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Tsuki ga Michibiku Isekai Douchuu
June 1, 2017
Status: v6
This start so out with a really good read. The chapters are very concies I get the information I need to move the plot along. The main issues I have come up after vol. 3.

The first and biggest problem is the characters that spend half a chapter thinking about what is being said and then not actually talking.

The second is Asora I feel this is just a way for the author to get a break and write something that doesn't really tie into the story. The reason I say this... more>> is cause you rarely ever hear about the races town building etc outside of one or two chapters. Asora should have a bigger role in the story since its a whole new world.

Third is just a preference but man is the MC such a beta 90% of the time. He's a teenager so you would think he has hormones so you would think he would get angry or horny but nope he never gets horny (even though he has two super fine ladies around him) and he only gets angry if you insult his family that's it.

Fourth is the "real" heroes their just there for conflict in what the MC wants but what bugs me is the female hero. Why don't the MC and hero just talk it out and move on. The male hero just isolate him now cause you know he's causing problems for the future, once again what would I do.

Fifth if you make it to the second major battle it's baffling how it took what seemed like 10+ chapters when the MC can fight a God. This is like the demon battle on death March. This op character is having trouble fighting someone that isn't op. It's like a parent having trouble spanking their 5 year old cause the kid is giving left hooks. I understand you don't want to kill but come on man.

Pretty much I love the first few vols but as it goes on I start to wonder why doesn't he do this or that since he's as strong as a God. If he wanted to he could end the war and transport ppl to a new world that want to but nope he's just going with the flow smh. With all the unnessary text I ended up skipping over 300 pages each vol after vol three.

So I wouldn't recommend this to read after the 3rd vol

Ps I would wax mio's and tomeo's ass all day as a teenager <<less
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Rose in a Yuri Field
February 12, 2017
Status: c8
Very intersting premise. Guy turns into a hot lady that pretty much is the hottest lady in the world and has to help populate the world. So far it seems that MC has no problem with getting with women but how's it going to change when the MC has to be the catcher.
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Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou (WN)
June 15, 2017
Status: v2c2
The first vol. was good not great but good. The issues start with the second and on vol. The MC went from a outcast kid on earth to a bullied kid after being transported, then he gets betrayed. Sounds like the usual start to a bad boy novel. The problem is that I feel he has to many goods that should outweigh the bads into becoming a revenge I don't care if the world burns type of MC. The first vol. the MC had a reason to live (pretty much... more>> make it out of the dungeon alive AND MEET HIS CLASSMATES), but somewhere in between he decided I'm a BAD BOY now so I don't care. And that's right when I started to feel disconetted from the MC.

the whole rail gun and revolver nonsense needs a in depth explanation on how he knew how to make those weapons. The revolver barley gets a pass but the rail gun does involve science more science then he should know.

The Hummer and the Harley bike... Vol.2 is just going the distance I'm guessing vol. 3 will have airplanes and trains. As the weapons I need more details on how it's made and how he knew how to make it, not a 1-2 page explanation. Those vehicles are a big part of the story

My biggest problem with the story was vol.2 chapter 2. The MC meets a bunny woman that needs help and this MC sees the monsters has his guns and can end it just like he did with all the monsters he killed like 2 pages ago. NOPE MC is a bad boy now he ignores her cries and tries to drive off. I spent more time reading about the bunny woman begging and the bad boy ignoring her request than if the bad boy just killed the monsters. WASTING MY TIME.

I dropped it at that point, but if you can look past these type of faults I guess there's a story to read here about a super OP bad boy MC with big guns cruising around with his harem then read on man. If not I suggest you read something else.

P.S. I'll try to read it again once Im out of reading material cause forums say that it gets better after vol. 4 or 5 <<less
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Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken (WN)
February 16, 2017
Status: c201
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This novel was so good. All the way up until the whole yuki "tricks" the slime and becomes the ruler of heaven. What makes no sense is that the slime can think at light speed move at light speed and do a whole bunch of other stuff but he cant beat a almost ordinary human.
To me it felt like a cop out, I know that there has to be a heaven vs the world battle but it feels forced. What worse is that the slime was all gun ho about finishing this and brought a crew of demons that defeated army and couldn't stop this small 3 man group. I wanted to keep reading this but ill have to wait for the next arc cause im done with this hole yuki business.
I heard that the Light Novel had a change to this but in the end yuki becomes the ruler of heaven when he should have been taking out after the slime confronted him like teleport to him and wam/slash/bam job is done in all of 1 second.

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Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyusoukyoku (WN)
February 16, 2017
Status: v15c42
This is a novel that has a MC that is smart, patient, and isn't a d*ck. Along with a clear goal in mind (sure its a slice of life goal/not clear and far away). With the MC already being overpowered he is more concerned about making sure his close friends are strong enough to protect themselves which is cool. The MC seems to not have any danger like OPM and can even fly in space wield a sword that can make a crater in the moon but it isn't exaggerated... more>> or forced. One thing I don't really care for in the novel is the side stories that aren't with the Main group. Something that always bugs me about these Trans to a Dif World is that whenever they get space/dimension magic they usually if not always build some rustic mid evil type of setting instead of using their modern knowledge to create a modern place. Its not a real negativity just something that I realized. <<less
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