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TheGuyWhoReadsStuff
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Lazy Dungeon Master
September 29, 2017
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This is really really really really boring. Like the MC is very boring, all he does is complain about how he want to sleep all the time. Why don't the MC kill himself? Note to the writer, We already know how lazy the MC is. You don't have to bring it up every f**kING chapter.

Bandit boss bought a loli s*x slave. Loli girl keep getting rape don't know how many days. What does the MC do? He does nothing until after the bandit boss was killed and the MC took... more>> her in. Her name was Meat... Meat yeah sounds like a good name for a little girl. "MC didn't change her name" Now every town he goes to the villager thinks he is a pedo. Ha ha ha. Im dieing of laughter. -.-

If the author is having trouble with a ending for this, I got one. Meat kill the MC the end. MC will say something like I wish I can sleep forever. Meat Okay your wish is Granted. MC dies and got his wish and Meat will become the new dungeon master. Good ending right?

I rate this as a 2 stars because of 2 reason #1 The lame humor #2 Uninteresting MC. <<less
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TheGuyWhoReadsStuff
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The Desolate Era
August 7, 2017
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This is my first review on anything.

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This was a good read until the the great war ended and the MC went up a level.

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How many levels are their in his world? Like he is literally learning new move just to say "I can't use this on this guy because he is to strong." I don't know how many the MC just learned a new move just to forget it when he rank up in power.

The MC shouldn't make friends because he will just forget them when he get powerful.
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He had a f*cking daughter for no reason. Like really, What type of father would just leave his daughter alone when his own daughter can become strong? This should of really ended after the great war ended. Imo

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I really enjoyed this book, but now im finding myself just skipping a chapter or two.

The author could of make a sequel to this. Like his daughter for a example. The MC failed to get his wife back and his daughter is now trying to get his father and mother true souls back. Or the MC daughter really hate the MC for not being their with her and she ran away to start her own adventure. Or the road of revenges on the MC. Do you guys remember the kid? The MC killed his father and the shameless gate supposedly train him off his anger and hatred for the MC? Well that would be a great sequel to this story. <<less
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