The story's framework is terrible. It's pretty much "I worked so hard, it's vacation time" "vacation time" "I worked so hard, it's vacation time." Sometimes, they even complain about their vacation, so they decide to go on a different vacation. Like what. Why.

It's a sci fi story set in space, but there's nothing that actually makes that setting interesting. It's literally space. They don't go to cool planets except maybe the one time, but that planet isn't very creative IMO. It's just a water planet with some islands. Neat. You have all of space to work with, but the author sticks to satellites, asteroid belts, or generic, empty space. Again, why. Space has never felt so limited.

The harem also terribly explained and reasoned. It's a harem so of course it's not well explained, but like, wow. I should also mention that there are several chapters where it's just mob characters going "oh I'm so jealous that this man has so many women wow." It's so base and generic that it's an insult to call it base and generic. It's boring.

Oh the characters are also kind of boring. That's fine since everyone already knows that many isekai will usually have a grab bag of characters that aren't too deep, but it's still a bit disappointing. The entertainment value from the story will be derived from the events, which again, get kind of tired after a while because they're constantly repeating the same events over and over again, just with a new coat of paint.

Don't let those nitpicks dissuade you though. Or maybe do. It's still a pretty alright read. The mediocrity combines into something that's pretty alright, but keep in mind, it's still kind of mediocre. It's a good isekai, but not a very good story.

Once, Commander Serena ordered his ship to not evade so a bombardment would succeed using him and his crew as bait. He was notably angry and then dropped it completely and thought of it as him not knowing a large fleet's tactics and putting himself in a bad position to start with. Even if he was in a bad position, he was used as bait and his life was risked. I thought at least even if he dropped it that Commander Serena would have maintained some of that guilt but it has never come up again as far as c341 anyway.

The second dicey instance was when a pirate merc (who was abruptly revealed to be another isekai'd character) ambushed him in the middle of a crystal swarm and was sniping him through the swarm. He got a message from her saying she wouldn't try again and she has not been mentioned in the story since. It seems wild to me that he doesn't even mention it to the anti-pirate-fleet-commanding Captain Serena so she would at least not hire the pirate mercenaries or leave that vulnerability exposed, but nah, just their usual banter with no, "oh hey, no biggie, but this large gold rank mercenary fleet are actually pirates and definitely affected your last unsuccessful operation against those pirates who seemed to have imperial army insiders." I get that his character is that of a gamer and his over-the-top resistance to the call to action are meant to be comedy and most of the time they come off that way, but just leaving that thread there without a single line of lip service is reality-breaking to me.

serena best girl, fight me