his lover.

Plot is also very thin. MC states he doesn't want to mess with the world's hero so he won't be noticed, then does... more>> nothing but mess with the world's hero... <<less
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The Daily Life of the Immortal King
July 12, 2018
Status: c30
It is an interesting world, a cultivation world that has gone through similar changes as our society and ended up in a modern world.

However the plot is badly done. The MC has super powers since birth, is probably the strongest person in the world at 10. I don't mind this, however the plot has continuity problems. At the beginning it states one thing, then later on to introduce a new plot element it's revised on the fly.

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Example: He draws a rune on himself to hide his power. Later it wasn't himself who did it, it was his cousin who was jealous of his power and wanted to suppress him. Next he suddenly has a power to make people forget everything about him that they learned before meeting him. However it has affected none of the previous people who met him and already knew things about him like his entrance test score.

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This is a boy love story since it's not yet in the tags.

The story itself is interesting so far. However it feels like Machine Translations at times with the sentence structure being incorrect and missing words. Not a very good translations in some parts while normal translation in other parts.

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Chapter 41 closer to the end:

Today they would pry back with partners, all those materials would not be kept just in a few houses, wanted to speed up to rob in front of those people!

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Library of Heaven’s Path
August 25, 2017
Status: c80
The story is about a shut in being transmitted to a world of cultivation. The twist in this story is that the MC was a librarian in his previous life and now is a teacher. The teaching system seems to be based on cultivation sects. Each student picks their own teacher who in return pick them. Once you pick a teacher you are pretty much stuck with them. They also tend to have teachers who in the West would be graduate students teaching undergrads, meaning they are only a few... more>> years removed from each other. The story then revolves around the great cheat the MC got and how he uses it to show up people. It's quite heavy on the plot armor. A lot of times you will see the MC stating to himself that he needs to keep a low profile or else horrible things will happen to him. The Very next thing he does is show of his cheat skill for everyone to see. In case their is a misunderstanding that it is not a cheat like skill he even goes out of his way to show people that it is in fact a cheat like skill.

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For example early on in the story he goes to a library to read cultivation manuals, the librarian is mad at him for just flipping through all the books and disrespecting the books and bans him from the library. Another student wants to show him up and starts asking questions about the books in the library. He answer everything spot on. This gives the other people the idea that he might have studied everything before. So to prove that he was not disrespecting the books but actually studying he goes and tells them where the book is located in the library and what page the solution is on. For someone who is trying to HIDE his skill this is like putting it on a advertisement board and going look at me, I can read thousands of books and know every word of it inside of a day.

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The author seems to not have planned out the story. He writes a few chapters and then changes his mind or needs more plot armor and drastically changes parts of the story to fit the current situation. <<less
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