In the first chapter itself, I find it utterly ridiculous.
MC is/was the crown prince, just from one stupid accusation he got defamed and his title denounced. The chapter literally or briefly said he has been framed, no plots, no story, no details on how it was carried, just like that the king/emperor of a great dynasty/empire pressured by his court officials to dethrone/demote his crown prince. Oddly, the supposed to be king, the one above all, on top of the pyramid, the highest authority succumbed to their claim. Seriously, nothing about investigations mentioned or done, just like that the prince is fallen. And not to mention, the prince didn't fight back?? Seriously?? MC got no vassal (s) / backer (s) / supporter (s) / faction or what so ever a Crown Prince should have for protection?? How awful can it get in the further chapters since the opening of the story itself is undoubtedly nonsense.
Yes, to make it worse, the officials didn't just end by framing the so called genius MC and knock him out of his Crown position, they even literally cripples him by taking/destroying 4 out of 5 of his spiritual veins. And yes to that as well, the king didn't appear to bother about it as he is not mentioned in this part. Really? A genius prince and the king didn't give a damm or at least try to care? His genius son/prince crippled by his officials. That is his lineage we're talking about here. What syithead king does this empire has? Or perhaps the king himself wanted the crown prince to be out the picture?? Guess I have to read more (unfortunately) to find out as nothing of this particular is mentioned in the 1st chapter.
And another yes, to make it even more worst, obviously with just one spiritual vein, no chance or very hard to cultivate and advance his stage, he is ordered by the king to join the army defending the border, as to keep him would be wasting resources. By how big of the matter/situation managed by the officials, the darn king should have known what took place and things happening to MC. Should I say the king is one big dumb ass syithead or maybe he just doesn't favor MC from the beginning. If so he does not favor MC, why the hell he's the crown prince in the first place?
The story background is great, just that some of the plots are tolerable to read to a certain degree imo. MC supposed to be a smart and great strategist but some scene (s) or scheme (s) turn MC into an idiotic being. I mean MC could easily avoid fallen into some simple trap yet she fell into one, how can that show (s) of a great strategist is? I just got annoyed by that.
Another thing is that, the author tweaks and twists too much of the obvious and straight forward scheme (s) and turn it into a horrendous one to read. Take one character for example, the "main" female villain (?) , she's clearly a one dimensional person, pretty much a no brainer, but still been kept around to torment FL, hilariously she kept on scheming to get rid of FL but fails everytime and the vengeful FL didn't really retaliate or get rid of her. This is another fact that I find it odd and disappointing, the so call smart strategist FL did not (fail) dispose of the irritating bug.
Now after so much of "fast phase" planning been set and put up, the progress of getting things done is rather slow in action to fruit results actually. It seems like the author keep putting/bringing in unnecessary new ideas/plots/twists to drag/prolong the story line. It even make certain part of the story somehow became idiotic and deranged. Minus these add ons, the story should be better imo.
Though is supposedly be in the modern era, but cultivators keep popping out like nobody's business and MC kills just because he feels like doing so, by the way he himself who pokes his nose everywhere and invites unwanted attentions and troubles in the first place.
Anyways, he supposed to be a healer but so far he kills way more than providing medical help. So in one way he is "invincible" but the healer part, it's a bit ridiculous. His medical practice is so worthless as he does not appreciate life, easily provoked (comically) and have a twisted mind. I really don't understand in what way does this represent a healer etiquette!!
The author tries to bring a story of a deep bond between lovers, friend (s) and family member (s) from previous or another life to the recent time of the story. Eventhough ML and FL lost the previous life's memories, but for the strong intimate feelings they managed to tangle upon one another and hook up again. I get the picture of what the author is trying to potray, and it has a deep, emotional touch and feelings to it, but the poorly arrangement plots, bad expressions, needless arguments and worse of all, a simply 'I write whatever I want, even if it's a worthless idea' wasted the potentials.
It was pretty ok, not so bad to read up to a certain chapter (it did have rushed scenes or sudden end of an arc), beyond that, one would want to pull the hair from the scalp from anger/frustration/annoyed/irritated/mind blowing reading the bad drama and stuffs. I mean, not just the couple who died transmigrated/reincarnated came to the same world and at almost the exact same time, even the nemesis came as well (maybe there was an explanation on how on earth they manage to get to the same realm and time, I don't really remember thou) just because she wants to own, heads over heels, crazy for the ML (it's not time traveling genre), not just she tried once failed but a second, third, fourth and so on to no avail, she even been killed several times, needless she is brought back to life, and the same thing repeats, getting rid of FL and get the ML scheme. The actions are dull nothing much to expect, the fights/killings done simply on a whim "nothing personal, I just don't like you... Kill"
Welp, there are other characters came along which should been killed but saved, one in particular brought back into the plot, for no strong reason she bare deep hatred, out to kill kind of jealousy towards FL/MC. Long story short, it was rather a not so bad story earlier but turned bad and worse further up.