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Scent of Magnolia
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Gender Bent Loli Is Not Cute!
November 12, 2018
Status: v1c2
This is too bland for me, I tried to write a novel once and this novel looks exactly the same. I don't think I can read this any further.

There are very little details about the world he was in except that there is a very little population. The MC also somehow felt the "shock" of being genderbent but that's about it. It's also filled with rant about his new body.

Maybe it's just the writer being inexperienced.

Edit: I managed to read further and it really deserves 3 stars. It's 3 stars... more>> for cuteness, I love these kinds of stories. The plot don't have much direction cuz it's the school arc. <<less
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Oh wow this is great! Like really great, I'm hooked and I'm loving it.

But wait, why 3 stars? Well it's about the setting. Nothing is really told about the world they are in.

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Like there is this school that accepts Exorcists of some kind, humans, and Phantoms which Exorcists exorcise. What for? Why are they in the same school? It wasn't even mentioned. Otome game? What's the otome game about? Also not mentioned.

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I might be wrong though. Setting might not actually be needed here. Idk. I'm all in for the entertainment it gives though.

I'm a very patient person I believe, now where are the chapters? <<less
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The world renowned strongest swordsman managed to beat the Dragon God in exchange for his life. In exchange for beating him, the dragon sees him worthy of a wish.

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Wow that's pretty interesting. The wish part felt forced though but that's irrelevant already cause it's just a reason he reincarnated. Right?

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He has no parents, friends, lovers. Anyone related basically.

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Damn, that's so sad.

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In his new life, he has a family. He got shunned (subtly) after his family found he has no (more) potential for growth. He shrugs it off like nothing happened cuz he was "interested" in magic.

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Wow that's unrealistic.

Those are my thoughts 6 chapters in. The MC has no character other than being interested in magic and being real good with the sword.

The writing style is as the other reviews (and comments in the site) say: horrible. This novel isn't meant to read, it's meant to be skimmed through. You won't miss anything other than our MC's muscle pains or something.

It's a pretty nice time killer though, so 2/5.

Edit: As of c28, I'm smelling some plot! But it's still bad for grammar freaks, so much pointless conversations and things.

The author is really terrible at foreshadowing too, if that's what it's called.
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