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Divine Throne of Primordial Blood
June 16, 2017
Status: c59
Can't say it's catastrophic, but it's bad for sure. Good natured, smart, hard working MC get's randomly blinded by beggar saying he is too naive. WTF? Dude, MC is only 12, or smf, years old. What can you expect? What's more, beggar says that MC will get OP eyes after some time. In rl how naive you would have to be to believe that. Another minus is stupid side chars. How hard can it be to check if he is regaining his eyesight? All of them keeps waving their hands... more>> to check (facepalm). Third thing that annoys me is romance. It is nice idea with blind guy accidentally meeting beautiful girl, but there are almost no interaction. You don't get to know about the girl at all. And most annoying thing is useless info that you get to read in some chapters, for example about history. Author could add some of it then writing with related adventures or smf, but no, he choose it write all in 2 chapters. After 40 chapters you still don't find anything related with those chapters. So why write it so early if nothing will follow it?

All in all, in my opinion not worth your time, unless you don't have what to read anymore. There are at least 15+ better LN. <<less
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Great Demon King
June 16, 2017
Status: c314
Story is all over the place. MC too OP not with just with his plot armor, but all those teleports is really too OP. Another thing that is not nice is MCs maturity. Don't know how to treat his woman at all. Just no... DONT!
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Tales of the Reincarnated Lord
October 26, 2017
Status: c293
Started reading this novel yesterday, now at chapter 24. Story timeline is that MC came back from some mission in another place, met some friends in the inn, ate some food, slept, got new place to live and went to take some stuff from ex. F*cking 24 chapters for that and still not seem it will be back to real story. Most of the chapters is about history. I like to know some background about the MC and stuff, but why would you need to write half chapter about rats... more>> or 6 chapters about his ex. It's not like he will meet her much more. And even if he meets her, it is better to tell short stories, not dump all 6 chapter story in the start of the novel, when you need in get reader in this story to get intrigued. Don't know, don't know.... For now it looks pretty poorly written novel, but I will continue to read it, just because MC looks pretty intelligent and chill dude. 2/5

Okey, it started really really slow, but got it rolling and got better. Atm I am on chapter 293 and got some action, little romantic, much comedy. The kingdom building storyline is decent too, don't have too much of complains. Furthermore, how MC is not overpowered is commendable. I will rase to 3.5/5 If it won't get out of hand, it is good 4 for this novel. <<less
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Warlock of the Magus World
June 20, 2017
Status: c271
Really nice read, but novel sometimes gets "dry reading" feeling. Would be nice to get more romance and interaction with other characters. You know then characters named "Servant 1 (1-5) ", it will not end well for them. MC 10/10, but this OP AI Chip feels too OP. For example - how can it calculate how will the fight go if it didnt even saw any opponents skills?
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