Bursting After He Transmigrated into the Cannon Fodder Omega

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Yun Xingze transmigrated into an ABO novel and became the cannon fodder omega. The family business is declining and his fiancé doesn’t like him. According to the original plot, with his love-filled brain, he dedicated everything to the male lead Chi Yu, but ended up losing the marriage, before finally cutting his gland and dying of infection.

The former mecha genius Yun Xingze said: I am very busy and will not play with you.

After tearing apart the script, he was obsessed with mechas, ready to realize his past life’s dream.

Delicate and frail omegas have always been unsuitable for piloting mecha armor. However, in this year’s XingHai Military Academy’s mecha contest, a new omega student named Yun Xingze appeared, driving a pitiful second-hand armor. Everyone thought he was provoked by the broken engagement and ready to watch a joke, but they were shocked when Yun Xingze suppressed a group of alphas with his mecha!

Everyone: ??? Is this reasonable?!

Something more shocking is yet to come-

Yun Xingze broke the winning streak in the Mecha Contest!

The mecha designed by Yun Xingze was sold at a high price at the auction!

The mecha technology created by Yun Xingze is desired by all-interstellar mecha companies!

The whole interstellar wants to hold his thigh!

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After the dissolution of their marriage contract, Chi Yu waited for Yun Xingze to regret it, but the one who regretted it was himself. Fortunately, there is a rule in the Empire: AOs with high pheromone matching must be together.

Yun Xingze is destined to become his fiancee.

However, at the engagement banquet, before Chi Yu had time to propose, Yun Xingze sneered and severed his gland. As described in the original book, the pheromone floated in the air, and like a rose, withered quickly.

Chi Yu was shocked and heartbroken, but before he could do anything, another tall figure hugged Yun Xingze and rushed out of the banquet.

Everyone showed a surprised expression.

Even Yun Xingze looked at the person holding him in surprise-

He was the villain, Luo Wenchuan. In the original book, the second prince of the Star Empire was tall and handsome, but cold and unkind.

But at this moment, his eyes were red with anxiety.

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穿成炮灰O后他A爆了
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kello
kello rated it
August 3, 2022
Status: Completed
" one of the best abo novel I read "

It had a satisfactory ending for villians as well as the story. It was funny, enjoyable and it was not completely on romance.

It showed how MC rise up and it can also been seen that, by the end MC was stronger than ml.

... more>> Also the setting for omegas was really nice. As the end came, the omegas stood up for themselves and also that invention about that flower that will help omega was something really nice and creative.

What I loved the most was the cat mecha, the supporting character's reaction and perspectives (Kaleb, Lu Ranxu, su guy omega villian who later changed, mc's brother, the competitors of other school and likes) , also our mc's fight (especially with kaleb) and obviously how MC is stronger than ML at the end (it is showed that MC surpassed ML in many ways which is what I believe to be rare in other abo stories, usually even though MC (omega) is strong but ML (alpha) is 10 times stronger)

The author has done a great job and I would recommend it to everyone who loves stories with characteristics that I have written above! ☺ Ps: even tho MC is growing from weak to strong, it can also be seen that MC is op due to his identity of his part life but the reason why MC is able to get stronger is not only caz of that but also caz of his special ability which I believes to be due to his transmigration. Anyway I love it that's the final conclusion. 😊❤ <<less
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Cheng Mei
Cheng Mei
July 1, 2022
Status: Completed
If you look for romance, its barely there. But the ML really doting on the MC and you can walk through their relationship from strangers to employee/employer to senior/junior to friends/rivals and being a perfect match as a partner. Its mutual, understanding and respect. Or some may find it boring too because ML is too cold, quiet and closed-off while the MC oftentime lost in his mecha maniac brain.

This novel totally span around the MC. He's given a 2nd chance in life and he lived it up to the fullest.... more>> Making use of all his past intelligences and technologies to improve omegas social status and changes the law even changes their discrimination between genders. Its too OP, obviously because he originally came from somewhere more advance than this timeline.

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His drastic action to cut off his glands is not irrational at all. It was the best time to make his point heard and seen by the world. If you can put yourself in his place maybe you can understand and feel it better. Well, I dont deny that there is a better and safer way but that was what the MC chosed.

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He's a 100% mecha maniac, a rational and a genius too. Its an enjoyable read to me but some may not find it interesting. You should give it a try first before you judge it uninteresting. You never know the tea is bitter or sweet if you never take a sip. <<less
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Smtha
Smtha
May 31, 2022
Status: Completed
Binged read this in 2days. Love the story, love the battle scenes and the sweet love. There’s alot of op ness but what you expect in Transmigration story. Fascinating plot and good romance. Recommended read. Tq
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Drenlith
Drenlith rated it
May 24, 2022
Status: --
Romance is a subplot, not a main genre, it's clickbait.

The protagonist is dense, acts very childish, is ignorant of his situation, and is arrogant on top.
His entirety radiates a white lotus aura.
Give an inch and he'll take a mile, the white lotus look is what makes people resign themselves to him.
Generally displeasing to the eye. Minus the white lotus act, he'd be an entitled brat.

The biggest flaw has to be self-harm.
MC ironically gets a second chance at life, he knows how precious health is, has taken... more>> a lot of care of his former body, but goes to push his new body over the edge again and again.
Completely unnecessarily so too, there's no rush in the things he's doing yet he's risking his neck every time... for his greedy self-satisfaction.
There were multiple signs of his not-self-loving habits exhibited throughout the story as well and those signs already started showing themselves mere 5 chapters in.
The biggest dangers this guy will ever be in are the ones he's directly responsible for.

Development doesn't feel natural, everything's forced. From transmigration to romance, all in all just there because it has to be. MC can approach from the worst angles and still come out on top every single time. We're merely going from one point to another, clearing one obstacle after another without a clear aim or thought process on said non-existent goal. Whatever his whimsical self desires, shall be.
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Walk with me here and see the rocky narration problems for yourselves.
>MC transmigrates, what happened to OG host; died? Suppressed by MC's soul? (Yes, OG ML pushed OG Host and he fainted, but the guy's been a healthy young man, no frigging 80-year-old, then again it was never specified, push from where? The severity of the fall? WE DON'T KNOW JACK.) Dunno. We get a rough outline of OG plot and OG host's later demise
>Sure, OG ML could turn scummier later but as for the early chapters, it's MC and the OG Host being little pricks
>OG ML doesn't love him, never did
>marriage arranged by parents
>OG Host is not someone misunderstood either, he's been rude to people who're nice to him and have helped him in the past, plus, he went after the omega OG ML fancied instead of having some shred of dignity or clarity to complain to either him or his parents, just suffocating
someone with his selfish one-sided love
>MC with the little brain cells for social cues he's got, briskly and rudely
breaks it off without reasoning, giving OG ML a weird misunderstanding
of someone playing games instead of just talking through it like the
actual mentally 25-year-old adult that he was, OG ML doesn't know the
souls in that body are now different, duh
>Thinks he managed to dodge a death flag, but just dug himself more pits with the way he went about breaking it off and didn't prep or talk his family through about it prior to his impulsive kiddy act
>goes full -shocked Pikachu- saying OG ML 'snitched' on him on his parents, yes, shocker, it's an engagement set by them, they kind of have to know? Why would OG ML keep it a secret? He's following through according to MC's wishes
>parents obviously pissed as they are in need of OG ML's family financial support in order to sustain their business but the glorious good omega son *note the sarcasm* had to go do such a good thing behind their back, no shit, they're pissed, no more money for you stinky boi
>MC, down to his luck with no money, bad grades, entered the school through a backdoor with the help of OG ML's parents and all he wants is to play with mecha suits, priorities, y'all.
>goes to a black-market and rudely haggles for a 90% discount for already cheap AF mechas, protagonist halo shines down and the seller tolerates this kid's whims but he still doesn't have enough
> well-timed mech maintenance jobs inc., average student hiring other students for repairs, oh well, but are we seriously to believe people would let a freshman, a backdoor student no less, with terrible grades and reputation who hasn't so far even touched a mecha in school would be great at repairing mechas?
>MC doesn't care and just buys a kit, and manages to find the highest paying job, which also happens to be the mecha of ML...
And I could go on and on... TL;DR it'll only worsen from hereon.

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No main plot as it's given all away in the short synopsis, so we don't even have a plot. The story curve status: Dead, deceased, flat-lined, and ready to be cremated.

Transmigrated to elevate an Alpha-Star-Struck domestic little omega into a Mecha nerdy guru. Everyone who offends him is an ass, those who kiss up to him are spared. Consequences? The author parent got his back. Need something like money and a charitable opportunity? The author parent got his back. The author's not doing him any favors by dumping all essentials into his lap, making the protagonist seem more incompetent than he is. Glaring protagonist halo with a gigantic intelligence debuff field that affects user, the protagonist, himself. OG plotline hardly is relevant.

It's not like I do not enjoy shuangwens but simply despise low-quality content, there are well-written ones out there despite the cliches and tropes. Depends on the author's writing style and execution. This one fell too flat. A good comparison would be 'rebirth of the evil mother in law', same cliches, flat cannon foddery, OP protagonist but the difference: the protagonist doesn't function like a single cell organism.
This is terribly boringly forgettably bad. Not the type of trainwreck bad that you can't look away from. Working through these paragraphs and chapters feels like being stuck in a never-ending field of mud. <<less
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earlgreyt
earlgreyt rated it
May 22, 2022
Status: Completed
One of the better "cool-fic/feel-good fic" (shuangwen) ABOs out there where the MC confronts the prejudices of society and seeks to overturn them, as well as blazing a new trail for equality in the future.

Super strong OP MC (who is possibly more OP than the ML).

What impressed me the most was that

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Spoiler

there was actually redemption for the ex-love-rival as well as the mom. Typically in most BL, it's difficult to find any admirable female or female-oriented cast of characters, but in this case we have several cases of strong ones.

This might be one of the first instance where I've seen the OG omega lead getting his own redemption after being face-slapped by the MC.

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Overall very engaging/enjoyable read.

Your standard entertainment novel, but due to a positive and wholesome worldview, I give the author kudos.

One thing:

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it's odd to me that the competition didn't provide standardized mecha for everyone to use. I can't really imagine a sports arena where the construction or repair of the mecha can contribute so much to winning/losing.

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Translation wasn't too bad, a few odd spots, overall pretty immersive. <<less
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Jero Rex
Jero Rex rated it
May 14, 2022
Status: Completed
Second time re-reading (I was waiting for the next update last

time, after seeing that it's almost translated, I came back and re-read the whole thing)

Main Characters;

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Yun XingZe (MC) , a mecha genius from another world that transmigrated into a cannon fodder that died in the first half of a novel by cutting his glands while in estrus, causing infection after being humiliated.

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Luo WenChuan (ML) the strongest mecha fighter and the biggest villain in the novel, he was kicked out from the palace by his father, the king when he was 7 for "experience". Both in the novel and the current world, he became the heir, in the original novel, he was blackened by his family causing them to die in Luo WenChuan's hands. He has an allergy with omega pheromones and can only smell pheromones with higher percentage.

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Other Characters;

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(MC's side)

Xinghai Academy:

Principal (I f*cking forgot)

Zhou FeiYue - Teacher

Lu Ranxu - Friend (Omega)

Oriel - Teammate/Friend (Alpha)

Richard - Teacher (ZFY's rival/ LWC's teacher)

He Haomin (Alpha) - Teammate (used to hate MC)

Ashley (Female Alpha)

Ke Lei (Alpha/ LWC's friend)

Kaleb (Red haired 'madman' / has a poisonous mouth)

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Jicot Academy (enemy team/kind of close?)

Cheng Jun (Captain) - mecha stars' username ; Don't mess with me if you have bad temper

Xi Bolai - mecha stars' username : Please eat shaved ice

(I forgot the others...)

(From Xinghai but..)

Ou Rui (doesn't really communicate with MC, just teammate)

Sato En (doesn't really communicate with MC, just teammate)

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Researchers

Cheng Yuan (Dean)

Jin Xuan

Eugene (omega to beta)

(And others..)

Yun Wu (brother; alpha/MC's family)

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neutral characters

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Su Zinan - The original protagonist of the novel, I don't like him, and I don't hate him

King (Ml's father) - He did throw away ML when he was a kid but he did help in the end (kind of)

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tr*sh,

Scum,

Idiots, and disgusting Characters

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Chi Yu (protagonist gong of the novel)

Chi Yin (Chi Yu's Father)

Yu Wan

Queen

Yun ChuangSheng (MC's father, disgusting as the Chi family)

Qin Shuang (MC's Mother) a bit*h who kept on forcing MC to get married, saying that there's no other choice (doesn't deserved the happy ending she got tbh.)

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The story isn't really heavy, just disgusting
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forced marriage, omega discrimination. (kind of) (I'm not calling the novel disgusting... Just the characters like MC's dad)

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Don't complain, it's already mentioned in the first chapter, everything goes well for MC, he's pretty OP just like ML.

The story is pretty short, you can finish it in one day so I wouldn't really mention what happened in the story so you could read it yourself.

You don't really have to be nervous since MC
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won everything

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DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT A HEAVY SPOILER

Spoiler

When MC's family and Chi's Family forced MC and Chi Yu to marry, he cut of his glands and became a beta. If you want a beta x alpha then I'm sorry since he recovered at the end of the chapter.

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There's also face slapping here so you can enjoy the felling of rollercoaster of emotions.

About MC's Family

Spoiler

MC's mom and brother got was able to do what they really want in the end of chapter, basically happy ending, but it wasn't the same for his disgusting father.

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Chi's Family

Spoiler

The family ended tragically, Chi Yin died and Yu Wan was imprisoned, Chi Yi was left all alone and no one cared about him, he also dropped out of school.

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About Chi Yi
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I feel both disgust and also felt bad for him tbh (of course, its only when ignoring the original novel) He did regret breaking off with MC and was always proud of how high their pheromones compatible are, but of course, ML was higher. Even after MC cut off his glands he still loved him, but he was too disgusting I felt schadenfreude.

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Lonely? No sh*t mf this is full of dogfood

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even when playing [Mecha Star] they're name are indicating that they're a couple.

MC's username 'I'm so weak'

Ml's username 'Then I will protect you'

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Ah. By the way, just came back to reread this again.

Not to be rude to the other readers who wrote a review but the review they wrote are just nonsense, it's like telling the opposite of what happened instead of telling the shortcomings of the novel itself.

It's mentioned in the description that Mecha is the main genre, and romance it's just next to it.

The protagonist may be dense, but he isn't childish and knows how to calculate things and deal with it himself. What white lotus aura? Do you even know what white lotus mean. He believes in himself and protects everyone close to him, like his classmate and his best friend.

He does care for his second life, besides, the things he does aren't really that dangerous, in the competitions, even if he lose, killing players aren't allowed. Cutting his glands are just him copying Eugene so he could become beta, besides the reason why the OG YXZ died is because of the infection after he cut his glands while in estrus. "for greedy satisfaction" You've forgotten, you've forgotten how Chi Yi is. He does want someone who can fight with him but also want them to depend on him, he isn't even that strong tf.

The romance clearly developed normally. ML found him and realized that he can smell his pheromones, while chi yi is just being delusional that they're still dating even though he's just forcing himself into MC with both their families in his side. ML treated him nicely and gave things he needed, even cheering YXZ and watching over him so he can practice carefully.

What rocky shits are you even saying

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  1. Pretty sure you've forgotten that OG YXZ already died and how he was humiliated, it is shown to MC what clearly happened to og yxz, he just transmigrated at the start but everything already happened to OG YXZ. Og host died. Not because he was pushed (how the f*ck did you even came up with that) but because he was humiliated and after he cut his glands while in estrus. What plot are you talking about, even MC leave the 'relationship' with chi yi, he can still be together with that omega. The original plot was chi yi and su Zinan falling in-love but they destroyed it themselves, Su Zinan was too jealous and shows his real personality, Chi Yi is still being delusional that MC working himself to become strong is for him.
  2. How the f*ck is og host and MC being a f*cking prick, og host is just doing what he should really do, it's not like he and chi yi had broken up the marriage, chi yi is just being a f*cking sh*t and clearly flirting with Su Zinan and su Zinan and aware of him being with the og host, he even started rumors and humiliated him anonymously. And MC just broke things of after he transmigrated so Chi Yi can be with Su Zinan and so he can avoid that f*cked up death of the og host.
  3. Og ML does care for him, giving him cake and explaining that him and szn are just friends, too bad he's a f*cking tr*sh, not admitting he is wrong and just wanted anyone who can fight with him.
  4. For businesses, og host just doesn't know how to fight, it's not like og host came from the same place szn came from, szn learned how to fight to survive while og MC is an OMEGA came from a rich family, meaning that he doesn't really need to fight.
  5. The f*ck do you mean og host doesn't care for anyone, the only person he is rude at was at su Zinan who was aware of what's going on, he just had a bad reputation because of him targeting szn, and because of that anonymous rumors made by szn.
  6. So you're telling me you wanted YXZ to repeat what happened to og host? Breaking it of means MC being free and staying away at of host's death and chi Yi pursuing szn openly.
  7. Other than him losing contact with his family and not having money, he successfully avoided og host's demise.
  8. Og ML did snitched, not only he was flirting with szn while being in a relationship, he told MC's parents about this but not how he openly chases szn, he also have the guts to tell everyone he dumped MC.
  9. Of course they're pissed, they thought MC marrying chi yi can bring them good shits. Obviously, them not giving money to MC shows how tr*sh they really are.
  10. After MC and chi yi broke up, it is mentioned that MC will be kicked out of the school if he didn't do well on the competition since he already doesn't have connections with chi yi.
  11. How about you buy things you needed that cost almost half a million without you having a work and your parents suddenly not giving you money. Besides, the shop owner doesn't really hate him.
  12. Not like MC told ke Lei that he was a freshman, besides, in his last Life, he was the most known to make and fix Mecha. He's basically a genius, he just had a omega body in the second life.
  13. Just f*cking told you, MC was a genius when it comes to Mecha, he was the most known, he just had a weak body and died early, besides his (1st life) parents also knows how to fix and make Mecha.
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It's mentioned that it is Mary sueish. The main plot is him becoming the well known omega that could fight and control Mecha, while the romance is the subplot.

It's f*cking mentioned in the first chapter that it's smooth sailing, IN. THE. FIRST. CHAPTER. It's not like they offended MC, he just defeated anyone who he needs to fight, and it's just him proving how strong he is even if he's an omega. Mostly, his enemy looks down on him for an omega and he just proves that they're wrong. Most of his enemy are arrogant, you're telling me that MC is in the wrong for proving he can fight?

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Drenlith, Did your brain shut down when reading this? None of what you wrote was right. Just reading your review makes my head hurt. Really.

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jitterbvg
jitterbvg rated it
May 9, 2022
Status: c91.4
3.9/5

I haven't finished it yet, since I don't want to MTL the rest. Overall, it's an okay novel.

Story Notes:

  • The ABO aspect is minority. Unlike other ABO danmei (which I'm sure half of us read for the romance between the ABO couple), the ABO here is mainly to point out the discrimination against omega in the mecha/interstellar world.
  • The main point of the story might as well be mecha modifying and fighting. More than half of the novel is about MC remodifying his 2nd hand mecha, and about 2/3 of the novel covers a mecha competition from picking a team, to preliminaries, to finals.
  • The Romantic/Romance Aspect is kind of an extra. Because, as I said, more than half of the novel is just showcasing the OPness of our MC. The interactions between MC/ML are sweet but it feels lacking, like there's no actual chemistry that we feel between them unlike other romance novels.
  • The actually romance only progresses (if there are any) during the latter, latter half of the novel (yes, latter of the latter half)
Character Notes:

  • I'm sure you all have heard, the MC is overpowered. A Gary Stu. No weaknesses at all, only OP.
  • The ML is a bank. Literally. He just throws his money at MC.
  • Family relatives mentioned in this story are tr*sh (both sides of MC and ML, as well as MC's fiance's family).
  • Side characters on the MC's side are cute, especially LRX (MC's omega roommate in the beginning) 💜
  • Side characters against MC are tr*sh (not even kidding).
Spoiler Notes:
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  • The plot in the beginning of the story shows MC trying to break off his engagement with CY, who was with another omega SZN, while they were at the mecha academy:
  • Now, this SZN has character growth. You can see that his tr*sh personality represents the discrimination against omegas and their inferiority complex against the alphas. Eventually, MC showed him (and the world, actually) that omegas are not inferior to alphas. SZN actually, for all his flaws and mistakes, is not that bad.
  • CY, MC's fiance, is not likeable at all. If anything, he's like a pest. I feel like I'm seeing a fly everytime he is mentioned. He's just, simply put, delusional.
  • The MC cuts off his omega glands as a last resort when he was pushed to marry someone who was engaged to him because their pheromones were a high match. This happens in the latter half of the story.
  • Turns out MC and ML, the second prince of the Imperial City, were an even higher match, but it was only discovered after MC cut off his gland.
  • As of Chapter 91, MC is a beta with no chance of recovering his omega gland. (However, another spoiler note here tells me MC will get back his omega gland).
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Bunga Kantan
Bunga Kantan rated it
March 21, 2022
Status: Completed
Oh hey, it's pretty enjoyable although my blood pressure went up and down like on a roller-coaster's ride when I came across the following characters:

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Green tea bit*h (well, at least he reformed), c*ckroach like scum alpha (so glad he's gone and he can regret all his life), sh*t of a father (this scum should've suffered more). On the other hand, the king and queen can just go f themselves. As for the mum, oh well, whatever.

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It's entertaining enough. A suitable read if you wanna feel something or would like to regain your emotion. 😏 <<less
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ellie357
ellie357 rated it
March 18, 2022
Status: --
if you like face slapping and fairly predictable storylines (which, oh boy, I do) this story is for you! MC is a sickly genius who transmigrated over from an alternate universe with slightly more advanced mecha and who finally got to realize his dream of driving some! the "original owner" of the body was a rich kid who entered the academy through the back door, and that combined with the fact that hes an omega means that he's wildly underestimated in the arena. hes DEF op so you could argue... more>> that theres not a lot of tension to his fights (which, for me there was bc the chapters got rly long so the tl would split it up into two or three parts) but what I liked about it was that he had a lot of fun and creative ways to fight people stronger than him.

the reason I ended up taking off a star honestly was mostly because of the ml. he's a fairly typical overly cold school grass/kaolin flower who dotes HEAVILY on MC (which I do love!) but idk I felt that there was something... missing for a lot of the story. idk I cant really put it into words.

there was one review under a spoiler tag about the MC and mls relationship that I was fully prepared to agree with, but surprisingly didn't (and thats the main reason why I decided to write this review) and I think its because the person reviewing it was thinking more about the romance side rather than the mecha side of this (which is interesting considering that this story is heavier on the mecha side rather than the romance but whatever)

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obv in the summary, we know MC cuts his glands, and as this is a fairly predictable story, we know that MC is able to get his glands back. the reviewer argued that it felt like it cheapened the storyline -- whats the point of coming to the realization that if you fall in love an individual, them "changing" their gender doesn't matter when MC didnt end up changing his gender at all? normally i'd agree with this point but a) MC didnt REALLY want to turn into a beta, he was forced into a corner and b) its actually quite explicit that ML didnt care about his gender, it was all the cannon fodder characters that did. yes, he was sad about it but that was mainly bc MC was in a lot of pain, fell into a coma and could have died, and he was also afraid that MC would be upset upon waking

in fact, in this case I feel as though MC turning into a beta would have cheapened the storyline. some of the characters mention that "oh it could be a good thing that hes turning into a beta because now he'll be stronger and can fight better! questionable physiology aside, MC did spend some time doing research specifically because he wanted to help omegas be able to drive mecha, and that combined with the fact that so much of the story focused on how people underestimated him because he was an omega, him turning into a beta would have just straight up s**ked. but hey, thats just my two cents.

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anyways, this was a really enjoyable story, but don't expect like anything super deep or life changing. I do recommend it though <<less
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Roshizer
Roshizer rated it
November 29, 2021
Status: Completed
I love this novel, overall is 4.5/5, - 0.5 because its only a bit rush, like kind of summary.. Maybe author rushing to finish the story 🤷‍♂️

Btw, the synopsis.. Is a very big spoiler 🙄😅
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MpregQueen97
MpregQueen97 rated it
November 27, 2021
Status: --
I hate it when the MC is suddenly OCC and suddenly very overpowered without any reasonable expectation! This book is sh*t upon shit. People saying this book is great, have not read great books. You don't know what is a great book if you deem this great. The plot is just pure garbage
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hy-d-ra
hy-d-ra rated it
November 2, 2021
Status: Completed
Mediocre story tbh.

I've followed it during its' initial publishing, since I was attracted by the strong protagonist setting. But when it was over I was too disappointed in how the author handled it at the end. My biggest disappointment was the fact that author just spilled the beans in the synopsis and it was the only dramatic point in the entire novel, nothing as big as this ever happens in the novel, so I conteplated on how impactful it might have been if author made a "surprise" in the novel... more>> instead of saying outloud. Secondly, when you read this moment sure it's all drama and look at how strong MC is, but the thought that "he could have acted differently" never left me while reading (simply because by that time he was a cherished scientist and usually those are protected and people could have been sent, but of course it's not as dramatic as MC who never contacted for help just slashed his gland and was carried out by the prince). Also the setting behind the situation: MC is forced because a new bill was just admitted and everyone hurried to marry him. It's all convenient to justify.

The romance of MC and ML was so BACKGROUND. Like it was very background if you look back after reading. Sure thing the romantic stuff like being a perfect match and meeting early, and only MC can fit ML and ML's care for MC with everything etc. But I still felt with the amount of mentioned fights/competitions just made their romance become distant.

And yeah, those competitions. A lot of time is spent on describing fights and matches, first in their academy, next when they compete with other schools. Everyone is making fun of MC who basically collected his first mecha from scraps, not to mention his accompanying cat robot. But later they couldn't underestimate the power of MC's modifications etc. Of course MC gets the glory of winning, later he is also cherished as a scienstist who made great contributions, later when he was rescued and recovered everyone found his identity, thus the fiance's family got quite a backlash. Anyway, all glory to MC in the end, but what surprised me the most was how MC aquired the business of his father who basically pushed him to marry, but he acted so vile in it, like so sinister it really lacked style. I really didn't feel the need to end things like that.

And that's that. He just gets known, last chapters look rushed and we're done.

Tbh, I also read another novel from this author, about a guy who after an accident acquired an ability to see how close a person is to death and some secret information about them, which I found way-way-way-way more interesting. It's called 我靠算命成为万人迷. <<less
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XavierForest
XavierForest rated it
October 14, 2021
Status: Completed
Cute romance between MC and ML, but slow. ML is your typical quiet + SSS spiritual strength + mecha genius ML with a bit of darkness mixed in. I found it really interesting that MC had come from a world more advanced than the one he transmigrated into. This was fresh and an interesting concept.

Scum gong deserved what he got. I thought he was finally learning to treat MC properly, but his reaction to

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finding out that he could force MC to marry him was when I realised there was no hope. Scum gong then being forcibly engaged to someone else when he didn't want to and realising what MC had felt was karmic justice.

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On the other hand, I liked the scum shou's character development. He actually came out a better person after the face-slapping.
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Rain in the sunny morning
Rain in the sunny morning rated it
August 29, 2021
Status: Completed
Definitely one of my favorites. The story isn't to long but well paced out. The competition lasted in the most parts of the story but everything just fits so well. I finished mtl this in two days and I love it so much. The main couple are in a healthy and trusting relationship which is also really sweet. The bad people got what they deserved but not to exaggerated of extreme and I liked how the Su omega turned for the better. Overall this was a sweet and heart warming... more>> story about Omega rights. <<less
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psychofreak
psychofreak rated it
August 27, 2021
Status: Completed
Love MCs with strong characters, especially omega ones. Though OP (but trapped in a weak body, at least the Mc's character started as a typical weakling then steadily became strong whatever gender he became. All throughout the story, the MC kept destroying everyone's worldview. It's pretty much like the MC flipping the bird to anyone who tries to belittle him, especially during the engagement banquet. That was such a power move. That was a big fat "f*ck you, you, and you, and your whole 8 generations too".

I love how... more>> he never gave the ex fiancé a chance again, nor gave him any face the moment the engagement was broken. I dropped one other novel because the MC was too much of a dumbf*ck dealing with the scumbag fiancé, so this one was a breath of fresh air for me. Same with the tr*sh parents and the ex's father, and anyone else that wronged the MC, I love how they weren't spared. The retribution was satisfying. In other stories, characters such as these would just be let go and gets left alone and let fate decide the outcome, which I find frustrating and incredibly annoying. You don't get to almost ruin one's life and get away with it. I also like how the og protag had a redemption arc. The other annoying characters were just flat brainless idiots, kinda like the typical tr*sh family common in other novels.

All in all I enjoyed this, especially the journey of building a frankenstein'ed mecha to the most advanced newtype. Hope this gets adapted to a manhua, or at least have some nice fanart, I really want to see the ugly cute cat and the initially ugly mecha with the pink and blue light sabers lol. <<less
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Common_people
Common_people rated it
July 27, 2021
Status: Completed
It's good Abo novel. About a sick MC transmigrate to become a waste omega with love sick brain, who chasing after a Scum fieance and end up tragic. The MC transmigrate before that happened. There's some plot hole, but Maybe I like this kind of sweet, calm and pig eating Tiger MC. He is so genius, I'm satisfied with the face slapping part, kinda exciting. The ML is cute cold guy too. But I thought there Will be some fanwai or so but nah. This feeling like you watching film... more>> but then there's a sensor in the ending scene. <<less
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Humph
Humph rated it
January 15, 2024
Status: Completed
I really liked this novel. It was a short read and really enjoyable. The bad reviews really made me not want to read it but I'm so thankful I chose to read it. There's not much fluff but the way the couple interacts now and then really made me giggle and squeal in my bed. There's a lot of face slapping and it's so enjoyable to read it. There's some foreshadowing that makes it fun to guess how it might turn out unlike other stories that just lay everything out... more>> without letting the reader guess at times. What I really liked is how they portrayed the lives of omegas in this story. It's very realistic and I loved how the MC contributed to the future of omegas. I just wish they added more chapters at the end about the couple's pairing and a peak into the lives of omegas a few years later. <<less
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readingaddict1
readingaddict1 rated it
January 14, 2024
Status: Completed
3 Stars.

This was a quick read but also enjoyable. However, this could’ve gone on for another 20 chapters or more to cover more plot holes. There are so many good side characters in this novel that I would like to see their development, but nothing. Also, I would like to see more of the MC and ML relationship after they became a couple and how the empire flourished during the reign. The ending honestly left me unsatisfied and somewhat frustrated.
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Bookster
Bookster rated it
January 9, 2024
Status: Completed
MC: Yun Xing Ze

ML: Luo Wen Chuan

It is a typical ABO story where Omegas have no worth except for marriage. And MC transmigrating into an O, obviously will raise the position of Omegas in society, though it happens towards the end.

... more>> Plot is just as mentioned in Description.

MC is OP and ML is also OP. They get together quite late. They have mutual love and respect for each other. They have a healthy relationship.

MC was quite OP. It was quite bearable but this Overpoweredness got a bit cringey towards the end.

Don't expect much drama. It is a light read with a smooth progress of MC. <<less
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Kuromi.Soldier
Kuromi.Soldier rated it
January 2, 2024
Status: Completed
I wasn't interested in sci-fi and especially about mechas untill I read this novel. Everything was well written and I got highly invsted. I even forgot this is a bl novel and not purely about mechas. The action scenes are easy to understand and visualise, I don't usually like long descriptions of fight scenes but those were great. I wish there's a manhua adaptation for this because I really want to see how those mechas look like! Also, why is this novel tagged as Yaoi? It's mostly shounen ai but... more>> I don't think there's any Yaoi-worthy scenes??

I feel bad for MC for having such disgusting parents

Supporting characters at the first few appearances were very stressful to read, they always tell MC to give up. Just because you're facing a stronger opponent, you should just give up? They have a sense of relief after putting others down, MC is very nice to not punch them straight in the face. MC is very mature, very envyful.

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I hate Qin Shuang (MC's mother) the most, more than Su Zinan. She's a hypocrite. What's ironic is that she, herself, opposed her own arranged marriage with an unknown alpha and is somehow fine with forcing her child to be an arranged marriage in which SHE USED TO OPPOSE. I hate hypocrites the most... Chi Yu on the other hand, is just pathetic but I don't have deep hatred towards him unlike Qin Shuang.

Also the online barrages when Xinghai was fighting against Noah, they were so annoying like can't you understand that Xingze is in the hospital 😬 atleast show some compassion and tell him to get well soon instead of telling him that Xinghai needs him for victory, seriously no empathy but I also can't expect much because it's a patriarchal society

What's weird and uncomfortable is that while Chi Yu can't get his life back, it's very unfair when MC's mother was given a chance but not Chi Yu. If we're reading the same novel, MC's mother is no better than Chi Yu. MC was being quite forgiving to his parents and even Su Zinan but somehow not Chi Yu as if his sins is greater than what MC's parents did? He's annoying and pathetic af tho but he should be treated the same way as the current Su Zinan, he's also brainwashed by patriarchy so why should he be treated any different? Just because he's the "villain" male lead?? Not a fan of what the author's point is. If you want to punish everyone then punish them all, if you want to forgive them then forgive them but make sure it's fair. It's ironic talking about omega rights but also not being fair in terms of justice... Overall, I dislike the fact that he's forgiving to his mother. Guilty conscience does not justify what you did in the past, please leave MC alone and stop saying that "you're sorry" 🙄

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Obviously there's a lot of plot armour because MC was already the best of the best person in his former life so adapting to his new life wasn't hard and could easily regain his best ability from his former life experiences.

I rated 3 stars because I dislike slow burn even though they liked each other quite early in the novel. Also, the novel's summary makes it sound like it's a full-on omegaverse romance story but it mostly focuses on mecha fights. Now that I think about it, there's not much going on with the plot because most of it are fillers (- too many mecha fight descriptions). It was a great read but I wouldn't read it again. <<less
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