A Smile from the Villain

Description

Links are NOT allowed. Format your description nicely so people can easily read them. Please use proper spacing and paragraphs.

As a person who transmigrated into a novel written by himself, Qin Kaiyi experiences a huge pressure and burden.

Even more so, he transmigrated as the villain and is forced to follow the plot. Qin Kaiyi expresses that he doesn’t want to write novels anymore.

Qin Kaiyi: “WTF. transmigrating into the villain and being forced to follow the plot. Just let it be. Shen Feixiao, can you get the f*ck down from my body???”

Shen Feixiao: “Shixiong, I won’t.”

Alright, actually this is just a s*upid story about transmigrating into his own novel as the villain and getting pushed down by his own protagonist.

Associated Names
One entry per line
ASV
反派邪魅一笑
Related Series
N/A
Recommendations
The Scum Villain’s Self-Saving System (10)
The Reader and Protagonist Definitely Have to Be in True Love (4)
The Villain is Outrageously Beautiful (4)
This Way of Transmigration Is Definitely Wrong! (3)
The Transmigrated Senior Martial Brother (3)
Every Day the Protagonist Wants to Capture Me (3)
Recommendation Lists
  1. BL & Baihe To-Read List - Translations Complete Pt...
  2. danmei yandere ML
  3. Dark bl novel
  4. BL novels (finished)
  5. BL Novels to explore

Latest Release

Date Group Release
03/11/22 Moonlight Novels c97
02/28/22 Moonlight Novels c96
02/21/22 Moonlight Novels c95
02/14/22 Moonlight Novels c94
02/07/22 Moonlight Novels c93
02/01/22 Moonlight Novels c92
05/02/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c91
05/02/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c90
05/02/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c89
04/25/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c88
04/17/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c87
04/17/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c86
04/17/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c85
04/17/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c84
04/10/21 Chrysanthemum Bud c83
Go to Page...
Go to Page...
Write a Review
132 Reviews sorted by


Smtha
Smtha rated it
July 25, 2021
Status: Completed
Update 12march2022-

i reread the whole story edited translation.?Gosh, it's much better. So sorry I can't change the star rating. Would have given it a 4 1/2 stars. With smoother reading and reconstruction of the story (because some of the paragraphs missing previously) The story is really good. It's intense, dark, psychological manipulation and also funny and aghast. If you want to explore your sadistic side, this I recommend. Thank you


I really don't mind those tags, especially the psychotic personalities, if presented nicely it can be an exciting read. And this story is quite mild ish compared to some other novels. Why I given only 3 stars is the author writing, the 1 st half is actually quite good, but sometimes there are so confusing paragraphs here and there thats kinda disconnected to the plot. And some jumps from paragraphs to the next. I really just kinda confused what had happened and there's also a few plot holes. That why I give this abit low rating.

I thank you translator for their hardwork bringing us this story, but if continues the whole modern extras, I would feel that at least there some "compensation " of shixiong somewhat "tragic "life. In the modern arc ML cleverly, scheme and win the beauty. (Mtl the last 7 extras). Thank you
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Jay0
Jay0 rated it
June 26, 2021
Status: Completed
A slow burn - the start was very plain (typical premise: author transmigrates into story as the villain and has to adhere to the plot), and the second half was incredibly angsty (after Shen Feixiao (ML) realises the 'secret'). Whilst I appreciate that the author didn't force it, even in the end there was no love. On the ML's side it was a yandere-like need to control, and on the MC's side it was only fear. So there's a sense of non-fulfilment with their happy-but-not 'ending'.

Also sometimes surprisingly flippant and... more>> randomly comedic/light-hearted. E.g. There was that random bout of friendship with Wei He, who is a confusing character in himself. All in all, there was nothing bad that I took particular issue with in this story, but at the same time nothing special about the plot/characters/writing that would make this a good story~ <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
WeiWuBebe
WeiWuBebe rated it
June 24, 2021
Status: c91
So, after completely finishing this story, I just want to say that it's just barely okay and tbh not really worth the read. It starts off pretty interesting but starts to fall off mid way through and then toward the end it just becomes entirely nonsense that you aren't even sure if you want to complete reading.

SPOILERS AHEAD!!!

My biggest issues is the squandering of the rest of Lingshan Sect. Characters like Liu Ling'er or the Sect Master who were introduced in the beginning as important characters to the MC are... more>> left hanging. Sect Master for example who was clearly suspicious of the ML, and vowed to avenge the MC after thinking MC was possessed, simply shook his sleeve and left and we don't hear anything from him after that. I was expecting some scenes where Sect Master would at least interrogate MC to seen if his consciousness was still able to be saved from his 'possession' and investigate the ML and figure out just what the ML was doing to the MC. Also, Liu Ling'er, the MC's shimei who fell for the ML, I expected to at least see a scene of her swallowing vinegar after realizing the MC she didn't want is the one the ML she was after was obsessed with. Then later on I expected a scene of her trying to save the MC from the ML after she realized ML was batsh*t insane. But she was also just gone after MC was apprehended. We don't see how she gets on with the ML afterward or if she finds his behavior at all disturbing. It's completely unsatisfying that the only ones who seemed to know the ML true colors or at least we got to see react to them was like the same four or five people.

The author didn't spend a lot of time making the world of that place believable. The main cast they stuck to was too small and everything else lacked detail.

I almost want to rate this story an extra star simply as thanks to the great translation team, and Another because of hoe promising the first half of this story was, but the ending was such a non-experience I am just going to leave the rating as is. <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
estrellita394
estrellita394 rated it
June 19, 2021
Status: --
I just want to give my opinion... this is the first time I have written a comment here so sorry if it sounds silly.

I only give 5 stars for the translation and editing. Very good work on that. On the other hand, this novel is not something I recommend, especially if you are sensitive people.

I was curious about the novel, yes. You could say that from chapter 65 he took a nosedive.

The confinement, the forcing to be with someone, this whole... situation is sour. This novel made me very bad,... more>> and I only continued it because it recorded the novels that it completed. <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
The White Rabbit
The White Rabbit rated it
May 6, 2021
Status: Completed
Really great start and plot build up. Somehow it reminds you of one of MXTX's novel.

ML is really quite obsessive w/ the MC is a whole scale of different level. No matter w/c world they are in the ML always wants to lock-up the MC by his side.

The story is quite interesting since this is really one of the novels that posses a real yandere ML.

The ending is quite open ended as their is no conclusion w/ regards to their relationship. But overall it is quite interesting to read this... more>> novel. <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Lunica
Lunica rated it
May 5, 2021
Status: c91
I'm not really satisified with this novel. After coming here from The Perfect Destiny, this novel has all the dogblood of one of the fantasy arcs and the humor and bickering of the system but not the actual love and compatibility.

It feels like the ML is just obsessed without love for the MC.
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
taizidianxia
taizidianxia
April 23, 2021
Status: c80
Those who were here for the 'tags' y know who you are!! The smut scene starts at c70. Overall this novel has interesting premise but lacks in execution. I get bored fairly quickly and I found myself skimming most of the parts. The pacing and order of events felt a little abrupt. I tried but the story didn't pique my interest like I hoped it would. I can't say much else since I've skimmed.. Didn't reach the ending.. If I had nothing else to do and got round to it,... more>> I might update the review. <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
someonewithemptyhands
someonewithemptyhands rated it
January 4, 2021
Status: --
i like this novel very much, if I have to say who is the real villain, I cant say anything cause ML is indeed a victim and villain at the same time, he suffered in his childhood and after went to sect he suffered again too and never any person help him or being kind to him so when a person who hurt him save him too and add Devils of the heart too, if it were you, you werent going crazy? MC is victim too, he should done the... more>> system orders and he was a normal kind person and didnt want to hurt ML so he can only help him in secret ways and he didnt want ML to be aware of his identify but at the end, he only wanted to retrieve his action toward ML and didnt know that his light actions have great impact on ML's personality so I cant scold him too... so I dont like that people scold ML.

i dont hate the ending too
Spoiler

although as others said it really shows stakholm (i know I write wrong) but considering it as a BD or HE is really depends on u

For me who dont have prob with story as long as MC and ML are happy its a HE and ofc if the ML was really shitty I dont like him to be with MC but as I said before I have complex feeling for this ML so I dont hate him to be with MC, but for who that like MC to freely choose his love and life and dobt want ML to force anyth on MC.... yes it is really a BE

for me 2th ML really doesnt deserve MC, as himself said that he couldnt give up on every things like our ML for MC, so I didnt felt bad for him at all. but ML really needs someone like MC for his miserable life, he is really poor and put everything on the line for MC, actually I didnt felt bad for villains when I read novels but after reading this one I think to myself that the person with miserable past really isnt normal person so why should we except him to act kindly and normal like other peoples ? so I like ML too even if he r*ped MC and use many methods to keep him and as I said before its just my opinion and ofc it doesnt mean that he didnt do any badthings cuz he did and after all he was a phsico and nobody could justify his bad doing everyone deserve to face their karma

but somehow I cant understand ML's love for MC, maybe if he waited and lived more he could find many kind person like MC and loved them but the novel's version that MC didnt appear in it didnt show how ML's personality was after all, it only said that he had great harem and many lovers but didnt say who really he loves or how happy he was so maybe he could only loved MC? but afterall I like the result so it doesnt matter

[collapse]

so if you like yandre ML, this ML is most yandre ML that I see in my life or the true version of yandre (the yandre person isnt soemeone that just likes MC very much or only being possesive) , not for his love or give up on every things for MC, for his action toward MC, in many yandre ML's that I see, they used many ways to gain MC love but they didnt use somway that MC hated them even if they see that MC didnt like them or wanted to run from them, or they use it when MC little liked them and not was going to hated them after that but this ML, really is yandre, he cant live without MC and no matter what the result is, he used all of the methods to keep MC, and I personally like this ML's type. maybe I am little sado LOL, I like the dark side of this novel too, its gives novel more charming and cause the plot to be more Complicated, the side chracters have their own chram and have great impact to story and MC and ML progressing and didnt only exist to made love triangle, and I dont hate r*pe or violence too so this novel is my cup of tea so if you hate novels tag you souldnt really read this story, but for someone like me, I love this novel and I recommend to other readers who are like me,

Spoiler

their child is really cute and funny too,

[collapse]
<<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
blackwatersinkingshipper
I would actually rate this story more as an average not bad at all 3 but bumping it up to a 4 because a chunk of people ignored tags and let that colour their rating. (I get that ratings are personal taste but I don't understand wasting your time to read a story with a tag that squicks you out and then drop the quality of the story based on the appearance of a tag you were warned about)

That said despite being one of those stories that could devolve... more>> into leveling up and filler fights this novel doesn't do that. There's a focus on the characters and relationships rather than a million chapters worth of and then he got the magic sword and then he got the magic plant. It's a refreshing version of the basic transmigrated into the antagonist shixiong/shizun trope featuring clueless modern person MC and yandere ml.

The pace of the relationship is a little slow for me. It took until about chapter 65 before stuff actually started happening there, but the actual story of how they get to where they get was a pretty good read.

But yeah in the end it's an average read that's easy to get through. Good translation. Must love yanderes <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Blubber_faults
Blubber_faults rated it
December 22, 2020
Status: c81
So 3.5 for the story and a 4 for the translation group. Doing an awesome job guys. A few small spelling mistakes but nothing that would damage my reading experience.

Now... For the story.

... more>>
Spoiler

First off. r*pe scene. I absolutely hated it. ML is a whole as*hole and of course with your usual yandere possessive ML the scene was to be expected, red flags were just planted everywhere around the guy. Second. I am not entirely sure how others were able to even like our tiny ML in the first place. Guy had the whole "you're beneath me" attitude during the first meeting. Wtf is cute about that arrogant little intro? MC my heart breaks for the MC. Especially in the recent chapters. I'm curious to see if he really does go home, I hope he does.

[collapse]

That's all from mwah ~ <<less
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
Reader2304
Reader2304 rated it
October 5, 2020
Status: Completed
Ahh. Hard to say. The first half was pretty interesting, the normal transmigration story. Then it became pretty twisted and the end was.... not so good. A story with a good start, but a pretty bad and strange end. I didn’t totally enjoyed it.... but good to pass the time I think.
0 Likes · Like Permalink | Report
1 5 6 7
Leave a Review (Guidelines)
You must be logged in to rate and post a review. Register an account to get started.