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Chaotic Sword God
May 23, 2016
Status: c465
Enough is Enough If I don't drop this then I can't help but help to think I am wasting my time reading this The never ending filler (Chapters that is irrelevant and just making the story longer) is very annoying. To many Plot Twist. The NO ROMANCE theme. To much its to much!

I drop after
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After The prince sent an assassin to kill MC. What did MC do? He let the prince go, since MC doesn't want to have a conflict against the prince country. I call that BULLSH*T! MC just destroyed 5 freaking Kingdoms! And he was afraid with one kingdom. The hell was the author thinking, He could have just given the prince a beating before letting him go! To much! I have enough with this whimsical author!


The major reason I hated this novel is how MC approach things. We see an OP MC that can destroy kingdoms! Then another part we see a very coward MC who can't do a thing! Then the Never ENDING Loop of killing here and there! There are times that MC status makes him invincible so I can't understand why MC is so coward at times!


To hell with MC disappointing the princess who waited for him for years just for MC to annul there marriage! The reason? MC is afraid since he has to many enemies! Still afraid after he can destroy kingdoms! And has the backing of a major Empire not to mention the two saint ruler who is MC's friend!
And how can I forgot to mention MC is beyond OP already! Still afraid? Seriously! Go jump on a cliff or something! After you killed lots of lots of people! Still afraid? Its not MC fault its the author way of writing!


Will I might as well read this again next year but right now I seriously don't feel like reading anymore. <<less
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The Magus Era
May 18, 2016
Status: c125
At first it was kind of decent remind me of a certain novel (Perfect World). The savage way of living and the simple plot looks decent
but as the chapters goes by the annoying copy paste scene starting to appear. What do I mean copy paste? It is when a scene that has happen in the past chapters appear in the latest chapter. It is so similar that the only changes are the place and some minor characters added.

What is more depressing is the never ending cornered MC. The annoying... more>> family of MC especially his father who keep on ignoring obvious thing which could have avoided various tragedy but because his father keep on insisting of the clan's priority now his clan is clearly disappearing and slowly gotten destroyed which is clearly can be avoided if he take actions. (So much for a Legendary leader)

What I like about this novel is:

MC little army of mystics, The Tree Man. The stone man. The nymph and so on.
MC little adventure every know and then (MC is still 10 yrs old)
OP MC is already common so its not really worth mentioning.

How the Enemies died brutally, but some things also quit disappointing how that annoying girl died so easily in 1 hit after all her plots and attempt to kill MC and His father


What I hate about this novel is:

The MC encounter powerful people befriend them and then left MC side. Seriously what's the point? Appearing before MC and then after they leave MC is then put into a life and death situation. (This has became a copy paste so expect a lot of scene with this sort of plot)

MC meet a girl same age but much stronger than MC and the girls father was the ruler of there place, and made MC her man servant. And what happen next? They got almost annihilated. The prostrating part MC got blamed? Seriously who is in there right mind blamed a 10 yrs old kid? At this point I already feel like not reading at all. Imagine after all MC effort saving the little girl when he return he saw his father got beaten up and his mother almost dying (its not really surprising since like I said the copy paste plot this is not the first time MC sees his father and mother got beaten)

After This the girl and the mysterious old man went back, Surprisingly not a single reward for MC! They just gone left disappear!

MC is always get cornered and often almost died. The obvious Enemy has never been punish, The father of MC always insist not to take action although he already know who the mastermind is.
As a result they are cornered again.

They send MC to get help, I was like WTH!? MC is just happily traveling and encounter another random thugs and beat the crap out of mc?

You see it once, Twice and in the 3rd time it got annoying, Father and Mother got beaten badly, MC and family always got cornered. Plot please move on with the copy paste sitting!

The new scene where MC ask for help, I no longer look forward to it
Reading almost 100 chapters of this with the repetitive scene which is like copy paste. Can you blame me if I don't expect anything new?


Well when I read this it remind me of the novel Perfect world but sadly it was world apart, my bad for expecting to much.

MC journey is really harsh, yeah brutally harsh. I still read it but maybe once a month if I ran out of novel to read. Like I said this novel is not something which you well look forward to for the next chapter.

Warning: For some odd reason the author love to see woman as slaves in this novel. Most of the time Woman are seen as slave and some even put prices on them. <<less
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Close Combat Mage
February 28, 2016
Status: --
I can understand the depression of others reading this novel
just Imagine our reaction after we read chapter 250

It was a complete waste of time reading this!

First The author focus to much on beautification, to the point I gave this novel a new title the Close Combat mage beautician (with all those face and body modification turning ugly things to beautiful beings)
2nd The age gap for MC and the plot of the story.. To much happen and MC was barely in his Teen. You can see a mature... more>> and scheming little child to the point it feel disturbing..
3rd The unnecessary build of characters and relationship (after you read chapter 250 you well realize what I mean), It means all characters the MC well meet well be useless and well be easily forgotten. So to anyone who well yet to read it don't expect to much to characters that revolve around the MC or you well get disappointed just like us.
Major Spoiler! Well its not really major considering the author said it was still a prologue..

The 36 Fire and Wind Girls betrayal and this girls was left untouched and was just discarded as if they never existed in the first place!

I believe that this girls is where MC spent Trillions of Money, Show them Tender Love and Care, and with out doubt the most chapter consuming characters was really actually trash and unnecessary, it left a bad taste to me. The agonizing part is after there betrayal the author sugar coat its words twisted it and say this girls never betrayed the MC. Still no matter what the author say.. This 36 girls spent more time reporting to the 4th prince than supporting MC, This girls even said the only reason they follow MC was because of the 4th prince order. If this is not betrayal then author has yet to feel being betrayed. At the end this girl was never been punish and was just ignored by MC.

The punishment of the 4th prince and his wife was actually a big insult to most readers as the author only shows 1 single chapter for it! Imagine the 4th prince has taken everything, Everything from the MC and yet the 4th prince punishment was just 1 chapter! I can only see a childish revenge from MC, at least author should let this person suffer more!

This clearly show the authors lack of comprehension towards revenge. And we can also see that in future development the author might make this kind of approach and well end just another waste of time to various readers.


and finally with the prologue ended (Chapter 250) and new journey open to MC I feel that it is just a waste of time continue reading since I can clearly see the usual thing where the author well just make a random loop in the story and maybe after chapter 500 all the characters well also be forgotten and the MC well move on to another journey.

As such this kind of story is not really for me as I love character Building and journey with companions is also good. But not only this novel discard comradeship it also ignore the very basic of friendship, you can see the author attempt to make this story of friends betraying MC but the approach seems childish and morally lacking. <<less
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Slave Harem in the Labyrinth of the Other World
July 6, 2016
Status: c215
I think most people who read this have some high expectation (especially when they see the harem part).
They failed to notice that this is a slice of life, It means it follows a day to day basis on how MC grow up into a new world (so technically its expected to be at slow pace). Actually there's a plot if you fail to notice it then its your lose not mine.

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MC was sent to another world got a certain legendary title (The Hero Tittle duh..) by accident.
Along the way he was force to choose between two paths (If anyone still remember the dream thing) It was to live a simple life in this new world or follow the path of a legendary hero in the past.

This is your average person we are talking about not some other MC who have some experience in novels, anime and etc. So we can't blame MC to be extra careful. Next is the coward part of the MC is a side effect when MC Mana is almost depleted which is normal in that world (when mana is near zero one well have negative emotions).

And while at it we must not forget that this Novel is called Slave Harem for a reason, and yet this can't be called a hentai novel which give to much details to sex. (People who over react on the s*x part has just super wild imaginations.)

Another thing is its not that the plot is not moving, base on the latest chapter a lot already happen. (MC already joined a secret organization and got himself an ELF is already a big achievement in my part)
(when we talk about slave having an Elf is a must..)


I guess some people just half halfheartedly read it and miss some minor details which is important in the story.
Although the dungeon exploring looks like a Loop which is repetitive but for me it isn't. There is always something new and if you fail to notice it then this novel is not for you.

I hated repetitive chapters and never ending fillers but surprisingly this novel is different. I have been following this since the very start and I can say that its one of my favorite novel. People who focus to much only on the s*x part of this novel serious something is wrong with you guys. There is more to this novel than s*x (moderate your wild imaginations or just read another H-novel there is plenty at Novel update just search for it)

And I say people has bad habit of putting to much expectation to any MC. The MC in this novel has Zero Knowledge in another world so comparing them to other MC with vast knowledge and theories from novel, anime and etc. Is kind of unfair. Those MC can have major achievements since most scene is already expected base on there fictional knowledge.
What we have here is an MC that has no idea where to start. So what if he got Hero stat epic skill and so on. He has no idea if this is good or bad.

I usually don't like speaking and comparing but when it involves certain novel that I love I can't help but react. Its not the novels (authors) fault if there tiny little brain can't comprehend and appreciate the truth about the story. But I hope they moderate there insult and bad impression towards the author and the novel.

Its because you don't like it doesn't mean others won't. And just because we like it, it doesn't gave anyone the right to downgrade the reader who love this novel along with the author.

This novel is great for people who love simple Living, expect a slow plot (Read twice if you think you miss something or find it repetitive, since its not)

The s*x part is just a little fan service, ignore those people who have to many to mention about s*x in this novel (This is a mature novel but not a H-novel who gave to much details on sex).

It might look slow pace but MC is a total newbie in new world stuff, his PR is very low, MC is not a coward but more of a overcautious type. What I love in this novel is how MC grow stronger along with the girls, He always focus his relationship to them and always do his best to improve them. He always try to do things on his own pace which look slow to readers but it can't be help since he basically have no idea where to start.

If you manage to appreciate this novel then your one of the few who see the truth about this novel. Its definitely a good read for my part. <<less
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Inferior version of http://www. novelupdates. com/series/the-man-picked-up-by-the-gods/

I say Inferior because the timing of events is so mess up. At least the novel above balance from store making and still with in the flow of the plot, but this thing is just *sigh*

The building a store thing is a little bit annoying. Recruiting staff explaining various things to sell (and it takes 1 whole chapter!)
Yup its boring....!

MC is OP? so what! what good is an OPness MC when what he did first was run a shop! It would be nice... more>> if MC was like an average person that badly needed money but in this novel MC is for crying out loud a Noble!

As of Chapter 21 there is no Clear plot of the story (I think there would be none in the first place)

Seriously I was excited with the school arc but what was that after the enrollment the ret*rd MC build a shop and start selling things!

*sigh* Yup this is one of those novel you would drop reading <<less
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Strongest Abandoned Son
June 12, 2017
Status: c113
Finally Drop after chapter 113


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The Desert arc disgust me

I have no idea what the hell the author think if you don't want a romance or any thing then don't even write it.

To hell the 2 girls went to a deadly desert just for the MC and when they finally meet it was like "Hey its you two, ok good bye" so annoying I was like GIVE ME BACK MY EXPECTATION, I thought this novel was different to the other novel this author written HELL NO! they are all the same Tragic MC with ZERO to EMPTY ROMANCE!


I am disgusted how the author use girls here to justify MC greatness they are like tools or decoration. I wonder if the author feel that is good for girls to just expect something to a man and by the end they are left behind and crush there expectation

What I hate on this novel is how the author make you think that MC and the girls has connection, you are in a false expectation that something will happen after the girls separated then search for MC and they meet again. And when they do MC was totally indifferent about them.. author why not let MC say to this poor girl.. who you?

There is no plot just your boring story where MC wanna get strong

and when you think there is ROMANCE on this novel TRUST ME there is NONE ZERO NOTHING EMPTY NADA...

So when you read MC meeting girls blah blah blah the ending is clear the girls are just decoration to waste chapters a huge empty and useless fillers of girls struggle to look for the MC and the MC was like WHO YOU? to them.

If you are a man who love to give empty promises or expectation towards a woman then this novel is for you...

BTW Author is amazing all his novel I already drop after reading hundreds chapters since its a boring never ending loop of

MC-->Want to get stronger-->Meet girls-->leave Girls--->Girls search MC-->girl find MC -->MC want to get stronger-->leave girls--->Girls search MC--->girl find mc-->meet girls... and so on... yup this basically sum the story and I was LIKE the GIRL has no reason or meaning on this novel but just a decoration to waste chapter... <<less
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The Portal of Wonderland
February 11, 2016
Status: c108
Rereading As I see Xianxiaworld has now plenty of Decent Editors

I was annoyed after reading 4 chapters. First the Story seems similar to the story of Arthur and Mordred (Arthurs Bastard Son from his Wicked Sister). The Novel is so annoying to read it feel like machine translated and an epic fail arrangement of words (But that was 6 month ago and it seems they have now decent editors)

After reading then I well reevaluate my review. As of Chapter 108 and yeah its really bad to the point where... more>> one can read 1 chapter in less than a minute (took me 20-30 sec)

First It lacks Direction of the plot (MC wanted to be the strongest?). As you read you well notice MC is here then there the ever changing scene. Second it Lacks Impact on Cultivation, MC is not OP but is hardworking to the point that MC was once a warrior, a mage, a summoner, and etc. Third its way to short, You are introduce something then the next thing its forgotten. You see MC is popular yet forever alone. Fourth lack of Enemies, It was a good battle when MC offended certain characters then after that it went blank. And Finally (To lazy to make a list) It lack ROMANCE! MC meet clam girl and was forgotten, MC meet another girl and was again forgotten, and lets not hope for another girl since it well also be forgotten.

When you read this you don't really need to understand everything since its as simple as it can be. It has to much repetition and there is no improvement in MC's part. When MC learn something, after a few chapters MC well again learn another thing and it well repeat itself. In short it is a total waste of time trying to understand this novel.

Well I just read 100 chapters but sadly it was not really improve on my first impression. The Translation is OK but the novel is just a big disappointment on my part.

It lacks the ROOT that wanna make you read it. I just feel I well read it but the desire to read more is empty.

The Good part is since I had a bad first impression and so I never did expect anything from this novel. So like I said some chapters can be read (at least for me) for just 20-30 sec. I feel bad for TL who translates this and to the Editors since I am aware how long it takes for each chapter. But I can't help it that is just how boring this novel is. (Still this is not my Final say since I am still reading this) <<less
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School Flower Versatile Security Guard
June 16, 2018
Status: --
No offense to BuckRodgers but comparing it to the novel "Beauty and the Bodyguard" is a BIG INSULT to the novel how the f*ck are they even similar when "Beauty and the Bodyguard" is a Tr*sh cough* cough* Garb*ge *cough*cough* novel

Beauty and the Bodyguard

  • MC is a masochist who love to get bullied by women with no touch attitude towards them who is always abuse by bad words.
  • MC who do assassination job for a hundred bucks because his master order him, a simpleton who has no mind of his own.
Originally I... more>> don't want to react but seeing that it was compared to that novel I honest to god want to depend this PLEASE for crying out loud never mention that b*llsh*t of a novel it will ruin a potential good novel

P.S. My real review will be after reading hundred chapters but so far novel is good deeper background and plot, Bad*ss MC and very OP but lying low to the highest level. Good relationship with women and so on. <<less
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It's annoying as hell reading this novel

It goes like this character A B and C in Chapter 1. Chapter 2 POV of B, Chapter 3 POV A and so on.

There is no sense on skill magic or whatever it's like I got this skill and I am amazing, kind of writing. The MC is annoying as you don't know if he is just being passive or seriously has no care. The surrounding characters are rather dull. I mean the MC mother took a whole chapter of POV and was left... more>> just like that. The relationship in this novel is rather miss up. Who in the right mind would isolate a child of 6 yrs old? And it was like I want you to be an amazing MC so let's make your life as tragic as possible kind of feeling.

And MC was like I am very OP and yet I want to lay low so people won't notice me cliche again. MC should be an expert but keeps on making childish and beginners mistakes so I was like what's the point of reincarnation again?To many repetitive thoughts the redundancy on each chapters are annoying.

Well it is a rather good novel if you can just stand the annoying random POV's and the popping of skills out of nowhere (The norm is you get skills from level up or learn it) this novel was like I got an amazing skill with out explanation.

I only give 1 star (.5 if it was possible) since like I said this novel annoy me like hell and that is just my own POV and has no intention to attack the translator and especially the author. I mean they are the most amazing people in this world lol <<less
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Beauty and the Bodyguard
April 23, 2016
Status: --
Note: This is a bias review anything I say that might hurt any real person is just a coincidence. This review is also posted in WEBNOVEL in case they delete it their I can always do a copy paste lol

As of Chapter 500+

One of my most hated novel, It is in my Top 10 Novel I should just forget and stop reading. Then again I hated this novel and I think everyone knows why but for the sake of reading I can still read this I think. My first impression... more>> about this novel is horrible, seriously what kind of an assassin that is so poor and idiotic. The MC is clearly a masochist as he love being insulted and downgraded by women as shown all over the story. Clearly their is a very lack of understanding when it comes to Romance. And this novel is OVERFLOWING with MISUNDERSTANDING scenes. Their is no HAREM so far but If their is then it is just to much B*llsh*tting at this point the last thing you want in this novel is a harem.

The Main Character is the biggest loser of all in this novel. He is being downgraded by every women he meet. He clearly has skills but the author make a story where just to show case the AMAZINGness of the MC which is very idiotic and bland. For example a case that was not solve for ages and MC just solve it easily. A problem that big CEO and blah blah can't solve was just solve by the MC so easily. It is so idiotic that main problems in the story are being solve EASILY by the MC. Take that part where the 2 b*tches was kidnapped, The father is self proclaimed powerful business man his right-hand man is a self proclaimed powerful at first the author SHOWS their attemp of saving the Kidnap b*tches and wasted many chapters of this and that by the end of the day MC save the 2 B*tches with 1 chapter alone in the most IDIOTIC way. This clearly shows that the author just want a MC save the day theme which is very very very BORING and IDIOTIC!

Now lets talk about the girls in the story, I wanna first mention the 2 B*tches whom was introduce early in the story. I seriously find them Horrible to the point that reading them is like chewing broken glasses. I seriously start to question the mentality how this kind of characters are being created. I seriously hated them and often skip the part where they appear since I often just read idiotic line of this and that. Yet despite not reading them you won't really miss anything. As for other girls they are very much one sided, They appear here and their without follow up especially that police women, she only appears if the author feels like activating the MC save the day option. The only decent girl so far was the MC POTENTIAL girlfriend although her only flaw was her paranoia but that was justified because of the experience her best-friend encounter. But the author seems love to troll to much and even this girl is just in the POTENTIAL girlfriend line and so far not the official partner of the MC in the story. So far I feel like author plan to make a BL story as almost every girl in the story dislike the MC. They might have a few crush on the MC but the HATE is overflowing to the girls. The author might wanted to have a Tsundare type of character but all I can say is sad*st women all around the MC.

As for the Villains of the story. They are a Masterpiece actually the author made the villain here so idiotic that I can only praise them this much. Imagine a villain that appear in the early 10's chapters now good news you can still see the same villain appearing around 500+ chapters later or more. Was he a big time boss enemy? No for crying out loud this villain is just a small time minor enemy yet keep appearing here and their doing idiotic stuff and being highlighted like it's the end of the world. On the other hand BIG TIME villains are being thrown behind the scene like some shadow or something. The most Idiotic part is this Villain are being defeated easy especially if author activate the MC save the day option. Imagine a nonsense chapter of enemy planning this planning that, force reading enemies POV doing this and that. Forcing you to read to much b*llsh*tting of enemy side. Then author activate the MC save the day option and booom all the nonsense defeated in the most idiotic way.

Why this novel is trash summary? (it's a bias POV from me)

To much Dragging (even filler chapters paled compare to this novel)
No Important development all plot is going in circles in a never ending repetitive loop.
To much explaining this and that. A chapter can be sum up in 1 - 2 sentence.
Villains are very idiotic to the point that you even question your own definition of a villain characters.
MC save the day option (you can notice author are repeating this skill all over the story) If only he can save the story in an epic why but sadly the way he save the day is very idiotic most of the time.
The Female characters are TRASH especially the 2 B*tches.

and so on... <<less
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If you are an Overlord fanatic then never read this novel you will hate it and comment like others that this is another riff off pirated or something from overlord.

There are many novels out there with the same familiar or similar setting this include this novel. People may say that this is copying overlord but like I said that only for overlord fanatics. Since they love overlord anything that has a shadow of it with out a doubt will be judge by them as horrible.

But if you like overlord and... more>> watch it for fun then you will enjoy this novel.

Same as overlord MC was drag to another world with all his in game cheat that includes all the npc he created but unlike the overlord I like how this open minded way of thinking as going with the flow. I can say that what overlord doesn't have I found it on this novel.

Do not base the novel with the title since so far the title is misplace or it has nothing to do with the novel so disregard that. Same with the novel description its is plain B*LLSH*T.

In other words just imagine overlord x harem x comedy. The plot is not that deep and simple I rather read this kind of setting without to much deep scheming or political B*LLSH*T in it. The npc are also simple yet they manage to follow the I am so loyal attitude.

It's early for me to rate this but so far I enjoy reading this kind of novel. <<less
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Bakaleaf rated it
April 28, 2017
Status: --
I don't really know why none of the reviewers ever mention

WHY!? A 5 yrs old kid is being hated!?

I see so many spoiled little children but then again they are technically LITTLE children, I don't like how to author have a very bias view to the point it is pretty ridiculous. In the first place a 5yrs old kid being hated by everyone including his parents and still mentally able is questionable, and he never ever question this oddness. Well I am reading this since it is translated by a... more>> trusted translator but the early chapter give me some creeps. Imagine a 5 yrs old being hated by everyone!

I am still reading this but I just feel like shouting this question out loud as I read the reviews and no one point this out. A more detail review later after reading a hundred or more but I don't expect much as I really feel weird.

Yeah my first impression when I read this that this novel is weird or at least the mind set of an author where he can easily write a novel where a 5yrs old child is hated and bullied by all including his parents.

Do forgive my sudden rant lol Like I said I needed to shout this out loud lol <<less
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Tranxending Vision
May 16, 2018
Status: c64
This is my review so far, First and foremost the MC of this novel is a G*y no offense to other G*ys out there I respect you guys!

This is one of the weirdest novel I read so far this year let's first talk about MC

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MC is a hard working handsome (since the author said it) brother who support his sister so she can go to college. (Will talk about the sister part later as she is none existent so far in the novel). Take Note after MC got his mysterious eye power he became a pervert that can see through female cloths (yeah every guys dream skill) while the eye has other abilities so far this peeping skill is mostly use in this novel. Second their no fighting scene so far where MC do commando and hand to hand combat someone, surprisingly their is a lot I mean a lot of face slapping. I mean bro if you have argument with other guys is it really normal to slap him I dunno should you punch him or something so why the slap?Age wise MC do act like mature but he is most of the time act foolishly like a high school virgin seeing boobs for the first time (I do remind you about his eye ability) I have no idea what the author wanted but he is like repeating all this useless action despite seeing girls nude because of his eye. Maybe an innocent reaction is good if he see it for the first time but doing it every time he see a nude girl is like asking your self, MC are you really a man?


Another part of this novel are how the women are being introduce it seriously weird


First lets talk about the none existent sister who was spoken I few sentence before she went to college and was never mentioned ever again.

Then we have a childhood friend who act like a big sister who Bullies MC every now and then, another part which annoys me is the author has no clear indication if this girl has a love interest to MC or not, and MC always act like a virgin boy who first saw boobs when he saw her naked. I mean he often use his eyes to peek at her so why the hell are you still not use to it in the first place don't use your eye on her to peek lol. So far their is no indication of romance between the two just a good old older sister bullying MC while MC look at her naked can sum the relationship between the two.

Another one is the mysterious girl who always save MC she appear every now and then just like a ghost and solve most of MC problems so far, she is like a female version of plot armor.

The archeologist girl who I thought would be interested in MC but again sadly MC has no interest in her what so ever, their was a part where the girl was drag somewhere and MC was like I am not interested with her and don't want to be a 3rd party so he let her be, I was like what the hell and you still call your self a man?

The mc's first crush a certified sl*t who sleep with anyone with money, she tried to seduce MC in sleeping with her at this point we can see MC is not a man so I assume you can guess what happen next MC refuse her every time. At first I was confuse why MC interested with her even knowing his sl*tty life style but I see now MC was not interested with her as a women.

The female CEO who MC help by the end of the day she left (I was like girl you are just wasting chapters!) and MC was like who you attitude and let her be. She gave MC money and that's the end of their story. Feel like flipping table their relationship so far was the strongest and highest potential of have a romantic outcome and author just trash it with one chapter. All this chapter of blah blah blah between her and MC became garbage in your memory that was deleted and no longer has any relationship in the story. I was like F*ck if you are planning to trash why you make it like MC and her has future when you just delete her character at the end. At this point of time I really feel like stop reading this B*llsh*t novel.

Their are other girls but they are not worth mentioning at the moment, just most of the girls here are either to seduce MC (appearing to MC naked, drunk or drug) and MC manage to save his chastity every time and reject them. Majority of the girls are so far goes in this pattern.

Girl's in trouble -> MC save the girl -> Girl seduce MC --> MC reject the girl

up to this point I already guess that MC won't have any other love interest in this novel after reading a hundred chapter I might as will drop this

To sum this novel up MC is a closet pervert who use his eye most of the time to peek girls nude, and as a big contradiction MC has no interest in women. I seriously have no idea what the author is thinking why make a scene where MC must look at a girl naked (note that he can control if he want to see a women naked or not) when he has no interest in women?


I don't recommend this novel it was interesting at first but authors weird fetish and weird relationship of characters makes me who read hundreds of novel daily confuse and gives me the feeling of wasting time reading this

forget it decide to drop this novel on spot made me realize after reading a few review that it will get worse later on so it's a big waste of time reading it might is will look for another new novel to read.

No offense but the novel is not really that bad if you ignore MC relationship with women it has a new feeling since some expertise are being presented which is familiar in the real world, it's just this novel is not for me so I apologize for my bias review as it only reflect my emotion as I read the novel and hope will not influence other reader in a negative way. <<less
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The Boy Who Swore Revenge On The World
April 24, 2018
Status: c7
I barely read it and I think this novel is good as long as I can ignore the NTR part

Seriously I love how this novel keep on attracting hypocrite people lol what is justice that title already said he want revenge against the world not one person not one organization but against the world! So technically speaking all is his enemies which makes this simple and straight forward.

I love how the church is being introduce I mean the all is evil except us setting I always love to read how... more>> those righteous people pretend that they are good since they worship god and all their evil acts can be justify by a single word in the name of god lol

I'm looking forward reading this novel although it's cruel and ugly but novel like this is one which is so similar to the real world and only a hypocrite will bad mouth this novel lol

contrary to what others said this is really a good novel, despite the annoying POV of other characters at least they are not some random people who will die the next chapter.


It's not particularly about them being pitiful or whatnot. The country won't be able to function if there are no people working. If it becomes so, food and so forth won't come in as well. And at that time, what will happen is..... Liscia will get angry. This fellow, she's really annoying when it concerns the meal. Because the economy won't function if we kill too much, I also have to consider about such things.
-chapter 32


Note that this novel is about fighting against the world so the MC is evil if see him evil but if you think about it if you just dispose of your hypocritical way of thinking I think MC action is justified as he technically hated humanity.

I don't think any person who suffer torture and heal cycle all the time by the so called church of light, then got stab and betrayed by the people he live in all his life and they even kill his mother in front of him can still be called sane regardless of how he kill innocent it is only one's own point of view, when a murderer kill, people only see that he killed someone and people judge him guilty but they fail to see the reason why he commit such act.

This is not an avenger story nor is it a story of revenge this is about how evil is created out of good intention. This is about how beautiful being evil is because of the cruel reality of how good people act. In other words this novel is for hypocrite people who always shout "you are evil" and "you are bad" yet their action is much worse than that. <<less
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With OP MC comes with problems that can't be solve by OPness

but this novel doesn't have a counter for the OP MC which make it boring, It's more of a slice of life where MC spend his time in the most boring way one way or another.

There is no plot atm moment which won't make you think what might happen

The abnormality of MC is unlimited which consider him in the realm of OP yet sadly that is the only thing and there is no more. I was expecting about a... more>> romance part but oddly enough I can't expect this novel being near romance as MC just SLEEP SLEEP SLEEP and did I already mentioned SLEEP! to become strong...

To sum it up this novel is boring as hell for me I don't know about the others but I easily read chapters so fast and yet I can still ask why the hell did I read this. <<less
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Castle of Black Iron
May 3, 2017
Status: c7
After reading a few chapters this novel is not for me to read

First is the level of vulgarity I admit that most novel can get as vulgar as they could be but surprisingly my first impression was what a vulgar novel

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15 yrs old student Masturbate in the classroom? MC explaining about underwear in the first chapter? A random teacher who suddenly propose in the gate in front of many student? And the worst part the setting is in an all boy school


I admit that the whole mature thing doesn't suit my reading habit and this novel I can feel a depressing atmosphere which is I want to avoid since I already have enough depressing situation in real life as reading is one of my fun habits.

My review is technically one sided and should not be taken seriously as this is one of those moment that I thought I found a good novel just to realize that it is not for me to read <<less
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Bakaleaf rated it
Atypical Reincarnation
April 18, 2018
Status: c203
It seems I'm not the only one who want to shout out loud about this novel

Like what most people said it started good AT FIRST everything was normal then all hell break loss and yeah it became one of the most trash *cough *cough hated novel on my list. Ridiculously stupid MC, even an idiot MC pale in comparison against this novel MC. Of course idiot MC are very common now a days but like I said calling the MC of this novel as an idiot is an insult to... more>> the word idiot it self. Even the word TRASH can't be describe to the MC of this novel.

So anyway MC of this novel is created as a hypocrite and was the very definition of being back stab. Out of nowhere everyone just feel like backstabing the MC so yeah the word backstab is common in this novel.

Another thing is author love to troll when it comes to relationship you see many potential partner but it is a ZERO NONE NOTHING of them comes into being.

Reason for DROPPING this novel! Spoiler below


I already survive reading 100 chapters of blah blah blah where MC remain 6 yrs old all the time. I though that I have read the worst part that this novel has to give but after 10yrs have pass and MC is like around 16yrs old the worst has yet to end.

Every one keep on betraying MC as it is normal the disgusting part of this novel is how good people turn bad with the most stupid and ridiculous reason. And now it became pretty much PREDICTABLE. I mean if MC meat good people (girls included) they will betray MC 100% guaranteed! reason of betrayal? the most idiotic reason of all time.

What OP MC his still useless and is barely alive because of plot armor, It means for example a huge meteor drop above MC and MC will Die 100% but because of plot armor the meteor got hit by a random stone before hitting MC and for some idiotic reason change direction, just like that MC is ALIVE.

Another thing is that gather force something YET MC always go on SOLO so what the hell is the purpose of the force he gathered when he was 6yrs old? NONE NOTHING it's a USELESS force

@chapter 173 the r*pe part I almost vomit how awful this novel is... To think the author introduce a girl blah blah blah then just get r*pe at the end! GIVE me back my expectation for the girl! seriously MC is Trash and useless as of chapter 173 that is 2 girls DOWN seriously at this point I ain't surprise if his wife also get r*pe and daughter get killed this is how useless the MC of this novel...


You been warned! My reason for reading this is because I am looking forward of the most ridiculous end this novel is the opposite of the best has yet to come. Since as chapters are added the novel become more trash and the MC became more useless.

The worst has yet to come? read hundred chapters? B*tch Please there is more much worse after 200 chapters. Since this novel has yet to hit my bottom line like NTR part so it's still readable to pass time.

Atypical B*LLSH*TNESS I just feel like I wasted to much of my time reading this d*mn novel so I officially drop this novel buried it under my graveyard list hoping to NEVER encounter nor see this novel ever again

As of Chapter 200 (although I its 202 I decided to close 201 and 202 since I was like wtf in chapter 200) If you still read this pass chapter 200 then I am amaze on how you can ever read this novel bow down to you who can read pass chapter 200 as for me enough is enough to much B*LLSH*TTING on this already beyond my bottom line.


As of chapter 200 remember the good old village that MC was save where He left his good old wife and daughter.. guess what? It got destroyed and wife and daughter got capture. So lets flashback a little can this situation be avoided? hell yeah in the first place MC with enemies left and right how the hell did he left them their! I was not that shock just annoy, I just read that girl got r*pe and now this? like I said author has to much B*LLSH*TTING in this novel.


MC in this novel are what you call your typical A**H*LE where he is so arrogant fight enemies left and right with out carrying of consequences because plot armor can save him anytime and the damage is taken by everyone in his surroundings.

To sum it up this novel is about MC with OP plot armor MC survive because of his OP plot armor everything about MC why he still alive is because of the OP plot armor, and another thing is the TRAGIC fate of people around MC who doesn't have plot armor so they die get killed blah blah blah because they don't have plot armor with them. This is the never ending cycle of this novel it is much worse than your typical copy paste scene or any filler since Plot armor is what makes the MC invincible...

You have been warned worst novel I read this year although not the 1st rank but it's part of my top 10 novel I will never read again!

Since this is the last time I'll be here let's put my own version of description


Our protagonist was retarded adult in his late twenties, who had crossed dimensions into a world of cultivation. However, he was sent into the body of an infant (if you call 2yrs old an infant well no comment) when the transcendence happened. Our story begins a few years later, when both his parents died to an ACCIDENT! it is a f*cking accident and he was the only heir to his clan, at six years old. Watch him grow as an epic legendary retarded useless worthless human and a cultivator who has invincible plot armor as he offends enemies left and right who desire his fortune (because his f*cking showing off his treasure left and right) and destroy his influence in the new world!...


finally after this I will, no I must forget that I ever read this novel... <<less
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Bakaleaf rated it
Red Packet Server
June 6, 2017
Status: c84
I give it 5 star since I love to read a novel that makes me thinks of possibilities

To many novel now a days are just to blunt and boring with the repetitive plots and predictable outcomes not to mention the never ending filler and trash chapters.

1st Let's Ignore the Harem part I am not one of the hypocrite readers who denies and say they hate harem yet they still read it. What this novel have that made me interesting is the mix of god and human. Take MC for example... more>> an idea just made me think WHAT IF MC is not really a mortal? That make sense and explain why he got invited in that chat group as most reader who read novel such as this can tell that some gods tend to reincarnate and forget most of there past until they reach a certain realm. To many What IF in this novel and that is just one of the example that make this novel interesting. I also love the balance on how the author represents the girls in this novel. Not the old classic harem where all girl should reunite out of no where. The girl here has decent character build which we can enjoy reading. To little to None Filler that makes you wanna read this daily.

The plot is a big mystery? Well that is if you don't expect that the outcome is this and that still it should be good enough to manage to outlast the story.

The biggest flaw of this story is the lack proper setting, for once we have an amazing MC yet you can't help but say why the MC is amazing? The backing or support characters are a little bit not clear as MC interact with some people every now and then. And there has yet to appear a really decent enemy that can threaten the MC.

I rarely give 5 star so I can guarantee this is a good novel to look forward for.

for the readers who give below 3 star

I can't help but notice that the comment was base on the MC being arrogant and the harem part. I feel pity as to this people is reading and can only see HAREM? This shows how hypocrite of a person they are.. I mean if you don't like harem why the hell do you even mention and explain this and that like a pro. If you really HATE harem tag genre then STFU and stop reading lol.

remind of a bunch of lolicons saying that this and that are pedophiles and yet they are the only ones who notice the pedo part as the majority of the readers can't even tell which part is being pedo lol.

Next is MC being arrogant, This is an old and really ridiculous reason of assaulting an author. Which person is not arrogant? Wake up reality is all humans are born arrogant. Humble? Is a word use to submissive people who need to vow down like a dog to impress someone and you really think people would read a novel like that? MC should be superior he is called main character for a reason and you want him not to be arrogant? And yet when you read a lame MC with down to earth humbleness you then shout out loud! Why the hell is this MC like that? Lol such a paradox.

Sadly to rate this novel below 3 just for that Harem Tag and MC being arrogant and still have the shame to review is really pitiful, yet it can't be help.

Like I have the right to do a review this people can also say anything they want. I know since I often say my bias opinion yet I don't force people to believe in me. <<less
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The Secret of the Seal
August 2, 2018
Status: c66
First Impression for the novel is it's quiet readable let thumbs up for the TL now about this novel I was glad at first I thought I found another unique one but soon felt disappointed, well that's nothing new from reading hundreds of novels with the same theme.

Things I dislike so far

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The MC was either a retarded or an idiot (but that is the norm for most MC) While the from heaven escaping to the mortal realm made it interesting, as I read I discover that it was another same good old boring plot. First MC's Identity should be unknown but was pick up by a woman (plot armor) and strange thing no one question him. Another things is MC pretending to be weak, while its a good plot but I feel like it's over use for novel with this kind of setting. I mean unless a person is a retarded and an idiot they can notice MC is OP but with the authors power no one notice a thing. For example MC defeating 2nd and 3rd strongest girl in class and 1st strongest was like he use a cheap trick (I was like yeah right).

The characters in the novel so far are useless, they are like wasting their rule to much. For example MC was suppose to be a useless young master so why the hell no one notice MC change compare to the old young master. Then you wanna foreshadow it that that young master is still out their alive somewhere? (To hell with that) The leader of the clan already favor MC and wants to earn MC favor but he still let other member of his clan look MC as trash. Regardless if MC want's to hide his status to others as the leader of the clan he should prevent such behavior.

The girl are being evenly divided by love and hate that it also look stupid. One girl is obsess towards the MC another one hated him to death. But don't you find it strange if a person hated you that much he/she will be the first to notice any change and yet this girl remained the same.


To sum it up I can't rate it yet because I still find it interesting regardless of my rant but this interest will fade fast because I read 100 different novel here with almost the same setting. So it's up to the story if I can still continue reading it or not to early to decide to give up who knows it will drastically improve later. <<less
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Bakaleaf rated it
Eternal Reverence
June 21, 2018
Status: c37
I rated it 2 because their is nothing unique so far although I read only very few chapters I can still tell after reading hundreds of similar novels like this how bland this novel is.


Similar novel like this

    • MC got weaken for what so ever reason got mock and ridicule with no end by his own clan.
    • MC fiancee broke their engagement and the fiancee clan also has a fall out with MC's Clan.
    • Out of nowhere Plot Armor activates and MC's OPness are unleash.
    • MC is fighting major clan becoming enemies for the slight idiotic reason.
    • Betrayal from some clan members who is jealous of MC's talent

When I said Unique part was missing is...

    • NO ROMANCE what so ever the MC's love life is as plain as a plank of wood.
    • NO guidance from any legendary granpa's or grandma's
    • NO moral support from supporting characters (yeah no side kick's)
    • NO epic background (No foreshadowing of epicness)
    • NO epic schemes or plot the enemies is like puppet being program to fight the MC

and so on.. (it's still to early to judge this novel but god forgive me it was a really boring reading.


No offense but this novel is not for me, just a bias review from me but please forgive me when I say that it was one very very very boring read... (I was reading this out of pure curiosity I love reading this kind of novel but that is if their is something unique or different from it which make it interesting)

I did my best forcing my self to read up to ch37 but I almost poke blood


I mean where the hell did sport man ship go it was discarded by the author MC's family was thrown away by their own ancestor (seriously the most epic plot except I read this like hundred time before) They are like fighting a f*cking tournament and yet by the end I was like what the hell is the purpose of that tournament? MC got 1st as expected but people who got trash by MC still manage to enter via backdoor (and again to hell with this cliche plot) so MC being number one doesn't make sense at all.

And what's worse about this novel is the f*cking rating of bones I was like can you stop mentioning about bone's! 2 star bone 3 star bone star what so ever It is really a waste of words! It's already annoying enough to read this about MC's enemies then even some random character A B C and their BONES is still f*Cking highlighted what the hell is this abnormal obsession of BONE rankings! And author was like insert some line that even normal bones can become amazing but for F*CK sake stop mentioning BONE BONE BONE! good this is the most hated word I have today Every chapter has like Bone star this and Bone star that!

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