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aetonazniel
Its only a few chapters so far but is proving to be interesting. Its basically mundane normal life for the first two chapters until eventually he realizes his goal after his power grinding. Although I am wondering why he does not explore helping people in the world with his powers or what else he does with it be it heroic or pervy stuff. That I think would have been interesting
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BJ Archmage
March 28, 2020
Status: c9
I was interested with the story at first but damn this writting style is annoying af. Author wont say whats happening properly and instead likes to beat around the bush. That narration feels like author is telling a riddle than a story. It just made me pissed and annoyed. If you happen to be ok with the writting style then it might be interesting for you.
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Mr. Nobu’s Otherworld Chronicles
April 2, 2019
Status: c72
Decently paced Isekai.

Starts off as summon, a bit of a twist considering who interfered with his summon and for why. Normally you'd think he has to be a new demon lord or some villain sh*t but no. I like reading his daily life and how he uses his modern knowledge. Shame that the translator dropped the series and ended it at chapter 72
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With Contract Skill Many Brides!
March 19, 2019
Status: c21
Pros

-Harem route

-rare males on the world = low chance of arrogant noble cliche

... more>> -OP MC (for some reason the self proclaimed goddess told him he wont get cheat but for some reason he still is)

-very little description of surroundings and details (this can be a good thing or a bad thing depending on the reader. For someone who hates info dumps, this is a pro for me. Although I wish the author made more lines on the characters thoughts to express more emotion)

Cons

-Very low quality translations. Possibly the translator is not that good with english yet

-goddamn pop ups and ads on translators page!!! WTF!!!!

-feels like the writer is assuming we have all read isekai novels so he does not say how things work or not. Writer should have done minimal exposition either via MC inner thoughts or supporting character's explanation of the new world

-super short chapters that its barely moving the story

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Initially it was a decent start. MC aint exactly OP from the get-go. The path to become strong was always welcome but in this case, what put me off was how long it took for him before even reaching the starting line of the path to be strong. He even lets people he cares about get taken and instead of grinding to become strong and take them back, he casually travels to another kingdom. I cant relate on that decision. If I had important people taken, I would have grinded... more>> like crazy to become strong asap and speed up the path to take them back. Its like he does not have any sense of urgency despite claiming they are important. Maybe others get that but I sure dont.

Upon reaching c70, MC has only barely started on the path to OP. <<less
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aetonazniel
Very slow paced. Repetitive grinding.

The MC is very flat and no character development.

MC illogically hides his abilities from his own s*aves even when revealing it may produce better results for growth and battle capacity improvement.
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Shadow Hack
November 2, 2019
Status: v231
I really tried to be patient with this novel but it has a lot of truly bad writing. The author makes you believe the MC has obtain truly rare and powerful power but then the author suddenly pulls random new characters out of his ass that is supposedly with the same if not similar power. The MC obtains power to create his own dimension/universe which apparently a lot of people can also do?

No consistency and just like MOST if not ALL chinese novels, suffers from using OVERBLOWN and EXAGGERATED naming... more>> sense.

Ex. Why call a normal steel city heavenly city or techniques like sun god flame or whatever when its not exactly the most powerful. They use big terms like heavenly, god, celestial, mythical among others as if they were a normal thing. I even see the term king quite a lot but I dont think it should have been used that way at all.

This had so much promise at the start but went downhill real quick. Its just sad <<less
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aetonazniel
Started since I was curious but got put off. The MC has bad attitude towards his wives. I understand having a grudge towards the god who put him in the situation or the turning the tables against those who summon him but are hostile but being on a one sided s*avery type relationship with wives is lame. He even puts them in a pokeball till he remembers or feels like taking them out. Such a lame concept.

Also crappy translations is crappy. I felt like I lost a lot of brain... more>> cells trying to understand that supposed "english" <<less
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Someday Will I Be The Greatest Alchemist?
August 2, 2019
Status: c47
Self proclaimed production class MC lol. Interesting to pick a production class on an isekai summoning. I like the flow and the supporting characters. I wish it had more other peoples POV chapters occasionally though. Bookmarked this one for sure.
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Child of Light
July 21, 2019
Status: v12c13
would have rated higher since the story setting was interesting however I had a lot of issues with the novel

  1. Chinese culture is way too embeded in the story that too much jargon an ideologies are used that can only be understood by those familiar with chinese culture and beliefs. Example.. "Cultivation" is generally a word used for farming and plants and such but china uses it im guessing as some sort of spiritual training idk. Another example are the jargons like meridians and other words that dont normally have english equivalents.
  2. The authors probably only thought of releasing this in chinese audiences and did not think of international audience im guessing. Hence the jargons
  3. Do chinese people obsess over physical good looks too much? The main character was written to be "good and kind hearted" but seems to have a very superficial concept of love and relationships and seem to believe that it is based on physical appearance. In the story he turned ugly and just because of that he chooses to abandon loved ones since he believes he is no longer a match for them due to face? Im like WTF! That very idea contradicts the way his personality is supposed to be which leads me to believe this is a chinese culture thing.
  4. Some world building is ommitted which leads to the lack of detail but the way it was written, again feels like this is a chinese thing where people would understand how it works and such if they are chinese.
I really feel this story like most chinese stories were written exclusively for chinese audience or those familiar with their culture. It depends too much on the assumption people already know how chinese mythology martial arts work.

On the positive note, it still has some monsters, magic and adventure so its an ok story I guess
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Had potential but became unrelatable imediately.

Reason: MC learns kingdoms normally kill potential heroes due to being hard to control and only pretend to support them. Sends assasins to kill him. Nearly kills his girl but MC only stops at killing assasins and does not show any anger towards the kingdom. Normally when a loved one is almost killed, one would express rage and would want justice or vengance but MC doesnt.

For once I would have loved if an MC would put royals and nobles in their place by enforcing retrebution... more>> for their crimes instead of hiding like a wuss

Regarding translator... Bad grammar, aweful website... Full of damn ads that try to make my phone install sh*t apps. Beyond frustrating <<less
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The setting seemed interesting to me considering its a skill for lazy people but have potential. Unfortunately writing wasnt satisfactory. No main plot would have been okay but the story at least needed something to focus on each arc. Translation seems bad. Most times it made me re-read stuff to understand. The summon of the MC was extremely pointless and unnecessary that it could have been at least a cool creature.. Instead it had to be a damn pig.
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Isekai Tensei no Boukensha
February 23, 2019
Status: v1c7
Typical Isekai.. So far so good, pretty decent OP start which is fine with me as I like OP characters. But the translator stopped at chapter 7 and never updated since. Such a shame since I was willing to read the whole novel if it was continued.

In terms of writting, I normally dont like too much info dump since its not that hard to imagine a world of swords and magic (also there being dozens of stories with that setting already so no need to describe everything) so its pretty... more>> ok, but in some chapters, he time skips quite often and missed on small events like parents being surprised with his talent moments. Felt like author wanted to skip childhood as soon as possible.

If anyone picked this up I would still read it. I agree with gonzhilaz that its a little like man picked up by the gods but this one doesnt have a speedy translator like jigglypuffsdiary <<less
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Hon Issatsu de Kototariru Isekai Rurō Monogatari
August 24, 2018
Status: v2c4
The first volume started off fine since the MC wasn't afraid to kill if his life was on the line, but by volume 2, he just goes along with killing in the tournament regardless if the enemies already surrendered. The author wrote a tournament that kills each other and no room for surrender which made the MC into an indiscriminate murderer each chapter and it left a bad taste in my opinion.

"So dark... you sure you're not from the DC universe?" - Wade
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Isekai Canceller
July 31, 2018
Status: c45
It was off to a decent start. But what annoyed me was the fact that MC lets others dictate the outcome too damn much. Even when he was being forced into bad situations by greed and arrogance of others, he does not properly take the best possible action to resolve the problems even when he could have. Also since the chapters were last updated 2017 and it is already 2018, leads me to believe this has been dropped or something.
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Blade Online
April 4, 2020
Status: c50
Too much negative emotions for me. That only works when there are redeeming points like when a betrayed MC becomes op and eventually learns and improves. By chapter 40's MC still gets betrayed, s*upid enough not to make logical decisions.. If the whole story is about repeatedly getting hurt and betrayed and nothing else.. Then its pointless tr*sh.

Normally people learn from mistakes or tradegy but MC apparently doesnt. Makes friends but s*upid enough to trust clearly hostile characters and put his new friends at risk, then does not kill his... more>> enemies leaving more loose ends despite watching his friend murdered by them. Thats one hell of a dumbass <<less
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One Man Army
March 29, 2020
Status: c100
The story itself has an interesting setting, I loved the other players reactions to the MC uploaded vids and streams but the main weakness of the author is the game balance. Made the MC seem already equiped with op items early on but still keeps getting even more op supposedly but its hard to put into perspective in relation with other players. The game has no sense of balance or proportion.

In terms of the translations... Asian hobbyist sucks. The previous translators did the job right but asian hobbyist makes it... more>> confusing and frankly borderline understandable. Feels like a machine translation but improved only a little bit. <<less
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Everyone Else is a Returnee
November 10, 2019
Status: Completed
Would have given 5 stars but the world building was a little confusing for me. Maybe its just me but the different worlds idea in the multiverse could have been properly given better ending.

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Spoiler

If instead of merging and compressing worlds into one planet, he made multiple planets in a singe or more solar systems (since there arent any aliens in that universe) it could have been more logical.

Its hard to imagine thousands upon thousands of planets merging into one. I mean where do you put all that land and sea, not to mention population. If one fused that many worlds, its impossible to compress and will result in a planet billions of times larger than a super nova. Its more logical to just destroy the dimensional barriers separating them and join in one universe butdifferent planets instead.

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That being said, I like op MC stories or weak to strong character developments. Though I would have prefered more reaction to mc's OPness pov chapters, it was enjoyable for me. I also would have loved if it included dimensional slow adventures though. Or chapters where MC travels to diff worlds to explore and not be in some serious sh*t all the time <<less
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Magic Bullet in Magic Land
August 16, 2019
Status: c14
had an interesting setting but quite a few problems.

  1. Author feels like bragging his knowledge of modern military weapons. Instead of making the main character consistent, MC is using a different military weapon each time. It would make sense if it was used well according to situation but no. MC kept using a different weapon each time. If it were me there, I would have utilized the range of a sniper and killed aerial enemies first and commanders before switching to a machine gun. MC became s*upid in my opinion because of this.
  2. Too many jargons. Author showing off military knowledge went way beyond what would have been acceptable. Too many weapons and unknown terms used made this barely readable. No use remembering what the weapon or understanding what it does since the author will switch weapons the next f*cking paragraph
  3. Not an adventure isekai. So much potential lost
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aetonazniel
The initial setup is quite interesting to have an OP production class MC with skills to make any potion but the downside I see in this novel is the female heroine? The companion of MC holding him back. I honestly dont see whats so wrong with selling elixers. Maybe in that world since its rare, selling one every now and then maybe ok but that girl prevents MC from selling even one which is really s*upid and holds him back from being rich and solving his financial problems
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