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World Defying Dan God
March 10, 2016
Status: c3820

The story starts off with a lot of potential, but it falters in the later parts. It does have 3, 000+ chapters so it’s understandable, but the little problems in the story really starts to pile up after a while and gave me a lot of unnecessary frustrations. I stopped at exactly chapter 1, 750 and now have no intention to continue anymore. There are a lot of things that the author did well, but there’s also quite a bit that bothers the heck out of me. The two sorta cancels each other out. Nevertheless, I would recommend this to other people, just not as highly as other stories I’ve read.

EDIT: Nevermind. I will NOT recommend this series to anyone. By the end, the story became so horrible, so terrible that I basically have to force myself to finish it. I will also edit my rating to express my disgust.

EDIT2: Since I've been messaged by people asking why I was so disgusted by this story, I'm gonna copy and paste my comment here with this review.



There are a lot of problems with this story, but up to around 1, 000 chapters, this was still very enjoyable and fun. At least it was enough for me to read more. However, by the time I'm done with this, I was left with nothing but hate and frustration for the story and its author. I actually had to force myself through the last two hundred chapters just for the sake of completion. So I'm done with this whole story and this will be about all 3, 820 chapters, not only the translated ones.

Alright, spoilers. This is gonna be looong. Let's see, where should I start...

Oh, the ALCHEMY. I understand that this is a story about an alchemist, but descriptions and the preparation process should not take up two or four chapters each time. I'm much more interest in the plots and the characters in the story, not reading about a fake process that the author just pulled out of butt. There are a bunch of fighting tournaments for the MC which features the usual. MC joins, audience thinks he has no shot, wins. These are alchemy tournaments in addition to martial arts tournament. Although the latter drops off eventually, the alchemy tournaments persists all the way up to chapter 3, 400. Same pattern, MC always win. Then there are the experiments that he does with alchemy which sometimes leads absolutely nowhere. Like, he learns how to combine alchemy and weapon runes to increase the effects of his pills by at least 10x, but he hardly ever uses this discovery again (I'd say never, but I think he may have used this one other time) cause it's apparently too hard. Oh, sure, like two thousand chapters later, he finds out about a similar process, but this and that are two different things. Different runes, different system. So yeah. That was a waste of time.

Then there is a LEVEL SYSTEM. It is complete bullsh*t. Like, there are a lot of stages where it took most people thousands of years to reach, centuries if they're talented. Okay, MC does it in a couple years. Which is nothing compared to his friends, who achieve even it earlier than the MC because they are lucky as heck or their master essentially have a Hyperbolic Time Chamber that only girls can used for some reason. And rarely does the other character react to this miracle. They did it and that's it. So no matter how powerful the MC becomes, his friends/lovers will either be ahead of him or be not that far behind because of stupid reasons. All the way up to the end. Seriously. Power levels are bullsh*t.

Which leads us to the IRREGULAR TIMEZONES. Oh boy, the MC keeps getting screwed over by this. In this story, there are a lot of worlds, and they almost never the same. Say, if MC becomes stuck in some place and is forced to spend two months there, as much as NINE thousand years could have passed in *his* world. This idea probably came from the old Chinese belief that one year in our world is like a day in the Heavenly world. But this is crazy from a reader's point of view. This process rarely works out in our MC's favor. It's just a plot point that the author relies on to let his friends/lovers/enemies catch up to him when he becomes too OP. It's as frustrating as it sounds and it feels really cheap whenever it happens. At first, it was just one century or so, then it become thousands of years, then tens of thousands of years. The last time dilution condensed millions of years into ten days. Fortunately for the MC, this one worked out in his favor. So if you intend to read this, prepare to experience a lot of jumps into the future.

And also fortunate for the MC, the ROMANCE in this story is pretty simple. The girls are all beautiful or at least attractive. Their hearts are very easy to capture. Some female characters barely has any interaction with the MC but somehow fell madly in love with him cause he did one good thing for them. Still, as flimsy as that sounds, they remain very loyal to their man. Even if that same man leaves them for hundreds, if not thousands of years without any communication between the two and is constantly out there seducing the underpants off other girls, they remain as chaste as nuns. Just like in real life! Okay, I can accept that cause this is a fantasy, but then... they just outright disappears. Even the original women who had accompanied the MC from the very start disappears for hundreds of chapters (if not a thousand) without much fanfare and by the time they make another appearance, they are reduced to cameos at best and their roles by the MC's side are replaced by OTHER women. Some of the best characters in the story are these original love interests, and then, poof, they're just gone. I'm serious, they're just phased out. They have absolutely no roles in the end game arc other than the fact that helping MC get back to their world (which is around 3, 400 chapters onward) and are barely mentioned at all afterward.

A lot of PLOTLINES are also dropped too. Like, you can tell when the author introduce some stuff, like some new information or named characters, to set up a future storyline. Then, they are never mentioned again. I understand one or two dropped storylines, but this happens a lot. The author seems to just set stuff up on a whim and drops them just as quickly. This wouldn't be so bad if they don't suck up so much words and chapters. Like, MC creates a sect of his own later on that took a lot of chapters to set up and a great deal of the story involves its conception and survival. Eventually, while all of his friends and lovers ascend to a higher realm of existence, the MC choose not to ascend so fast and waits a hundred years. (*actually 30 years) Why? To do nothing but create pills for this sect so that it would have a strong foundation and would be able to endure against the obstacles ahead. The result? The sect falls apart in his absence and its existence is never brought up again. A second one is the existence of dan lings, spirits that are born when alchemist creates pills that have reach the peak of their potential. They have the talent to become even better alchemist than normal people cause they were born of alchemy and have the ability to "eat" alchemist in order to steal their skills. Apparently, every alchemist worth their salt have at least one or two in a "higher realm". We do not see either of these two abilities used in the story. Ever. In fact, after their arc, we do not see any dan lings ever again. As if MC is the only one who has it. Lastly, have MC finally found something that that stupid needle couldn't pierce through?

If that were not enough, the MC's INTELLECT starts to decay badly later on. Like, after a while, he just runs into every problem without any consideration for himself, his situation, or the strength of his enemies. Most of the time, he has absolutely no plan on how to face his enemies/threats which are often a lot stronger than he is. He just throws himself into bad situations and hope for the best. It's only by luck that he makes it out alive and ahead every time. Like, his arrival just happens to coincides with an opportunity that ensures his safety and eventually leads to his rival's downfall. Gosh, I know he's never been some super smart genius, he's a C+ student at the beginning, but by the end, I'm sure he qualifies as mentally retarded. It's just that he's the cleverest retard in the story.

Speaking of retards in the stories, I have to talk about the VILLAINS. If a male character is talented/handsome/famous but is not MC or a clear ally, they are always evil. No exceptions. They will always be stupid and greedy people who wants MC's treasure or some super technique or even his lovers. They always will resort to either numbers and underhanded methods to get their way. Not only that, their families (or a whole set of families) will also be evil and greedy, and they will always be pulled into direct conflict with the MC so that he can destroy them later on without any sort of guilt on his conscience. It's fine cause they are all horrible people with no redeeming traits at all. Most of the time, these families or sect will be connected to someone even more powerful that wants to revenge or for sake of his treasures/technqiue. Then the MC has to destroy them too and... Well, the circle of life, everybody! And, the ones that MC hasn't got time for? Well, they will all join the next big antagonist that comes along cause they are evil and evil people always work together. This will make MC's victory all the more awesome! Or not. And, the villains are just worthless. They are often set up as the big bad, cause a lot of trouble and pain for the MC when he's still weak. Then, once MC becomes powerful, he just bloody kills them off instantly cause he's 10x more powerful than them now and they are nothing compared to him. Or, if they're really unlucky, they are killed by MC's allies offscreen cause karma? All that built-up and conflict that the author created between a hero and his rival... Ended with one stroke.

Finally, one of my biggest problem with the story... The MC is always a SUBORDINATE. Okay, he made his own sect. Okay, he becomes a very powerful alchemist and he's killed a lot of people... But I never got the sense that he ever becomes his own man. He's always the underdog, working his way up to the top. Though he eventually get there, comes the next arc, he's reduced to a nobody once more and has to start his rise all over again. Like, one of the last arc in the story, we see him in a new society, with everybody and their uncle is considered stronger than him, where he takes a job as part of a patrol company guarding a bloody tree! Really? 3, 600 chapters later and our MC still has to rely on the good will and protection of others to cover his butt? Haven't we done this already? Repeatedly? Did the author really have to make him take a job as a glorified redshirt cause he couldn't think of any fresh ideas for his story? This is in the last hundred chapters. And don't get me started about the number of times where he is stuck in another realm where he can't use his normal powers and has to learn to use another kind of energy! The last arc is all this.

All in all, not a story that I would recommend to anyone. The early parts are enjoyable, but after the first major time-skip, the quality starts to decline rapidly. There are a lot of other problems that I didn't mention, but I figure the ones I did talk about here are story's biggest and could essentially make or break a reader's enjoyment so I might as well warn you guys before you get suckered in by the translated chapters as I had. I haven't picked up another story of this genre since I've read this one. For good or bad, this killed almost all of the interest I had for xianxia.

Oh, minor spoiler.

I know some of you guys hate this so lemme just tell you first. Except for his father, the Shen family (in fact, everyone from the entire area he came from) will eventually ends up extinct/dead. As per usual, MC had to save his father's butt later and his father doesn't appear again. And MC never had any children with his love interest even though he promised his father he would after things "settle down". I think he's sterile by now.

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Miracle Throne
July 26, 2016
Status: c22
I wasn't sure at the start, but I'm almost certain now. This is essentially the Chinese version of the r18 Japanese light novels.

As one can see from the cover, the heroine's clothes are also very revealing. If I'm not wrong, that girl is supposed to be sixteen years old, and that's what she normally wears going to class. This may be the norm for everyone else cause every time a named female character appears, the author mentioned long legs and full bosoms. Fortunately for our imaginations, every heroine is... more>> beautiful, has a saucy body, and are utterly helpless without Chu Tian around to pull their (perfect) butts out of the fire. Really, even the supposedly strong heroines are pretty dumb and become play-doh around Chu Tian.

Chu Tian, our protagonist, is perfect. He knows everything and there is nothing he can't do. But, because he's from an alternate future where magic reign supreme so rather than modern technology, he relies fantasy-technobabble-mumble-jumble that is very similar to our own stuff (light bulbs, air conditioners) to lord over everybody and win the day and prove to everybody that he's the best. So, yeah, his arrogance is on par with Donald Trump.

Now, I wouldn't mind an another Step into the Past clone if the story was good... But, for me, this was pretty average for me. Where I am, there is little to no explanation of Chu Tian's previous life and world, other than that it was really advance and he was a genius. The author essentially just drops Chu Tian into the past and that's it. That's where we start at. From then on, Chu Tian creates some new revolutionary technology in the background and explain what it is and what it does and how superior it is, and that's our exposition, I suppose. The story also moves really fast. How fast? Chu Tian, in two days, has already destroyed the primary threat to his love interest and saved the day at least three times.

The characters themselves are also pretty generic. They don't act like normal people, you know, cause normal people usually have pride and dignity and a personality. They are only around to stroke Chu Tian's ego and make everyone else look bad. The villains are laughably terrible.

I like the premise, but the author obviously couldn't deliver without relying to heavy technobabble to save the day. It wouldn't be so bad if the author just slow down and flesh out the story rather than go straight into the action and make Chu Tian into a pure Gary-Sue. This, and the characters, makes me feel really weird when reading this. More than once, I ask myself, is this someone's power fantasy?

Anyhow, I don't like this story so far, but I may come back to it, primarily because I see a lot of good reviews so I assume the story gets better later on. I am reading the raws so I'm not at all influenced or limited by the translators. I just choose to stop at where I am. <<less
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Realms In The Firmament
August 5, 2016
Status: c1460
Extremely disappointed with this series. Compared to OEM or TTNH, this story is an absolute joke. Ye Xiao is a terrible main character, low in both IQ and EQ. The other characters aren't much better either. Many of them act in a way that I can only describe as dumb. Not only that, it has a lot of filler. Now, I don't mind one or two chapters of filler. I'm talking about six+ of chapters of fillers. Do you know what that much filler does to the pacing of the... more>> story? Have you ever read a fight that lasted sixty or more chapters? Only to have the bloody opponent slip away? Well, just keep reading. I went into this hoping to like it. God, it almost feels like the author hired someone else to ghostwrite for him. What kept me from reviewing this one star is that there are actually some really good ideas here and there. Also, I still have a little good will for the author because this is the dude who wrote OEM and TTNH! <<less
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Eternal Reverence
October 30, 2018
Status: c600
This does have some similarities with BTTH, such as broken engagement and MC's focus on fire cultivation, but after the initial chapters, it becomes very clear that this is not BTTH at all. BTTH is a far superior piece of work than this one.

Spoilers abound. Most of the story is basically like this:

MC has terrible talents, at least on the surface, but gains a pretty powerful cheat. He joins a medium-level faction for cultivation resources, where he is initially ridiculed by his fellow peers cause he sucks or his body... more>> sucks. Everybody and their mother are so arrogant that it's almost pathetic to read. MC has to endure mockery and threats, but will eventually retaliates when someone inevitably attacks or challenge him. Of course, he always win these. After this, when our MC shows his value, he is finally appreciated and praised to heaven, until a bigger talent comes along and he is suddenly the scum of the Earth again who doesn't know his own place.

In every faction that he joins, they don't simply invest or teach you. Oh no, they're all run by capitalists, you see. If you want something from them, you have to do missions for them and earn these arbitrary points, which you can tend buy it from them. Skills, weapons, pills, utilities, etc. And forget collective knowledge, since only the things you mulled over and realize with your own power will be helpful to you so there's almost no actual teaching involved in these factions and they literally expect you to figure everything out. 90% of MC's techniques and skills are earned this way, while the remaining 10% are from adventures.

Once MC reached a certain level of power, then it's tournament time. First, there are tournaments in sects. Followed by tournaments for the main tournament. Then there is finally the main tournament, supplemented with a detailed dossier of each opponent that MC will face, which includes information of their sects, their power level, their skills, their specialty, their weapons, their rivals, their friends, their mother, their father, their dog, their shoe size, their last meal, and a five page essay about the day they took their first baby steps.

All that matters is that MC wins. And all these poor bastards cease to matter anymore.

And he is then declared the best all around. And... that's about it. Author finds a reason to switch maps, transports MC before he reach the level cap where his cultivation starts to slow down, to a new better area and the cycle repeats. Mm? Oh yeah, there'll a war and... a treasure hunt... and a chase... And okay, maybe he comes back for some payback... But all in all... Rinse. Wash. Repeat.

Sounds familiar to anyone? Hm? Maybe it's because this is the same scenario as every single xianxia you've ever read in your life. Chances are, if you're reading this review, then you already know the xianxia mantra by heart.

I mean, This is a fine story to read if you just want to past the time, but don't expect anything more than a generic xianxia story. Except without romance. Yeah, that's right. This has a thousand chapters and there's no romance whatsoever. Maybe. I think this is the story's biggest failure. Some girls obviously like him. Some even throw themselves at him. But I'm at chapter 600ish and MC seems determined to star in the much anticipated sequel to the 40-Year-Old Virgin. I don't know where the author is going with this, but the joke here is that the author is married now and he's too scared of his wife to add romance into his story, let alone a harem.

Damn, the TMW curse strikes again! The MFer who put harem in the tags, you better be talking about the later chapters, because I'd sue your pants off for false advertisement otherwise!

Anyhow, let's talk power-levels, yum, my favorite. The power creep in this story is terrible. I've already read three map changes so far, and basically, the power levels are bullsh*t. Take the Yunhai level for an example. In MC's home, Yunhai level is so powerful and legendary that no one even knows about it. To even have a chance to cross the sea that separates each major continents/map, you have to be Yunhai or stronger. In the second map, Yunhai are the key powers of the sect that MC joins, just a level or two beneath the level cap. Third map. Yunhai is so bloody common that each one is basically the mayor of a city or some sh*t. And you don't even want to know how common MC becomes after each map changes, it's hilarious. I know, it's expected of xianxia, right. But it feels especially bad here because it's only been 600ish chapters and already the power hierarchy makes no sense. This is way too early, and I realize, this may be a sign that the author doesn't have a firm control of his story.

And another problem, let's talk about MC's cheats now. You know, the prizes that MC gains from adventure/killing/achievements. Except for a few key items (Golden Talisman, Star Sword), they're really pretty underwhelming. Most of them aren't all that flashy or impressive, and are basically just slightly better-than-normal weapons/techniques, which when collected together, makes MC a real powerhouse. But eventually, they become pretty worthless. Some of them will even beaten out by the stuff that MC buys from his sect once he reached high enough in the hierarchy. Basically, our MC is "normal overpowered", not "absurdly overpowered". There are geniuses around that have their own inheritance/cheats that are just as powerful as MC's. And the primary way MC eventually outgrow them is by gaining and quickly learning more powerful skills and techniques that will be completely common in the next map. So his cheats are now worth about nineteen dollars on amazon.

And, because of MC's main cheat, the Golden Talismen, his soul is incredible. This is his real cheat. While everybody else's soul is just default gray, his is purple (previously green and blue) and extraordinary powerful for his cultivation. This not only makes him learn quicker (10x, 100x, 1000x, etc), it makes him naturally inclined towards spirit and mental abilities. But, for most of the story, you'll see him choose to focus largely on his physical cultivation and won't touch any of the other stuff (illusions, spirit attacks) until much later. I honestly don't know how to feel about that.

But I really like MC's character. He kills, yes, but he's not ruthless or vicious. He's not the type to murder whole families and cities just to end a potential threat "at its roots". He actually have a conscience, he cares about people and actually try to protect the weak when possible. He loves his family and invest a lot to help his parents cultivate and live longer. He calls himself a loner, but he still make friends with people and even have a healthy bit of respect for his rivals. He's actually worked with weaker people before and pay them their slice of the pie, their just dues even when they've barely lift a finger to contribute to their success. He hold grudges, but at the same time, he won't take a rivalry too far and even forget past wrongs after a certain point. I see a lot of people calling MC arrogant, and yes, he is, but no more than anyone else in the story. It's pretty normal for him because he's a prodigy, a genius of his field. Aye, this MC is arrogant, but he also have class.

All in all, a very generic story with a decent MC that hits most of the typical tropes, but not quite as satisfying as some of the other stories that are already available. Seems like something the author wrote just to make a little extra money and haven't really put much thought on. Nonetheless, I will make an effort to read up to the most recent chapters and update this review later on if I can. I feel like I haven't actually encounter any major problems yet that would turn me off. The only major issue I have is the lack of romance. Otherwise, this would be a good xianxia to read in my spare time. The rest are minor problems that, you have to admit, pretty much comes with the genre.


If anyone thinks that this actually deserves to be compared to a classic like BTTH, meet me outside when we lunch, we'll brawl it out, kay? <<less
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My Father in Law is Lu Bu
October 25, 2016
Status: c957
TL;DR: This is a decent time-travel story. Three and a half stars, aka a four.

The long part, with tons of spoilers, of course...

... more>>

Ah, this story has a complicated spot in my head.

It's main draw is that a modern person has the ability to travel back and forth in time. The MC is the sole link that ties the ancient world and the modern one. But, for some reason, this plot is eventually phased out and the MC lose contact with the future completely. Fortunately, in my opinion, this doesn't really hurt the story, but the author could've just saved us all some time and just made MC stuck in the past from the beginning. Why give MC the ability to travel back to the modern period when you're just gonna take it away, permanently?

Anyhow, let me just say this first. The story starts out a bit weak, then gains a lot of momentum around the middle part, but ultimately and completely falls apart at the end. It's fairly obvious that the author just lost interest and ended the series well before its time. If done right, it could've lasted at least two hundred more chapters. Four hundred, if the author actually decided stick with the Hun Invasion plot-line. Still, I did enjoy the most of the story. It's just the end was just too... abrupt. And silly.

Children, beware. This is a story about Ancient China, so you know there's gonna be some very violent stuff happening around MC. The author isn't afraid to show the brutality of war and the cruel methods some people used to inflict pain on their enemies before they die. Two words: Human Stick. At least one of MC's generals suffer this fate upon their defeat. This might not be for everyone, but personally, I love it. In fact, I wish it were more frequent.

MC's relationship with his wives doesn't really develops. In fact, once they've married, MC will rarely have any time to spend with his wives at all, other than some interactions here and there. This story is nearly entirely about politics and intrigue and the introduction of the fabulous inventions that the MC brought back with him from the future. Essentially, MC replaces Liu Bei as the third power in the Three Kingdom Period. Most of the time, when he's not uplifting Chinese civilization with the introduction of cement and cannons, he's stealing talents left and right, making Cao Cao green with envy and Liu Bei look quite the fool.

Speaking of... The characters were very well done... At first. Then, they all get flanderized.

Cao Cao starts out a fairly reasonable character, at least for a warlord, but is still an extremely ambitious and shrewd fellow. Yet, by the very end, he actually surrenders to the MC and helps dismantle his own empire after he was overthrown in a coup. It's complicated. Sun Ce... Turn out to be gay. In fact, very gay for Zhao Yu. It only took Zhao Yu's brush with death for Sun Ce to realize it. I suppose it had to be that way in order for the MC to steal both of their wives and yet have them both join MC's faction willingly and loyally as his dragons. But that was still very stupid in my opinion. I don't know what the author's problem is with Zhuge Liang, but the author decided to portray him as a decadent, yet often penny-less and henpecked strategist who's so scared of his own wife that he's even afraid to go home. One of the best strategist in history, and here, he's been reduced to a comic relief. Even the MC gets this treatment. He gets absolutely no respect from his own council near the end. While they are all making jokes at the MC's expense and embarrassing him as if they were old buddies, and the MC just taking it, I thought... Warlords have been known to execute entire families for less. Xiang Yu, for example.

If there were anyone who's portrayal I enjoyed from start to end, it's Liu Bei. I never liked him in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. In this story, MC completely take over his role and then slowly dismantled every single thing he ever had. Strategist? Gone. Wife? Gone. Supporters? Gone. Elite Forces? Gone. Sworn brothers? Gone. In the end, he had absolutely nothing. And I very much enjoyed to watching him fail again and again. Too much enjoyment, in fact, so this might be a little bias.

As for the titular Lu Bu... Still a warlord and a fearsome warrior, but... he's also a family man now. He's leaving all the world conquering for the younglings. Still don't know what to think about that.

All in all, characters starts out normal, but essentially becomes a parody of their former selfs by the end. This, I didn't like at all.

Nevertheless, I really enjoyed the story. Sure, there are a lot of problems and plot-holes, but even so, I'm not too bothered by them. I see this similar to a summer blockbuster movie.

You essentially see the MC live out everyone's fantasy of what they would do (or should do) if they were to travel back in time. Become someone important, carve out a territory of your own, develop a worthless wasteland into the technological capital of the world, and build a reputation so powerful that your very name becomes a weapon to use as any other.

You see the MC start out as a nobody then become a prince then a warlord then ultimately an emperor. And you really do feel excited by the MC's achievements. Like when he modified the ballistas, install them into ships, and then use them to crush the Wu's naval forces that was invading. Or recruiting Zhao Yun before Liu Bei and using him to harass/devastate Liu Bei's forces with the Mongolian horse archer tactics. Or by the end, building a fleet of European-inspired ships, complete with naval artillery, to devastate whole enemy fleets, seaport, and seashore city from miles away. And what time-travel story would be complete without the MC bringing superior methods of forging better and stronger swords and armors that are essentially hacks for his elite army. Or, best of all, at the end, when Cao Cao used the Emperor's authority to declare MC a traitor and an enemy to the realm, MC and his council simply declared MC the true Emperor and Cao Cao's Emperor to be a false one. Man did that backfire on him horribly!

The MC also shows some shrewdness in the way how he abuse his Princely title to overpower his enemies, how the use his Liu surname to unify the world under his banner, and how he twist all of his enemies plot and schemes into building blocks for his own little corner of power.

Still, as much as I've enjoyed those moments, there were also a lot of other moments where it dragged on and on. The story is kinda there, but the execution leaves much to be desire. Some of the stuff that happens to the MC should've killed him outright. It is only became MC is the protagonist that he survives with his head attached to his neck. Plus, some of his actions are also downright stupid, such as his decision to put himself at the mercy of another warlord and essentially living for years under house arrest in exchange for the right to buy food. Or waiting for Cao Cao to attack you rather than taking the initiative to attack first while he's dealing with the Yuan's army on the other side of the map. Note, at this point, MC already has the manpower, the superior arsenal, and an epic naval force, WITH CANNONS. And he's extremely rich after stealing all the merchants from the other warlords and the Yuans still have an army to threaten Cao Cao with. He can take Cao Cao out, easily. But he decided to wait and wait, and ultimately paid dearly for that decision. Hint: Cities sacked, generals dead, and his cannons fall into the hands of Cao Cao. Go figure.

And adding to the fact that the ending was a complete mess. So... I give this three and a half stars. Not an actual four stars rating, but I can't, in good conscience, give this just three stars.

P.S. Even though MC's indecision cost him a lot, it'll all work out fine in the end. Cao Cao has a really capable son, overthrowing the emperor and helping himself to the throne while his father is fighting the battle of his life. MC becomes emperor with the help of Cao Cao and unifies China just in time to fight off the Huns or something.


This review is unrelated to the translation. I read the raws, like a real man! <<less
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September 25, 2016
Status: c1100
The beginning of story started out well enough, but as it moves further and further, it falls apart, but I suppose most of you won't need to worry about that until like chapter 700 or so. Minus the ones that were kind of thrown in, most of the love interests were well done. I like how the MC actually marries his love interest, with a ceremony and all that. That's kind of rare with these kind of story. There are a lot of big moments here and there. If you... more>> like seeing an MC who consistently find extraordinary treasures and expand his immense wealth with the spoils of his fallen enemy, then you'll like this one. However, that said, there's very little excitement in the story. After the first few hundred or so chapters, you'll realize that there's very little in the world that can actually threaten MC. In fact, most villains are either terrible with their jobs or have been schemed into destruction by our MC. Later, you'll find out that he was never in any danger in the first place cause there's a certain desu-ex character who's literally behind most of MC's success and prevents him from actually dying before he's supposed to. So, even when MC destroys his greatest foes or finding an incredible bank of treasure, it doesn't feel very satisfying. After a while, I started to become jaded cause the story was no longer fun to read. By 1, 100 chapters, I personally found it hard root for the MC at all so I dropped it there.

Also, let me name off a couple of deal breakers that the story has that very few people have mentioned.
MC has to destroy his power and restart his cultivation from the start around chapter 900 so take note of that.
Yang Xi, the man who destroyed his MC's first life, doesn't die until near the end of the story. So a sin for stretching out a plot point that should've been solved in the first three hundred chapters. Yang Xi is a very annoying character.
The Mortal Realm and the Spirit Realm takes up about 90% of the story, which I assume leaves about 10% to the Immortal Realm. When I stopped reading (1100/1300), MC was still pretty low in the official power heirarchy, as in he's still at least five level of reaching the end. So I'm going to assume he never reach the final ranks.
Also, MC becomes quite an ass later on.

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Sovereign of the Three Realms
November 30, 2015
Status: --
I'm reading ahead of the translations. This is an okay series. There are a lot of unnecessary fat and fillers. The author tends to be a bit overzealous with his details and expositions. Sometimes, whole chapters, or at least half of it, will be devoted to expositions or be used to tell us about stuff that we have already been told repeatedly. Every time Jiang Chen becomes overpowered and crowned the greatest genius around, he immediately discovers there’s another place somewhere else with people who are at least several levels... more>> above him. And it’s always because they have more money (resource) than him. After this happens a couple times, you tend to get pretty jaded at these developments. Jiang Chen is a good protagonist. He isn’t a pushover, but he also isn’t evil and ruthless either. If someone piss him off but makes a real effort to make peace or make up for their actions, he will usually forgive and forget. He isn’t a walking disaster like some protagonists, but, if pushed too far, he can be very heavy-handed in his punishments. Jiang Chen is pretty powerful on his own, but his greatest asset is his brain and the memories of his former life. Sadly, while Jiang Chen is smart most of the time, when he is dumb, he can be REALLY dumb.

There are also a ton of characters, but other than Jiang Chen’s core followers, they are simply given attention and then drop out of the story. There isn’t much romance either, at least for a long time. Strength is Jiang Chen's top priority. A lot of girls fall for him, but they either bury their feelings and stay around as backdrops or hop onto a bus and disappear for a thousand chapters. This seems to be the trend for most characters. Overall, this story is fine but it can be very exhausting to read sometimes. <<less
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Talisman Emperor
November 28, 2018
Status: c1300
For a story named Talisman Emperor, there's really not much of a focus on talismans. Sure, our MC started out with talismans and he's connected to talismans in many ways, but throughout the story, MC is largely focused on martial and energy cultivation, on body refinement and sword techniques. Talismans have a role and do pop up occasionally, but a very small, supportive role. Reminds me of another story I've read, Path to Heaven, where the protagonist there also found his first big break through talismans crafting, but would move... more>> on to a more genetic path of cultivation once he had the means and resources to do so. Because I'm pretty sure the author initially wanted MC's core cultivation to be based around talismans, but after a while, realized that it was too troublesome and quietly dropped the idea entirely. MC's primarily a sword cultivator. So if anyone here was suckered in by the title... well, the title is a lie. Rather than Talisman Emperor, it should be renamed Sword Emperor.

The story, post-ascension, is solid. That's about it. There are a couple dropped storylines that the author set up early on and clearly intended to empower our MC, but would exposition'd away or just outright disappeared for no reason in the later chapters. The author also relies heavily on a lot of deus ex-machina to save the day. Like, in one storyline, MC stole the treasures of an entire inheritance right under the nose of a dozen of young masters and faction successors, and then when he beat their whiny butts back to daddy, daddy decides to throw in. Only to be stopped by the seal of the Bai family, a major powerhouse in the mortal realm, because MC happened to be friends with the sister of the Bai Family's patriarch and she gave it to him after they met again. I think she considers him as a son... which is kinda dumb in itself, because MC's situation at the start was very, very bad, and then it got worse. And she... You know what, nevermind. All in all, there's some dialogue and behavior that would be considered unnatural, if not awkward, from almost every character in the story, but pre-ascension, it's still readable.

MC starts out with a good personality. He's a family person, and he's really easy to root for early on, but he's not actually that smart, he does a lot of dumb stuff that just happened to be balanced out by chance, but his heart's in the right place. He's really reckless, but thank God he's really lucky too. He's a "know-it-all" though, because everything new that MC encounters, he would just so happened to hear it from his more experienced companions or read it from a book off-screen. Rarely does MC ever encounters something that actually stumps him. All in all, decent.

The villains are as you'd expect from a xianxia antagonist: proud, stubborn, and incompetent. People in this story cannot work together, unless it's against MC. If it meant screwing over MC, well, then they're like the bloody Fellowship of the Ring. Then and only then, do they learn to swallow their pride and learn the power of teamwork! Even people who didn't know MC before (see def: neutral) or people who were actually supposed to be MC's allies, would, more often than not, work with the villains to crack MC like an oyster because everybody be greedy for treasure-y. At least two love interest would join these alliances and try to kill MC for his treasures, until they are converted via the Bill Cosby Special.

The romance sucked. If you went into this story for the harem tag, you'll be disappointed. There are a lot of beauties who fell in love with him, but MC has slept with two women so far and both were by accident (See above). I don't know why they fell for MC and these love interests almost never have any time to properly develop. They love MC, they want his babies (我要给你生孩子), and... yeah, instant harem, right?

As for the treasures and cheats that are atypical of these stories... they're alright, I guess. The primary ones are pretty useful and often remains viable to MC all the way to the end, or at least to the mid. Others, I feel, are one-trick ponies. MC finds it, uses it once, and forget about it for the rest of the story. Even the really useful ones, like that orb that could supposedly sense fluctuations in space, often the aspect of special inheritance left behind by great people and allows the user to effortlessly enter without being stopped by its defense/forcefield. Holy sh*t, that's really cool! But I think it's only used twice in the story, total. Darn!

And that's my thoughts on the mortal realm section, which lasted around... 1, 000 chapters.

Then we move onto the immortal realm. The first or second arc, between 1, 000 chapters to 1, 200 chapters is terrible.


This is the part where MC ascends to the immortal realm, but it feels like the story took a massive step backwards. First of all, the author every trick uses in the book to stretch out each chapter, and it's done in a glaringly obvious way, where every character will watch MC challenge the impossible and react... Loudly. Before and after MC accomplishes said impossible task. They repeat information, reveals why said task should be impossible for MC, and gapes like a fish whenever MC does it and praise him to the sky and back. Until next time, of course. Instant three chapters that the author pulled from his butt! It's fun the first few times, but ugh... It gets very old very quickly when the author essentially reuses this trope repeatedly with minimum changes to the situation and dialogue.

The mood of the story also changes, from an adventure/action to a comedy/school life. It reads like a completely different story. Almost every character is flanderized and reduced to just one trait: If you're with MC, you're loyal and pure and awesome. If you're not... well, you're totally irredeemable and also totally boned. The third option are the dumb, impressionable skeptics who doubt MC in everything he does. This problem was present and also kinda bad in the early chapters, but after ascension, it became a lot worse.

And the most terrible aspect of this arc is... MC just joins an academy. Not sect, not kingdom. An academy. What? Typical xianxia terms like apprentices/master/elder are dropped in favor of student and dean/teacher/instructor. Everybody becomes a student. MC is a new student (freshmen), and there are older students (sophomore, junior, senior). Then comes the fights and personality clashes... that all reads like a bunch of high school kids throwing a tantrum and spat. The author implements a point systems and have MC create a cliche of supporters to fight against another cliche of rival students. There's no treasuring hunting in this arc, no adventure, and no sense of urgency. Just 200+ chapters of petty rivalries, grudges, and dumb feuds that makes no sense. Eventually, finally, the MC would leave the academy for some test to be promoted to an "inner student" and almost instantly, the story improved, but after that arc's gone, the author returns MC back to his school-life adventures and petty teenage spats.

Boring af. Especially since MC is in the immortal realm now, he's actually got one of the most powerful faction and a lot of senior brother/sisters there to support/protect him whenever he's in any actual danger. I'm not talking about the academy. I'm talking about the Mountain of God's Eye or however you translate it.

MC himself should be at least two hundred years old, but he still acts like a kid! And so do the people who are supposedly 1, 000s (10, 000s) of years old. Around this time, people starts using words and phrases that are... modern, I guess, but most of the time, really awkward to read and long-winded. The biggest example is this: (陈汐你这个不该降生于世的孽子), which essentially translate to (MC, the bastard who should have never been born.). This phrase is wordy and painful to read, right? And it can easily be condensed into just two words, 孽子 (bastard), but the author insist on using the entire phrase every time members of MC's mother's family confronts MC. It's like the author either fired his editor or the said editor died of a brain aneurysm. Or the author decides that by actually writing good, he can't bloat up his word count and make a few more dollars. But either way, the chapters post MC's ascension are really bad. The ancient setting/mood is non-existence in this arc. For a few times in the story, I thought I was reading a dushi, not xianxia!

Ugh, and I don't even want to talk about how many times the author have a villain goes (He suddenly felt like his dignity have been stung and heartlessly stomped to the ground) when they are defeated or ignored by MC. The answer is all of them. Why in bloody hell is everybody is so arrogant when they have no right to be? Originality goes out the window too, the author literally stop giving a crap about how to name locations. I nearly threw up when I read "Quest Mountain". This arc has everything I hate in Chinese web novels.


Final Impressions: There's no NTR in this story (up to chapter 1300), the harem tag is weak but solid, and MC always wins. In the early chapters, there are a lot of treasure hunts and cheats, and the battles are pretty cool to read. There's tournaments and they do drag on a bit, but not as many as other stories tend to have. However, the dialogue will always be kind of awkward, and this would only get worse. Many of the character's actions are questionable and irrational. I don't think anyone have any style or class. Maybe they had some during their introductions, but the more they appear in the story, the more... vulgar and normalized they seem. Note, this is a story about xianxia and cultivation. And by normal, I meant a normal, modern person. There's no ancient flavor in this story, if that makes sense to anyone.

Post-ascension, the writing plummets hard and there's really no point in reading this story any further. There are better ways of killing brain cells (see name).

I rate this 2 stars. Bad Naruto Fanfic. <<less
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Martial World
July 28, 2018
Status: c1100
I honestly do not understand how this novel became as popular as it is. Even by web novel standards, this reads very much like something that was written by an amateur who was inexperienced with writing and doesn't have much control over his story.

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The biggest problem for me is that the author has a very awkward way of writing his dialogue. How do I say it... It feels like he just never lets a conversation develops itself and instead rushes to get to the conclusion as quickly as possible. Most of the time, MC meets with another character, the author would dump everything the other character have to say (expositions or even secrets) into two or three long paragraphs, and that is a little annoying to read. Then, there are a lot modern words/phrases that each character uses that you wouldn't expect to come from from a xianxia and some stuff that are downright awkward to read. It's like the the author's in some race to see who can throw in the most exposition the fastest. Also, more than once, I had to cringed when an antagonist announced his evil plan to MC and even screamed for the whole world to hear about how he's gonna cripple the MC and rape his lovers in front of him. Perhaps the author wants to justify how the MC will embarrass/punish the arrogant young masters later on, but a lot of time, their rants doesn't really make sense. There's arrogant and there's borderline retarded. MC literally has you by the balls and you threaten him?? It feels like the author is making them evil (and bloody loud) just for the sake of them being the bad guy and the MC's antithesis. All in all, the dialogue is cringey, awkward, and uh, the very opposition of immersion.

And that story itself is kinda bad. Oh, it has the common problems. Way too many tournaments, too many arrogant young masters who wants to rape MC's women, and too many ancient shameless "what's his face" chasing down youngsters for their treasure/secrets... However, there is another bigger problem: the author never gives us readers a chance to stop and breath. At all times, MC is always facing one or two serious crisis. There is never a chill arc or something slow to prepare us for the next big bad. The MC always jumps from one big event to the next big event. And MC's running for his bloody life again, color me shocked! This gets exhausting to read after the fifth big bad comes along. But, that's not all... The author also has a very poor control of his story and an equally poor judgement of how to write it. For example, the author decides to have the MC go take some stupid test from the phoenix family and then literally travel to another world while big bad #2499 and his fiendish minions are chasing down and threatening to kill everyone that MC cares about! And there, we are treated to all the lovely clichés that comes with these sort of "test" while the big bad is laying siege to MC's base. And oh my God! Everybody is so proud that if they were even a little be better than you, they'll look up their nose at you and belittle you to the ground! Oh my God, I'm about half of foot taller than you, you are beneath me, you bloody insect! That's every character in the story. There's no humble characters. Just proud and prouder. For some reason, MC often just takes what he needs from memories gain from his cube cheats whatever and leave the rest sealed at some corner of his mind until he needs it. Like, what? It'll take what? A couple hours? A day tops to absorb the memory shard entirely? And what does the MC do? Push it off until he literally needs them to save his lazy butt or make a pretty penny for him. That's just dumb, one of the many ways the author utilizes to create problems for the MC that shouldn't exist. Just terrible decisions all around, imo.

Most of the characters who appears feels flat. Everybody has an ulterior motive, which they would also readily reveal through dialogue for some reason. But then again, they are merely clichés who are only in the story to fulfill their role, then die or disappear or whatever when MC leaves for the next region so whatev, right? A lot of the antagonist's actions do not make sense. All the good guys are incompetent af. And the love interest... is okay, I guess. But I have a saying: if you write a harem, either you better incorporate everybody to please the Pokemon collectors or just take all the popular ones, to satisfy most of the fanbase. Leaking one or two is fine. But the author here decided to write a harem, and seems to have MC marry only the most boring heroines in the whole story. I'm only in the early 1000s and hear that there'll be two more love interest, maybe they'll be better, but my God... the current love interest is boring af. And yeah... I used a singular just now because the princess has almost zero presence as a love interest. Pretty sure she's just in the harem cause she sucked up to MC's parents. As for the MC himself... he's lucky, and we'll leave it that. But he's a baaaaad character too.

The power hierarchy doesn't really make sense for me. Oh, I understand the numbers, but the power gap's just too close between each characters. Like, most of the time, the leader of a sect/family or whatever would often just be a couple power levels higher than the minions they command, but the power differences would be massive. I don't know... It just rubs me the wrong way that if someone were to be a little bit more gifted and breakthrough just a couple levels, they would already be stronger than their sect leader or whatever. Which is essentially what happened. MC went from being known as the number one among juniors to the leader of an entire war/rebellion in just a year or two, tops.


I read over 1000 chapters of this story and this was my thoughts on it. I wouldn't really recommend this story to anyone unless they have nothing else to read. If you read the translations, maybe it'll be better. Translators, tend to have proof-readers and editors, which this author clearly does not. But all in all, a very disappointing work for something with such glowing reviews. <<less
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Tales of Herding Gods
July 6, 2018
Status: c340
A villain? Not really.

First of all, I do like this, but it's not really for me. The writing itself isn't bad. It's not the best, but it reads fluidly, minus a couple modern phrases/word/term here and there. But the story, the themes are the real meat.

If I have to describe this series, it's basically a story set in a post apocalyptic world that once reached the height of cultivation, but is ultimately destroyed by either demons or Gods from another world. The region that MC is from is basically the... more>> "ground zero", the area that was hit so bad from the apocalyptic event, that it is still effected to this day (hence the darkness) and its people cursed to live in this area and disdained by the people who lives outside of it.

The story features a very special boy who was raised by several of the most powerful figures of their era, each who choose to exile themselves for various reasons, but loves the MC and passes much of their skills to him. Upon "adulthood" the boy travels outside of his region, dazzle the world with his talents/sharp mind, and becomes the leader of a powerful but hated organization the promotes cooperation and the sharing of knowledge between peers, and hence, is labelled as an "evil" or an "unorthodox" order by their rivals, which are led by the followers of Buddhism and Taoism. But, I don't sense either groups to be evil. True, the author bashes the followers of Buddhism up and down, but the primary conflict of the story feels more like a case of progressivism vs traditionism.


At first, the villains of the story seems to be the Empire that threatened to invade MC's homeland and the Prime Minister seems to be set up as the big bad, but later, it turns out that they are actually the champions of progressivism, that have improved the lives of the common people greatly and taken lands that were traditionally belonged to the sects and handing them back to peasants and commonfolks. Their conquest and slow but firm centralization of their government is actually doing a lot more good than harm. And their philosophy actually lines up with MC's pretty well. Later on, MC's faction and the empire would actually work together and they would become extremely close allies. I like this. Normally, the empire in question would be evil to the core and would be wiped out by the MC when he gets absurdly strong, but no. It turns out, they're actually doing a lot of good in the world and they seems to be spared from the fate that befell so many big bad empire in xianxia. It's a breath of fresh air to see this development.

But, with such strong themes, the story still feels very light-hearted to me. Right, there are a lot of death, massacres, and even torture, but... I'm kinda desensitized to that already. There are a lot of jokes, a lot of gags that made me laugh, but it also saps the seriousness of certain situation for me. Some developments actually feels too silly to even be possible. Or at least, the reaction of such would be much darker/violent.

I dislike that after MC leaves his home, he joins an academy and learns like a student when he is already so powerful and have already endured so much, but it's easier to take when I consider that he is only twelve, thirteen at the time. MC is still a child, right, but some of his opponents actually reads like a child to me too. A lot of bad stuff happens, a lot of people does bad stuff, but some of them are brushed aside when the Prime Minister is revealed to be the big good of the series. Once the good guys are revealed to be good guys (or is hinted that they would be good), they don't really get any karma for the bad stuff they have already done, which seems weird to me. At the very least, the King of Poison should get some real sh*t for poisoning the Empress, but that's just me. MC himself is a huge karma houdini. But, while everybody claims that he is evil, he is closer to unorthodox, with all the makings of a modern saint. And yes, he really is quite clever.

The romance... is terrible. There are a lot of love interest and I think this story is going to be a harem, but it's not really done very well. MC is extremely dense with relationship. He's like a Japanese light novel protagonist. And some of the love interests aren't really that good. Like, one love interest nearly swindled all of his treasures, and he's actually grateful to her for letting him use his own money, the heck? And there's that snake lady. Ugh. There are so good love interests too, but all in all, this story isn't a romance, or a harem focused story. That's all I have to say about that. But, the other relationships in the novel is very well done. Through the MC, I have grown to care for certain characters and even love interest, though I doubt anything would get into this block of rock. Maybe there might be some development by chapter 500, but that's a tad too late for me.

There are hints of a greater threat in the future, the Gods that lives beyond his world and the ones who destroyed the old civilization. MC will definitely come into conflict with them, as MC is later revealed to be a descendant of that very civilization and that bits and pieces of that civilization are hinted to have survived to the current era. The war between the world and the Gods would be something to see, as this is the same society that created "Sun Ships" and "Moon Ships" and have calculated ways that allowed even normal mortals to ascend to Godhood one day.

Some of you may notice that my terms are a bit modern, that's because modern is what I feel from the story. Let me summarize this story in another way: The story features a boy who journeys across a world whose highly advanced civilization was once hit by apocalyptic event, probably caused by aliens, learning and spreading knowledge/ancient technologies across the land, befriending liked-minded peers and making enemies of powerful men who guards the secrets of their power and advancement from the common men.


Which is why, while I like this story, it's not for me. I prefer a more traditional xianxia story. I might be able to read this further than 400 if the romance is good, but like I said, it's terrible. Or at least non-existent. But, I will recommend this story to anyone who just wants a good read. And even though I have repeatedly claimed that this story isn't suitable for my taste, I would probably come back to it since it's written so well and I haven't encountered any major bugs yet. I just hope the romance improves by then. <<less
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Tempered Immortal
March 28, 2019
Status: c600
Tempered Immortal has been on my read list for a while, but I've always been reluctant to read it. I mean, holy moly! 4k chapters? That's crazy! I'd be lying if I said I wasn't intimidated.

Anyhow, I really like the premise. The idea what MC is able to take what people normally considered trash and recycle it into a treasure, there's a lot of potential in that. It's a fresh idea, and it was MC's primary cheat, but after a while, I kinda lost interest.

For some reason, I thought... more>> that this would be one of those stories, you know, the type where the protagonist stays in the shadows, tricks enemies into fighting each other while he safely makes off with the treasure with none the wiser. That's what I'd assume a smart protagonist would do. Hide in the shadows and reap all the benefits, without fighting battle after battle like an ox. Instead, we have a MC who would often throw himself into dangerous situations, makes a point to ignore threats that would eventually explode into a much larger problem, and constantly make enemies out of people who are at a much higher cultivation level than he is. He doesn't make much plans at all. No schemes, no trickery. Hell! He would even gain the ability to change his appearance and hide his cultivation level, and still he walks around with his real face and introduce himself with his real name. And he couldn't be bothered to hide his identity because since he's only been around for 20+ short years, he thinks that no one would recognize him. And this is the same guy who constantly stress to himself about how dangerous and cutthroat his world and its inhabitants are!

... Hear that? Cause I just broke my nose face-palming.

So I don't think MC is clever, rather he's just properly cautious and paranoid, with maybe a little bit of wit on him. Other than that, he reads like a normal xianxia MC to me. And as a normal xianxia MC, basically all he does is fight, fight, fight.

I've read almost 600 chapters, and there's almost never a moment where he doesn't have to fight someone. And these fights are so drawn-out. Even against people who are of a lower cultivation weaker than him, it'll take at least two chapters to resolve. The first to introduce who his opponents are and talk about their entire life story. The second for the fight to actually happen. But MC is at least nice enough to let them exhaust their move-set first before he kills them. Whatta swell guy! For even slightly stronger opponents, it's not rare for the fights to last anywhere from five to eight chapters. Or even more. Which makes it kinda ironic because despite all the fighting he does, this MC feels a bit underpowered.

Yes, MC's develops at a pace that is considered very fast in comparison to his peers, but that's because of his many cheats. Okay, so what's her excuse then? By her, I mean MC's maid, Yue'er, some random ghost that MC enslaved while he was in some normal city of normal mortals. Turns out, she's also some genius who could easily follow MC's footsteps. Without cheats, without pills, she is always at least equal or just one small level beneath MC. Huh?? Not joking! MC is Mid Gold Core? She is Early Gold Core. The heck is this situation? MC is being overshadowed by his own maid! This isn't the only example. Later, one of MC's rivals happens upon some miracle elixir that magically promotes him to MC's level. Huh? MC works like a dog and risk his life for years just to promote one teensy level and this mothertrucker finds one treasure and catches up immediately? What? Are we sure that MC is the real protagonist here? All in all, the author puts way too much focus on the side-characters, even B class characters, and not enough on the MC himself.

And his power feels weak too. Despite the sheer amount of treasures and cheats that MC have in his body, the best he could do is fight someone who is of one minor level ahead of him. Yes, I mean minor level, not one level. For example, basically when MC is Early Gold Core, he can maybe fight Mid Gold Core. Anyone with a higher cultivation than that and MC will have to run like a dog and hide. God helps him if he encounters anyone who is actually a solid level ahead of him. No, I'm serious. God, save him before he pissed his own pants!

Sigh! It's not exactly enjoyable to read this kind of MC.

There's much bigger problems though. I know that this is a very old story (est. 2009) so I was prepared to read all sorts of classic xianxia tropes, but wow, Tempered Immortal reminds me so much of Sovereign of the Three Realms, and not in the good way.

It's the exposition! Now, I can normally suffer a little exposition here and there, but every chapter, around 30% of it will be dedicated to expositions. MC would constantly think to himself, explain every one of his decision/action down to the smallest detail, talk about this thoughts, dedicate entire chapters to stuff that's not really important and no one really cares about. Repeat information, all that jazz. The repetition is mindbogglingly bad. This story has so much needless information that it would sometimes drive me crazy. The author would inserted expositions/info dump even at key moments and completely throws off the pacing of the moment. One moment, MC's fighting for his life, next... Stop. Exposition! But it's fine, cause the info dump only seemed long and windy from our perspective. For MC, it was only a blink of an eye. That's the way the author writes, and it annoys me so much! The author really needs an editor to cut down all the excess fat! Basically, like most Chinese web-novelist, the author really uses every trick in the book to bloat up his word count. There's other methods as well that are very obvious.


Example A: MC needs to buy some stuff for alchemy, yes? In this scenario, the author would just need to write a sentence or two that explains the MC went to the city off-screen and got what he need, yes? But not in this story. The author would write MC going to the shop, write out the entire conversation between MC and the shopkeeper, then write about how MC finally returns home and starts the process. The shop isn't important, there's no importance in this trip except to acquire the item MC needs. So basically filler, yes?

Example B: MC travels to a sect known for their scrolls that summons beast. MC talks with some random youngster, who then mentions a very famous scroll maker, is shocked that MC doesn't know who the said scroll maker is, and then tells MC all about this scroll maker and his achievements and how awesome his scrolls are. Later, when MC shops for summon scrolls, he encounters someone who might be the famous scroll maker. MC even thinks to himself about how he suspects the person may be the famous scroll maker. Only, in the end, after MC has brought the scrolls he needed from the person, that MC decides that the person isn't the famous scroll maker after all because the person accepted a low-level item as payment that the famous scroll maker would otherwise never have accepted. MC never does meet the famous scroll maker because he would later travel to a much better location and the person who sold MC the scroll he needs is basically just an unknown nobody. Huh, why the fudge did I just read all that BS then?!

Example C: MC and a group of cultivators are recruited by a merchant guild to kill a monster. At the meeting, MC and another character strikes up a conversation. The character is led to believe that MC is a freelance cultivator and makes every attempt to recruit MC into his 3rd-rated sect, which includes details on all the advantages that he could enjoy if he joins and how important it is to have a strong backing in one's road of cultivation. Then MC rejects him and the person stubbornly ask MC to visit the sect someday and check it out, maybe he would change his mind. Then, the character dies a couple chapter later and everything I just read was basically meaningless. Oh my God, this part is so irrelevant! Note, the author has already went over all this stuff shortly after the 1st map change. At this point, MC is already in one of the best sects around and is next in line to take over as leader. I thought that the character and MC would have at least become friends or whatever, but nope! He's dead, Jim! So what was the point of dedicating almost two chapters to a conversation with an entirely irrelevant character and his useless sect? Foie gras, anyone?


And the dialogue, it seems the point of every character is to stretch out every conversation that can be said. Misunderstandings, over-reactions, small talk. Any question that can be asked, will be asked. And author always try to insert some worthless babble into some sentences, maybe to make the conversations feel natural, but probably to bloat up his word count. In fact, the maid that I mentioned earlier, Yue'er, she is basically the Robin to MC's Batman. She questions and second-guess just about every single decision that MC makes. MC wants to do that, she ask why. And when MC did this, she ask then why he didn't that. She talks and talks and talks! And she's just a maid! A slave, to put it bluntly, not even a lover! But holy sh*t! So much worthless rambles from her! I think she is easily my least favorite character in the story.

I made it to about 600 chapters before I decided to drop this story. The arc that ultimately made me give up is where MC explores a ruin for over thirty chapters, maybe even fifty. I don't know, I think my brain shut down somewhere in the middle of all that. But anyhow, it was nothing but MC fighting mobs after mobs after mobs, and chapters of detailed POV from a couple of generic characters that no one cares about. My God. I heard that this gets even worse in the later chapters so I decided to drop this story here.

So my thoughts are, this is a very generic xianxia story that some people may enjoy, but honestly, it's not worth the effort. There's other options out there, and the only merit this story has over them is its length. In this case, it is indeed not about the size of the boat, but the motion of the ocean.

Two out of five stars.

P.S: I forgot. Everything I've read so far points to this story as being a harem, but up to 600 chapters, the most MC has done so far is kiss one love interest. <<less
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Otherworldly Evil Monarch
March 10, 2016
Status: --
A great story that most people would enjoy and likely make you laugh for a long time. But there are traces of racism here and there. Also, the ending is... shall we say, abrupt? Yes, it’s VERY abrupt. All in all, a wonderful journey, but the destination leaves a bad taste in my mouth. If you can overlook these problems, then I highly recommend this one!
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