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It's BE.

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The story is written in the third person perspective, and since it's a oneshot, it doesn't tell us much about the background story or portray much of the feelings between SHF and SL until the last section. However, you can still feel their love throughout the story, and I felt really numb while reading this.

Honestly, I could already predict the ending from the start, but I still hoped it would end in the other way.

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SHF took 10 years, from the age of 24 to 34, to collect parts of SL until the last day when it's finally the day of his long-awaited final operation, and someone gotta suddenly break in and ruin it all!? Good for you, people. 🤬 Why would you even do that? They just want to live! Is he creating a bioweapon or what? Seriously, is this even necessary? This made me angry and very, very sad at the same time. 😭

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Beautiful.

If I am to use just one word to describe this story it has to be "beautiful". From start to end the story grips you and tears your heart tiny piece by piece.

I really would not mind if author were to write a 200 chapter story based on this one shot.

... more>> The Flow of story is nice although it does get confusing in start because it's a 3rd pov story (story between the leads) while 1st pov is more common.

As tags say it is a tragedy and BE. So keep your tissues close. It's technically double BE. You just keep on hoping it's the other option but your hopes will get crushed again and again.

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So good! The way it was written was lovely and beautiful, it touched my heart, made me even shed 3 tears and Im telling you that I rarely shed tears to oneshots. I think the description of SHF trying to reach for something he would never touch again broke my heart the most.

The story is quite literally told by a third person, even so, it didn’t ruin the tragedy between the couple.

A heart clenching story.

At first I was confused until I realized that the author tells the story from a third perspective. I keep hoping that there will be a different ending despite seeing the tag.

But if you love this kind of story and want a double kill (double the heart clenching) I recommend reading Defect before this and just imagined that this is Defect’s sequel.