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Magnussteffen
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Manuscript Screening Boy and Manuscript Submitting Girl
December 23, 2018
Status: epilogue
Really a great story, I was all tears throughout the novel. I'm glad it was only one volume, it had perfect pace and as Ao would have said it, "Interesting and didn't leave a bad taste."

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Even though the ending was very satisfactory and I know they'll get together in the future, I keep cathing myself wishing Ao would have used a cheeky line, like "I wont let our story end like Cyan and Subaru's."

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Magnussteffen
Nothing left for me to say that hasn't been already said. This is an amazing novel that really warms the heart, the MC is truly ordinary like us readers and if reincarnated, this is probably the way our lives play out as well.
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The World Online
May 7, 2019
Status: c246
Even if the story isn't a harem, it's still 95% females. This is definitely my biggest problem with the story, why so only women?!?

It's almost like the author thinks it's okay to throw in women everywhere, just because the army is filled with men.
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Lovely Belle
December 23, 2018
Status: c9
Talking plot, there isn't really any. Though this is smut, so 4 stars!

The story is really well written, aside from the fact that it uses repeating words a whole lot.

"Is this pleasureable?" ----- "Pleasureable...Y-Yes... Pleasureable... Pleasureable... V-Very pleasurable... Pleasurable... Pleasureable... This is very Pleasurable"

Like seriously, that is how some of the scenes are written. It's understandable, finding 10.000 words for liking the s*x is quite hard... It doesn't really ruin the storry but I can't give something like this 5 stars.

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Finishing this I just wish that she wasn't a married woman. My prediction for the future, is that either the husband somehow dies or they get found out. (Don't really want that to happen so uncle-san plz die :D)

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HeroxMaou
December 23, 2018
Status: epilogue
Haha, truly lovely. Why couldn't there be more chapter!?

The pace was quite nice and everything played out well. But why, just why did author-sama have to leave it like that!? I so want to know want happens next. Cicily.. "Urgh, I mean Cecilia" is so cute and I hate Oliver for keeping her to him self but since I'm not in the novel, he'll have to do want I can't. But DOES IT EVEN MATTER if I can't read about it *crying*. A light novel comes out with more story.

All... more>> in all great story and Cecilia is cute. <<less
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Coiling Dragon
December 23, 2018
Status: rwx's afterword
The novel has amazing story development, the pace is excellent, everything plays out astonishingly well and that beautiful ending!

I like most of the characters because of their unique personalities and quirky attitudes but then there´re ... more>>
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Alice...

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I hate her to the end of the universe and back again. I understand the reason she was brouht into the story but even after so many chapters I can't think back to the story without thinking of my hatred towards that.. THING!

The reason for me not giving 4 stars is undoubtedly because of the world background, in my eyes it's perfect and easily rises CD from 4-5 stars. If I wasn't because of
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Alice

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I would seriously consider giving 6 stars (if it was posible :P) <<less
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