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Melfer
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Sword Spirit
July 17, 2016
Status: c14
Bad bad and worse. Bad version of martial world. Author bad at girlxboy romance.

MC is one of the biggest moron yet repeatedly lucky. Can't imagine reading over 1137 chapter of 'a moron is still alive because gets lucky over and over again'.

Was a lot of repetitiveness and the novel had just begun.
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Galactic Dark Net
July 11, 2016
Status: c15
Good idea for a story, delivery was bad.

Amateur work very contradictory. Would say one thing and then turn around and write the opposite in the same chapter or next.

A lot of things were not stated clearly. Think author tried to be funny a few times but really wasn't.

A lot of instances made no sense if one would take a few seconds and think about it or visualize it.

Just felt like he was pulling way too much out of his *** way too frequently so early in the novel.
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The Magus Era
February 5, 2016
Status: --
Author writes contradicting sh*t and stuff that makes absolutely no sense. MC is supposedly super strong and a genius but in reality he’s a retard dunno how he could have been the strongest in his past life with his IQ he should have died by the age of 5. Only read up to chapter 22 but the author and wannabe genius MC are killing what could have been a good novel
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World Defying Dan God
February 14, 2016
Status: --
The reason it got a 4.2 is because it was rated by retards just like most of the novels on this site as well as the novels the majority of fast translating translators translate. Decent idea, not too many obstacles, weak problems surface and the author tries to make the MC super creative and a genius yet he forgot he already gave the MC super op skills that would allow him to resolve the obstacleswih ease. On top of that the whole cultivation leapfrog is rather retarded as the mc’s... more>> growth becomes stagnant yet he can amazingly kill more and more people at higher and higher ranks then himself. It appears that the author doesn’t remember what he wrote the chapter before as he just makes up random sh*t that contradicts things he wrote in previous chapters. Overall, it had potential, author kinda killed it, but still somewhat entertaining as any novel worth reading is either translated by a super slow translator or caught up with the author as it’s still ongoing. <<less
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Wu Dong Qian Kun
July 7, 2016
Status: c307
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MC is retarded. Barely kills anyone and let's just about all his enemies live over and over again.

If you want to read a novel where you like to get annoyed that the MC is so dumb and the author portrays him like he's so smart and a genius then you might like this novel. Almost every chapter it's like "can the MC really be that dumb?"

"Can every character in this novel really be that stupid?"

Also a lot of things make absolutely no sense and at times contradictory.
"Does the author not think anything through properly and just pull random sh*t that makes no sense out of his ass?"

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Versatile Mage
March 3, 2016
Status: --
So far 14 chapters and I must admit it’s pretty bad. The author keeps trying to be funny but it’s not, he’s so busy trying to be funny that he’s just throwing in random sh*t into the novel without decent explanations or contradicts himself. And sorry but having 2 out of 7 elements being water and ice is just dumb.
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God and Devil World
January 21, 2016
Status: --
Pretty bad novel author contradicts himself a lot. The story is all over the place. The author uses a leveling game system yet has no knowledge of leveling game systems. MC is a complete moron.
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Harry Potter and the Rise of the Ordinary Person
April 4, 2016
Status: --
Read 2 ch. Not much to go on, however, imo it was just that bad. The author/MC keeps referring to himself in the third person, which if you can get past that, is kinda all over the place without being clear, such as how the MC time traveled yet digressed in age, assuming had a different family some other stuff (assuming his soul took over someone's body? And he lost his during his time traveling?) and then the author attempts to be funny in a few instances which again Imo... more>> just isn't. <<less
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The Amber Sword
January 21, 2016
Status: --
This novel is horrible although I've only read 5 chapters so far. First, the dumb author knows nothing on gaming yet is trying to write a novel on gaming. Second, he is retarded and makes girls with male names and boys with girls names. 3rd I guess he's Catholic or something cause he keeps having the idiotic sissy MC cry to a mother Marsha which is extremely annoying.
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Supreme Arrow God
January 24, 2016
Status: --
Read 10 chapters and had to stop. Cause it was so bad. Author keeps repeating sh*t over and over chapter after chapter. Also author keeps writing how great the MC is and sh*t but he's really just a care bearing noob. Reminds me of another horrible novel called Lu Xiaofeng where the author keeps talking about how awesome the MC is.
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Otherworldly Evil Monarch
January 17, 2016
Status: --
On chapter 34. Story has potential but author is killing it. Super short chapters, a lot of diolague, kinda boring, author repeats things over and over just changing the words yet same meaning. A conversation can span to up to 5 chapters which is ridiculous so early on. Feels like the author drags things on already cause he ran out of ideas about what to do in the story or added fillers already at the beginning of the novel.
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