Harry Potter’s Natural Villain

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A person from earth is reincarnated in the Harry Potter World as Draco Malfoy. Armed with future knowledge, he tries to defeat all obstacles while protecting his family, fighting Voldemort and figuring out how to deal with teenage girls.

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哈利波特之天生反派
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Vex
Vex rated it
October 7, 2018
Status: --
Translator here.

First of all, not even one chapter is released and I have got a rating. (ノ_-;)...

Now about the story. I will try to be as unbiased as I can be.

... more>> It's one of the better HP fanfics I have read, among those which are completed. It has it's faults, but I think the author does a good job with it.

About the characters. DM was always the little villain in the story. But here he tries to mend his relationship with HP, but his status as a Death Eater's son, a Slytherin student and also as an a Weasley family enemy, stops it from progressing any further.

His main goal is to live. in the original canon his family would probably go to Azkaban if not for Narcissa. So he's trying his best to not go that way. Main thing is, he can't even do it on public. Or else Voldemort will kill him. And author does a good job in managing all this.

There are few cringe worthy parts, but it's necessary. So no harm done.

Side characters have been developed to some extent. The main cast has been developed and expanded a lot. But his team mates like Crabbe and Goyle... Are just that.

People might hate the romance. Four girls love him, but he tries to keep away from all. He's not a beta, but he doesn't wants anyone to get mix in all his problems. Even he's not sure if he would live or die. So he likes them... But keeps them at a a distance.

Translation.. Eh. It's great! It's like the best. No problem here.

Jokes apart. I am basically cleaning up MTL. So yeah, it might have few problems. I am trying to improve it.

Above all, the story is just around 400 chapters. The chapters are medium sized averaging around 1.5K words. So overall, it's not large.

And that's for now.

Hope you like it.

Edit: not averaging around 1500. Make it 3000-4000. -_-

And please read few chapters before rating. <<less
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hypersniper159
hypersniper159 rated it
January 13, 2023
Status: c426
overall, this is a good quick read, I really like watching 2 characters grow from childhood. That really gave the ending something special. I read this novel in 3 days, and I don’t remember most of it. I don’t think you could expect anything more from a Chinese novel, it doesn’t do anything special but also nothing awful. Some parts are better than others. I felt that the ending was really lackluster and and so well thoughtful as it should’ve been.

I personally found this novel to be a good balance... more>> between plot and character. But it’s a lot more plot focused. The plot wasn’t particularly special nor glaring. However something’s really need to be spelled out clearly. The harem wasn’t bad, at all. And some parts were dragged out way too long. There was a huge buck of chapters I read the first few words since I knew these chapters had to be pointless. <<less
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WiLeY BiGhEaD
WiLeY BiGhEaD rated it
April 30, 2020
Status: c4
I don’t know how this novel got so many good reviews. A few chapters into the novel, an 11 y/o girl tries to blackmail the MC with photos of him studying black magic in his fathers study (that she took when she was 8 years old without him noticing her using a camera from the 1980’s). What does she want? Him to be her bit*h and entertain her with stories. Not only does the MC go along with this, he doesn’t bring it up to his father or the girls... more>> father who are both death eaters!

WTF! He doesn’t get mad. He doesn’t act like an adult even though he is. He doesn’t attack her. He doesn’t get the photos back. NONE OF THIS MAKES ANY SENSE!! The phots are literally a death sentence for the Malfoy family and the MC does nothing but bend over and submit to an 11 y/o who planned this during a spontaneous encounter when she was 8 years old.

This MC is the ultimate combo of the Japanese ‘super beta masochistic’ MC and the Chinese wuxia ‘f**k logic the plot needs to move forward’ MC. Do yourself a favour and don’t submit yourself to this mess. <<less
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Capa
Capa rated it
October 10, 2018
Status: Completed
I, surprisingly like this fanfic, enough that I binged through the whole thing in 3 days.

There's the suspense of knowing events that will come, and how Draco will tackle it, trying to alter outcome of the original story and how the butterfly effect spread. There's no denying that the author is an avid HP fan, sprinkling tidbits that you'll know only if you're a Potter fan.

You know how our duo isn't already the brightest bunch originally, fueled forward by angst and jumping to conclusion. Well, it's much more pronounce over... more>> here with Draco being so OP that you'll cringe at some scene. You can see which character the author is a fan of in the original story. <<less
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Poireau
Poireau rated it
March 11, 2020
Status: Completed
The storyline is really the same as the original books, and some parts even similar word for word, the worse being that there is not much new stuff (compared to Harry Potter and the secret treasures). The author even skip a lot about the way the MC becomes stronger and plans things, and at the opposite, spend too much time about the developpement of his interactions with his "harem".

A huge waste and deception for the potential of the story and a poorly inspired fanfic, even through the first chapters were... more>> promising. <<less
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Noronha
Noronha rated it
October 10, 2019
Status: Completed
Man, I had to say that I really like this book. Has somethings that could be better, like, for example, explore more characters from Weasley family, Cho Chang and Cedric too.

I really hate Hermione, really. The end of the book was great, but, could add more things to be better. But, the book is great, a nice read.
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Veronica12
Veronica12
March 30, 2019
Status: --
I really like the fan fic since I’m huge fan of Draco Malfoy and I always felt like he was underrated more than he should by the people. So far I really like it :)) I have only read upto 3 chapters if possible I want to ask cappa where you read the complete set?
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Loosergirl rated it
October 13, 2018
Status: c6
I began to read the three chapters that were translated and quickly continued on with the Chinese raws. The translation quality isn't that good but the author is brilliant. The characterization is just so fitting.

Malfoy as the genius transmigrator? He's like one of those light novel characters with white hair, isn't he?

Pansy Parkinson is described as a mean loli. I don't know if she was actually a loli later on, though it's certainly true while she is a child. But her mean, villainous lady type personality was just so good.... more>> It's perfect to offset the image she had in the books.

This beginning has me really hyped up about the story. Even if Asestado or other reviewers say it goes downhill after chapter 150, that is still 150 chapters of a good story. Raws, here I come! <<less
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Asestado
Asestado rated it
October 10, 2018
Status: --
Ok first of all I'm going to say that the novel starts quite well but later on I started to feel as if the creator was caring less and less about the novel.

Be aware that in this review you will find some "spoilers" so be aware of it.

First of all we have our MC, the evil child in Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy, personally I always felt a bit of pity for the child because rather than him being evil it was the oppossite, rather his education about pure blood had... more>> quite an influence on him but he wasn't willing to take "evil actions" like killing.

So here is the thing, in the novel we change his child-like mind for someone that was a fan of Harry Potter so he knows everything. He starts to study a lot and he wanted to be a great mage, until here all is good.

Then he starts to comment at many points that what he desires is to have a third faction loyal to himself and in fact he's seen as working many things behind the scenes, while showing himself as a loyal servant of Voldemort he is trying to get "power" and "influence".

The sad thing is that after chapter 150 or so I started to feel that the creator started to feel disinterest in that line of thought, it kind of started to focus more on the book events and by chapter 300 it just disappears, most of the chapters between 300 to 400 I felt them as an absolute disinterest from the creator of the novel, the things that made me like to read it were already forgotten and the only thing left was... nothing truly.

It kind of recuperates a bit when we enter the last part but the ending is quite bad, and when I say bad believe me it is. Not gonna spoil it don't worry.

So, if you asked me what rating I would give the multiple parts:

1-150 I would give it 4 stars, while it has quite a few debatable moments it feels quite good.

151-300 This started to go down to 3 stars, I start to feel that the creator is feeling disinterest in his own novel.

301-400 The worst part of the novel, 1.5 stars, the disinterest is so obvious that it's even painful...

401-425 I give it 2 stars, while it has good moments it has quite a rushed ending and it doesn't even show the effects of anything, something that was within the expectations of a reader from the start, even more having Malfoy thinking about many things that he want to do after the storyline. It kind of feels that the own creator decided to ignore everything within the novel just for the sake of ending it. <<less
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