he just wrote a science book, word for word, who the hell even remembers the glossary of those books from high school
A girl named Lightning, seriously?
-MC development, is next to nothing, or maybe there is something, he deteriorated.
-Decision done by the MC is Dumb but the author is making it seem like it's the smartest move ever
-You'll see something build up, then suddenly, it vanishes, you'll be wondering "why the hell did that happen" and not the good way. He killed characters that could have built the MC, killed the characters that could have made his sisters shine.
-You can tell at the later chapter, the author is trying to make an antagonist, but it's not doing so well, he's rushing the problems to be solved without much explanations.
-The author rushed the "sisters" personalities to change so much, you can say they're completely different characters, well the characters that could have changed them were wiped out, it's like the author smacked the characters in the face with a bat, either change or die.
The MC should have been smart, he spent his last year collecting knowledge, but apparently, his sister that got resurrected as well, who was 3-4 years younger than him and hospitalized, is smarter than him, oh and she got better spec, he calls her a cheat after all, then his sister from the world he resurrected in, is apparently able to manage the territory, he could have done it behind the scene.
But nope, all he did was tell his sister to have the starving commoners to build a new mansion for him so they have a job instead of giving them food relief and using his knowledge to make products bring in income to his territory, and then start improving everything in his territory
He also had built a school to teach farmers children that got sold to slavery how to f**king farm, farmers children being taught how to f**king farm. And the author made them all women, cause why not.
The only thing that really happened in that school was the students got fairer and smoother skin, and his sister made a school uniform that creates a white beam of light whenever the students skirt would flip up.
still I gave it a 2 star instead of 1 star, because of the prologue and the synopsis, the translator did a great job as well.
Would be great if someone else takes a chance to writing a similar story, but that probably won't happen.
The village she was in started improving, what happens? She gets sold, the territory she got sold in is improving, what happens? She got kidnapped. The group that kidnapped her started improving, what happens? The bandit group left her to a friends territory that needed improvement, since they didn't have any magician. BUT the author didn't bother doing anything in that territory, and just went directly to school arc. The story stops there, since there's no more updates, I'll bet when the School Arc gets interesting, she'll run away and/or stolen by another country or something.
The MC lived 1, 000 years, 1, 000 years and he still act like a damn 13 year old with all kind of mental disorder regarding social aspect to the opposite s*x.
A man, that watched the world for 1, 000 years, claims to have no s*x drive, but every paragraph mentions something about the other s*x. and the MC mentions it himself! "MC: I don't have s*x drive, but she got nice boobs" something like that
A man that lived 1, 000 years, does not have a full grasp of his abilities, apparently, his aura, causes others to be s*xually attracted to him, or lose composure, peeing whatever. Like this bitch mentions he has no s*x drive, but in the first few chapter, his abilities seem to be focused on s*xual aspect.
A man that lived 1, 000 year and created subordinates, can't talk to a woman, oh that issue applies to his subordinates since they were created by him.
Not being able to talk to new people? I understand, he could've been using telepathy to speak with his subordinates, but NOOOOO, he can speak to other men just fine, and he seems to only have issue talking to beautiful women, (I didn't read far enough to know if he can talk to ugly or old women).
Also, because Shannon isn't #1