There is so many villains! Left and right there's sure to be someone who hates the heroine to the point that I felt suffocated reading this. Holy crap, can't she just get a few chapters with no one hating her? Seriously.
Another one is that I feel like EVERY SINGLE MAN in the book likes/falls in love with her. There's only one true main love interest but she's portrayed as a super gorgeous, super pure looking etc and it gets annoying over time as its usually the reason for my first complaint above.