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I’m Sorry For Being Born In This World!
September 30, 2018
Status: c68
Quite a good novel but not the enjoyable type if I would describe it it would be like a movie. Based on how the story goes it's like a semi tragedy story and a little bit of romance not really the main focus. The yhing is that when I was at the 50 and above chapter it turned the scenes confusing for me when suddenly something happened without me knowing how and didn't get explained at the later part of the story but it's a good story.
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Manuscript Screening Boy and Manuscript Submitting Girl
September 18, 2018
Status: epilouge
Excellent story. A story having a good plot and story flow it maybe short but it's perfect the way it is unlike other novels which is tailored completely for the readers which is a double edged sword or so Ao would say. Having a long story is good for the novel and for the industry because of the profits and sometime having made the story too long will ruin the whole novel or series which is disappointing so as I was saying a story should have a well planned plot... more>> which follow a good story flow and end it when it should end and not extend it until it ruins the whole series. This story is an example of a story which is good as it is even if it is short it stays true to the objective of the story which is the love story between a screener and submitter which is pretty interesting in itself and it achieved it's purpose
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of having them be together in the end.

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The story is pretty interesting. While I'm reading this story I was nervous most of the time well more like a continious suspense. I recommend it but it's still not perfect there are some parts that are lacking a little but I don't regret reading it. I don't wanna spoil the story so my review ends here.
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