I loved it. I honestly love every arc and I love that it focused on You XiaoMo and Ling Xiao from beginning to end, altho there were some parts for side characters, it never overwhelmed the presence of our momo and boss so I still liked it very much. I like how the books purpose is from the very beginning and we just literally read the adventure of momo and ling xiao hahahah I loved how ling xiao didn't keep momo because of the promise and was actually surprised that momo is the one he's looking for. It's sad that the chapters were short but they aren't really hanging? Like u can have a peace of mind after every chapter lol. I also love how the smexy scenes aren't censored hehehe altho there was less in the last few arcs, but the last chapter of the main story is literally them doing the deed HAHAHAHA what a bold move. I love how previous characters suddenly appear and that they were not forgotten. I literally just love this, I think I can reread this cause of how many different arcs there were and literally different situations. I love how momo and ling xiao kept on robbing things and the others have no idea HHAHAHA I love that our main couple aren't op from the very beginning and we really saw how they got stronger and that they aren't invincible. I guess the only repetitive thing here are those s*upid mocking people who just doesn't know what they're up against hahahah tho I still love it cause momo's silver tongue is a must and his face slapping is the best. I like the reality that there are different currencies and how momo DID have to do something to gain money.

unfortunately I can't find a list of the arcs so I'll just comment on what I recall..

TianXin Sect - really interesting beginning, how I met your boss HAHAAHHAHA I love clueless and pure and overall not blackened You XiaoMo, I love how we still god Da-shixing and second shixiong till the end and even fifth shixiong was useful. I love how they literally overturned the sect and Momo even had to kill his so called master. I love how they got all the treasures in the paradise realm lol, and even got little chick here. I love how we saw the change from Momo here who was hiding his capability and being secretive but still in the end he got to tell ling xiao the truth hahaha, I love how they are being gossiped here haahha love how ling xiao kept on going to Momo and how momo got used to being/seeing him and in the end even looking for his presence heheheh

DaoXin Academy - I love how Momo got the opportunity to learn and that ling xiao is very supportive. In here he got to show his capabilities and got scenes that normal student stories have and even gained friends and got to defeat a 'genius'. Btw Ling Xiao also entered here and it was just really fun to read, and how Momo earned money and all. We also got the lol Da shixiong here and a really good master. But the fun school arc had to be bothered by those from higher realm, I love how there is a higher realm hehehe this story just have a really good world building.

I love them being adventurous and being spendthrift cause they got the spirit gems hahaha and how Momo got to attend XiaoYao Institution altho he really didn't do much here lol. I love You XiaoHa HAHAHAHA and Ling Mo LOLL. And how Momo accidentally used the dimensional talisman and got to experience really robbing and how ling xiao just watched him AHAHAHHA the old man was also fun. Ling xiao using different faces was also funny. I wished there was more chapter about Momo being lost for a year and how ling xiao felt. But I guess its alright hahaha

I have nothing much to say, I love how they got OP at the very end and how it was showed/written.

Aww, its not what I expected, I thought it would be more enjoying like, touring ling xiao and all, doing modern stuffs, but instead it was still serious, but its still ok since we now know that how momo really died and his real family. The last chapter was ofcourse 🥰. The ending is just lol AHHAHAHA Also, I wish there were some extras in DaoXin? Just for some closure cause they literally run away from there hehehe

I LOVE You XiaoMo, and the fact that he can be clever but he's always being an idiot when ling xiao's there HAHAHA (c: papa lin) I love how I got to see his growth and how he values his relationship with others and hoe he didn't complicate his relationship with ling xiao. Lol with how he witnessed Yunlin? And baili smthng HAHAHA I love how he calls his Qiu team hahahah and his adorkable team, which honestly also includes him, little black turtle has good taste hehehe I'm gonna miss him and s*upidity and how he always laughs when ling xiao mocks another even in the middle of a fight LOL

Ling Xiao? Yes pls hehehe I love him too, I just realized that they never really said anything like 'i love you' or 'i like you' to each other lol. I love how he is not the typical overbearing, emotionless, addicted to the shou person. I love the statement that goes ' he looks at you xiamo as if disappointed' or smthng like that HAHAHHA I like his h**ny side too and his jealous side hehehe and of course the way he says wife. I also like how we got to witness him grow beside Momo. I love him too, I'm gonna miss a bully gong like him.

You JunQi? - I'm sorry I forgot the name but I also like him very much, this clingy dad hehehe lol with how he was described in his first ever scene

Yin Ge and Feng Chiyun - they literally just run away after the abducting part, kinda sad they didn't get to help but I guess that makes things more realistic

Jiu Ye and Qiao WuXing? - They're nice friends

Fang ChenLe? And Fu Zilin - love them and love how they stayed till the end

Fu CangQiong and Wei Bai? - Lol idk what's up with them but thanks for the help

Duan QiTian - wanted more scene about him like if he sees Wei Bai and realizes Momo became stronger than himm

Baili brothers and Tang Yunli? - I like them all cause they liked our Momo

The Qiu Team - lol with how they react when they were named, it's kind of sad how they weren't really that helpful to Momo HAHAHHA but Momo became OP so fast so, ,

you know how the last chapter when the rainbow grade 6 mages all around came after YXM for the secret to become a rainbow grade 7 mage. And it said that YXM & LX didn't know to cry or laugh. I laughed my ass off because from what I get from this is that the secret to get to rainbow grade 7 mage is to dual cultivate 🤣 you know what I mean lol 😂

Translation: I'm very picky with language errors, not for any reason except I'm a language teacher and can be a bit*h about it.

Writing Style/World Building: I suppose this is a common phenomena in Chinese novels, sometimes they tend to point out the obvious (which is not always bad, as it makes sure the readers didn't misunderstand sth). I was quite annoyed at first since explanations of a process (pill refining percentages or sth) seemed to drone on and on, when at that point I wanted to hear more from the characters instead of reading a Chemistry textbook.

One major flaw though, is that there is practically 0 decent women in this novel, which is.. Not good. The only good ones that aren't on the "bad side" barely get any screen time. A little annoying, but at the same time not too big a deal. There are only gay couples in this novel, but it's a yaoi novel anyway (why are you here if not for the gei lmao) so wtv.

I too, feel that the ML is a little too cruel on how he jokes about his partner's (MC) intelligence almost 24/7, but at the same time, I'm gratified because not all couples share affection in the same, conventional way. In this case, action over words!

As I mentioned, I love this novel for not casually discarding the MC's past and actually making it an interesting branch off the main plot (Even if they did, I'd have enjoyed it anyway but it's still a fun surprise).

1. When MC is working hard in making the pills only for ML to eat all of that in one sitting. It's funny LMAO.
2. When MC got some of his cultivation pets that was being disobedient, he will throw all of them to ML and the pets is terrified LOLOLOL.
3. When MC coming back to his original soul's world and meeting his original soul's family. OMG!!! At the start I was frustrated with his parents, their form of love is so.... frustrating and when MC's original body died, they all got depressed and blaming themselves. Rolling my eyes
   You should spend your son's short time with you, not ignoring him, oooo foolish parents of the MC and when MC's original parents knew that their son was safe and sound and even have his cultivation way better than them, their way of saying sorry is so lavish, I'm not appreciating it. Luckily, it turns for the better, other extra chapters is so good. I don't have enough

• When MC's body uncle wants to kill him so MC can't endanger his position as the head of the family.
• When ML is trying to freeing his mother.
• When ML' half brother (?) or cousin (?) was trying to kill him with breaking his core so there will be a big enough explosion.
• The pets (cultivation pets in this story have a consciousness and they can interact like a normal human being) have the dramas themselves too