I tried to push through but by chapter 5 I was done. It reads like a bad Marie Sue. The way the main character obsesses over her "cheat" with the rambling inner monologues, forced excitement, and pointless info dumping gives the impression that this story is a personal 'what if?' Self insert fantasy. As a 5yo who supposedly only received incomplete, peripheral memories to have a strangely complete memories of herself to the point she's obsessing over her past age is just out of place. The author just over-writes the... more>> old personality with the new while claiming otherwise. Mary Sues can be fun but they are frequently bad. The story also hits every old cliche without doing anything new or memorable. If you're unfamiliar with the tropes it might not be so bad but for anyone else this story may be agonizing. What makes it worse is the endless amounts of useless info dumping. One could argue that it's world building but it's all obvious, unoriginal information that's pulled from every generic fantasy trope. The is no need to explain what a fairy, demon king, elf, etc is if you're just going to use the generic version. The main character is also not very bright. This is a first person story. More time is spent on the main characters mental ramblings than on actual occurrences or dialogue. It's boring. This story is very cliche. I can't help but feel it would have made a decent children's picture book or anime. But for anyone out of elementary school it's lacking. <<less