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MrJaxPL
MrJaxPL rated it
Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable
June 17, 2017
Status: Completed
Novel had potential but author destroyed it.

Coping things from other novels and repeating realm sequence.

Add to it Game Elements and typical Chinese villains poof you got this novel.

Actually it was readable but it could be better way better.

2/5 I read it to the "end"
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Ending is just excuse for dropping this novel by author. He lost in his loops and finally decided to end this

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It wasn't that bad but it wasn't good.I didn't read another novel from this author but I rather don't want to do it now.
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MrJaxPL
MrJaxPL rated it
Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~
August 30, 2017
Status: v8c183
Novel is actually good but MC is...

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MC doesn't answer affections of many women because of his childhood girlfriend. When she come to this world he doesn't confess to her but just protecting her it's so hard to say I am... and I love you he written a letter but wonder what happened? It was intercepted by lame hero. There will be harem but we must wait another 100 chapters for MC and his love interest meet and he grow some balls to confess to her again. 183 chapter stil no confession (I mean second confession because MC tried once (Failure)) Maybe in 20 volume he will confess or author will drop this novel he will be not first and not last author that did something like this.

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World ?It's quite good world but simple. It's not best world but not worst world too. Author is not best creating worlds. 2/5

Characters. Most of them are 2 dimensional. 2/5

Story. Story isn't bad. MC is strong from the beginning I should say.
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Everyone is bulling him... And what he does ?Completely nothing...

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Aside of that I am stil enjoying this story and I am hooked to it.3.5/5

Translation is ok.

My English is bad. Sorry for that. <<less
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MrJaxPL
MrJaxPL rated it
Breakers
June 17, 2017
Status: side story 1
Novel was good. Author probably wanted to make more chapters but he changed his mind and shortened the story.
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Story developing well to 200 chapter+ and then author decides to end the story faster and just skip to the end with some plot armors.

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Actually world has potential mb story of this MC ended but I would like to see another story in this world.
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MrJaxPL
MrJaxPL rated it
Arena
January 23, 2018
Status: c111
I like this novel very much. Story isn't that decent but MC is most likely like real person. He feels, live and mb isn't brillant person.

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Author made his skills like this while others learn how to use aura and other sh*t he just combine skills and get power ups

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Romance ? Actually author tried make MC good person I mean:

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When he left his girlfriend he feels guilty about this and think about her I don't know that he will continue being like this while 2 girls basically bitching around him we'll soon because there is only 80 chapter left or so with pace of translation mb in 2 years :D

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World ? I actually think world building here is not good. We have some kingdoms and races but what ?Most of it is worthless...

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For example MC used 1 year to revive the Tree of life he even made second one... Enemies just didn't paid attention to these things at all and after he made. Few trees of life and gathered elfs around they finally (I say finally because it took some time) got that their plans were destroyed by him. We have another thing converting guns to items 3k for super duper sniper riffle and he kills the corrupt examines like rabbits... Ohh rlly we don't want to influence the time flow but why not give MC power to bring technology to this world ? (why not?)

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I wonder what author was thinking when he was writing this novel.I quite enjoy this mb it's not the best but I like KR novels anyway. <<less
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