I'm really disappointed, really, if this is only light fluffy novel with slice of life and romance genre I can understand but Action Fantasy Xianxia?? With two displine relationship? Its very disappointing that this novel even cant satisfy me like fluffy novels.

i skip many chapters just to read the final ch
as blackwatersinkingshipper said I like yandre ML very much but this ML? His personallity doesnt has the capability of a yandre person, author just write a shadow of a cool yandre ML, about MC? I cant understand his character at all its like he hasnt normal human emotions, and not only him, I could not communicate with any of the characters, all of them havent the ability to leave impress on readers and I cant felt anythings toward them, nor sad or pity or even hate. They came and disappeared very fast, MC and ML's level up is illogical especially ML. I cant find any excitement in myslelf when I read this process, MC and ML level up then encounter some mystery men stronger than them, then level up again then find another stronger enemy, without any special events, I think author wanted to write cool and mystery level up novels but she really failed. And we never reach to The climax of the story, somewhere that you like the most and want to read again

and about story? I think other reviews said good point

romance? Doesnt have any charm, without any real progress and the story focus isnt on its romance at all, author just put some boring romance between level up story with force
although I like smut scene of it. But at all its boring story without Regular structure plan. So its your own choise to try it or not, but I dont recommend this novel to anyone, and this is my point of view ofcourse maybe after read this novel you'll like it

Feels like as the story progresses, the MC and the ML are just spiraling deeper and deeper into a pit...

This author is such a stepmother!!! Does she hate her own protagonists??? That said, this novel is not too badly written, since clearly... this angst is on. purpose. TT_TT Everyone sticks to their assigned role/personality, there's foreshadowing, plot's exciting and fast-paced, etc. Feels like a 1000 chapter xianxia being condensed into 100 short chapters, so yeah it's going to feel rushed.

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Was it worth it? Was it worth it? Totally unrelated, but did they have to steal a line from Marvel's Civil War?

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It's a happy end... Eventually. But they must have gone through even more lines of filler text offscreen to get to that point... I'm glad the author doesn't subject us to all that actually. Her goal was a romance BL, and she gives the bare context to get to that point. A lot of people say that it's unfinished but... it's not really. This was an interesting speedrun.

If you've had too much fluff in your life recently! This is the novel to balance out that sugary fluff :3 <<less

This novel need alot of imagination. Because there are numerous fights scenes which is quite entertaining but also need a lot of brain work. There are not much fluff here and the romance really kinda sparse. The ending is HE. So it's not a bad read. But if you want alot of dog food... there's are more dog blood. Tq

This was the first novel from this author, and it shows. There are a lot of really interesting plot hooks and promising secondary characters, but unfortunately a lot of them get forgotten/unresolved/not resolved that well, or not used to their full potential.

Is this novel good? No not really.

Do I still like it for some reason? Have I still read it multiple times? Yes.

the plot is a total mess and incoherent. Onstead of a sensible, overarching plot, it is a bunch of interconnected, unrelated events. These events occur from the MC and ML randomly running into people, or a random new group of cultivators showing up out of nowhere. The cultivation aspects are a mess, and the fight scenes are generally pretty boring.

The most interesting aspect is the relationship between the MC... more>> and the ML, and it is not healthy. The ML treats the MC very poorly (look at the tags). But, the MC still cares deeply for the ML due to their past (he protected the ML when he was a child, and they were close before the ML betrayed him).

I think this novel has the potential to be so much better. Even though I can't romantically ship them, the relationship between the ML and MC truly is interesting and in some ways deeply tragic.

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the r*pe, for me, was far too brutal and ruined the potential for me to want them romantically together. The ML is also a creep, and does many things that are creepy (drinking MCs blood, for example). I think their relationship was destined to not work out, because the MLs unstable nature. When he ends up capturing and raping the MC, he already had specially made chains that were able to keep the MC trapped (specially made, because the MC has special cultivation powers that can get him out of most traps)

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Hot mess of a novel. The author brings up and drops major characters and plot elements at the drop of a hat (or flick of a sleeve) making the plot almost nonsensical in how rapidly it progresses. The CP is also pretty terribly done. The ML is a classic over the top yandere but the MC goes from despising to forgiving him so frequently and without any real reasons for the forgiveness. Like you ruined my life but then you cried a bit so I guess you're fine. Unless you're... more>> desperate for another BL cultivation novel I wouldn't say it's worth the hassle. <<less

I think I'm just being nice by leaving 4 stars to help balance the rating even though I dropped the novel.

The story had their good moments, but it failed at trying to be a serious action novel. I often find myself bored reading this. The protagonist/ML was the only one with character development to become a yandere, and even then, his story was barely mention in a few sentences throughout 50 chapters.

The MC was too dull for me to take interest in him and I dislike that his face was... more>> so stone cold solid that he often appeared as if he's only a puppet. I understand some characters possess the ability to be like this, but there are usually reasons why they are the way they are. Apparently, he's just a natural, and again, that makes him even more dull and uninteresting. He doesn't move the story, the story moves him.

Besides that, I do kind of like the slow pace of the story too? I mean, I like that it took over 30 chapters for the possessive attraction to truly begin and it kind of allowed the MC to really see how real the world is around him and adjust to it. It also allowed the ML to age up from a child to a teen to an adult. I'm only down over the fact that they have so very little interaction, so I still can't really accept how he came to develop an attraction for the MC. <<less

Maybe I should start from saying that I’ve dropped this novel before, and finished it only after some time for my emotions to calm down. That’s why, I think that you need to be in a specific state or mood to read this novel.

I liked how it started, really liked. The middle was unexpected and mostly not pleasant to read. That can be the reason it dropped. Somehow, the ML and MC didn’t understand each other almost until the very ending. This is the source of most problems and tragedies... more>> here. Unfortunately.

Still, maybe it’s only me, but my heart pained for the ML, especially closer the the end. I’ve almost cried. Yes, he did many bad things, some things might be not forgiven at all. But he went though so much, and my heart really aching.

Im thankful for such an ending, for cute fox and second chance. The extras are just right for my hurting souls.

As for recommendations... I don’t know. See the warning and tags and decide yourself. This is not a novel for everyone. <<less

So I rated this on my personal enjoyment-- not objectively. I went into it knowing the tags, and sometimes I'm ok with that content. I wasn't a fan of how things were handled afterwards. And personally I found the ending to be a little disappointing.

It's a more realistic HFN type ending, and I don't usually like those. Again though, sometimes I do if done well!

I just feel like the MC and ML needed at least another 20 chapters of character development and conversation to develop past some of the things... more>> that happened. The chapter count is there as is the time but we don't see any of it, and they are separated for all of it.

This one makes me feel conflicted! In a lot of ways it's good and pretty well done. I can't tell if my reaction to the drawbacks is completely based on my personal taste or if it's honestly got a problem there.

I don't feel like I wasted my time by reading it though, and I do recommend you give it a go. Especially if you really like yandere types. <<less

First opinion:

MC is already interesting. He was previously a surgeon (?), which is not only unique in the world of transmigration novels but also justifies his calm reaction to being transmigrated. I also personally always prefer novels that immediately get into the meat of the story instead of wasting time with useless prologues.

The ML/protag's story progression seems a lil bit too fast, I think author could've benefitted from showing more unfortunate scenes or shown his side of things in the outer sect before having ML choose the yandere route on... more>> their 2nd meeting. But hey, at least the people who started reading for the yandere tag can go straight to the action. <<less

I don't understand why there are so many bad reviews regarding this good story. Even though compared to the fighting scene the fluff moment is as rare as gold. But the interaction between MC and ML is also interesting. And there's dont have too much of a smutty scene just at it right amount. The translation is also so good.

Although the plot is not that unique but if you haven't read sooooo much of xianxia novel then this plot will surely new for you. And even the love between them... more>> seems shallow or fast but if you understand it you will appreciate their feeling cuz even tho ML is so obsessed with MC but he has gone mad only once (If you ever read obsessed ML you will know that those ML are like psychopath, LZZ gone mad only once is really something to be praised) He sacrificed so much for MC (but some is he reaped what he sowed), and MC also sacrificed so much for ML.

The slight disappointments in this story is only that its too short so in every events it not in so much detailed, however this setback is not bad in some part. Plus I expected more lines from some side characters but the author just casually brushed them off. However this story is still good and worth a read! Just dont be discouraged by the bad comments and try it yourself! <<less

hmmm...I'd say that the premise and SOME events here in this novel really kept me going and intrigued. After chaps 40 or so, the events suddenly became blurry to me and by the time it reached like 75 chaps, I caught on and there were many moments of ML and MC. The novel was 85% action and 15% subtle romances between those action scenes. There were many parts that I just skimmed over just to get the main gists and not reading the whole. Overall, the translations were great and... more>> really understandable.

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I was kind of saddened by the ending and the extras did not even lessen it. But it was the most plausible and real ending out of all endings out there so I think that would be fine. I just though that the ending would have been different if they both think a little smarter and communicated a little more from the past chapters.

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I knew the smexy scene will appear a later on and of course, I was looking forward to it because I love hot scenes hohohoho... however, deep inside it hurts me because after that scene, the MC and ML would inevitably fall apart when they were just starting to warm up to each other again. And I think that maybe if the ML did not continue, mc's treatment of him would be less cold, perhaps a better ending.

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Lastly, I think that both of MC and ML were so dumb for not noticing and defeating Wen Qing early on. Well, I know that ML already smelled smthng sus about WQ but he only suppressed it inside because WQ is kind of important for MC. And voilah.... Wen Qing is one of the characters nearly at the end of the novel that made big changes to both MC and ML Im so madd aghhhh wtv.

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I stopped previously. And now I’m back till Chap 45.
I’m still not able to continue forth. No fluff. No unique writing that makes me wanna continue. &Gt;< I guess I’ll be stuck on chap 45 for now