Report Review
28 Reviews

Sinai rated it
Monster Paradise
November 18, 2017
Status: c54
Very shoddily translated.

MC gets transported to another world, but it's one of those transfer MCs where you question why they even bothered since none of his thoughts are ideas are from Earth except when he thinks to himself "this system is like the card game I used to play." Wait, I almost forgot, he also thought to himself, "Oh, this is just like the webnovels I read on Qidian". MC gets a gacha card "system" with pretty absurdly strong powers, which is fine. MC proceeds to use it very poorly,... more>> which is less fine.

World in general is what I call "low-intelligence worlds", where a moron from Earth is a genius in this world. MC hailed as a genius for having mediocre ideas. Note that this is despite the world being seemingly at least equal to Earth in technology along with a large variety of "system" magic and magic tools.

And it gets worse. Characters are needlessly wasteful of resources and lives. Characters are randomly cruel or self-centered in ways that normally don't survive 8th grade, and this includes the MC. Character personalities are completely inconsistent, and so far his life and powerups are a series of random encounters that has essentially no input by the character or supporting characters having any persistent, reasonable motivation. The world and its people seemingly only exist for the MC to do his thing, but the MC doesn't have a thing to do. He sort of had an immediate motivation in that his life bar was set at ~60 days at the start,


but that got solved partially without him trying because it turns out his system gives him like a year of life just for killing one bottom-tier monster and then it gets solved completely without him trying because of a random encounter was like "hey thanks for doing this thing that you did with no effort, btw, I am actually a god and I fixed your supposedly unsolvable problem without you asking me to"


But worst of all is the nonsensical things that happen. I would call it a plot, but that's an insult to actual plots



MC's temporary boss/high ranker/harem candidate tells him not to let anyone leave town because it might be too dangerous. Random low-tier noob says she wants to leave anyway. MC pulls out a gun and points it at her head and tells her he'll kill her if she leaves. Like seriously, out of nowhere. He could have just said, "hey, the gold-ranker says you can't leave because there are monsters roaming outside" but naw, straight to gun-in-face. Keep in mind this isn't some grimdark fantasy, this is a hyper-modern world where there's supposed to be rule of law. Our MC is a psychopath, but it gets worse.

Random bozo tries to stick up for the girl and say the MC is being unreasonable, which is what every halfway sane person in the room is probably also thinking. Not our MC! Our MC displays his genius thinking to himself "Huuuuh, why is this guy I can easily kill trying to stop me. Gosh, I know I'm not wrong so...I know! This random bozo must be doing this because she's pretty" and spends like a minute patting himself on the back that he isn't swayed by pretty faces like everyone else. Author makes it clear he's also proud his MC isn't, the chapter title is 100% for real titled "What's Being Kind to Women?".

We never get to find out what MC is going to do to them because, suddenly, for no reason at all, random mid-boss antagonist who has been harassing MC (and other people) jumps in to start a fight against MC, not because of the girl but because he wants to pick on MC. They look like they're going to get in a fight. Mid-boss is definitely stronger than him, he literally beat MC like yesterday and let him go because "you're so weak you're not worth killing." Which is a classic mid-boss line, except only about two chapters before the author established the only reason he's here is because he's uh, here to kill people he thinks are weak. Riiiiight.

MC doesn't back down, because I don't know, being a dumbass threatening some random girl with shooting her in the face so she doesn't endanger herself is more important than his own life, which is all so stupid I can barely breathe. Fortunately, they're suddenly interrupted by random bullsh*t and everybody forgets what they were doing. In the ensuing few days MC exerts his dominance by beating up shit-tier background characters with no names and doesn't let anyone leave.

Somehow, this makes people trusting and admiring of him, which is important because he's about to lead a squad into battle because his boss/harem candidate thought all that previous bullsh*t was genius work by him. A couple of chapters later he declares he's going to stay and defend the town from monsters despite being having a power rating of effectively zero when there are literally a thousand other super-powered high level humans running around. Tens of thousands of years of combat experience between all of them, and somehow MC is piping up with his shit-tier ideas and people are calling it genius. It also feels super weird because our MC has been relatively focused on himself and his sister so far, and this is the first hint that he gives a sh*t about anybody else, yet he's suddenly burning with self-sacrificial desire.

Not long after, it turns out this was a tremendously stupid idea (which more experienced people than him told him at least three times, but he ignored because he's dumb) and he's going to die, 100%, no take-backsies. Just then he gets a system notification: Would you like to get your get-out-of-jail-free card I didn't tell you about and you didn't know you had? He's like: "sure". And then the magic wish automatically determines how to get him out of the situation with no input from him, and kills millions of monsters with a nuke that only hits bad guys and instakills everyone but the boss, and saves the day. No, I'm not joking or exaggerating in the least.

But wait, it didn't kill the boss. Boss appears and says, haha, you humans are so dumb, Superman-Goku Macguffin the 3rd isn't coming to save you, Superman is a dumbo and is fighting my sekret clone. By the way, I'm going to kill all of you, especially you MC. Suddenly, harem candidate goes, "Wait boss monster, can you please give me 3 minutes to confess my love for MC? Pleaaase? Pretty pleeaaase?" Boss monster goes: "Okay, sounds fine with me, but don't doublecross me or I'm gonna like, kill you. Uh, I guess I'm gonna kill you anyway but I'll like really super duper kill you or something", and he goes to sit in the corner and jacks off for awhile.

Harem-candidates grabs MC, and then is like, "omgersh boss monster, you so dumb!" and then she pushes through MC through a portal while boss monster is distracted. Staring at the portal he goes, "How dare you lie to me!" "Curse you humans and your predictable yet inevitable betrayal!" "It's a good thing you were too dumb to take your own portal, now I'm going to kill you even harder!"

But then she goes "Wait, let me give a dying speech. Okay, still giving a dying speech. man, why am I not dead yet? Guess I'll speech some more. Also, it's sort of weird that I pushed MC through the portal and stayed behind but he's still here but oh well, if the author's not paying attention why should I? MC even though I met you like last week and we've literally never had a conversation, you are the most amazing man ever and I love you."

Boss monster: "That's great, I'm gonna kill you now."

POW! Suddenly the goddess our delightful MC met last week in yet another random encounter roll after feeding a squirrel who turned out to be a immortal god-beast who was the pet of the goddess back in the day so he was like, how about I show you her corpse and then just because MC is MC the goddess came back to life from him getting a plot boner or something and was like "Oh hey MC, we're soulmates and I love you. Please ignore my irrelevant background story which makes it seem like I should vengefully kill all humans." Anyway. Goddess shows up and her pet squirrel smacks boss monster to death with a single slap. Actual Deus ex Machina. It's not every day you get a god to solve your unsolvable problems. Unless you're the MC. Anyhow, Goddess says, "BTW MC, since we killed a immortal super boss monster, why don't you take its soul. You can raise it as a soul pet and get super powers you didn't work for, again, just like the time you became a grandmaster in a sword technique that takes a lifetime of effort to learn by watching me make tea."

MC: "Huuuh? Oh, okay. Oh yeah, goddess, can you help save this harem candidate who I met last week?" "long as you're here doing miracles, y'know?"

Goddess: "No, that is impossible... unless I had a boss monster soul or something like that, but those are pretty rare and it's not like we just have those lying around." "Oh whoa, it turns out there's a boss monster soul I just gave you. But are you sure you want to give it up? You worked so hard for it. Oh wait, no you didn't I just showed up and gave it to you."

MC: "uh, sure, yeah, whatever G-dog"

Goddess: "haha, just playing, I don't need the monster soul after all. It'd be too much of a pain in the ass to write another monster in...I mean, I don't need one because I got others. Despite me being dead for the last thousand years or whatever" "Bippity-boppity-boo! This girl is alive! But hey we're still gonna get it on at some unspecified later date when you're a god through remarkable happenstance, right?" "also, the girl is super mega powerful now cuz I put a god-beast in her. The soul I gave her was like a super rare Phoenix soul I just had lying around."

MC: "Yay!"


And that's when I stopped reading. <<less
211 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
One of the most surprisingly deep light novels out there, the world is carefully constructed in such a way that the pecularities of the world are crucial to the plot. The entire world is a parody of RPG tropes, but at the time taken seriously by the author. In short, it's reconstructionist or even hard fantasy.

For example, the MC has the Guide class, which translates to the RPG tropes of a Jeigan character, a strong, but temporary party member you get in the beginning who shouldn't be invested in because... more>> they have low long-term potential. So he gets booted out of the party before the story begins by the party's Sage, who essentially corresponds to an in-world min-maxer. In a great send up, the MC is stripped of all his heroic gear except a worthless copper sword and sent out of the party, just as we are generally advised to do for temporary characters who might otherwise disappear with epic gear that could better go to the new replacement party members.

What makes this novel great is that the above is all taken very seriously. The author never makes it obvious that is it a parody, the reasoning is explained in-universe convincingly that the hero's party is defeating the Demon King and obviously it's a better use to save the world than for the MC to keep the gear he personally helped quest for.

Thus begins his Slow Life, the genre of "I am in a typical fantasy (RPG) world, but rather than pursuing the hero's quest, I am going to have a slice-of-life story of me not doing anything particularly of note." Where this novel sets itself apart from its peers is how well it plays by the rules of the RPG world yet has a realistic response from the characters of people stuck in a fantasy RPG world. The novel heavily plays on the existential horror of being consigned to a Class and more lightly upon the equal casual horrors of a world where you grow more powerful by killing things and gaining experience. Also, despite it's Slow Life at the Frontier setting, the novel doesn't ignore the Hero's Quest at all, carefully parsing out dribbles of what's going on, and teasing the audience with the idea that the MC will get embroiled in the Hero's Quest again as even his sleepy town is affected by the rumblings of the conflict between the "light races" and the demons. Not that we expect it to happen because that would imply a genre shift, but it's surprisingly effective teasing nonetheless.


What drives the plot is the conceit that classes impel a person to fulfill being the ideal representation of their class, and the stronger the class, the stronger the compulsion becomes. This idea is examined in-depth and is the motif running through virtually every story arc.


All of it is also set against the greater backdrop of a possible "Rebel against the Gods" RPG storyline too, and it wouldn't surprise me at all if it incorporated "The Demon Race isn't really evil, but Evil in that they are fighting against Good, which isn't really good" which could easily end up with the MC allying with the Demon King in the end in the fight against God, all which of, again, are standard deconstructionist RPG tropes.

Also features one of the sappiest romance subplots I've come across in recent years, if that's your jam. Eye-rollingly non-sexual, but endearing in its own right, and at least their slowness is, again, explained plausibly in-universe.

Also, probably plot-centric because the Hero happens to be a yandere bro-con, and the MC is the onii-san in question. And for the record, the reason she's a yandere is also explained in-universe making her a pitiable Hero.

68 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Lv1 Skeleton
October 21, 2017
Status: c9
Can't really recommend this. The "system" of the world is so bad it rapidly ceases to make sense.

Briefly, in this world, you get exponential experience for killing more than one creature at a time. By chapter 6 or so he's killing thousands of creatures, and there's no way to make this non-ludicrous. The ramifications are absurd - killing 20 people at the same time would be equivalaent to killling a million people one at a time.

There is no way to make this system work, at all, and it's only one... more>> part of the sloppy worldbuilding that's running rampant in this story.

Example: he class changes into an enchanter... spends some absolutely insignificant amount of time enchanting some trash he finds, then a chapter later he class changes into a lich, and him being an enchanter becomes completely irrelevant.

The writing is poor, the large cast of characters are utterly unmemorable, and we're subjected to humor like this:

"‘Legol, Arin, Hattan, you guys get minus two points. Mir, Tagan, Jenna, just the minus one. You three spiders hesitated too long so that was minus one point, also none of you cooperated as a team so minus one point for everyone.’

‘... ’

It was silent as none dared to talk back.

‘Hm, actually Arin performed quite well so you’ll be spared the penalty this time.’

‘Huh why? If it wasn’t for that spider girl, things wouldn’t have been so difficult!’

Jenna’s telepathic message was burning with hostility.

Jenna, minus one point for promoting internal discord, anything else to add?’"

Or maybe it's character development, I'm not even sure. Whatever it is, it's impossible to care about what is happening to these characters. <<less
48 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
I am the Monarch
April 25, 2018
Status: c176
This story worked okay for me on the small-scale, but the larger in scale it gets, the more incomprehensibly dumb it gets.

Everything always works out perfectly for the MC, even large-scale combat. You know the maxim, "No plan survives contact with the enemy"? Not if you're this MC, whose enemies might as well be following scripted AI you've fought a thousand times before the way they literally never do anything the MC didn't predict 5 months ago. MC is carrying out ridiculously elaborate tactics that would never work in a... more>> million years, and his enemy is all, "well, we're going to ambush the MC in a narrow valley, but we won't bother to take the high ground because, gosh, what would be the point and gosh it'll be so surprising when this becomes one of many factors that makes us lose this nonsensical battle later". I don't know what the hell is wrong with this world, because that's been basic military strategy for valley ambushes for longer than history has existed. Not that anything else in battles ever makes sense. Nobody has ever heard of keeping a reserve. It's completely unclear what the cavalry or archers are doing once the battle is joined. Armies fight basically to the last man instead of the 5-10% casualty rate in real life. Generalship is essentially nonexistent, nor is there any apparent form of communication between parts of the army. Armies are ridiculously large for how unstructured they are. His casualty rate is disgustingly, enormously large in any case yet his soldiers are completely 100% loyal, when any sane man would have deserted after their first fight.

His medieval intelligence network works a hundred times better than the multi-billion intelligence network the CIA has today backed up by dozens of satellites, thousands of agents, and computerized databases and modeling. Somehow, his spymaster/logistics/jesus druid can keep track of the entire kingdom down to the last conversation. Who literally showed up on his doorstep and asked to work for him.

Fear of the unknown? No problem, not only does he remember every event in intricate, incredible detail despite being barely literate, he obtains a guy with psychic powers who can instantly tell if anything bad or good is going to happen well before it ever does, by random stumbling upon him as a guard in the enemy nation, who joins him because his psychic powers tell him he'll jizz harder than he's ever jizzed before if he brownnoses the MC for the rest of his life.

Fear of betrayal? No problem. The kingdom's princess falls in love with him because he's a dashing young illiterate bum, and she also has psychic powers, able to instantly tell whether anybody is good or evil. Not that it matters, because, miraculously, every single one of the MC's henchmen and stoogies is a good guy. Except one, maybe. Also, she's probably the secret greatest merchant that ever lived. Of course.

Greatest spearman that ever lived? Actually totally part of his first unit he met in bootcamp. All his super top-notch commanders? Random militia bumf*cks also in his first unit, who miraculously have the capability to be top generals if they only had the chance.

He has literally never met a single competent person who opposed him and wasn't capital E-Evil. It's like, look, sometimes, in stories that aren't shit, you meet guys who are every bit as good as you or better who neither want to blow you or rip off your limbs and feed you to the pigs. A lot of times, smart, clever, skilled, important people have better things to do than to wrap their lips around the c*ck of a random bumblef*ck upjumped militia grunt, even if he has miraculously become a low-tier noble.

While we're at it, MC is an enormous hypocrite. Several times he's judging people as miserable pieces of trash because he knows in the future they'll betray the kingdom. Except that's literally his plan. He wants to be king. And that's not going to happen quietly following the current royalty. There is never any sense he detects the obvious problem with him judging people on their loyalty here.

Then there's the inanity of the economics at work here. He tells his soldiers to give their hard-earned money to the poor, and they do it. In any sensible universe, this would have been basically completely wasted, as a petty lordling is hardly going to make a dent in the needy of the capital city, but somehow it all works out, and everybody thinks he's the greatest guy ever. Did I mention none of his soldiers ever get angry or r*pe or pillage or kill, because, he's such a good guy, so are his soldiers? Except when he's actually executing all the enemy soldiers to the last man, EVEN WHEN THEY'RE THE SOLDIERS OF HIS OWN LAND. Yeah, that'll endear him to the populace. Like, he's doing this to his own future knights, and that of the neighboring fief, and the author is treating it like genius strategy. Hilariously, this is just after he gets super mad and judgy about the bad guy treating villagers badly. Somehow this is okay, because this is the battlefield. No, I'm pretty sure the king and the nobles will be at least a little pissed at you for executing the enemy to the last man when the "enemy" are their own bannermen and they're kind of pissed at your side for starting the war in the first place. I've given up on this. It's clear the author has absolutely no idea how to write the MC running any sort of enterprise, and the larger in scope it gets, the worse it gets. Since his plan is to run a whole kingdom and actually the world, it's going to get incredibly stupid and I don't want to watch this trainwreck any longer.

I mean, other than all that, it's okay. <<less
28 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Night Ranger
January 15, 2018
Status: c91
Night Ranger is a reasonably competent tranmigration into a game world that is actually real. The best part of the story is easily the vivid combat scenes, which relies on a MMORPG sensibility to drive the action. The fast pacing and excellent translation make at times, this novel can be enjoyable, but unfortunately, the world is inescapably shallow, which even at the best of times prevents the novel from ever being truly great, and at the worst of times, drives the novel into frustrating places.

The world is just like the... more>> game he played, except when it's not. The main character remembers everything about the game down to the fiddliest bit, except when it's convenient for him not to. The system seems in-depth, but ultimately is obviously contrived around the main character like his subclass which would make no sense as a main class. Skills that would be obviously stupid in a game are purported to have existed in the game, such as a near-instakill skill that makes the user weak for months. There are niggling details when the author tries to bring in plots into a video game world. The MC's father was murdered by a slow poisoning. Here's the problem: In this world, you can fairly trivially cast "Cure Poison" and "Divination". Over the months he was slowly getting sicker, why didn't his father visit a cleric? And after discovering he was being poisoned, it would have been trivial to find the culprit. I'm a hundred chapters in, and every single character introduced so far feels like a sock puppet for the MC to interact with. Nobody feels real, they're all just NPCs waiting around for the MC to show up. The villains, in particular, have all these contrived plans that involve trying to kill the MC, but they often seem pointless. For example, one mastermind spends an enormous amount of money plotting to kill the MC because he has a treasure map onto his land. I can't help but wonder why he simply didn't take a small adventuring party there and simply take it. We keep being told how smart the MC's actions are, but it's clear that without plot armor, he'd die pretty much every other day. He consistently, repeatedly putting himself in mortal danger time and time again, by choice. Yet there's never any sense of danger at all because the MC is a cocky perfect hero because he's played a lot of video games. He's never afraid of death even when he's inches from it, and even though we're told he feels pain, it doesn't seem that way. There is an incredible amount of telling instead of showing. Worse, people know things they shouldn't. The MC concludes that other people don't gain experience for getting kills, but he literally just assumes that without any testing whatsoever. Some mook knows instantly the incredibly rare class of the MC (literally only 18 other people in the world with the class), but then a far more powerful, older, guy with far more access to knowledge has no idea what he is like two chapters later. For some bizzarre reason, despite seers with future sight knowing a world-shaking calamity is coming, they forget to tell anyone.

The MC has a cross between xianxia and video game morals. One second he's thoughtlessly murdering mooks, the next he's sparing somebody who's betrayed him. Why? Because they're plot-centric. The MC keeps saying he doesn't kill pointlessly, but he does. All the time. Then the author tries to show him as ruthless, but it mostly just makes him evil and possibly insane. The MC looks at somebody and senses that they have strange eyes, so he kills them. Then he kills some peasant for giving him lip. Well, maybe they weren't a peasant, maybe he was a spy. Who knows? Not like the MC is going to bother to check when he mysteriously just knows. When it comes down to it, the MC sees people as bags of experience and loot. When his class trainer says "Okay, for the next step in your training, I need you to murder these five thieves that are pretty annoying because uh, they'll show off your night murdering skills" he doesn't stop and think "wait, is pick-pocketing really a capital crime?" Nope, he's got a quest to kill 5 people, so he kills 5 people. Amusing, since he later gets ragingly mad at someone else who is killing people to fulfill their advancement. I'm often frustrated by MCs that try to bring in modern world morality into brutish and violent worlds, but in this case, the MC shows less regard for human life than serial killers. His kill counts exceed that of most of the villains in the story, and include innocents, guards, and children. Bizzarrely, every day citizens expect him to be punished because in civilization there's clearly rule of law, but he routinely gets away with murder. You might say, "Might Makes Right", but he's really not that strong in the grand scheme of things compared to the ruling powers trying to keep order. Somehow, every possible authority figure that in all reasonableness would see him hang, coincidentally befriends him or has something they want from him and they don't even admonish him for his killing sprees. This is partially explained by the reliance on law enforcement on divination spells which are failing, but it simply isn't enough. The author wants us to believe he's decisive and bad-ass by going from zero to murder in less than a second, but this just makes him a short-tempered, idiotic murderer who only gets away with it because of plot armor. Let's talk about plot armor. MC shows up at what is essentially Hogwarts, where the story has tried very hard to establish that virtually any wizard with a brain could kill him at whim. Unsurprisingly, there are rules against murdering wizards in Hogwarts. So, some nub wizard, let's call him Draco, slanders him, so the MC murders Draco and his guards, in full view of, well, everybody. Keep in mind, Draco's probably like 10. Now, dead 10-year old wizard is part of an incredibly important family, lets call them the Malfoys, so understandably they're peeved, not to mention it's definitely a capital offense to casually murder the receptionist at Hogwarts.

But not to fear, the MC isn't a bad guy, after all, Draco started it. Yeah, that's pretty much his excuse. Let's recall that virtually any Hogwarts student can kill him, much less their parents. So well, fat lotta good "he started it" it is going to do him, you can't get away with murdering 10-year old Draco Malfoy at Hogwarts. Fortunately, the MC's great-grand father was a wizard, and he has a fancy wizard medal, which means the MC can't be summarily avada kevadra'd, but instead he has to be arbitrated. The Malfoys roll their eyes, and give him a sham trial, fully intending to lock him away in wizard prison and arrange for an "accident" to occur.

But wait! Dumbledore was there all along! MC had literally no plan to get out of this predicament when he killed the guy for giggles, but after he finished killing him, he was like "oh hey, there's Dumbledore in his little girl form". So Dumbledore saves his ass. Have I mentioned the MC is stupid? Well, whatever, that happened. But it's not like the Malfoys are going to take little Draco being murdered lying down. They're an incredibly powerful wizard clan, and they can squish MC like a bug. But suddenly they decide they have to do so honorably, by uh, openly killing him dring the Tri-Wizard tournament by sneaking in an insane hermaphroditic killer into it instead of, I dunno, Draco's father teleporting to his house and melting his face off before dinner. Well, anyway, it doesn't work, but it's not like they still can't squish him like a bug.

Fortunately, a volcano blows up and wakes up a dragon that has been sleeping for millenia and kills their entire family. All according to keikaku.

Well, it's still a fairly enjoyable read despite its faults. I'd recommend to give it a try and see if you can get past it's shallowness and simply enjoy it as a decent system game transmigration with awesome fight scenes. <<less
28 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
The World Online
December 18, 2018
Status: c147
This novel is offensively dumb gamer wish-fulfillment fantasy.

The MC is a start-over-from-the-beginning time traveler, with all the presumed advantages of knowing the future, so that's his advantage. That's fine as far as it goes. But the problem is that the author simply isn't smart enough to imagine what top people actually do and how competent they are and why, so his competition is basically dumb.

Author goes into incredible detail about how they're playing the game, which mostly consists of talking to NPCs and assigning them in some kind of ancient... more>> Chinese bureacracy, and we're supposed to believe that the entire rest of the world of real people are incompetents who are less competent than the MC in almost every sphere. For example, the MC starts a revolution by commenting to a friend of a friend that they should try buying something in the game with real money, which is somehow a novel idea even though it's a "real world" setting where people have literally been doing the same for a couple of hundred years or so by the setting of the game. For some reason, despite being repeatedly declared the top player in the world, nobody in the entire world has considered spying on him, even though his general location in the game is known, and any newbie player can start in his region. It's like the entire world has completely forgotten that espionage exists.

The 2nd highest ranked player in China, which should be essentially the 2nd best person in China because major organizations are aware that the game is the most important thing in the world, is a prideful young master who repeatedly makes terrible errors, has terrible interpersonal skills, and really cannot be taken seriously. For that matter, all top players seem to be between the ages of 15-30, which is fairly ludicrous given that this is a mangement sim and in the real world competent top-level managers typically start 30+, and again, all top organizations in the world are completely aware this is the most important thing in the world to be doing.

The author has virtually no conception of realistic economics, which is incredibly irritating given the subject matter. For example, at this point the game has a closed economy with no trading in real markets - gold is generated by the game when he personally sells things, and items are generated by the game when he personally buys them with no fluctuation in pricing. Yet he randomly decides to increase wages in his city by 10x, and believes this will cause his economy to boom. In reality, with a completely closed economy, all this would do is cause inflation of exactly 1000%., thus drastically decreasing his available gold to spend on items from the system while not benefiting his economy at all. MC has no concept of reserves in terms of money or military reserves - he spends down to zero, and since nothing unexpected ever happens to him, it's no big deal.

Despite being a management sim intended to reward people who can essentially run large organizations, MC does not have a single other real person in his administration a couple of hundred chapters in. Given that the NPCs are fairly unrealistic, it is immediately clear this game is absolutely terrible for its intended purpose of teaching people to manage organizations - where I've read up to he rules over 30, 000 people and there has not been a single significant episode of in-fighting, corruption, or even resentment from his NPCs. The game itself seems extremely shitty as a method of training people - people get immense advantages forever based on how well they did in the tutorial. Imagine the top genius in the world makes a poor decision in the first ten minutes they play the game which he has absolutely no idea is actually important because it's marketed as just a game - he is forever doomed to having absolutely no way to make up the permanent disadvantage he is given. Also, his management is fundamentally based on ancient chinese bureacracy spruced up with some modern Chinese bureacracy, and it seems extremely dubious that ancient chinese bureacracy would be a solid basis for best future administration, given how it is no longer extant anywhere in the real world. Perhaps even more hilariously, he shuffles around his bureacracy what feels like every other day, and fortunately because it's a video game there's no apparent penalty for making people do entirely new jobs every week or so. Which again, would be fine if you're playing a game but this is supposed to represent a training simulator for the rulers of the future.

MC is incredibly lucky where everything goes his way, even though there is a luck stat in the game which he has a 5 out of a possible 20. Although we are aware he is a time traveler from the future and has a basic knowledge of the future, the story explicitly says he doesn't even have any personal experience playing the management game. Yet he has never made a single mistake and nothing I would consider unlucky has happened to him, and now that I think about it, it isn't even reasonable that he knows perfectly how to structure his city considering he never even played the management game in the past. It's like expecting somebody who is really good at Counter-Strike to know perfect gameplay in Civ VII even though they've never played it just because they come from the future where CIV VII has been out for a year. There's really no reason to believe the MC is actually skilled at anything other than the fact that somehow he keeps being ranked #1 in the world. He had a mediocre education, appears to have never worked a real job nor had any real responsibility in his past life, and performed mediocrely in the game in his past life (which he played in MMORPG mode rather than sim management mode). Even assuming he can competently leverage his advantages of future knowledge, there is really no reason at all to believe he has any skills at all, and everything we see in his life that doesn't involving future knowledge cheating appears to indicate otherwise.

For example: MC unreasonably spends enormous amounts of money and effort on every girl he sees for not much return, yet somehow this never bites him in the ass. He doesn't even get laid for his trouble, for chrissakes. He's like a 13-year-old who gives big gifts to girls online because they are girls, for no real benefit in the game. Of course all the girls like him anyway because the whole thing stinks of harems, even when he is hiding his secret identity as the top player in the world. It's all clearly an enormous waste of resources for dubious benefit in a lot of cases, and honestly, I would literally prefer if he managed to seduce every last one of them for his harem because at least that'd show some actual competence in doing something instead of acting like a 13-year-old virgin. Imagine if Bill Gates, when Microsoft was worth $10 million dollars, decided to gift a hottie female tech CEO Windows to get on her good side, because why the hell not. And imagine if somehow, this ended up all working out in his favor or something. Nevermind the fact that so many top managers and gamers in general in the world happen to be extremely beautiful young women, which contravenes real life to an absurd degree. Pretty much all his major allies are hotties who are described down to their pink nipples poking out of their braless top. There's literally only two dudes he's allied with, who have been so poorly described it's easy to forget they exist, except for the fact that I'm damn near certain one of them will betray him in the future for no other reason than the fact that he hasn't bothered to investigate their background at all because hell, it's not like he pays attention to his male allies. God only knows how irritated I would be at that "big reveal"

We've seen plenty of wish-fulfillment MMOs about how people who are good at playing a video game can become the most important person in the game, which may be a real world. As masturbatory as that is, this novel wants you to believe that one of those shitty phone games that involve building a city and a territory and I guess probably attacking other cities would result in you being the best administrator in real life for the world. It's made further offensive by the fact that it's inherent to the story that the MC is only the top in the world because of his future-knowledge cheating, so assuming everything goes perfectly for him and he's given mass power and privileges, he has essentially f*cked over all of humanity, which is facing an existential crisis and must have top leaders for an uncertain future. There is zero awareness by the MC that he is actually risking the entire human race by winning the game by cheating.

So. The novel tries to take itself seriously with a super-important real game, but the game is shit. Everybody but the MC is incompetent. The MC is forever distracted by any girl. The writing is below average. Fundamentally, the entire premise is shit. The novel, as a whole, is attempting to represent the MC being a perfect king by having future knowledge, but that has absolutely nothing to do with actually being a good king and the whole thing is fundamentally limited by the author's poor imagination of good management, and how the real world as a whole functions, and what skilled and intelligent people are actually like.

Unless you can literally make yourself believe shitty empire-building phone games are excellent simulators of real-life nation management and thus can mistake "highly-detailed" for "very realistic", I do not recommend reading this. I am extremely tempted to give it 1-star, yet, I am all too aware there are worse novels out there.

edit: I read another 15 chapters through to his city defense arc and it is so vomit-worthy I'm lowering this to 1-star from 2-stars. Things that happen:

Top players continue to fail quests for no reason like 1) gosh, what is a military reserve, or 2) I thought I would win, but it turned out that even with everything going according to plan I didn't have enough guys.

He's unsure he can win it, especially since he just took major casualties. Decides to fight the battle anyway because he wants to be first in the world despite no important benefits and he's really weaker militarily than he has been in some time.

MC asks random low-grade officer who isn't even a famous historical figure or whatever to snipe the enemy general with a ballista bolt 1.3 km away. He does it, first shot, wins the battle.

Personally leads a charge to enemy outnumbering him 4:1 when he's behind his walls on the theory that "oh their morale is weak, best to end the battle quickly". Never mind the fact that he's leading a charge into the enemy lines and the whole reasoning their morale is weak is because their leader just died. Never mind the fact that he's supposed to have a low Luck stat so bad things should happen to him just because. Doesn't matter, enemy collapses and retreats immediately, it's not like he's potentially throwing away a won battle or anything like that....

Refused to conscript more troops into a battle where he's badly outnumbered because he already has twice a big an army as he planned to. After battle, recruits bandits into his army because he shrugs and says he'll be growing in the future. Says that bandits are just decent guys forced into dire straits. Neglects that in the last arc he didn't want bandits to join his army because of their generally poor moral character.

I don't know what the hell I was thinking continuing to read this a little further, every chapter made me hate it more. <<less
21 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
MMORPG: Martial Gamer
April 4, 2018
Status: c110
Horrendously mega-overpowered MC playing a game and being absurdly better than everyone. It's competently written, and it doesn't violate its own rules, which is a huge plus.

On the downside, that's about it. Nothing interesting has happened in a hundred chapters. Just him being OP and waving his big d*ck around.

Frankly, I enjoy it, but by now, I expected the MC to encounter a setback. Good, and entertaining in its right, but ultimately, it's like reading about Superman in the Olympics and winning 80 gold medals. What is even the point?... more>> I don't mind reading a story about the very best man in the world, but the author needs to get off his own MC's dick. By which I mean his own dick, since the MC has the same name as the author. So. Here's the question: How much you can tolerate watching the author stroke himself? <<less
18 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Shadow Hack
January 29, 2018
Status: c79
Thorougly unmemorable xianxia tripe. I had some interest early on because of the futuristic setting and the reasonably interesting system, but the author failed to take advantage of such settings.

So. This is what you get:

- poor world-building
- completely forgettable supporting cast
- poorly thought out system
- unremarkable MC
- no villains to speak of
- no interesting philosophical topics
- mediocre combat
- no backstory worth mentioning
- inconsistent power systems
- a low-intelligence world, that is to say, everybody is stupid

I'm not a huge fan of xianxia/xuanhuan... more>> novels in the first place, but if they're your cup of tea, there are at least dozens of lengthy ones that are significantly better. The story appears to be on a steady downward slope at that. I managed to enjoy the first 40-odd chapters, was disappointed from 40-60, and downright disliked 60-80.

In short, relentlessly formulaic, tawdry pulp fiction.

At this point, the only thing that could save this novel is a massive out-of-nowhere plot twist, like his system actually being a sentient AI using him as a meat puppet to take over the world, with a chapter cooly thanking him for his service as it cuts his throat and replaces him with a shadow puppet, "As a matter of fact, I can do that, Dave Li Yunmu."

It'd be cheap and dumb, but it'd be more interesting than what this novel has in store for the next 400-odd chapters before its readership has withered away enough for the author to start a new story.

17 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
The Second Coming of Gluttony
March 10, 2019
Status: c73
Sometimes, reading webnovels it's hard to remember what quality writing looks like. Thus far, Second Coming of Avarice displays the qualities of traditional novel-length formats - the author has mapped out in advance the backstory and their critical plot elements, and it shows. Small details in early chapters hint to a greater world, and yes, that greater world exists, and is remains consistent.

One simple example is the main character's main ability, his ability to scan items and see them colored, e.g., green for non-hostile, red for deadly threat. However, the... more>> author has wisely left this ability as partially locked, so his colored vision doesn't work on the most plot-centric characters or items; they don't have a color. However, you know the author is working hard behind the scenes, because eventually with his ability, everything has a color. Therefore, when something doesn't have a color, the author must know why. Better still, the flawed main character doesn't just passively accept his ability, he makes judgements on why something would be non-colored. He is curious how his ability works, and realizes that a lack of information in his ability is still information, and responds accordingly.

And speaking of being flawed, the main character is deliberately set up with a flaw, he's a dissolute gambler who's wasted his life away. Because he's sort of a time traveler, in that he's been bestowed memories of a future self that failed, much of his flawed self has been washed away, however despite having changed, both his flawed core personality and his future self's memories and emotions allow "bad" decisions to be made by the character without making him seem stupid.

Firstly, his future self's memories and emotions sometimes overcome his rational, self-preservational nature. Because his future self came to a Bad End, and knows/guesses there are specific points of failure in his timeline, his future self's emotions about an event can override him and cause him to do highly dangerous activities, which would normally seem suicidally dumb.

Second, setting him up as a flawed gambler does the same, when he gambles his life, he's aware of it being a character flaw. Most importantly, very early on, he stupidly takes on a too difficult mission and almost dies, and then, in hindsight, realizes how stupid he was gambling his life for something he doesn't need, and this spurs a shift in his thinking. In fact, this is a recurring theme of the webnovel, where the novel attempts to reconcile the fact that being an adventurer going on quests or expeditions is inherently risky, but older, wiser characters repeatedly advise against reckless behavior. And the novel doesn't shy from death, essentially every character that's introduced there's a coin flip whether or not they'll die, which serves to reinforce the idea that competent adventurers control their risk. If anything, this happens a little too often, because to get to their Level, experienced adventurers must have taken on dozens or hundreds of expeditions on average, so for them to die on the expedition the MC's on might seem a little forced. Fortunately, thus far the author has set them up for reasons to be unusually stupid compared to their past, so I'll allow it so far. Still, in any case it's apparent the author is extremely aware of one of the most common pitfalls of the genre: why would a MC repeatedly risk his life?

As discussed, the novel does not shy away from death, and although it's largely in the background, the novel doesn't shy away from s*x either. As one character puts it, there's no internet or TV here, all there is to do is eat, drink, and f***. So brothels are common, and very early on the MC experiences culture shock because on a carriage ride one of the adventurer pays another for a blowjob for "5 nickel coins", with the negotiation spanning a couple of paragraphs. 5 nickel coins is later established to be roughly the equivalent of $25, and the negotiation and the s*x act all take place in front of the MC, and he's treated as an obvious rookie for being surprised by it. In any case, a substantial percentage of the characters are romantically and/or sexually involved with another named character, and this colors their perceptions and actions accordingly. Additionally, while I have't done the math, I'd guess there's something like a 2:1 gender split between male:female adventurer characters. Without getting too much into gender politics, this is something like the ratio I would expect given the setting, because the majority of adventurers rely on raw strength as having a Warrior class, and characters must rely on their own capability to get through the tutorial, which is rather deadly, and it's apparent your base stats as a human are foundational for your fantasy growth powered by fantasy gods and leveling and systems. That being said, for "beautiful female character" purposes, being female instantly increases your chances of being important to the plot, and essentially almost everyone is attractive, especially if you're female, and 100% of the important female characters have been beautiful. Oh well. I guess there's just not a market for the hero rescuing 60-year-old grandmas from the orcs.

There's also an apparent political backstory going on where the human kingdom the MC is residing in is flanked by both some kind of alien menace and a coalition of demihuman nations. This is largely spooned out a little at a time as it's set up and self-apparent that the average person neither is particularly interested or informed about the geopolitics of the world. But as the story goes on it must eventually come to the forefront as the prologue establishes that the inability of the "humans" of the fantasy world to unite with Earthlings is what leads to the MC dying to his Bad End, so it's necessary for him to be the factor that causes a lasting political union between Earth factions and the primary fantasy human faction. A side effect of this choice is that the author deliberately makes the different political factions and nationalities and races of Earth to be the core reason for the ending of humanity in the fantasy world. Because Earthlings can freely travel between Earth and the fantasy world (which needs a name, dammit), they maintain factions that exist on Earth. So literally, the Mafia is competing against the Triad and Google (for some unknown reason there doesn't appear to be national government factions). Although it's unclear exactly what benefits the travelers get from the fantasy world (we can only presume they are vast, as the fantasy world lacks the convenience or entertainments of the modern world, which they can go back to at any time), the top powers are very wealthy on both sides. In any case, this means that despite being a Korean webnovel, people from across the world are featured as travelers to the fantasy world, and thankfully, there's no trace of "Korea no.1!!!" in the setting, although it's established early on that for reasons unknown to the MC at this time, Korea, China, and Germany are special regions allowed national representation instead of continental representation, and should thusly make an outsized percentage of the Earthling population. Indeed, the most powerful faction is some made-up Korean corporation. Of course this is convenient for the author's purposes of having Korean characters, but the author again establishes the necessary backstory - it isn't set in stone that Korea is powerful, it's just that the most powerful Earthling was a Korean guy, and by his merits, he essentially single-handedly made them the most powerful faction, and the author makes this an interesting political crisis, because he's disappeared at the start of the novel, and they're experiencing a crisis because of the power vacuum created from their top agent being MIA, and this directly affects the MC as he was recruited by one of their agents, so to some extent they regard him as one of their own, and regard him as a very promising rookie. As a side effect of factions being able to freely travel back and forth, this also means that power on Earth directly translates into power in the new world (and vice versa), and the novel has broadly hinted that developing nations are mostly unimportant because of this - with not a single graduate from South America, Africa, or Oceania from the MC's tutorial round. Accordingly, we can presume that the factions from these Earth regions are very weak relative to the factions from other regions. Again, this isn't meaningless backstory, as political fighting from factions from Earth are again the core reason humanity fails in the fantasy world.

In any case, my overriding point in this review is that the entire novel is well thought-out, and not mind-rendingly dumb in terms of characters, setting, motivations, economics, and politics, which is unfortunately the case of the vast majority of webnovels. It's well worth the read. <<less
13 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Pet King
March 20, 2018
Status: c214
Extreme slice-of-life.

Have you ever wanted a protagonist who got a "system", magical genie lamp, whatever, and proceeded to make no effort whatsoever to take advantage of it? Then this is the novel for you.

Essentially, a man running a pet store who gets magic powerups because he has magic pets. Some protagonists try to rule the world with their system, our man here, he uses it to charge people more to bathe their cats.

I'm usually a fan of slice-of-life, but this is a little too much for me. Especially since most... more>> of his problems are solved by what amounts to magic pets taking care of him. Instead of accepting the consequences for his decisions, good or bad, his magic cats intervene and fix everything. Perhaps this should be expected since his very first pet can essentially assure that nothing bad ever happens to him, but it makes every possible conflict seem a done deal.

Last, but not least, although the writing and characterization is fairly good, I cannot recommend Pet King for one reason: It is first and foremost a comedy, and it hasn't made me laugh or so much as crack a smile. <<less
10 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
I’m in Hollywood
April 30, 2018
Status: c136 part3
Ahahhahah. Okay, first off, I'm in Hollywood is not well-written, and it's basically a Gary Stu self-insertion fanfic, except instead of a fictional story, it is real life. Like MC falls back in time, and uses his future knowledge to go to Hollywood to steal famous movies, and in the process bangs hollywood starlets before they were famous while offering them roles in his stolen movies like Jurassic Park, Scent of a Woman, Titanic, etc, etc. Like. I read a manga from like, the 80s once, and the bad guy... more>> mafia boss guy is hanging out with his bros with some arm candy white woman blonde model and while he's on the phone he tells her to strip and pleasure his big yellow cannon. On the basic premise that powerful men have s*x with beautiful women and can completely sexually objectify them if they want to, and in the realm of fiction, this establishes them as a villain. Actual things that happen in this novel: He makes a young and basically unknown Jennifer Aniston fall in love with him, cucks a young Brad Pitt in the process, JA gets mad at him because a sexually precocious teenage Alyssa Milano moves in with him who might actually be his ward (I can't recall precisely), and sneaks into his bed and JA walks in on them together in bed and assumes they're f*cking, and gets pissed at him all over again, all the while he's keeping some C-list actress who I don't even remember who she is as his mistress. The fact that this is getting published, even if it is a webnovel by Qidian, cracks me up. I think the entire thing is absurdly funny. It's not nearly as horribly written as one might expect, either, given the subject matter. For better or worse, the author treats the whole thing quite seriously, even if we must be abundantly aware that the author probably has watched Alyssa Milano's Teen Steam in its entirety. Like, I could talk about its many flaws, but what is even the point?

Basically this guy is Harvey Weinstein, if Harvey Weinstein was actually young and attractive and also a mega-powerful director, writer, and actor, instead of just a producer, which makes the starlets he's preying on fall in love with him instead of wanting to throw up in their mouths.

Besides, if we want to be morbidly serious, the sexual dynamic of the casting couch is a thousand times more realistic than the MC who gains ultimate power, can't even get laid. <<less
7 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
The Devil’s Cage
February 8, 2018
Status: c269
Read through about Ch. 108 so far. Great internal consistency in this story, and shockingly, a MC who is actually pretty smart, has a reason and motivation for his actions, and doesn't completely shun help when he needs it.

Anyway, MC voluntarily joins a VRMMO death game in order to earn money for an operation (on himself), which gives him essentially a reason to risk his life. The VRMMO is set up into a series of self-contained missions, at the end of which he is sent back into a hub to... more>> prepare for the next mission. While theoretically he can log out, essentially he has no life worth speaking of in the real world and he needs to power up quickly to save his life, so for the purposes of the MC's story it's essentially very similar to VRMMOs where characters are trapped in the world.

The MC doesn't really have much character to him, but that's sort of forgivable given that he's generally competent and driven. There's some reasonably decent side characters, but the episodic nature of the story prevents them from long-term development or gaining interest in them in general with the exception of other PCs, and those haven't really been strongly used other than info dumps.

It's a little distressing he doesn't try to powergame and min/max his build given the free availability of a player trading system with very minimal account-bound items, he just kind of rolls with the skills he picked up in his newbie mission despite exponentially increasing costs to level them - as time passes new skills are exceedingly cheap compared to leveling old skills and even at lvl 1 they're the equivalent of a very highly skilled normal person - basic skill in dagger and sneak has him OHKO assassinating street thugs by the dozen, and basic skill in light arms gives him one-shot headshot mastery of all light firearms. Imagine you could learn to be a great computer hacker, or a Casanova, or able to speak every modern language for $10 in a store you pass by every day, and you know this, but you never so much as walk into the store.

Which might be more reasonable, except he's intentionally soloing missions instead of working in teams, so he has enormous skill gaps he doesn't really realize, and there's frankly quite a bit of plot armor that keeps him from being killed outright. For example, in his 3rd mission, he plays mercenary, and just as all the team is about to be poisoned eating a meal, he happens to detect it with a skill he coincidentally picked up in his 1st mission. Which is fine, but there's really no reason he hasn't died in any number of ways from soloing without being a jack-of-all-trades given the game's general unfairness. Or how he picked up a lockpicking skill recently, but up until he got the lockpicking skill, he's never encountered a locked door or chest or cabinet or anything, which is just a non-deadly form of plot armor.

There are fun quirks that keep the different worlds fresh; in his 2nd mission, he's basically Sherlock Holmes, and the MC alters his speech accordingly on the theory that playing his assigned character role will make the NPCs act more positively, which appears to be correct although it's not really proven either way. At any rate, the fact that he's essentially shifting to different settings allows the story to keep from getting dull, and the author is quite good at pulling off a variety of settings that feel significantly different.

All in all, a well-written, entertaining and refreshingly different take on a stat-based VRMMO with a Quantum Leap/Sliders-ish feel (apparently this is a sorta established genre in the Chinese webnovel world, but I haven't read others).

edit: up to chapter 269

Quality remains overall high, but it becomes obvious there's a great deal of railroading in the story - things happen because the author wants them to, not because they make sense. Also frustrating is we keep being told how smart and powerful the MC is getting, but he's unable to significantly outpace the power curve in the "game". Missions ostensibly of the same level of previous missions offer him as much trouble as when he was at far lower levels of power, and there appears to be no good reason for this.

Also, as MC continues to play the game fairly badly pretty much bumbling around at random, it's very unclear why he's better than other players other than pure luck. Example: He's wasted skill points on no less than SEVEN weapon paths: hand-to-hand, dagger, spears, bows, light firearms, swords, and attacking magic. You know how many defensive skills he's learned? One. Exactly one. Which he got automatically without trying, otherwise his dumbass probably wouldn't have thought about it. Bro, maybe invest some points in some more passives, armor/defense, or general skills and you won't almost die every mission. <<less
6 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
The King’s Avatar
January 29, 2018
Status: c913
Remarkably faithful to being a gaming novel, The King's Avatar takes itself completely seriously as a story about professional gamers in the most popular VRMMO in the world, and it delivers remarkably.

Although there are some minor missteps, the whole series feels like a labor of love from an author who knows his MMOs, with a sympathetic MC who is driven and reliable despite the inherent immaturity in his actions in basically throwing his life away to play video games. He's faithful to his ideals and knows what he wants.

And the... more>> amount of logical plot progression and slow buildup into him re-entering the professional world is absolutely outstanding. Sure, he's ridiculously skilled and has practically a cheat character, but he needs them for the challenges he has to face. And the villains, while sometimes petty and going a bit too far for a game, are entirely believable as the kind of behavior you might find from people rather than some caricature of villainous behavior you so often see in other stories - their misdeeds towards the MC are because the MC is in their way of things they want and they're apt to pull back when they realize they're being a bit ridiculous or being a bit too unprofessional, or whatever.

The characters are remarkably memorable too. It isn't common that a story can convince me to keep track of both the characters and the video game characters they're playing, yet despite the absolutely huge cast of characters, they're solidly in my mind whether it's the reckless and stupid Steamed Bun, or the old and humorously cunning and ill-tempered Wei Chen, or the entirely too devoted Su MuCheng.

Real world. Real people. Video games taken seriously. It's simple, yet wonderful. <<less
6 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Kuma Kuma Kuma Bear
December 1, 2018
Status: c110
Flat, unoriginal, and basically uninteresting isekai with extremely simplistic writing style.

Yet still somehow charming and readable.

Good for wasting your time, but ultimately, a waste of time.
5 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
The Novel’s Extra
August 6, 2018
Status: c64
New favorite novel. I devoured the current 64 chapters in one night. It's a pretty standard setting of an author sucked into the world he's written and going from weak-to-strong with the help of a system, but novels like this remind me that tropes don't feel tired as long as they're well-written with quality characters that feel like they have their own motivations and personalities.

The novel is lacking a few things, such as competent villains, but the large and diverse cast of students, adults scouting them out to be future... more>> Heroes, and various underground organizations of varying shadiness make that easy to ignore.

Despite being massively overpowered and generally acknowledged as such by other characters, competent foreshadowing and fairly intelligent decisions by him make it feel like he's earning his powerups rather than them being just given them on a silver platter. It helps a lot that he actually seems to be a lot more powerful than he is just because his skillset and cheat break the rules of the world, and he uses his powerset reasonably intelligently. In a lot of ways, his system is completely broken in that it can do virtually anything - his cheat/system is Author Power in being able to rewrite the world, but it basically takes experience points to do so, and actually it's pretty clever that that's his power since he's, well, the author of the world. There are some iffy power scales going on, especially those of the bad guys who for some reason never send evil monsters/humans strong enough to wipe the floor with the MC even though it's clear that a great many adult Heroes are much stronger than the MC.

The MC is steadily building up a harem of three main girls, and for better or worse, a great deal of the novel is spent detailing their reactions to his feats. The MC's insistence is that he wants to keep all his main characters alive, but since there's never a POV of any of the male secondary characters it ends up just feeling like a harem story.

Overall, the whole thing is just a delight to read and a real page-turner. <<less
5 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Cultivation Chat Group
March 27, 2018
Status: c337
Easily my favorite of the modern cultivation novels, this one stands out because the MC is an average college student with no cultivation talent who becomes a loose cultivator (as in, not part of a sect) because he accidentally joins a chat room of incredibly powerful, incredibly bored semi-immortal cultivators.

If you couldn't tell, it's a comedy.

After over a hundred chapters, he can reliably beat any street thug... or even a dozen of them and that's about it. Sure, he's taken out plenty of more powerful, more experienced cultivators, but that's... more>> pretty much by relying on one-shot artifacts gifted to him by pals and being lucky. He has almost no business trying to fight a serious cultivator and he knows it.

There are various plot threads coming together, however slowly, and it does seem quite interesting, but if you expect them to come about any time soon, you're bound to be disappointed.

No, this story is about a mostly average, if amusing guy trying his best to survive being thrust into a world of super-immortals and endless calamities that befall him because of it, while also being excited to find out that he, too, can be a cultivator... just, you know, kind of a weak, pathetic one who isn't expected to amount to anything. <<less
5 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
I'll probably read this a little longer, but overall, this story just seems low quality in every way. The writing is sub-par, and on top of that the world has nothing unique or interesting about it. Complete bum-standard fantasy RPG world. Similarly, the game system is so ill-defined, it just seems like he gets whatever he needs from it whenever he needs it. Any game system is inherently a bit of a deux ex machina, but it's seldom so crass.

The MC (whose name I don't even remember because he's so... more>> dull and bland) repeatedly makes poor or stupid choices that should end up getting him killed but MC plot armor saves him and then he makes zero effort to mitigate his risks. The best thing that could possibly happen is that the chapter I'm reading ends with him getting killed, and then the novel moving on the a real MC with the old one being an object lesson in how not to treat his "adventuring" like a game, even when he's warned in the first chapter that if he dies in the "game" he's dead, kaput, gone. <<less
5 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Moto Sekai Ichi’i no Sub-chara Ikusei Nikki
October 17, 2019
Status: c23
Bland, mediocre wish-fulfillment with OP MC who is an "all-rounder" who is good at everything, therefore bad at nothing with no discernible personality despite supposedly having the drive to become the best at something in his past life. Side characters are harem candidates that fall into his party with essentially no effort. Of course, being Japanese, no matter how beautiful and willing, MC's sexual desires are never realized or voiced beyond PG-13.

Even though he has transmigrated into the world through unknown means, it is 100% a game world. Things have... more>> stats, and hp, and everybody in the world is aware of them. Dungeons magically regenerate as soon as you exit them.

MC is particularly stupid, in that he never tests anything in advance, just assuming everything will work exactly as it did in the game he played, despite it being obvious that having been upgraded into a living world that he inhabits, he can easily be surprised at the differences between a game and a game world, such as blacking out when hit in the head by a club. Of course, the novel never punishes him for it, and he just merrily keeps on doing it. He never stops to ponder why the very strange world is the way it is, or how he got there, and really, it's hard to fathom how he could have actually reached #1 in the "real world"

Fortunately for him, he starts with every advantage under the sun; just for starter's he's apparently the most beautiful man in the world because he's a cash shop character. Then he has his encyclopedic knowledge of the world while the game denizens are degraded to lacking basic knowledge or the intelligence to seek it. He has a cheat where he learns things instantly when denizens of the game world do not. And he starts off a billionaire, because he's an alt.

Let's be frank, if this was a game, he'd be a cash-shop smurf using cheats who plays straight from walkthroughs. Worse, it becomes quickly apparent that the only reason he has transmigrated is to make it easy for him, because actual other Players would represent competition which would require the MC to display some sort of talent that makes him beyond a self-insert blob.

All of this might be forgiveable if the writing was good, but this is what you're faced with reading this mess.

"For the first 2-3 laps, we proceeded in a relaxed manner while prioritizing the acquisition of Eko's 【Shieldmanship】 skills.

 From 【Shieldmanship】 I only want her to learn 6 skills. In addition to the basics 《Soldier Shieldmanship》 and 《Lance Shieldmanship》, there is 《Knight Shieldmanship》, 《Gold Shieldmanship》, 《Bishop Shieldmanship》and 《Dragon Horse Shieldmanship》.

 The other ones are attacking skills with shields, so these six skills are enough for defense.

 Eko easily acquired everything except the 《Bishop Shieldmanship》 and 《Dragon Horse Shieldmanship》. Each of their effects are: 《Soldier Shieldmanship》 normal defense, 《Lance Shieldmanship》 piercing deflection, 《Knight Shieldmanship》 defense + knockback, and 《Gold Shieldmanship》 range guided defense + knockback."

Don't forget the epic description of fights:

"Listen Eko. Activate your skills to match my voice as you defend. It should take roughly 15 minutes without breaks. But if you make a mistake, it's starting from the beginning again. Can you do it? "

 I give her some instructions before confronting the Rock Turtle.

"..... Yep. I can." 

 Eko nodded with an unusually serious expression and then closed her mouth.

"Let's go."

With my voice as the trigger, she rushed in front of the Rock Turtle.

So far, we've defeated the Rock Turtle around ten times. Up until now, Silvia and I have been attacking it with 【Archery】 from the back while Eko defends at the front, but this time is different."

That's right, there was no description of the fight itself, unless you count "rushed in front" as a battle description.

You might think that skillful character personalization is something that can redeem it, but...

"Eko looked happy, as if she was having fun every day. She often asked "What will we do today?" or "What will we do tomorrow?" and when I answered with something she'd go "Kyaaa!" and cheerfully jump around. She's supposed to be a cat demihuman, but from the way she acts she seems more like a dog."

This could easily be a parody where nobody has a name. MC could be called "Generic Harem Protagonist Cheat", first girl could be "Female Knight", second girl could be "Catgirl", and so on and so forth. People's personalities are defined by NPC tropes.

You've read this before, and it's particularly sparsely written this time around.

But honestly, this was my tipping point where I stopped:

"This is my wrath. A warning not to look down on PvP games. If you don't wear down your nerves and put your life on the line, there's no way to be the top in PvP. If you're not that serious, it just looks like you're trolling. And even if the surroundings allow it, I will not."

The author is an idiot. He has his MC, a gamer, telling people in the game world that they're not taking a fight seriously because they're not putting their lives on the line in a magic school tourney and that's the reason they won't win and all they're doing is playing "a stupid game". I don't think it's possible to be more hypocritical than this. I get that he *thinks* he was putting his life on the line in his past life, but obviously he wasn't. That was just self-delusion, and there's no sign the author gets it.

At it's very best, it's passable at what it does. But considering the genre as a whole, it does not do a single thing well enough to be noteworthy, and the only thing that keeps it from being total trash is that it can't be taken seriously at any point. <<less
4 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Godfather Of Champions
June 17, 2018
Status: c6
Early impression is that this is a top-of-the-line sports novel. The MC is the coach and already has a very strong character, basically imagine Tony Stark if he was born poor and had a passion for soccer.

The author clearly has a passion for the sport as well, with impeccable research in real world players and teams, as well as certainly being a big fan of Football Manager. I lack the knowledge necessary to fully appreciate this, but those with knowledge of early '00s English football would no doubt be delighted,... more>> especially if they're fans of the real life Nottingham Forest.

One thing I've never seen done before, the MC transmigrated into someone older than himself (26 into a 34-year-old body), which is typical of the general boldness of the novel. Given how high the rating is for the original novel (9.3), I have high hopes for this. <<less
3 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Sinai rated it
Library of Heaven’s Path
March 27, 2018
Status: c612
Xianxia face-slapping at it's finest. The story relies on a transmigrated character who is a teacher rather than a run-of-the-mill protagonist.

Let's get this out of the way; Library of Heaven's Path is a comedy of face-slapping, and any drama or world building is subservient to both.

In its weaker moment, it relies on genre tropes such as arrogant young masters, coincidentally getting exactly what you want, being completely immune to feminine charms, appalling arrogance from the MC despite being a frog at the bottom of a well, and basically all the... more>> things you're probably used to either loving or hating from xianxia.

But LoHP transcends all this by being the consistently among the best at what it does. The face-slaps are enjoyable, the power-ups feel somewhat reasonable, events are suitably foreshadowed, the author remembers how his world works, and there's a minimum of random ass-pulls.

MC's cheat is ridiculously overpowered, but it's also very consistent. As the story progresses and the MC has gained in raw physical power, he has a tendency to fight his way through a situation, which puts a damper somewhat on potential comedic situations. In any case, it's not without its flaws, but you would be hard pressed to find better face-slapping anywhere in Chinese webnovels. <<less
3 Likes · Like Permalink | Report