The Strongest Legend of Dragon Ball

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Xiaya reincarnated in the Dragon Ball Universe as a Saiyan 12 years before the destruction of Planet Vegeta.

Watch him as he creates the strongest legend of Dragon Ball World from the beginning.

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Dragon Ball Tối Cường Thần Thoại
TSLDB
龙珠之最强神话
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06/30/23 DM Translations c926-934
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MirTeiwaz
MirTeiwaz rated it
November 30, 2017
Status: c10
Interesting start, give it a try if you like DBZ universe.

MC is born with mid level talent, though it won't stop him progressing faster than high level one due to his DB knowledge. My only gripe is that the MC and his sister are not named after vegetables.
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9Lightning
9Lightning rated it
December 9, 2017
Status: c18
It is a really interesting story and the only real problem I have so far is that the MC just randomly gets time control and teleportation powers like ten chapters in. I can understand the teleporting since the author needed a way for him to get to earth without using his ship but, the time stopping power just seems excessive to me.

Also it bothers me they say cultivation instead of training
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Justpointing
Justpointing rated it
February 10, 2018
Status: Completed
This novel is terrible in many ways but at the same time superb in others. I also found the ending to be terrible, extremely rushed and have a high strung wtf moment, so what I would originally give five stars for the overall story gets downgraded to four.

The strength system in this is much more systemised and reliable compared to the dbz animation where characters strengths can get random boosts or nerfs to suit the storyline. Here everything has a quantifiable value.

Another excellent part is that this fanfic contains characters... more>> and plot events from the complete db universe, which means db, dbz, dbz movies, dbs, dbgt, dbz xenoverse etc... Its all tied together at a steady pace so you won't lose interest in any of it.

The butterfly effect of the mc's actions which had many people complaining it is taking away goku's future enemies is extremely well done, and is a baseless concern. The same goes with complaints that the MC has a twelve year head start on Goku and Vegeta and that they would never be able to catch up.

The author designs the butterfly effect based the conceptual river of time. While certain action may alter the path of the river, it still heads toward the same destination. Goku and Vegeta aren't any weaker in comparison to the original works, and in fact, are actually stronger. They also walk a completely different path to the MC so comparing who is better is wrong.

other things that I highly praise but are spoilers

Spoiler

Vegeta finds his own path in training rather than always chasing goku's footsteps. He even surpasses him and defeats him on two occasions.

Goku ends up with Bulma and Vegeta with Bulma's older sister Tights. Despite this, their children have the same name as original works, enforcing the river of time principle. Poor trunks coming back from the original future only to find his dad married to another woman and his mom doesn't even know it.

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At the same time I will point out the major flaws of the novel.

It has an extremely slow start. Goku and Vegeta get basically no exposure for the first few hundred chapters.

MC doesn't take proper advantage of having knowledge of the future and the author even makes him a complete idiot sometimes who as someone knowing future events, can't figure out what's happening despite the beginning or even mid plot happening in front of him. He could stop many plans in their infancy if he wanted to, but has dumb moments where he can't figure out what's happening.

There is very little earth time except when the MC is visiting. As the central area for dbz plot lines, I expected much more time on earth. The MC formed a survival colony on a new planet, which I enjoy, but isn't what I ideally look for in a fanfic

Worse of all was the ending. It was terrible, all other opinions moot. <<less
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Hitexh
Hitexh rated it
March 8, 2018
Status: c72
I enjoy it so far.. If only the MC is more mature, it would be better.. I dont get why MC has so much love for saiyan species. If I were him, let them die, they just brute. Save your family, and select few friends is enough. Power in DBZ is determined by OP individual, not by number of people.
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Legalt
Legalt rated it
April 22, 2018
Status: c118
Honestly, it's pretty good, especially if you like these types of novels based off anime/manga.

MC reincarnated into a baby Saiyan several years before the destruction of Planet Vegeta. He knows how the story went and the general strength of people, like Frieza, so it's nice seeing his preparation for things.

He's pretty mature I'd say and definitely not s*upid. Not a genius, but not a moron either. He progresses in strength and age, and though he obviously will become the strongest Saiyan, much like Goku and Vegeta, he's also not the... more>> only one to develop high strength.

Many characters you know appear throughout and it's super interesting to see how it's gonna play out. How it starts diverging from the original story and the fates of certain characters that change due to his existence.

Anyway, those are the points to know right away. It's a really fun story if you know the series, with a good translator as well. Check it out and see if you'll enjoy it. I definitely do. <<less
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Astaroth
Astaroth rated it
December 15, 2017
Status: c212
So far I've read 212 chapters (and counting) of MTL (on LNMTL)

Like someone mentioned space & time powers are a bit much (though author kind of realised this as well and hold back on the time stop stuff afterwards), he also randomly gave MC 70k Senzu Beans which obviously made the novel go a bit haywire. To scale back on it and not just make every fight trivial, it's mentioned that using senzu beans make use of your potential to restore yourself. Basically borrowing power from the future to... more>> save yourself in the present.

In that way, at least the MC won't just constantly eat senzu beans and automatically win any fight as it will have negative consequences and slow his progress.

There's some other questionable things, but overall the MC isn't too bad. And honestly it's quite good for a fan fiction. There's plenty of (much) worse original novels as well, so the bad rating is undeserved.

Actually my largest concern is that because the MC is born several years before Goku & Vegeta he has such a long headstart that I fear they might not ever be able to catch up. Plus he seems to be eliminating many of the villains they require to fight against to power up. Personally I don't want the MC to be so strong that Goku, Vegeta, and the other main characters are irrelevant. Rather I think that the MC should at least be within reach for them instead of completely overshadowing them... Of course there's still plenty of chapters to go so I'll update this later when I find out.

Some really good things to say about this novel however, perhaps guilty pleasures (p.s. includes minor spoilers) :

  • Saiyans, MC is a Saiyan and rescue a portion of the Saiyan race from the destruction of Planet Vegeta. Because of how they were basically all exterminated by Frieza in the Dragon Ball canon the author can freely create other Saiyan characters of his own as well.
  • The author 'save' some of the characters that more or less faded away from existence in the original works. For example the girl who change hair color whenever she sneezes: Launch. Maybe she'll even be a love interest in the future? (Probably not.) Then there's Tien Shinhan, the MC show him that there's way more powerful guys out there in the world so that he won't get stuck in chasing Goku. Hopefully this leads him to become much more powerful instead of an irrelevant side character.
  • There's some more interaction with other minor characters, and hopefully more to come.
I probably forgot some things I should have mentioned, but anyway, the novel isn't bad. It has some faults but it does it's job of properly fulfilling the fantasy of how you would change Dragon Ball if you were to be a Saiyan yourself. Which I'm sure plenty of people has thought about. I say, it's definitely worth to have a look. <<less
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Vaeren
Vaeren rated it
August 17, 2018
Status: Completed
Actually really fun to read fanfiction that includes basically dragon ball + z + gt +movies and mixes them. Probs for actually putting thought into the power level system etc. Even though I reduce half a star for the fact that the main protagonist kinda goes pretty chill through his life. No real hard fought wins in my opinion. The battle parts come too short.

Also - half star because the naming sense of the characters is not that good. Author choses english names for sayan instead of abrigation of vegtables... more>> and main protagonist got a chinese name. Would have ignored that fact if he would be born/raised on earth since there are people like tao bai bai etc but as a sayan himself that is kinda a no go. Especially when he goes around calling Son Goku Kakarott nonchalantly.

Another - Main protagonist/author seems to give a sh*t about the main plot what makes this interesting but some parts do tend to be too short and completly useless.

Well, all in all. Worth the time to read. 3.5/5 Stars. <<less
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hatoyin97
hatoyin97 rated it
December 3, 2017
Status: c106
The plots are nice...

MC is quite smart...

But be warn because in almost every novels that chinese make even the most calculating or smart MC go full ret*rd by challenging some one way above them and is alive because of author

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Spoiler

So MC wanted to wash his sin so he decide to wipe one of cooler corps...

Guess what he do after he sense cooler coming to wards him?

He fking waited, he have instant transmission

He decided to fight against cooler blaming saiyan blood and sh*t even though in early chapters MC flipping clearly can restrain himself especially when he is only at 160 k BP when cooler is 150 million BP a different of flipping one thousand BP.

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DekuHero
DekuHero rated it
October 19, 2018
Status: c200
I have read up to chapter 200 which is where the translation had ended at the time of this review. I like this story a lot. I don't usually like spinoff stories or whatever you call these types of stories, but this one was really good. I went in not expecting much and ended up pleasantly surprsied. If I had complaints it would be these two things:

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      The MC has a non blood related little sister that he bathes while she is growing up. This is before she even hits puberty. He was reborn into the dragon ball world with his memories of a past life as a salary man or some shit, so he's pretty old as well. Later in the series he ends up slipping her the Shenron that he keeps in his pants. Tbh, I don't even care if they are related or not, I just didn't feel they were a good match either. It seemed too pre planned and it made it boring to me. First part of the story and his new adoptive parents are like "Heres your new sister, feel free to have s*x with her". I don't mind romance, but I have a problem with something that is so obvious and predictable.

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    2. If you have read or watched any of the dragon ball series then you will see many mistakes throughout the story. I just ignored them. So many of them throughout the story and you have to ignore them to enjoy it if you are anything like me.
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lizabernal96
lizabernal96 rated it
May 23, 2018
Status: c934
It was so good this novel I did not get tired if it, it was so interesting and the plot did keep you interested in it, and I loved the end, the author even give a small follow up after he left the dimension, it was so interesting, I wish the author would do a second book.
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Zemophobia
Zemophobia rated it
May 8, 2018
Status: c35
This story is decent if you only have surface knowledge of the Dragon Ball series.

I rated this novel 3-stars because I actually watched DBZ when I was a kid and read some of the manga.

I rated this novel 2-stars because of the constant grammar mistakes that drag me out of the story.

I just want to warn potential readers that if they know a decent amount of Dragon Ball lore, then know that you will be pulling your hair out from some of the stuff that the author states. Not to... more>> mention the strictly Asian names of the two lead characters.

Just treat this novel as a loose interpretation of the Dragon Ball series. <<less
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Raphael
Raphael rated it
May 6, 2018
Status: c934
So I kinda liked this, read up to around 80 something and figured it would take ages to wait it out on current translations, so I went to the bane of all translations. That's right I read it on lnmtl, what can I say it wasn't a pleasant experience and it kinda felt like a kick on the balls, but I powered through and finished it. All I can say is that the story follows the DB universe pretty closely even up to Super and there will be some GT... more>> cameo involving universe travel but I won't get detailed because of spoilers. Anyways it's a fun read and the story is fairly well paced so hope you all enjoy it. My one gripe with it is the very end but you guys won't get it till you read it yourselves so yeah. Hope you all enjoy it since it's a good story and well made. =DDD <<less
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Agent47
Agent47 rated it
August 11, 2018
Status: c183
Ignore the rabid fanboy below me.

This novel is remarkable, and it's a nice spin to the main plot. The story follows a guy who reincarnates into the DBZ universe with foreknowledge of what happened in the main plot. Its funny, remarkable and exciting. The Translator is great too; 10 advance chapters for only $1 monthly donation on his Patreon. Fans of DBZ should definitely give this a try.
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SAMESame
SAMESame rated it
January 11, 2020
Status: --
So let me say first it's a good fanfic novel but with a weird atmosphere that almost make me drop it, MC has a cheat that will make you facepalm, author use the senzu bean like water but in the original story goku have to wait for few years to have senzu bean and mc's brain become ret*rded after using so many senzu bean when you reach chapter 104, he alway say don't make haste for training because it will ruined your foundation but always use senzu bean just by... more>> getting tired and get minor injuries like an idiot and by the way MC speak is ok but he's arrogant behavior is over the top just because he has some knowledge from the future story line and he always say some xianxia MC reference when the MC battle and kill a weak opponent it's a fanfic of DB not xianxia novel so why !!! Just be silent and kill it, don't sneer like your so strong just because there weak and distain them I like op MC with an arrogant and badass vibe backup with his power so it's ok just his arrogant behavior is out off the line for me. MC is like a kid for an adult that died and get stranded for a few years from the void and still act like a kid that had a sudden power if he don't know the story of DB ill say he will be kill early in the chapter :) oh and the MC is a sin killer ? Because of saiyans sins but even with sin he can comeback he just need to be more powerfull than king yama I think author make an error of this and add sins to make justice for hypocrite killings spree of MC .

Style of this fanfic is more xianxia than Db universe and world revolves in mc's way that almost all character act like a character from xianxia novel, I'll read it ' I recommend it for those love db just ignore the way MC action full of xianxia vibe ? Oh and i'll tell you guys a secret to make this novel interesting for you, cultivate your dao of skimming and skim some chapter that MC is ret*rded so that he will not piss you off and just skim some boring chapter till you get to the lastest chapter and wait for a bit if there no development then drop it thats the way to cultivate your dao of skimming and enjoy your cultivating reading manual ?? <<less
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Ayakashibito
Ayakashibito rated it
September 27, 2019
Status: c300
Not too bad but I feel like the author thinks the readers are ret*rd so he can just use God plot armor, idiotic reasoning and logic breaking events, this is also not a dragon ball novel but a xianxia at this point, a standard Chinese novel where women are just accessories and in the author's mind cant under any circumstances be in any way better than men, I will not be surprised if he starts adding Chinese propaganda which is a must in ALL Chinese novels that have China in... more>> their world, luckily there is no China as of chapter 300. <<less
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LastGodOfWar
LastGodOfWar rated it
March 10, 2019
Status: c252
Amazingly well done novel for a fan fiction. It is solid in keeping with the Dragon Ball world but does no feel as stifled as the old material. Also unlike Goku the MC does not wait for a threat to start training he just trains because hes a Sayain and he loves battles. It really is interesting to read. Also unlike some fan fiction only some of the side characters are featured Goku is only in it for a flash. This give the leeway to not have such a big... more>> name take away importance from the real stories MC. <<less
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Notatumor
Notatumor rated it
November 27, 2018
Status: c223
its not like other fanfics, and the MC doesn't really care about keeping the main plot, the author is a bit liberal with the power levels, there's one person who shows up with a power level of 2 billion. Overall this novel is a slice of life/ action and adventure and the characters have well written personalities, no cardboard cutout young masters or generic jade beauties.
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kratos1994
kratos1994 rated it
November 21, 2018
Status: c221
Over all, if you don't mind that it is pretty much cultivation reincarnation novel with dragon ball skin on it its a good read. When reading it's advisable to remember, that this novel is a fanfic and there will be changes to main dragon ball timeline as well as personalities of some of the characters, also warning for those who find power level setting dragon ball s*upid, as it is used as a base for cutivation here, which makes it more relavant but may also trigger som people.
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Rage808
Rage808 rated it
May 5, 2018
Status: c104
There are some editting mistakes here and there but its not at a level where its hard to understand. And the story and the characters for me atleast is very interesting. Im waiting for xiaya to meet goku later and his power level at the time. But most importantly when he will become a super saiyan. Until then im giving 4 stars.
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kennykdogg
kennykdogg rated it
December 5, 2017
Status: c713
it's ok the power scaling is better than the original but
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it seem like the author slowed down his super saiyan forms making take 41 years to reach 3 but take 8 to reach 3 level good. He doesn't use his future knowledge in the most efficient way I can't believe people think is smart. He could have teleported to any cold family and one shotted them while sleeping because somehow they always transform and away beat death

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