Otome Game Mob Villain (WN)

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Rid Baldia, the son of a margrave, suddenly regains the memories of his past life and realizes that the world he lives in greatly resembles the otome game universe of “Fluttery Cinderella”, or “Flutterella” for short. And it turns out that Rid is a crony bit player that’s supposed to take the side of a villainess. And what’s more, he remembers that the fate awaiting him for partaking in evil deeds is to be purged, exiled, and condemned alongside the villainess.

And so began the days of Rid Baldia employing the memories of his past life to struggle(mow) his way through this utterly completionist otome game world to have a shot at a decent life.

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I Reincarnated As A Mob Villain In An Otome Game I Was Bashing Away At, But I'm Gonna Live Straight Because I Don't Wanna Be Condemned
やり込んでいた乙女ゲームの悪役モブに転生したが、断罪されたくないので真っ当に生きていこうと思います。
Related Series
I Reincarnated As A Mob Villain In An Otome Game I Was Bashing Away At, But I’m Gonna Live Straight Because I Don’t Wanna Be Condemned (LN) (Light Novel)
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twdavis78
twdavis78 rated it
June 11, 2022
Status: prologue
If you like over powered, over intelligent, and invincible protagonists, whom are a little s*upid, this is for you.

If you can't overlook a 6 year old having the martial arts skill to overcome or fight to the even adults four times his size, this definitely isn't for you.

I've read to chapter 90 through google translate. The author here has basically changed up the typical isekai with an Overpowered protagonist by putting the transmigrator in a 6 year old body. All the genre tropes are present. The story actually starts out... more>> okay but falls apart as the author overpowers the protagonist to quickly without any struggle. This breaks the already wide leeway of suspension of disbelief attributed to any fantasy novel. The author seems to have forgotten the size and muscular differences between an adult and a 6 year old child. The fight scenes visualize as two opponents of equal strength and size are fighting....

This story is no masterpiece but it is okay enough to pass the time if you can over look the flaws. <<less
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Alfiant
Alfiant rated it
November 29, 2022
Status: prologue
The novel seems promising. The MC is not naive as far as I can tell. If there is one thing that bother me the most, it is the quality of translation.

The Zetro Translation doing a good job for 10 first chapters. But when new translator take over (zero-kun), the translation quality goes pretty bad.

I feel like reading MTL novel with little edits, without proofread. In addition to bad grammar, there is repeated paragraph, confusing dialogues, confusing lines, and so on.

The novel seems good and promising, but sorry to say, the... more>> translator ruined it. I've read up to chapter 90, but this is my limit, I feel like my head would explode if I read any more than this. <<less
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Ayushdeep
Ayushdeep rated it
November 18, 2022
Status: c12
Zetro's translation was good. But another one is not so like many parts are missing, dialog flow is not smooth, can't understand if his butler and maid are even giving respect to MC. I hope in future chapters it will be much better or a bit more readable.

Novel plot 5 star

Translation 0.5 star

This novel is a prime example of how bad grammar can ruin a novel.

(A word to translator edit your chapters once more)

I will rather read by using google translate right now.
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blankso
blankso rated it
November 28, 2022
Status: c18
From what I can even understand from the translation quality, seems like the author just copy a bunch of other reincarnation novels and pasted it into one.

Starting with the MC, a 30+ yo office worker reincarnated in an 6yo body. While idm it, other aspects of it seem really excessive. From creating an whole new product to mastering all elements in magic, and his sudden enlightenment to cure his mother in all cost dispite not knowing her, seem rather lacklustre. While I don't hate these types of cliches, author portray... more>> every character in the story unable to think. Why did the 6yo spoiled villain suddenly changed overnight into this incomparable genius of the century, no one ever mentions it and disregards it.

While plot might be better in later chapters, I can't bother to read anymore with this translation quality. Dialogue are missing, and with every 5 sentences I can only understand one. <<less
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GodlyGodMcGodGod
GodlyGodMcGodGod rated it
November 14, 2022
Status: c87
So far this one has been decent. The MC is one of those typical super OP MCs with normal modern sensibilities and morals in a world where life is cheap. While the MC has a strong aversion towards mu*der, as one would expect from someone from a peaceful nation in the 21st century, none of the adult nobility around him, including the ones on his side, ostensibly the "good guys", have any hesitation towards resorting to conspiracy, torture, and mu*der to further their own goals. For example: ... more>>
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The king of an allied nation and father of MC's fiancé used one of his own subjects, secretly guiding and manipulating him to form his own opposing political faction and allowed that faction to hold some level of political power, all so that any dissenting nobles would feel comfortable enough with exposing themselves to join this faction, making it easier to track them. Once he had no need of the faction leader any more, he then had him disposed of. He even allowed that faction leader while he was still alive to manipulate and brainwash the king's own son.

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And that's just one character. I like this sort of brutal medieval setting where life and death are treated lightly and human rights aren't a thing, where the MC is only allowed to do as he pleases and uphold his modern morals because he is A: a child, B: high-ranking nobility, and C: completely overpowered. So far all of the conspiracy and intrigue has been kept in the background and even when it involved the MC his only role was to crush the plots with brute force. I'm curious to see, as the MC ages and matures, if the author will ever allow the MC to be caught up in a situation that he can't solve by brute-forcing it from the front, how he'll handle all the dirty grown-up politics. <<less
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Drake888
Drake888 rated it
September 23, 2023
Status: c154
This is another bait and switch novel. The title and summary say one thing but the actual story is something completely different. I came for a story about changing the plot of an otome game, presumably with young adult characters. Over a hundred chapters later and I am still reading about a precocious ten year old shocking everybody with his knowledge and new ideas.

It is not a bad story. I actually kind of like it. But it is pretty average and it is not what it claims to be, so... more>> 3 stars. As for what you can actually expect, this is another story where the author fantasizes, in great detail, about what kind of OP life he would like to live in an isekai. Sadly, he fantasizes about being a minor lord that everybody loves in a peaceful country so the excessive detail is about how lords should act every day. Lots of conversations about various things, and hardly any fights that matter. It is a very pleasant atmosphere though. <<less
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Okuro
Okuro rated it
March 21, 2024
Status: c500
Honestly, I liked the novel enough to continue reading, unfortunately when they introduce the first real villain in the series I think the series loses almost everything good.

1 the villain is too strong for the mc's state, I won't be surprised if the villain slaughters his entire family and he only says that he is angry
2 the way they make the villain look only makes the MC, his family and the supposedly strongest empire look s*upid.
3 I don't understand the power ranges at first they make the MC look like a future god and soon after he is just a little more than average
4 the times are horrible the MC, he is too unbalanced early for the plot of the game, if the plot starts he will be too unbalanced to get involved, everyone's age is absurd
5 The MC is too nice, he is so nice that he looks pitiful and s*upid to the point that it justifies being used and made fun of, how nice is he? His subordinates could cause a war or the extermination of his house if that is what he tried to avoid from the beginning and how does he punish them? He takes his own salary :l and the worst thing is that he continues to cause similar things when he is furious
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shirochan07
shirochan07 rated it
February 9, 2024
Status: c13
No matter where I look to read this story it is always poorly translated, and the way the characters' lines were placed only makes the situation worse, making it even more confusing.

So far (c13) the story seems to have a suitable cake formula, but only slightly modified, so it looks like it will be a good read, but the state of the translation and formatting is horrible.

Normally I try my best to ignore this type of problem to the point that I have enjoyed reading several works that also had... more>> many problems but this one has been impossible to take advantage of, it is almost if not perhaps worse than the worst quality MTL. <<less
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SlyWing
SlyWing rated it
November 3, 2022
Status: c60
The story is still in the early stage but I am looking forward to MC interaction to the game characters of an otome/rpg game.

The concept of a side villain which can be played as after finishing the main story and then reincarnating into one is interesring. The MC is usually reincarnated as a villain/ess, hero/ine, capture targets (love interest), friend, or mob chatacter, where only the hero/ine and capture targests are playable in an otome/galge/rpg; but here, the MC rincarnated as a playable side villain which is new to me.
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The Shhh Knight
The Shhh Knight rated it
June 23, 2023
Status: c54
I don't recommend reading this to be honest. I've read some amateur JP webnovels with similar plot line and this is pretty much at the bottom as my impression so far.

The plot seems okay at a glance, but the execution is bores to the point that it's infuriating - nothing captivates you and the interactions are either somehow mediocre or very bland. Character development is like stagnant water too.

The only thing that interests me now is how the little sister Mel treats others. Sorry, I just don't feel hooked at... more>> all by this. <<less
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bigstew
bigstew rated it
April 9, 2023
Status: c365
well with few non (socialist/politict added) wn with the otome theme, its really good, MC isnt op, doesnt aim to be and focuses on helping sister while improving overall pregame start story, at least author progressess mc's age decently, behind the scenes narrative pregame is pretty good, MC does a good job mostly curbing death flags, starting line for MC is setup great while author writes in some sutel enemies changing tacticts after MC interfered from main story line as enemies, besides author ... more>>
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taking so long to setup and get to solution for mc's wife and further delaying a fix while also putting in a villianess chara that is half reincarn memory broken with only she trying to avoid death route herself but not remembering why and semi convincing brother to help out but brother only finally admits that after talking to MC he believes his sister and ask for future help (there family is a villian to hero/saintess? in main story line start)

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, seemed author was going to permanetly fix the wife problem first to avoid death flag for MC but inserted drawn out with said main story enemies that were the cause to aggresively interfer possibly before maind story (implied or setup)... with little wn's otome MC isnt harem first but trying to survive and a timeline age wise is moving ok and not stuck in shota or stuck in teen/school forever arc, this is worth reading at the moment or revert to the little alternates not cut and paste for clicks r out there (sadly those kakuyom encouraged cut and paste paragraghs writers r infecting incode for more exposure (warning)) <<less
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GreenRiver
GreenRiver rated it
December 24, 2022
Status: c93
It's a decent (not good, but readable) story about an OP, weak willed MC with s-rank plot armor....

The majority of characters other than the MC are believable (their actions make sense, their motivation is clear/understandable). But there's little to no character development.

The MC is a reincarnated Otaku that has SOME knowledge about the "game world", but it's not particularly useful. He becomes OP by way of hard work and luck, and is able to use amazing magic by trying things that are so simple someone should have figured it out... more>> already.

Despite being a super intelligent, super strong, high ranking noble, he allows his servants to walk all over him. Says things like "I can never win against him/her". When this happens once or twice it's amusing, but him being a wuss is a reoccurring theme. <<less
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