Demon Lord Wants to Laze

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In the wake of saving two young waif siblings, Demon Lord Alfred gets caught up in the upheavals of the world.

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Maou-sama wa daradara shitai
魔王様はダラダラしたい
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04/18/18 Novelonomicon c19
04/16/18 Novelonomicon c18
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04/09/18 Novelonomicon c14
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04/04/18 Novelonomicon c11
04/01/18 Novelonomicon c10
03/29/18 Novelonomicon c9
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03/26/18 Novelonomicon c7
03/23/18 Novelonomicon c6
03/21/18 Novelonomicon c5
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Casul_Reader
Casul_Reader rated it
April 14, 2018
Status: c10
Alrighty fellas, to those reading, this will be my personal opinion surpisingly on this novel. Yours could be completely different and thats fine, a diverse world is a good world.

To begin things, it was hard for me not to get interested at the start, it had a premise I rarely see (and enjoy) and was interested to see what it was about. It was "alright", but the chapters are too short for their own good, meaning they described too little to get a sense of the characters, whom are... more>> about as deep as a shallow puddle on a concrete floor after a morning drizzle. They were also boringly introduced, there were times where my attention lapsed in and out which made me go back and read past chapters to even remember what the characters looked like.

Now what made me furrow my brows were the scenes where the MC and co are showing off how powerful they are. In the two times that they did in 10 chapters, the POV would switch to someone else's to show off their exaggerated reactions which can, although understandable in their world, get so damn annoying with how so so many of basically the same thing gets said and repeated. The POV change could have been a nice touch, but it was poorly executed.

As for the characters themselves, about what you can expect from JP novels where the main focus is the MC taking are of a child, albeit with a rather generic harem. The relationship between the MC and the harem is unclear, which could lead to the author expanding upon it with future arcs, but seeing the quality thus far, I doubt it. As for the kids, one is a foil, one is supposedly there for the MC to react to with how "funny" she is, and the last is the one the keeps the plot moving as the MC is, as the title says, too damn lazy to do anything without the daughter providing an incentive to do so.

It was an interesting concept at first glance, the description hooked me in and made me dive in, hoping to find gold, only to be met by heaps of pyrite. But meh, try like five chapters, might be tolerable for you and you might even like it. Who knows, might get better from here chapters 11 onwards, people are able to become better if they strive hard enough.

Peace out. <<less
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Poison_Ice_Blade
Poison_Ice_Blade rated it
July 20, 2018
Status: c6
*sighs* Im not sure how it could be possible to ruin a demon lord story but look here! Its been done! I love this genre but this story is almost unreadable. Some of it is the translator's fault for not properly establishing which POV we are on but most of it is definitely the author's fault. It honestly feels like im reading the rough draft of a story because nothing it delved into.

The flow of writing and pacing is awful too. Way too fast and not enough details. I dont... more>> think ive ever seen an author struggle to describe the environment so much. I just kinda assumed it starts out in the forest because the MC talks about how a demon lord lives in the forest but it could have also started in a small village or perhaps the demon lord castle itself. Thing is idk because they never told me.
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the second chapter begins with waking up in the demon lord castle which is way too sudden and confusing. To try and fix this, your mind automatically assumes that our MC passed out at the end of the previous chapter but it was never shown nor told. The demon lord, his minion, and the MC are now suddenly raiding the mansion (I thinks its a mansion???) holding s*aves and the captured sister mentioned in the beginning of the story. If your not already confused by this point then im impressed. Everyone seems to be mu*dered by beans (dont ask me where they got beans and why they are using them, idk) I believe and then they are suddenly in the bas**ent freeing the prisoners.

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oh god it was so awful and such a clusterf*ck I had to stop reading it if I wanted to preserve some brain cells. <<less
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