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Godly Model Creator
October 23, 2016
Status: c5.2
Fantastic so far! The charter development is really outstanding! The only thing is a very important part of the plot
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The character's origin power changes/evolves? It's not totally clear but is conveyed well enough

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Also the love interest has depth, it doesn't seem like she'll just stand to the side and quietly support her man. Which I feel is an annoying cliché that I see often from Chinese writers and that's disappointing because it makes for a really uninteresting character. But awesome start to this novel 5 stars and I can't wait for more! <<less
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Nine Star Hegemon Body Art
October 31, 2018
Status: c118
At first I was a little hesitant to read this novel after looking at the ratings, but I read the review from "dniv" and decided to give it a try. It was worth it. This novel is excellent. I just read through all 118 translated chapters in a few hours. I couldn't put it down. I would strongly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys cultivation web novels. I'm writing this review in hopes that it can encourage others to give this novel a chance and discover a great read.
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Martial God Asura
October 22, 2016
Status: c1061
The environment building in this novel is fantastic. There is a multitude of different very interesting settings. The plot line is really interesting and has a lot of potential I feel. But unfortunately the execution of the story is very poor, the details are uninteresting or sometimes downright offensive, i.e. Rape is quite prevalent in the novel, including the MC raping multiple female characters. Also unfortunately story arcs get very generic. The majority of characters in this novel are incredibly ruthless and or arrogant, which also is how the MC... more>> behaves most of the time. But since the protagonist and main setting has transitioned out of the original world to
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The Holy Land of Martialism

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The story has gotten a bit better but I do see a very probable future of of the same card-board cut out of a plot line execution. I find it interesting enough to keep up with weekly updates, there are times when plot sequences are interesting i.e.
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The short arc with little Fishy

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The tomb of Chu Feng's family on the road to the Holy Land of Martialism

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These times might not make it worth it for everyone to continue to read it but it is enough for me to keep reading it plus the environments. I have no idea how many start to give MGA. So I haven't given it a rating yet. I feel like you've got to read a couple hundred chapters to discover if you like MGA. I might update my review as more chapters come out. <<less
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Cohen of the Rebellion
January 24, 2018
Status: v2c9
I really like the story so far but sometimes sentences are worded so weirdly they make little to no sense or entire sentences or paragraphs are just repeated. The translator needs an editor with an understanding of english. I hope that some of the later chapters will be edited.
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