The MC needs to use water jutsu and then freeze it to make ice. He still uses chakra for the water. Its super lame because even Haku could create ice from nothing. Mei could also spit lava out of her mouth. His ability is based off Aokiji. But its nothing like Aokiji's ice because Aokiji can create ice from nothing.
The author loves giving the MC kryptonite abilities.
The MC stores nature chakra with Tsunade's recovery skill. He can't refill it until it runs out.
The MC pissed his pants when he met 9 tails. He couldn't even speak when Kurama asked him a question. This is the same guy who killed a root member without blinking an eye. He never even cared that he killed somebody. He also knows Kurama is a good guy. He's still pissing his pants when he meets him years later. He even stutters when Kurama wants to meet him.
The MC has contact lenses to hide his Sharingan. But I feel like the Byakugan should be able to see it.
His sharingan's absorb nature chakra to get his 3rd tomoe. This is stupid for 2 reasons. The first is that his whole body had already absorbed nature chakra. His body even turns into nature chakra in his ice mode. That would include his eyes! Even normal sage mode would affect his eyes. It's been stated that nature chakra helps people see better. The second reason is that nature chakra doesn't advance the Sharingan. The Sharingan is created from a special chemical the brain produces during intense emotions. Then the author says he couldn't understand why Sasuke awakened his 3rd tomoe fighting Naruto! He then blames it on his curse mark! Is this author a idiot! It was clearly because of his intense emotions from fighting Naruto!
The author counts Sasuke's feats against Itachi's Mangekyou. This is stupid because Itachi was trying to lose. I dont think Sasuke's 3 tomoe could have done anything against Itachi. Just look at what he did to Kakashi. Kakashi was helpless in front of him. Granted he only had 1 eye and wasn't a Uchiha. But its known that Kakashi was better with his Sharingan than most Uchiha.
The MC gets one shotted by White Fang. The MC already has a 3 tomoe sharingan, sage mode, ice mode and elite jounin level chakra. He also knows all chidori variants and rasenshuriken. This can only mean 1 of 2 things. Number 1: The author thinks Kakashi's dad is ultra kage level. This would also mean that he thinks grandma Chiyo is ultra kage level. Thats because grandma Chiyo can fight him for a long time. That would also mean that Sasori is Madara level. Thats because Sasori is way stronger than granny. Then there is the 2nd option. The 2nd option is that the MC is super incompetent at using his skills. Im going to go out on a limb and guess its number 2. That makes me wonder who wants to read about a incompetent mc?
Pakura should not be able to melt the MC's ice. The MC's ice should be stronger than normal. He is also using nature chakra. There is no way Pakura could melt ice made with nature chakra.
The author thinks that Jiraiya became an author during the 3rd ninja war. But Jiraiya became an author during or after the 2nd ninja war. We know this because Naruto's name came from a book that he wrote while teaching Nagato.
This author knows nothing about Naruto. The 3rd hokage could never fire Danzo and the 2 elders as advisors. Danzo is in charge of the root and his power is unshakable. The 2 elders fought alongside the 2nd hokage with them and are the 3rd's most trusted advisors. They side with the 3rd over Danzo most of the time. They didn't start leaning towards Danzo until Tsunade took over. They even picked Minato to be the 4th hokage. Danzo was trying to get Orochimaro to be hokage and didn't want Minato. I think the elders even wanted Jiraiya to be the 5th hokage if I remember right. The 3rd hokage would have never fired them for saying he shouldn't give the MC a S rank skill. There is also 0% chance that he could fire Danzo! Danzo has a brainwashed underground army! You can't take away his right to speak when he has that much power.
The 3rd hokage made the root disband. This is the dumbest thing ever. Danzo would never let this happen. The 3rd would also never want it to happen. Root members are super loyal to Danzo. The root is there for a reason. The author has zero understanding of the Naruto world.
White Fang could not cut off Danzo's arm in 1 move. Danzo is a old war vet, who has gone through countless battles. He fought alongside the 2nd hokage. White Fang would also not want to cut his arm off.
The MC asks Kurama if he can be controlled by a Mangekyou Sharingan. Then Kurama tells him no. But this is wrong because the Mangekyou can control him at the loss of the eyes.
The MC has the hots for a 4 year old even though his mental age is 30-40 years old. His body is also 9 years old. The author doesn't seem to find this creepy. I hope the chinese police are watching him.
The MC breaks a sand ninja spy out of prison. Its stupid because the 3rd hokage would have let her go if the MC told him why. Instead he feels the need to risk being a traitor.
There is no way the MC can teleport people through his ice! The MC can only do that because every cell in his body is ice! This author is so stupid!
Anko learning snake sage mode is a complete asspull! She doesn't even have enough chakra to learn sage mode. She also learned it in only a few weeks and never went to the snake cave. But the worst part may be that she can even melt the MC's ice with a normal fire jutsu in this mode.
The MC should be able to feel his surroundings in ice mode.
How would the Leaf not know anything about the 3rd Kazikage? He was around during the 1st hokage's time! They would have seen him fight countless times!
The MC, Kushina and Minato meet Naruto from the future. Its from when he went back in time in the lost tower movie. The problem is that Kushina's Kurama should have talked to Naruto's Kurama. He should have been able to find out everything. He also should have known his chakra was in Naruto without him using it.
Th 4th hokage gives the Leaf his families ultimate skill so they stop fighting! This is the dumbest thing ever! The 4th hokage would never do it!
The author didn't seem to know that Shisui awakened the Mangekyou when he was 7 years old. He awakened it when he saw his friend die in the 3rd ninja war. Then he became a pacifist and made friends with Itachi. Itachi was 5 and Shisui was 8 at that time. The author makes Shisui become the MC's student when he is 9 years old and the MC is 12-13 years old. The MC says that Shisui is only chunin rank. This author knows nothing about naruto! The MC even said he's going to bring Shisui to fight, so he can understand the brutality of war!
The author thinks Shisui's and Itachi's crows are from a summoning contract.
The 4th mizukage did not get 3 tails until after Rin's death.
This author loves to write bs.
The author relized his cultivation speed was to fast and needed to slow it down and get more word count. The MC trains for half a month and is still rank 2. He says it will take a month and a half just for him to reach the peak of rank 2. WTF IS THIS BS GOING ON! How did his speed slow down so much. Wont it take countess years just to reach rank 9 if it keeps going up like that? The MC meets a super rare monkey while training in his backyard. The monkey takes him to some treasure that helps him lvl up. The MC should have already leveled up by that time anyway and it made the treasure feel pointless. It was also surounded by countless bones and pure yin. The MC said it had been there for countless years. This treasure was a half hour jog away from his house! How did his clan never find it! They have been there for 40 years and have a ton of members! The whole thing was just to give the MC some treasure. It felt super random and cringeworthy. Stuff like this goes on forever!
This is a great story to pass time. I noticed the author did a lot of things wrong though. But its understandable when you think how he wrote 709 chapters in such a short time. The story is just a power trip with a badass MC. Ive been looking for a story like this for a long time. The mtl isn't that bad for this story.
My biggest complaint about the one piece arc is that everybody had their same power level 9 years before the start of op. There is no way Doffy would be that strong 8 years ago. Its also dumb that Magellian could 1v1 Kaido. The MC kills the 3 emperors and locks Shanks in prison. Shanks would rather die than be locked in prison. He would cut off his feet like Shiki and escape. Luffy would also go to save him. The MC fakes ace's death. Luffy knows because of his vivi card. The MC makes luffy stop calling himself a pirate. Its stupid because the real Luffy would never agree. He would have said thanks for helping Ace but im going to be Pirate King!
Now for the Naruto arc.
Might Duy's 8 gates should not be that strong. He couldn't even beat the 7 ninja swordsman. His 8 gates had to be weaker than Might Guy.
Kimimaro should not be alive when the Kaguya clan rebels against Roja.
They call Kimimaro their secret weapon. He is 7 years old in this novel. This is 1 year after the 3rd ninja war. Minato has just become the 4th Hokage. There is no way that he could be alive. Kimimaro was only 15 when he died. Naruto was 12 when the manga started and 13 when Kimimaro attacked.
The author also thinks Haku is alive right now. He is practicing for the anbu. Haku is the same age as Kimimaro and should not be alive at this time. He at least cant be that old.
The Sage of 6 Paths is not immortal. He died a long ass time ago. That was just his chakra manifestation in the manga. I think the manga said he could see the future and sent his chakra there to help Naruto. There is no way that he could fight Roja.
Obito still attacks the Leaf. Roja destroyed the Leaf because they attacked Hancock. The 3rd Hokage had already made everybody escape before Roja came. Why would Obito try to destroy the Leaf with 9 tails when it was already destroyed a year ago?
The author underestimates how much chakra the tail beasts have. He says that the three sage creatures have way more chakra than them. Thats super dumb. They may have more than the lower tail beasts. But they could not have more than 8 tails. 9 tails should have way more chakra than them. Naruto only had half of 9 tails chakra. Half of 9 tails chakra was still way more than 8 tails. The author said a full powered 9 tails only had ultra kage level chakra. This author is super dumb.
The MC never uses Aizen's Kyoka Suigetsu. He can control everybody's 5 senses if they see his sword. The illusion can never be broken for the rest of their life and he can control them at any time. The Mangekyou Sharingan can not even see through it. Yamamoto could only tell when the sword was stabbed inside him. Why does he never use it? It would be fine if the author said the MC likes fighting and wants to train. But he never said that. He could have used it on Might Guys dad when he was using 8 gates and he would have been helpless. It was also dumb that he said Minato never looked at his sword. There is no way Minato did not see his sword. Minato is super vigilant and notices everything. There is no way he didnt look at the MC pull a sword out of thin air. He would have never suspected it would be a illusion. He even said that he saw the sword when he was dodging it.
Why does the MC not just absorb the tailed beasts? He said that he didnt want them to make him crazy. But his sword should be able to absorb them without any problems. It should be able to get rid of their wills and keep them as pure chakra.
Roja cut big moms soul in half and never cut anybody's soul again. Its stupid because his sword stands for soul cutter. All of his attacks should be soul attacks. It should go through any defense.
The Uchiha clan was still destroyed by Itachi even though Donzo was dead.
Kisame still left the hidden mist even though he didnt have to kill the woman that he loved.
Naruto used 5 tails when fighting Gaara. The seal was to strong back then and Naruto's will was not weak. He only used 2-3 tails when fighting Sasuke. He wasnt even that mad when fighting Gaara. I dont think he used 5 tails until he fought Orochimaro and we all know how much he hated that guy. Naruto would have never convinced Gaara to change if he went 5 tails mode. Gaara would still be crazy if Naruto couldn't keep his sanity and use talk no jutsu on him. The leaf would also lock down on Naruto for going 5 tails mode. They would all be scared of him. Naruto never lost control in the leaf unless we count the pain fight. But nobody cared at that time. Everything was already destroyed and Pain hurt them more than 9 tails did when he attacked the leaf.
Obito revives the 1st Raikage. The author said the 1st Raikage was the strongest Raikage. He said that he had chakra on the level of a tailed beast. This is stupid because even Naruto and his mom dont have that much. I think Kisame was the only person with tailed beast level chakra and that was because his sword was eating everybody's chakra. It even ate tail beast chakra. This authors power levels are bs. The manga even said that 3rd Raikage was the strongest one. The author made 1st Raikage so much stronger than the 3rd that its stupid. The author said his attacks are as strong as a bijuu bomb.
The MC should of had the yin element when he first came to Naruto world. The MC only had fire, water and wind. Thats because of his soul reaper powers. How could he not have yin=death when he is a soul reaper?
Every one of his attacks should be a soul attack! His sword is even called a soul cutter!
Naruto, Killer Bee and Gaara got killed by the Akastuki. Minato didn't care when he heard Naruto died.
Orochimaro was still alive during the 4th ninja war and never got his arms sealed by the 3rd hokage. So he may have killed Sasuke.
The MC let Momoshiki run away. Momoshiki could come back at any time and destroy the Naruto world. The MC went to the Bleach world. The MC's friends wont stand a chance and can only wait to die.
Now for the Bleach arc
Some prisoners try to escape and the MC goes to stop them. We find out Aizen talked them into killing the MC. The author says that one is the first captain of team 7. He went to prison for trying to overthrow the soul king. This is stupid because he was super weak. It feels forced to make him work with Aizen. The other guy was a former Kenpachi of team 11. The author said that he was always in bankai form and can absorb the reiatsu around him. The author said Aizen's Kyoka Suigetsu doesn't work on him. Thats stupid because thats the same ability as the Quincy's and we know his sword works on them. It even worked on the Quincy King Yhwach! This author is a idiot!
Orihime was never taken by Aizen. Aizen used Orihime's power for the hogyoku in the manga.
Aizen did not create Wonderweiss in this novel. Aizen created Wonderweiss for a reason in the manga. It was because Yamamoto would have killed him. He wasn't that strong after he just fused with the hogyoku.
It felt rushed after Rukia got saved.
The last chapter was cringeworthy.
The MC is married to Boa Hancock and they have never had s*x. He said that he wanted them both to become immortal first. But they became immortal before he left Naruto world. He also has a mountain of maids. He should also be able to have s*x without getting them pregnant.
I also hate that the MC never went back to one piece world after he picked up Hancock. He didnt care about his uncle Garp or his student Tashigi. He also left Hancocks sisters. Hancock was super close with her sisters and it would have made her sad. Him and Garp were super close. Its weird that he never went back to see him. It would have been no trouble at all.