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Wu Dong Qian Kun
September 14, 2017
Status: c866
Classic novel with the usual stuff, MC start at the weakest region in the weakest kingdom/continent and make his way to the top, along the journey, lot of people calling the MC "trash, ant, retard... etc" while trying to kill him, because of the usual reasons (greed, or others random reasons), and it will almost always end with "if you dare to kill me, my clan/sect/kingdom/master, will never let you off".

Of course how can we not include the "crowd" with the "oh MC is looking to die, trying to this... more>> and that", few paragraph later (mainly filled with insult toward MC), the enemy (ies) is like "impossible... blah blah", and the crowd "oh he is so strong", "how can it be possible"......."this guys is not to be trifled with".

As for the romance, it's rather complicated and kind of interesting.

Spoiler

So far, only one women is confirmed, with 1 or 2 more, and nothing more.

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TLDR: Standard stuff from a cultivation novel, however the overall story is rather interesting, hence the 3-stars rating.

PS: if you haven't learn to skip paragraph/chapter, you may not like it. <<less
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The Desolate Era
September 8, 2017
Status: v31c19
Classic IET work, good writing, story development, character growth and world set-up.

At-least the way MC makes enemies aren't something like, MC meet X guys/girls from Y sect/clan, and for some random reasons an irreconcilable feud is created between them, because they think MC is from some backwater region and weak with no backer compared to them. Aka "an ant".
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For R-18 novels, it's well done for multiple reason:

    1. The character development (yes there is a character development), MC start as a boring under-confident man and slowly change.
    1. The s*x scene are progressive and well done, not your typical R-18 with cheats stuffs and dull action start in 1 or 2 chapters.
    1. The slow development is really hot and immersive. It feels like a real relationship.
The only downside I can find it's the fact that's a bit too slow for my flavor.
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Long Live Summons!
July 27, 2018
Status: c425
It started quite well, but it turned quite bad after few hundreds chapters. For the following reason (from my pov)

The first reason: The slow pace is a killer for me, not that I mind fillers, however the way fillers are done will drive you nuts. As they are written withing the plot advancement, too many empty paragraphs in chapters.

The second reason is: The MC has way too many enemies, scheming against him all the time, while the MC's allies are useless.

The third reason and the most important one: I... more>> feel like this novel is a nest for retarded people. The author doesn't care about the character development nor about the plot, he will just bend the event in a way that will require more chapters (plot hole), regardless if the decision are stupid or not, which affect the overall IQ and EQ of the characters. <<less
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Hedonist Sovereign
May 13, 2018
Status: c188
I have had enough at 188, the plot are just plain with no suspense in them, this is the kind of novel that believe the readers are stupid. Although, I don't mind fillers (author gotta make a living), I hate this kind of fillers which are included in the plot.

Lack of character development, generic cliché plot carried by retarded people against retarded people (MC and his people).

Overall this novel doesn't provide anything. No joy, suspense, nor satisfaction.
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MMORPG: Rebirth of the Legendary Guardian
March 20, 2018
Status: c750
This novel is average, nothing too complicated as well as a shallow plot, the MC just play the game and own.

Nothing new nor exceptional. Generic plot and cliché all over the place.

however lack of fillers make it readable. (Not fillers free, as they are in-form of grinding, but as an MMORPG player, I don't mind it.)

One good point: the side character have a clear personalities that doesn't fade, with distinguished feature.

At best a decent read if you have free time and nothing to enjoy.
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The Great Ruler
June 18, 2018
Status: c450
Pretty much follow the same pattern as BTTH and WDQK:

The MC is always fighting people with higher cultivation realm, repetitive with stupid antagonist and very little character development.

The main difference is the fact that the MC is loyal to love interest, even with the story somehow revolving around the LI, the development between them is kind of lackluster.

another thing to keep in mind, the author love describing women.
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World of Cultivation
May 20, 2018
Status: Completed
It start really good, funny, refreshing and new (MC aiming at becoming a farmer), it lasted for a while (up until around 300 chapters).

after 300+ chapters, thing started to go south, a lot of plot build up mentioned before started being ignored and new ones started to pop out.

At the end of the day, this novel leave you with an incomplete taste, (average ending), as everything was meant to be this way.
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Heavenly Jewel Change
January 25, 2018
Status: c240
This novel has quite the potential.

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Despite the fact that are so many cliché, this novel is quite an interesting read, the MC is shameless and it's in a good way.

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Spoiler

Heavy on the harem, so if you aren't an harem lover you won't like, if your are an harem lover go for it, it's worth it

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Great Demon King
September 17, 2017
Status: c360
A light read with MC practicing an OP martial art, on top of being a strong necromancer.

Overall novel revolve around the MC making his way in the world, no massive drama or setback (as of now).

Sometimes you may find it funny, other time it's not that funny.

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Except a lot of wives

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An easy read if you are tired from the heavy drama/tragic stuff. As the journey so far is smooth.

PS: a lot of NSFW.
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God Of Slaughter
September 5, 2017
Status: c310
The novel can be described in one sentence.

"Brainless MC fighting against brainless enemies."

MC always driven by lust/greed, meet a women/pick a treasure, enemies show up to steal women/treasure, MC kill 'em.

Rinse and repeat.
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Against the Gods
August 30, 2017
Status: c720
Steroid doped MC where he say something and do the exact opposite, always get mysteriously saved/survive when he stir up trouble vs an enemy which he can't deal with as well as a h*ny one who jump at every women he meet (literally).

Well there is no need to point out that half (if not more) of the trouble are because of women, overall a very classic novel, nothing new.

The only thing that make it worth a ride is the plot the author build, hopefully it won't turn bad.
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In Different World with Naruto System
April 14, 2019
Status: --
Ah, The author did a good job for 250-300 ish chapters, even tough some chapters lacked in consistence (hell I remember a full chapter where the MC did nothing but order food, YES A FULL CHAPTER TO ORDER FOOD).

However the last sprint:

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Horrible, rushed and the ending is even worst.

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Considering this is a fan-fiction, it was pretty good but the author screwed up in the later chapters, but if you are a fan of Naruto it's enough to kill sometime if you have nothing better read/do.

Overall, the author had a good idea, and it's execution was good until the latter chapters, while he might have gotten bored and/or forced by life to move on. <<less
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Everyone Else is a Returnee
February 12, 2019
Status: Completed
Generally I rarely give a full mark to a novel, since it will always have something missing or poorly done, and this novels isn't the exception.

The reason why I gave full mark, is because the author wrote a masterpiece.

However this masterpiece can't be enjoyed if you are unable to take a step back and simply enjoy, because this novel is written in a "second degree" tone.

What I mean by second degree is don't take it seriously, just enjoy the chapters and arcs, because the author did a hell... more>> of a good job in telling this story.

What to expect: OP as f**k MC. Cliché made fun of.

What to not expect: MC struggling. Set back. <<less
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Demon’s Diary
June 19, 2018
Status: Completed
Fairly good novel, the writing style is similar to RMJI (same author), so if you liked RMJI you will like this one.

The story development is well planned, with minimal plot hole, the transition from arc to arc is natural.

MC is neither OP nor UP.

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Spoiler

MC's ass is on fire, he is always on the run for cultivation resource and with a good reason, since if he doesn't upgrade his cultivation level he will die due to his cheat.

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One of the main point that makes this novel likeable, is the lack of crowd, rarely the MC fight in-front of a crowd, and even if he does, they aren't here to tell how awesome the MC is.

as for the bad point:

Some arc tend to get to your nerve (for me), while other are kind of shallow and somehow rushed.

Romance:

Spoiler

while the MC has 2 wife (and another one playing the tsunder game), there are very little interaction between them, even the time spend with them is very little, (around like a year before he ascend, never to meet them again) it doesn't even come close to bad romance.

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Ancient Strengthening Technique
May 15, 2018
Status: c1200
It's just as the description say, omitting the plot hole, (and a lot).

if you are a harem lover, you may give this novel a try, tough you may deterred by the fact that after a woman join the harem, she become like a zombie mindlessly following her man (meaning: all women in the harem become the same person, just with different name).
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Renegade Immortal
May 14, 2018
Status: c650
One of best character growth I have seen in a novel, the transition from a naive/foolish young boy into an adult man is well done.

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The MC transition from a naive boy into a mass murderer sociopath.

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The world building, story development and plot transition are nearly perfect.

The only downside are:

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The world is just too dark for me, and MC is just a psychopath. (ATG's MC can be considered a saint compared to Wang Lin)

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I haven't finished the novel, but the romance is......... might as well consider the novel doesn't contain romance

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Strongest Abandoned Son
May 9, 2018
Status: c850
Overall, it started as a modern day novel, however after the first few arc, it turned into a cultivation one with a lot of plot hole. Coupled with "hero save the day " and others cliché that make it unbearable.

Every arc follow the same pattern, MC is weak, get trashed, power up, save the day, revenge. Rinse and repeat.

A women has been a beauty all her life, as soon as she get in contact with the MC, a lot of "young master" will start picking on her. (If... more>> you know what I mean.) <<less
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A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality
April 25, 2018
Status: c610
A slow paced novel, the MC always think before he act and is actually low-key (not your others MCs where they say I need to stay low-key, but just does the exact opposite few paragraph later).

The MC start as a poor boy, in martial art sect (martial art and cultivation are different, an MA is still considered mortal, a cultivator is considered an immortal), and for some reasons he start his cultivating, from this point and onward all his move are calculated and his goal are doable, neither lucky nor... more>> unlucky in his hunt for the thing he needs to cultivate.

Pretty much all the conflict are related to benefits (fighting over treasure, pills and so on), and the most important part it's "FREE FOR ALL", (again it start as FFA and it's end in FFA, the people only gang the one who picked the treasure) and it's not always the MC who picks the best one.

Overall I find this novel quite relaxing. As everything in it is balanced. Tough the lack of romance may be a problem for some, but it really does suit the novel setting. <<less
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My Cold and Elegant CEO Wife
April 19, 2018
Status: c730
The overall story is heading in a nice direction, if not for this non-brain fillers.

If you overlook the 652498426246598265265 randoms rich guys picking on the beauty when with the MC, just for the sake the be beaten up. well it's decent. (words count)

Otherwise just don't bother.

Edit:

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Spoiler

As soon as he start his cultivation, the novel pretty much reset, new 4 great families pop out, new young-master, and even more retarded feud.

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So my new advise: if you are looking for something decent, pass your way.

If you are looking for a bunch of brainless arrogant "young master" with a 4 years old kid mentality getting beaten by the MC....... <<less
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