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ClearMadness
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Dungeon Defense
September 22, 2016
Status: v2c1
This novel started with a halfway interesting concept and quickly ruined it. The MC is somewhat refreshing and original but the story itself is completely obnoxious.

In particular, the story is ruined by decision windows. Every time the author feels the MC is making an important choice a window pops up in his vision that displays his options. It's the stupidest story device I've ever encountered in my entire life. The MC is not playing a game. He's walking around a fully realized world full of sentient beings. His options cannot... more>> be condensed into 2-3 stupid random choices. He can do whatever the heck he wants to do! Why would the author add these retarded pop ups? It's dumb and reading it made me feel stupider.

If the MC selects an option does he lose all control over his body and is he then forced to recite a prerecorded speech like in a game? If not, then what happens if he selects an option and then does the exact opposite? The author never bothers to explain this and I'm left with the impression that he is writing for people to stupid to question it. This is just one of the issues with this novel that left me scratching my head and wondering about what the heck was going on. It swiftly became impossible for me to relate to any character as I couldn't even tell if they were real or badly scripted NPCs smacking their empty heads against game walls. Don't read this unless you possess an incredible ability to suspend your disbelief and ignore plot holes. Even then, you're probably better off reading something good. <<less
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ClearMadness
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Sevens
May 7, 2016
Status: --
This story is simply one of the best on this site. It has real depth, a consistent story, mystery, and believable characters. It has a harem, but it's actually done somewhat believably. I can't recommend this story enough, especially for readers who are sick of stories full of lazy tropes and shallow random plots.
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Sevens Gaiden
March 26, 2016
Status: --
This story is terrible. I’m a big fan of Sevens, but this story does literally everything that Sevens does right completely wrong. The MC is utterly generic and the plot totally shallow. He just gets handed power without any of the depth and interesting parts that make Sevens great. Spare yourself some annoying spoilers and skip this if you’re a fan of sevens.
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