I can honestly say I never gave a story a rating below 3 unless they absolutely deserved it and I feel like the author screwed up majorly. As an WIP Author myself, I can't help but think that this author messed up majorly, especially the part when the MC became a human with the race conversion skill. The MC was quite familiar with the race, especially since his avatar was human.
The fact though that he forgot Double Slash, a skill he was familiar with using due to him relying on these skills as his avatar was a human in the past just mind blows me. Like literally, he had to think of how the skilled work when it was used against him? Are you joking?
I can only say the upside of this story was the beginning which was right up until Chapter 60. The progression of his relationship with Valenor was nice, the pacing was somewhat okay, and the story itself was quite interesting. Of course, until the author decided to randomly add f*cking sci-fi out of nowhere, add angels who I'm pretty sure we're all familiar with is the Christian Gods angels, f*cking Metatron who I think might actually be from transformers, time travel, parallel world travel, and all sorts of shit. Especially since the MC decided to stay with what he knows best during the sci-fi world. Like really?
Who in there f*cking right mind would decide "Oh yeah, I'm just going to keep the same class at the end. It's not like the class Demi-Lich is pure f*cking evil and could most likely destroy my emotions completely." Seriously, what in the actual f. There were two other options, Golden Dragon and Golden Slime. If the MC was as SMART as before, he would've definitely gone with Golden Dragon since it's somewhat similar to his wife Valenor who herself was a Dragon. Not to mention they are powerful beings as well and the evolution of a Dragon would be quite interesting itself. The reason why he chose Demi-Lich before was that he had no choice.
I hate it when a story with great potential just ends like that. Also, if anyone noticed, Creation Magic was f*cking limited. Sure, the imagination is important, but you should know the man himself came from the Modern World. While Teleport and Levitate are amazing skills, he could've made an even better skill to deal with angels. For example, Holy Immunity would've been freaking great in that one situation where he fought Michael and the other Angels. A skill that can destroy magic itself would've been great as well and even if that doesn't work out or it wasn't able to be created he could've just created a physical skill that wasn't reliant on magic. All in all, this story was great at the beginning but went completely downhill. I'll come back to read this when the chapters are finished translating to edit this either giving it a one star up or another star down.