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Cameron
Cameron rated it
Youjo Senki
June 27, 2016
Status: v1c3
The premise and the characters are interesting. The events are also good but...

Too. Much. Info.

The author is dragging the story down by explaining everything. And I do mean everything. And he's not afraid to explain it again in case, y'know, he was unclear the first time.

It's a shame too. I want to know more about this world and the characters in it, but I can't handle it like this.
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Cameron
This is a light story. No depth and no hardship. The premise is nice enough but there isn't anything here to challenge the reader.

Nor is there anything that exists to challenge the protagonist. Even in terms of an all powerful MC there are methods by which the things important to that MC can still be put in danger. I'm not feeling it here. This feels like a cheap old anime plot where everyone is destined to be happy.

The author has missed an opportunity to show how the MC used his... more>> secrets and grew his power while young. This is a staple of these reborn OP MC stories because it's fun to imagine ourselves growing and using those powers while simultaneously managing that secret. Does the MC tell anyone? How do they react? How does he defend the secret? Does anyone figure it out?

Not here. This guy grew up and everything was perfect and sparkly?

Translation work is quite good however. <<less
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Cameron
Cameron rated it
Underground Dungeon
June 7, 2016
Status: c5
I feel like I'm reading a 4-koma with descriptions instead of pictures. The chapters are extremely short. No good for me, but maybe others will like it.
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