he wants to know if hes a reincarnated person or just a dude with randomly inserted memories, apparently its the latter and the creator could have been lying but I could care less because I was given no other clues to suggesting otherwise, pretty much ending the only lore related mystery I cared about.
so first his "children" seem all fine and everything. He seems to truly care for them as if they were his kids but by volume 5 they seem to all want to f**k him and it degrades the story from a city building one to a "how do I avoid these situations" one. And its super annoying. His ally also is falling in love with him but hes like "f**k that!" and then hes falls in love with his "parent". Starting to see a pattern? Yeah so do I and I think the author has some sort of family fetish.
oh then we got all these random story elements that keep being added without properly building on to each other, and rather then giving a sense of accomplishment. It feels more like the author just making him more and more OP for no reason and no explanation. In fact the power scaling of this whole story is off.
and then we got the over explanation. Seems contradictory to what I said in the last paragraph, but in the last one I was talking about how the story doesn't justify itself lore wise. For example why hes the only one who can make S class monsters or why doesn't anyone know the power of the creation medals. The over explanation im talking about here is stats wise. In fact they tend to repeat the same thing so many times its makes feel like im watching yu gi oh. "You see, the reason I cant use these hippogyths in the next war is because they can only 500 kilograms wheres as the darkness dragons can carry 10 times that amount." "the adult form of kuina muiltplys her stats several times over explanting why she can perform this feat that was once impossible" honestly overbearingness of the story makes the story feel like it was meant for children until you get to the s*xual tension that is.
hes every planning to murder the entire yang clan to get revenge.
theres one scene where a female is used as bait to lure men into a trap, and the explanation was that because they are all trapped on a murder island then the lust of men consumes then and when they see a female, they cant help but rape the lady. like seriously?! its a battle royal! no sane person is gonna fall for such a stupid trap. oh and then theres a scene where Chu is trying to find a soul pet for his not-related-by-blood female cousin (yes, im not joking. they actually emphasized this tidbit of info) and he skips over many good soul pets because he wants to get her a butterfly soul pet. with the explanation being "soul pets are like weapons, you must have the right weapon for the person of the right build." and thats why she should get a small nimble soul pet. for the record butterflies are far from being swift nimble creatures. they are slow and clumsy. there are plenty of other womanly-ish creatures that are far more capable of fighting. like cats or wolves, or small birds! idk something other then a butterfly... but maybe I should take this one off seeing how Chinese do have a thing for butterflies. perhaps they think its more badass?
theres one scene where, the king cat says something in English and the MC doesn't know what is being said, but the translation doesn't tell you what is spoken in English and what isn't.
there are also parts where the MC says something in his head but what is said is surrounded by "o" instead of italics or even single quotes 'o' which can be used to show that what is being said isn't being said out-loud.
theres are also a lot of cultural references and differences that aren't really being explained by the translator, for example the fact that people will reveal your address if you aren't being good online. (Thats not normal! and is a crazy obstruction of privacy!)
the story structure itself is also very confusing, often switching to other characters' POV without warning, that we dont care about. the emotions of different characters aren't realistic in fact, none of the personalties in this story feel very real.
there are parts wheres the MC will get mad for no real reason and its super confusing. I also noticed that the story is slightly unintentionally s*xist. even girl character ive seen pretty much acts like a spoiled brat except for the children. you also dont flirt with a woman by grabbing their face to look at them. thats what people do for slaves. but I im not one for being politically correct, so thats gets a pass I guess.
How can a genderless slime that is attracted to women, criticize the lizard men for doing what they're race is already designed to do. I understand its supposed to be funny in a hypocritical mocking kind of way but the humor isn't very clear and ends up coming off as homophobic. a similar thing is done when it comes to talking about goblins raping things. Rather then being disgusted as a former human himself and then dismissive of their behavior because "its in their nature", its feels as if he is dismissive of the behavior from the get go. The joke of goblins raping virgin queens follow soon after that but once again its not very funny and only portrays the protagonist as heartless, unempathic, and un-relatable. (the downfall of most stories) I think I wouldn't have mind it so much if it was mentioned once but the fact that its basically made some sort of plot point and is constantly referenced over and over again really ruins it for me. yes we get it you really want to rape some virgins, just dont forget the toss in the vampire too. I dont think he ever reaches out to the human queens and rather would just leave her to her fate. later on he is put in charge of a young human girl and now he suddenly cares for humans?! yeah that type of switch in morals isn't going to slide very easily with me.
and once he betrayed and falls down he loses his arm and then finds a magic rock to heal him. Which isn't too bad what I have a problem with is that they completely disregard the missing arm entirely. Did he regrow his arm and I missed it?! According to another reviewer he riding a motorcycle out of the dungeon and shooting his rail guns at the same time? How when he only has one arm?!
the second chapter begins with waking up in the demon lord castle which is way too sudden and confusing. To try and fix this, your mind automatically assumes that our MC passed out at the end of the previous chapter but it was never shown nor told. The demon lord, his minion, and the MC are now suddenly raiding the mansion (I thinks its a mansion???) holding slaves and the captured sister mentioned in the beginning of the story. If your not already confused by this point then im impressed. Everyone seems to be murdered by beans (dont ask me where they got beans and why they are using them, idk) I believe and then they are suddenly in the basement freeing the prisoners.
ok so I didn't mind the jerking off on his parents funeral, thing. Maybe they didn't get along. The thing that made me jump ship was when the mother was telling her story, and she noticed how perverted the baby was. Just disgusting! You cant hold back even with your own mother?! He s*xually harassed his mother as a baby! F**king incest! If this is how he acts as a child, then whats stopping him from being a rapist?!