This could have few extra chapters? I enjoyed reading this short story meant to be comedic ridiculous undertone since the start but uncovered later a childhood promised love. Recommended smut.

Its only 8 chapters, so its pretty short. There Isn't too much plot development but that doesn't mean It's not a good story. There isnt much politics, court drama.. Other then the pe*verted general harassing a poor prisoner in hilarious ways. If you got some spare time, go ahead and read this story. Its quite amusing.

It’s funny! Idk if I can call it cute, though. It’s a great short story, really easy to read so long as the tags don’t squick you. The characters really shine even though it’s so short.

I just started and still at chapter 2 but this story is sooo funnyyy I love it so muchh 😂 wait till I'm finished im gonna edit the review 💕

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omggg I love this so muchh.. The story is so sweet and funny, and the sm*t hehe, so satisfyingg 🙈

It is an okay read I think. Nothing much happens they just fck. I am not against smexy scenes and I enjoy reading smut but only if it’s written well. Smut wasn’t good at all (like an*l fluid? Wtf go see a doctor pls—- why all bl writers are like this😭 shous aren’t women) but it was funny idk There were also some red flags ML isn’t the nicest person on earth he is kinda scum too so it is pretty short could be read but not the best work... more>> out there kind of a waste of time I think. I really am generous giving it a three stars :/ <<less

It's pretty hit or miss... it's a very sadistic gong paired with a shou who doesn't know why he's being so needlessly harassed and doesn't know what he's done wrong. I think they're funny and cute because it's fiction but just because I liked their dynamics doesn't mean I want them in real life... I think it works for them and while the general goes too far a lot of the time, I tell myself he's a fictional character to de-escalate the situation.

Translation is nice, it is easy to read... But... The story being basically comedy does not sit well with me considering how much of it stands on the MC being s*xually harassed*. The only chapter that does not do that is the first one... which makes fun of MC being imprisoned and has his sentence prolonged because the authority figure (the "ML" but is he really?**) feels like doing it.

As for the plot twist... It had like one foreshadowing in a side note, so it basically comes out of nowhere...... more>> and the result is a severe case of OOC for the MC where the closest thing that I can describe it is that he developed Stockholm syndrome***.

*mol*sting, humiliating, r*pe (yes, forcibly having been given a handjob is in fact an act of r*pe)

**i do not consider a r*pist an ML

***MC stops fighting back and all the interactions have dubious consent at best...[sarcasm] remember, it has comedic undertones and it is not funny if the MC consents to it [sarcasm end] <<less

Pretty short and really smutty. Really loved that, lol. I'm remembering the yaoi manga General Dandy because they kind of have a bit of similarity

Oh my heart, I was so angry at the start, but when I was finally reading the last few chapters, my heart exploded with love.

If you want something simple, short and makes you blush at the end, read this (◕‿◕✿)

A very cute short. But the general really a big pe*vert! Lol