I was hoping and praying that the author would either make princess Katy die off or just forgotten about, because of all the talk about her being pierce's Wife, so I was thinking that maybe, just maybe he could suprise me, by making an interesting twist, but... nope. Everything happened exactly like I thought it would. More 'Hero saves the beauty" bs
1. Around the 300s 400s chp the MC just doesn't feel like he did in the beginning. It's Like he just lost his soul if you ask me. He's just different but not in a good way.
2. It's literally the same format in every arc which people have already pointed out.
3. Every time there is any progress in the relationship between the MC and his "Lovers" he has to leave at exactly that moment and it's annoying asf.
4. There is never any real feeling that the characters are in danger. It's cringy to watch his friends be bullied and on the verge of death over and over again and him coming to save the day. It's not interesting in that we know nothing Is gonna happen to them so it's just stupid.
So the first thing I noticed, that Made me think WTF, was how the humans are struggling to survive in the world. So they formed this big community, but they are only allowed to use that community's soul technique thing, which means the MC has to hide his technique. which makes no sense to me. Why would you care about something so basic as a qu gathering technique when your struggling to survive anyway?
theres other instances of stuff that makes no sense, but I'm too lazy to go through them all.
So now to the reason I don't think I can continue this LN.
Ok so there's this girl who you meet early in the LN, and a couple chp after you meet her she gets possessed by this ancient demon. (She's basically sacrificed by her clan) and her and the MC were close. At first I thought this was new and interesting and was kinda excited to see how it would play out, but all my hopes led to nothing but disappointment... So the MC can't say anything to anyone because the girls clan is super powerful which made sense because he was only a weakling so I didn't mind too much. But the chapters I'm on now the MC just had a major battle with the demon so not only does she know that he knows who she is the clan behind her is gonna know that he knows now, but because the MC is so strong the humans are suspicious of him while that just think the girls abnormal strength is how it should be because of her clan. It just makes no sense how the humans can't tell who she is. She literally showed her spider soul thing during the fight. Not to mention how the demons are known to be able to turn into humans so you would think they would have a way to tell if she's real or not, but nope she just walks around with no problems while everyone suspicious of the MC. While he tells NO ONE. It's like they already know that you know of there treachery why would you keep hiding it? Lost a couple brain cells.
So first off I wana talk about the translation, idk if the translators are bad or the author is just terrible at math and has no concept of time period. So he starts the story as a 17 year old and about 40 months later (real time) he's still 17 which makes no since. (Not including training room time) and the constellations are extremely confusing especially at first since he never explains them until later in the story. Like he never explains anything really so expect a lot of confusion.
2. Plot is just not good.
Ok so the MC is supposed to save his girlfriend from danger in a super far away constellation that she managed to get to in less then 3 months but he has been trying for like a year at this point, he has nooo urgency it's laughable. He just goes to every nearby place and gets into trouble for months at a time while his girlfriend the one he is "soooo" desperate to save is just left to rot.
3 the companions.
The one thing that I really like about this story is how the MC actually has companions that travel with him and we see growing and fighting together.
4 the fights.
The fights are not the worst but not the best. They don't drag which I LOVE but a lot of them are just not interesting.
5. The MC.
So the MC is basically a strong idiot he's like Goku but not as nice. He pretty funny which is nice.
6. Reason I'm dropping
The reason I'm dropping is simple, the author didn't really think anything through. Way to many plot holes and they just keep pileing up and I'm sick of guessing about stuff that we should know. Example (We don't know what rank any of the companions are or the enemy's). But the thing that got to me the most is how the MC all the sudden has a split personality where it's basically 2 people sharing one body and it's just do stupid smh.
like the chapters I'm on now he just got this super op mask that basically allows him to do whatever he wants without any repercussions, not to mention how annoying that bs change your appearance trope already is.